*Mayur married...(f-f)* note pg21 and 7

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Poorna.K.K.

@poori1993

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Posted: 16 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: ruchimayur

hey poori..you start with the update.......comments will come gradually

i love ur update😊

yyeah i hv started writin down my ideas...

after clubin them up

will update

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Poorna.K.K.

@poori1993

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Posted: 16 years ago

#122

guyz pl. PM me wid small ideas as hw shud i tek da story

zara slow

fast track

more misunderstanding

less romance

whatevr

just PM me

thanx 4 ur response

poori

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Poorna.K.K.

@poori1993

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Posted: 16 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: sonia054u
aawwww...great update.....i loved it...i liked seeing mayu jealous of dear arrmy....lols....i hope you update soon.....great job...plz make it longer next tim.

thanx sonia

gud 2 noe u lykd it

yeah mayu has 2 get jealous

aftrall nupz is his wifeeeeeeeee...😆

will try to mek it longer

thatz y i asked u guyz 4 more ideas or suggestions

am AN OK-OK writer but i can gather ideas and club them up and make my own ideas frm them as well

so it wud b'cum a quite long update isnt it?????

Edited by poori1993 - 16 years ago

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minalpink100

@minalpink100

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Posted: 16 years ago

#124

nice update keep it up i am daily reader of that updates but dont do more misunderstandings between mayank & nupur please 😊

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@Akanksha Biswas

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Posted: 16 years ago

#125

pls see my update too,

nupur enter s, and sees mayank holding rhea in a fallen position, , she, grows jealous, "romance is slowly, replaced, by, who's that look"

mayank can clearly feel the wave, of jealousy, leaping in his heart, mayank, tells, to aaj shaam, 5:00 baje,

nupur "kaun thi, mayoo"vo meri college friend, hum log ne saath hi pdayi ki thi, london me, bahut saal baad mili, and winks bak at, rhea,

rhea smiles. nupur, frowns, lolz,

nupur again says, to chale, , mayank haa, knowing the slowly creeping thing in nupurs mind,

mayank says, ek minute, nupur, boli, main aa rahi hoo, mayank holds her by her wrist, and she tries to free herself, showing jhoota anger, chodo mayank,", mujhe bahar jana hai, bus humari, wait kar rahi hogi,

mayank,: are tum apne sabse priya cheez ko chod kar ghoomne jaa rahi hoo, jab tum mera entertainment karogi, says, wittily,

nupur , turna back wid a look, sweet one tumhare liye bhi t ookuch hona chahiye, , tanatana, NUPUR LIKE, AHHHHHHA, mayank, mayapari, , mayoo, balo ko chooti hui, and mayank, baaloo ko mat chooo, and then both laugh,and hatho me haath dale go for sight seeing

mayur at a tourist spot,

nupur asks, tum mere liye kya kar sakte ho, mayank; kuch bhi, , marne ki baat mkarna, maroonga to kuch nahi kar paonga,

nlaughs innocentley😳, nupur,, says aur, (they r on a cliff, nupurs heads backward, and mayank faces towards, her, ), slowly walking behind, her leg is abt to slip then myank holds her hand, and usko sambhalte hue,kehta hai, humesha tumahri dhaal banke rahoonga, kyon ki tum meri zindagi ho, aur, mujhe apni zindagi, ko khoni nahi, hai, kyonki, yeh zindagi ka chehra, jannat se bhi khoobsorat hai, . jo mujhe ek hassen khushi ki tasvir dikhata hai, jisko main dundhali nahi padne dooonga, ha jab hum bude ho jayege, to bifocal lens se, is tasveer ko clearly dekh payenge, kyon,

nupur ki ankhe bhar aati , hai,

mayank :dekho,is etum pacific ocean mat bana dena, already tumhare pyar me dooba hoo, ab aur mujhe mat dobbayo, samjhi,

he says laughingly

both share a eyelock, and hug affectionately, promising to be togethr

for eternity, ,

next comedial romance tum log post karoo,

thanks poori, 4 allowin me,i 'll try to post more better next time

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Poorna.K.K.

@poori1993

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Posted: 16 years ago

#126

thanta ok aku, actually mostly i will post my update 2mrw... it will b a continuation of my previous FF... so pl. aku sorry yaar... already wrote it.... then frm da nxt 1 we can decide peacefully as to ven to update....

thanx anywaz

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

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Posted: 16 years ago

#127

awesome work yaar...........loved it completely

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Niharika

@NaughtyNihu

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Posted: 16 years ago

#128

awwwwwwwwwwwww

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwooooooooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwww

fabbbbbbbbbbbbb

yaar!!! poori..

sorry sweety commenting late

pura ff padne main der hogayi..

but u r awusum...

mere tarff se ek jhapi...

MAYUR MARRIED!!!!!!!!!!!

BY GODDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

LUv

NIHU

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Kiran1018

@Kiran1018

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Posted: 16 years ago

#129

wow...thats was such a sweet and cute update......i loved it...especially the part where mayank says, mein tumhare pyaar mein already dooba huva hoon.....that was reeeeaaaalllllllyyyyyyy cute...i adored it.....keep up the good work guys.