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Posted: 16 years ago

Pyaar Main Kabhi Kabhi

Part 11

Recap: Rahul and Muskaan go to collect Muskaan's brother.They find out that their appointment has now been set to a later timing,hence they decide to go shopping.Rahul tells Muskaan he has already brought her sari for the wedding earlier,Muskaan and Rahul buy a sherwani for Rahul.Ranvir and Rahul meet,after reaching back home they find out Nikita is upset and that Abhimanyu can't come in to comfort her because of a meeting.

Rahul cautiously opened the door to Nikita's room.He entered to find Nikita facing away from the door sitting on her bed,staring into space,whilst sobbing.He entered the room and shut the door behind him.He made his way to her bed which was spread with a blue duvet.Nikita continued to stare into space not responding to his arrival.Rahul sat next to her and put his hand on top of her hand.

Rahul-Nikita,kya hua?

Nikita-Rahul(her eyes were filled with pools of tears)

Rahul-Kya hua Nikita?

Nikita-Kuch nahi,mujhe akela chod do.

Rahul-Tum mujhe bata sakti ho,kya ye jis cheez ke bare main,main soch raha hoon who hai?Kya tum uss hi ke bare main upset ho?

Nikita-(nods her head and looks in the other direction)

Rahul-Kya hua Nikita?

Nikita-Rahul….Maine kissi ko bhi nahi bataya hai ki main aur Abhimanyu.

Rahul-Main aur Abhimanyu kya?

Nikita-(starts sobbing)Main aur Abhimanyu.

Rahul-Nikita aage bolo.

Nikita-Rahul tum nahi samjhoge.(turning away from him)

Rahul(shifting closer to her)batao.

Nikita-I love him Rahul,I love him (hugs him and starts crying)

Rahul-Haan mujhe pata hai ki tum aur Abhimanyu ek doosre se pyaar karte ho.

Nikita-Rahul main bohot boori hoon.

Rahul-Kyun?

Nikita-Main abhi bhi (tears roll down her face)Rahul main bohot boori hoon.

Rahul-Tum abhi bhi kya?Tum ab bhi Abhimanyu se pyaar karti ho ,right?

Nikita-(pulls out of the hug and stares into his eyes)Armaan.

Rahul-Tum ,yaane ki um abh bhi Armaan se pyaar karti ho?(shocked)

Nikita-Main bohot boori hoon,(starts crying even more)haan main abh bhi,(gets up and goes towards the window) pelha pyaar itne aasani se nahi bhool payi.

Rahul-Par Abhi…

Nikita-I dunno,usne mujhe bataya ki who mujhse pyaar karta hai aur maine haan bol diya.Main aur kya karti,(turns around to look at him)mujhe laga ke main ye sab bhool jayongi.

Rahul-Par Nikita,ab to Armaan ki shaadi hone waali hai.Woh tumhe nahi pyaar karta,he is already in love.

Nikita-Mujhe pata hain,(sits back down)aur parson raat jo maine use bataaya mujhe use nahi batana chahiye tha.I am really stupid(puts her head in her hands)

Rahul-Nikita,tumhe use bhool na hoga.Aur Abhimanyu ka kya?Usse pata hai?

Nikita-Usse,use pata hai ki I still feel something for him.

Rahul-Phir bhi?

Nikita-Haan,he is a great guy.

Rahul-Nikita,tum rona band karo,listen Armaan tumhara past tha,aur Abhimanyu tumhara present.Shayaad tumhari kahani aisee hi likhi thi,maybe you guys are just meant to be best friends.

Nikita-Hmm,par Armaan mujhse baat bhi nahin kar raha.

Rahul-Who abhi bhi shock main hai ki use ye sab kaise pata nahi chala.Nikita who thodi hi dinon main normal ho jayega.Don't worry.

Nikita- Thanks.

Rahul-(wipes away her tears) Main use baat karta hoon.Theek hain.

Nikita-(nods her head and gives a wry smile)

Rahul-Chalo aab khana khate hain.

Nikita-Mujhe bhook nahi hain.

Rahul-Aise kaise bhook nahi hai,mujhe pata hai Nikita ,tumhe bohot bhook lagi hai.

Rahul-Chalo(grasps her hand and takes her out of the room)

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Mukaan was busy staring into space in the dining room.She had cleaned up everything after Rahul's mom and Ranvir had finished their dinner.Rahul's mom had retired to her room and Ranvir had also decided to go and sleep early.She was patiently waiting for Rahul to arrive and have his dinner,she glanced up to notice Rahul arriving down the stairs clutching Nikita's hands.Nikita was wiping away her tears and there was an appearance of a sweet smile.Muskaan immediately went to the kitchen and heated up the rest of the food.

Nikita and Rahul sat down on the dinner table waiting for Muskaan to arrive with the food.Finally Muskaan carried in the steaming pots of curry and laid them to rest on a hot food plate.She served the two and then sat down to have her own dinner.

Rahul-Muskaan tune abhi tak dinner nahi kiya?

Muskaan-Kaise karti Rahul,main tumhara wait kar rahi thi.

Nikita-(was listening into their conversation and digging into her food,upon hearing those words she choked ,coughing and spluttering.Muskaan immediately passed her a glass of water)Thanks,tum dono kitne cute ho.

Muskaan-(smiled)Waise tum ab theek ho right?

Nikita-Ya,ofcourse.

Muskaan-Good,tum haste hue hi achi dikh ti ho.

Nikita-Thanks.

Muskaan beamed and looked over at Rahul,who had been busy staring at her,she gave him a stern look and continued on with eating her food.He avoided her stern gaze and continued on eating his food.After finishing,Muskaan grabbed all their plates and put them in the sink.

Nikita-Guys umm main ab sone jaati hoon,bohot raat ho chuki hain.

Muskaan-Okay!Goodnight!

Rahul-Goodnight!

Muskaan tied her hair up into a bun and started washing the dishes,Rahul stared at her throughout her actions.Muskaan could feel his stern gaze and had turned bright red.Rahul started moving towards her,Muskaan slowed down her speed of washing the dish.Rahul turned the light of the kitchen off and looked at Muskaan.The moonlight was streaming in through the window,enough for her to see Rahul and her task at hand.

Muskaan looked at him from the corner of the eye,and blushed harder.Rahul grabbed hold of her arms from behind and cuddled her,Muskaan popped the last dish into the rack and turned around to face Rahul,he moved his hands from her arms to her waist.Rahul leaned in to kiss her,when Muskaan wiped some foamy soap onto his face and started laughing.Rahul smiled inwardly at her childish behavior and stared deep into her eyes.He let go of one of his hands of her waist and moved it to her hair.He undid her bun ,letting her curly hair fall on her face.He swept back the hair falling on her waist.Muskaan's muscles tightened as she looked at Rahul.Rahul lifted her jaw up so that she could directly look into his eyes.Muskaan stared at his eyes and immersed herself into them.She closed her eyes as he leaned in to kiss her; once again.They were just inches apart,Muskaan could feel his breath on his.

When,The tubelight of the kitchen flickered,upon sensing this Muskaan opened her eyes to notice her brother standing there.She immediately pushed Rahul away from her.Ranvir meanwhile gasped as he saw them two so close.Muskaan tried not to meet her brother's eyes,as he held his gaze upon Rahul.

Rahul gulped as he realized that Ranvir had just noticed everything that happened.Ranvir looked from Rahul towards Muskaan who was fixing her hair up.

Ranvir-Ye kya chal raha tha yaha?

Rahul-Umm kuch nahi.

Ranvir-Muskaan,batao kya chal raha tha?

Muskaan-Kuch nahi.

Ranvir went up to Muskaan and shook her up.

Ranvir-Batao Muskaan,kya chal raha tha?

Muskaan-Kuch nahi.

Rahul-Dekh Ranvir,hum dono ek saath hai.

Ranvir-(laughed mockingly)Rahul aur Muskaan,who bhi ek saath.Mujhe to laga tha ki tum dono sirf dost ho.

Rahul-Hum ek doosre se pyaar kar te hai.

Ranvir-Kya tum isse pyaar karti ho Muskaan?

Muskaan-Haan Karti hoon

Ranvir-Well Mujhe pata tha ki kuch chal raha hai,You guys are meant to be.Bachpan se lekar aaj tak lad te rahe ho,aur aab who pyaar main badal gaya.Awesome love story.

Muskaan-So tum naraaz nahi ho?

Ranvir-Ofcourse not!

Rahul-(gives a sigh of relief)Good,great buddy (gives him a handshake)

Ranvir-As long as tum dono limitations main raho,I don't care.

Muskaan and Rahul looked towards each other smiling.

Muskaan-By the way tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Ranvir-Aise hi aaya tha?Kyun sorry tum dono ko disturb kiya.

There is an awkward silence as no one continues to say anything.

Ranvir-Aneways main yaha paani peene aaya tha.

Muskaan-oh so isilye aaye the.

Ranvir(looks uncomfortably)Haan.

Rahul-Okay cool.Aneways chalo bohot raat ho chuki hain,so mujhe so lena chahiye.

Muskaan-Goodnight!

Ranvir-Goodnight!

Precap:Everyone finds out about Ranvir being an ex- drug addict.

Alright guys that was the part,It wasn't that interesting lol lol but the next part will be! I just wanted Nikita's matter to be out of the way.Will update again tomorrow!
Do comment and criticise,suggestions are also welcome.Would love some! Cheers,
Radhika
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey great going!!!
continue soon.....
plz if possible, add me to ur PM list
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cute gauri

hey great going!!!
continue soon.....
plz if possible, add me to ur PM list

Hey! Will surely add you to my PM list!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Sambha!!!! I loved it! Rahul is so good with Niki. Seriously an awsome friend!
You're R-M scene, seriously, I had two songs playing in my head. When he let her hair down, I had that Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai from Hum Aapke Hain Kaun playing and then it switched to Mere Rang Mein Rangne Waali from Maine Pyaar Kiya. Too good!!!
For some reason that thing with Ranvir was kinda fishy. Why did he look uncomfortable when he told Muskaan he came to drink water. what did he REALLY go there to do? Drugs again?
Can't wait for the next part!
Gabbar
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Posted: 16 years ago
I would have killed you if you didnt pm me about this part... 😆 but like a good girl you did... and I love you for that! 😊 awesome part... I loved the RM scene! 👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
aawww loved RM sence😳 that was awesome gr8 going thxx for pm 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
Tht was such a cute RM scene...AMAZING !!
Thnx for the PM....waiting for ur next upd!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

Sambha!!!! I loved it! Rahul is so good with Niki. Seriously an awsome friend!

You're R-M scene, seriously, I had two songs playing in my head. When he let her hair down, I had that Pehla Pehla Pyaar Hai from Hum Aapke Hain Kaun playing and then it switched to Mere Rang Mein Rangne Waali from Maine Pyaar Kiya. Too good!!!
For some reason that thing with Ranvir was kinda fishy. Why did he look uncomfortable when he told Muskaan he came to drink water. what did he REALLY go there to do? Drugs again?
Can't wait for the next part!
Gabbar

Haha yeah I think thats the best romantic scene I have written up to date lol
Love both the songs!
Komal not gna reveal anything about the sinister happenings..Lets leave it to maybe maybe not
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: muskaan_ankita

I would have killed you if you didnt pm me about this part... 😆 but like a good girl you did... and I love you for that! 😊 awesome part... I loved the RM scene! 👏

Thanx yeah well I am not a big fan of dying so early!! Lol lol
Thanx yeah one of my best romantic scenes up to date!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: divyashaz

aawww loved RM sence😳 that was awesome gr8 going thxx for pm 😃

Thnax Divu,glad you liked it!

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