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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

👏👏👏gr8 update👏👏👏

😡😡😡he gave her money?!?!?!😡😡😡

😆😆😆LOL she showed him, throwing a rock and than stuffin a 1000rps in his hand😆😆😆

😆😆😆awww poor Raj in a bad mood, she showed him alright😆😆😆

😆😆😆Karan is too funny😆😆😆

cont. soon

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

I read the updates .....Its gud but abhi story is in its initial phase na

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Prerna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

that was so good

i just loved it

plz continue soon

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Sumi_162710

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Interesting. The start was nice. PLS CONTINUE SOON.

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

hey I just read your ff and i found it really interesting. however it seems a little bare if you know what i mean...for example you could describe the situations and the characters a bit more and then the story would really come alive....this is just a suggestion of course cause I love RN and you seem to have a lot of bright ideas regarding them

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ria

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: starasdf
👏👏👏gr8 update👏👏👏

😡😡😡he gave her money?!?!?!😡😡😡

😆😆😆LOL she showed him, throwing a rock and than stuffin a 1000rps in his hand😆😆😆

😆😆😆awww poor Raj in a bad mood, she showed him alright😆😆😆

😆😆😆Karan is too funny😆😆😆

cont. soon

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ria

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

n aur kripa ghar aate ha

dia-di eh aap

dia is laughing like hell

ma-are dia kya hua

dia-ma aap di ko zara dekhye

ma-hey bhaagwan yeh tere main itne mud kaise lag gaye

n-ma us carbale larke ne mere dress par yeh mud laga dia aur uper se aapko pata mujhe ek cheque bhi de the eh paisebale log hote he asse ha

ma-aacha aacha ab jaake haath muh dhole

dia-oh dii

n-shut up

n room main jaate ha

ma-kripa baith beta main kuch khanna late hu

ma kitchen main jaate ha

kripa jaake tv dekhne lagte ha

n fresh up hoke aate ha

kripa aur dia n ko dekh ke phir se hasne lagte ha

n-kya hua tum dono ko

kripa-kuch nahin

dia-di sach aap

n-ma dekho na yeh dono mujh par hase jaa rahe ha

ma-kripa dia kun has rahe ho tum dono n par sorr bolo

kripa-sorry n

dia-sorry didi

n-its ok

ma-aao tum log aake nasta kar lo

n kripa dia sab log nasta kar rahe ha

ma-n main tere masi ke ghar jaa rahe hu

n-thik ha ma

ma masi ghar jaate ha

n kripa aur dia 3 room main jaate ha

idher

karan aur raj bar main jaate ha

raj is drinking

karan ka mobile bajta ha

karan-hello

nandini-kaha ho tum

karan-jaan main woh raj

nandini-pata tha mujhe us raj ke saath he hoge tum waise abhie kaha ho

karan-woh jaan hum bar main ha

nandini-karan ghar wapis aa jaao jaldi

karan-nandini abhi

nandini-ha ahie

karan-par jaan

nandini-karan agar tum abhie wapis nahin aae na toh tumhe aaj raat guestroom main sona hoga

karan-jaan plz

nandini-no way tum abhie wapis aa rahe warna

karan-ok ok i am coming

karan -raj woh

raj-tu jaa nandini tera intezar kar rahe hoge

karan-tu bhi ab ghar jaa

raj-nahin

karan-raj chor de ab gussa jaa ghar jaa

raj-karan us larke ne mere insult ke

karan-are chor na ab chal main tujhe ghar drop kr deta hu

raj-nahin tu jaa main bad main jaaynga

karan -ok

karan ghar jaata ha

karan aake nandini ko hug karta ha

karan-hi jaan

nandini-yaad a gaye mere

karan-yeh tum kya bol rahe ho

nandini-karan sara din tum office main rahete ho aur phir shayam ko roz tum aapne us raj ke saath bar main chale jaate ho tumhe toh mere koi chinta he nahin ha

karan-aasa mat kaho jaan i love u

nandini-plz eh bar bar i love u kahena bad karo bilkul film type lagta ha har baat par i love u

karan-jaan tum hamesha kranti ke mood main kun rahete hu thora romantic baate karo na

nandini-ha raat ke 11 baje romantic baate mujhse nahin hoge

karan-jaan jaan plz aaj maaff kar do tum dekhna kal se main shayam ko 5 baje ghar chala aayunga plz plz

nandini-thik ha last time

karan-haiiiiiiiiiii

karan nandini ko aapne bahon main leke bed par litta ha

karan-nandini tum na gussa main bilkul aache nahin lagte

nandini smiles

aaluwalia house

n dia dono so gaae ha

ma bister thik kar rahe ha aur papa college ke copies check kar rahe ha

ma-suniye aaj main bina ke ghar gaye the

papa-hmm

ma-bina ka beta itna bara ho gaa ha bina bol rahe the mahesh ke shaadi kara dega

papa-hmm

ma-aur sahe bhi toh ha ghar main bahu ayege toh kitna aacha hoga

papa-hmm

ma-par mere kismat main yeh sukh kaha

ma rone lagte ha

papa-plz ab phir se suru mat ho jaana

ma-ha ha main chup he rahete hu har waqt aap mujhe ek baat baataye kya aapko kabhie alekh ke yaad nahin aate

papa-plz mujhse is bare main koi baat nahin karne ha kal subhe mujhe jaldi uthna ha light bad kar do

ma light bad karke rote rote so jaate ha

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Shaina_b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Dia aur Naina dono ne Aalekh ke liye rakhi kharidi hai hai and both are missing the olden days when they had so much fun!!!!

Even their mom is sad and they comfort each other!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ne Naina ki dress kharab kardi and usse cheque thama diya!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲

Yeh Raj ko apne paiso pe bahut ghamand hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Naina ne bhi kya khoob jawab diya!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj toh bahut gusse mein hai!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Aur Raj ka staff bhi yeh baat samaj gaya!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ne table ki saari cheeze phek di!!!!!

Karan is too funny!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣Sab sunke ke baad Karan bol raha hai ke wakai ladki mein himmat hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

When Naina came home Dia is laughing at her!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina fresh up hoke aati hai magar phir bhi Kripa aur Dia usse dekhkar hasse jaa rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

Raj aur Karan bar mein hai aur Nandini ka phone aata hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

This Karan is a totally hen-pecked husband!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😆 😆 😆 😆

Nandini threatened him ke agar woh abhi nahi aaya toh aaj raat usse guest room mein sona hoga!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Karan chala jata hai magar Raj ghar nahi jaata hai and refuses to forget that incident!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Yeh Nandini toh bahut gusse mein hai aur Karan usse kitne pyaar se mana raha hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳He is so sweet!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Karan ne sahi kaha ke yeh Nandini hamesha kranti ke mood mein kyun rehti hai??😕 😕 😕 😕

Karan promises ke kal se 5 baje ghar aa jayega!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina's mom is really sad about Aalekh but her dad refuses to talk about him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Naina mom cries herself to sleep!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

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Vertika Srivastava

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

accha tareeka hai dono ka milne ka,😊 😊 😊 vaise ye to samajh aa gaya clearly ki Raj ko apne paise par bahut proud hai 😒 😒 😒 aur vo apne aap ko kuch jyada hi samajhta hai.😔 😔 😔

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sea_nyx

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

aww I feel so sad for her mom but this raj is such a khadoos yaar!

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