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Posted: 16 years ago
#11

ma-suniye breakfast kar lijiye

papa-ha aata hu
papa aate ha
papa-bina
ma-jee
papa-naina aur dia abhie tak uthte nahin
ma-bacche ha uth jaege
papa-bina subhe ke 7 baj gaye ha
ma-aap breakfast kijie main unhe uthtake aate hu
papa-hmm
ma n aur dia ke room main aate ha
ma-n dia chalo uth jaao beta
n-oh ma sone dijiye na
ma-beta tere papa gussa ho rahe ha
n aur dia papa ke naam sunte he uth jaate ha
ma-jaa haath muh dhoke jaldi se neche aa jaa
dia-didi mujhe pahele bathroom jaane do na
n-dekh dia main pahele jaunge
n aur dia jaise taise taiyar hoke neeche aate ha
n/dia-good morning papa
papa-time dekha ha 7:15 ho gae ha
n-sorry papa
papa-hmm
papa-bina mera launch pack dena
ma-jee dete hu
ma-yeh lijiye
papa-hmm
papa office jaate ha
n-off ma papa pahele hitler the ka hamesha gusse main rahete ha
ma-n tere papa bas tum logo ke fikar karte ha beta aur kuch nahin chal ab breakfast kar le nahin toh dar ho jaaege
door rings
dia opens the door
kripa-hi dia
ma-kon ha beta
kripa-main hu aunty
ma-oh kripa beta aa baith
kripa-n tu abhie tak taiyar nahin hue
n-ha baba ho rahe tu baith main ahie taiyar hoke aate hu
kripa-dia tere exam kab se suru ho rahe ha
dia-kripa didi next week se
kripa-oh
ma-kripa sun tune subhe breakfast kiya
kripa-jee masi
n-chal kripa
n-bye ma
kripa-bye masi
n-kripa aaj history ka class ha na
kripa-ha
n-kripa ab sirf kuch months bad hum graduate ho jaayenge
kripa-ha
mr alluwalia shekhawat college main proffessor ha kripa ke papa bhi n ke papa ke saath usse college main parate ha
mr shrma-(kripa's papa)-are mr alluwalia kya hua
mr alluwalia-puccho mat sharma yeh aaj kal he bacche na toh parai main dhayan dete ha nahin aapne prooffssor ko respect dete ha
mr sharma-thik ha tumne yeh log toh college aate ha sirf girlfriend boyfriend banane
mr alluwalia-hhmm aapne baap ma guru ka respect nahin karte sirf awaragiri
mr alluwalia-shrma main class main chalta hu
mr alluwalia class main aate ha
every1-good morning sir
mr alluwalia-hmm roll no 1
rollno1-present sir
mr alluwalia..............................
after college
kripa -n kal toh raksha bhandhan ha chal rakhi kharidhte ha
n hearing this becomes sad
kripa-i am sorry n mujhe maaff kar de
n-kripa har saal is rakha bandhan ke din bhaiya ke bohot yaad aate ha
kripa-dont worry n dekhna ek din tere alekh bhaiya zarur wapis aa jaayenge
n ghar aate ha
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
that was so good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
👏👏👏Gr8 update👏👏👏
😃😃😃so glad u updated this fic😃😃😃
😳😳😳now interduce Rajveer😳😳😳
Star⭐️
Edited by starasdf - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Papa ka naam sunte hi Naina aur Dia uth jaate hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

They are fighting over the bathroom as well!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ne accha kaha ke uske papa pehle hitler thhe kya?? 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Kal Rakshabandhan hai toh Naina is missing her bro Aalekh!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Usse kya huya hai??😕 😕 😕 😕Kya woh ghar chhodke chala gaya hai??😕 😕 😕 😕

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Posted: 16 years ago
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i think maine aaj first time padhi hai ye story, kis baare me hai ye?🤔 🤔 🤔 Vaise abhi to concept kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai.😕 😕 😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mujhe kuch khaas kahani samajh nahi aa rahi hai par update karti raho tabhi samajh aayega.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: starasdf

👏👏👏Gr8 update👏👏👏

😃😃😃so glad u updated this fic😃😃😃
😳😳😳now interduce Rajveer😳😳😳
Star⭐️

thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Papa ka naam sunte hi Naina aur Dia uth jaate hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛

They are fighting over the bathroom as well!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ne accha kaha ke uske papa pehle hitler thhe kya?? 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Kal Rakshabandhan hai toh Naina is missing her bro Aalekh!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Usse kya huya hai??😕 😕 😕 😕Kya woh ghar chhodke chala gaya hai??😕 😕 😕 😕

thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

i think maine aaj first time padhi hai ye story, kis baare me hai ye?🤔 🤔 🤔 Vaise abhi to concept kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai.😕 😕 😕

thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20

agle din subhe

papa-breakfast jaldi do
ma-jee
papa-suno aaj shayam ko mere college main meeting ha mujhe dar ho jaayege aane main
ma-jee
papa-n aur dia kaha ha
ma-taiyar ho rahe ha
papa-hmm
dia-di mainne kal yeh rakhi kharidhte the alekh bhaiya ke lie
n-mainne bhi alekh bhaiya ke lie rakhe kharidhte ha
dia-di pahele kitna aacha tha hum subhe subhe alekh bhaiya ko rakhe bandhte the aur bhaia hume kitne sare gifts de te the
n-ha dia aur phir shayam ko hum sab film dekhne jate the
dia-di akekh bhaiya kun ghar chor ke chale gae ka unhe humare yaad nahin aate
ma-agar aate hote toh kya ghar laut ke nahin aata
n/dia-ma
ma-beta mujhe pata ha ke tum dono aaj alekh ko bohot miss kar rahe ho
n-ma papa ne aasa kun kiya
ma-pata nahin beta
ma hugs both n and dia
phone bajta ha
n jaake phone uthtate ha
kripa-hello n
n-ha bol kripa
kripa-n hume aaj library jaane ha tu bhul gae
n-oh ha kripa main bas 5 min main aate hu
n-ma main library jaa rahe hu
n -i am sorry kripa
kripa-its ok chal
n aur kripa raaste se jaa rahe ha
suddenly ek car aake n ke dress ke uper mud spread karke jaata ha
n-heyyyyyy uuuu dekhae nahin deta
car rukta ha
car se ek bohot he handsome larka nikalta ha .(ie our raj)
n larke ke pass aata ha
n-hey u cant u see aapne mere pure dress kharab kar de ha
raj n ke haath main ek cheque deta ha
n is shocked to this
n-hey u samajhte kya ha aapne aapko
raj-tumhe mainne cheque de dia ha now what is ur problem
n-mere problem abhie batate hu
n picks up a stone from the road and throws it on the back side of raj's car
n aapne purse se ek 100 ka note nikal ke raj ke de hue cheque ke saath raj ke haath main dete ha
n-garage jaake aapne car ko thik kara lena
n-chl kripa
kripa-n tu bhi na kya zarurat the us larke se paanga lene ke
n-kripa yeh paisebale ko sabak toh sikhana he chaheye
kripa-thik ha phoolan devi ab aapna gussa chor aur chal
raj is burning with anger
raj office aata ha
office staff-off sir aaj bohot gusse main lagte ha
raj aapne cabin main jaake ac on kar deta ha
raj-ram singh
raj-ram singh
peon-jee sir
raj-ek thanda leke aao jaldi
raj-samajhte kya aapne aaap ko raj shekhawat ko insult karege woh
raj table se uthta ke sab cheeze room main phek rahe ha
karan-aahhhhhhh raj agar mujhe yeh lag jaata tu tujhe mere murder case main jail jaana parta
karan is laughing
raj -plz karan aaj mera mood bohot kharab ha
karan-kun kya mr raj shekhawat ko
raj-karan how dare she uske heemat kaise mere car main pathar phek ne ke
karan-kya hua raj baata mujhe
raj tells everything
karan-wakai main larke main heemat the
raj-karan tujhe maza aa raha ha
karan-off raj chor na ab gussa thuk de

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