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kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1111

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah🤗 its really a mind blowing one⭐️ mind blowing mam😍 i have just read ur all 3updates😳😳 and sorry😭 for being so late😳😳 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Dil Hi Dil Mein Hum Tumhain Pyar Bahot Krtey Hain,
Lekin Saach Hai K Bataney Se Bahot Dartey Hain,
Khud Pe To Hai Yaqin Saanson Pe Magar Nahi,
Moat Se Nahi Aey "Khushi" Zindagi Se Hum Dartey Hain."

hey dear thank u soo much 4 ure comments!!! we are glad u liked the last 3 parts!!!!....dnt be sorry dear 4 being l8 its ok, and more than enuf 4 us that u took time out 2 comment!!!😳...we will surely cont soon...and ure welcome 4 the pm!!! thanx 4 the wonderful lines like always!! there very beautiful!!!!😳 and the flowers 2!!!...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi😳

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1112

Originally posted by: -Aarti-
A1 part....awsome... morning scene superb....angad kripa ki shadi ki shoping dats gr8 par yeh kashish ko kya hogaya usse maa word inta awkward kyun laga..................dahi mein naamak was soo cutee haan sujal ki sari demand kiss pe khatam hoti hai khane se phele baad mein sonne se phele subha mein uth te ke saath sirf kiss kiss hota hai us ke muh pe.....inko raat mein soo na to aata hi nahi soo cute jodii..........plzz conti soon

hey aarti jaanu no thanx 4 ure comments!! we are more than happy u liked this part....we are glad u njoed the morning scene....n yes ab yeh dono AK ki shaadi ki shopping kar rahe hain....dear Kashish ko ajeeb tabhi lagga kyunki woh abhi maa nahin banni...agar uske 10 12 bache hote tho nahin lagta😆.....😆 sahi kaha jaan, waakay mein Sujal ki saari demand kiss se shuru hoke kiss pe khatam😆aur sahi kaha sona nahin aata inhe...Sujal ko tho waise bhi aadat thi shaadi se pehle ki ab Kashish ko bhi hogayi hai uske saath rehkar😆....and yes they are a cute pair😳...will surely cont soon...keep readign and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1113

Originally posted by: sknra
excellent update yaar sujal kashish rocking...... i love it. bt kashish nay child ko dekh kar ajeeb sa behave kiya i'm confused. over all great part.
waiting for next one..

hey seher sweetheart no thanx 4 the comments!! we are glad u liked this update!!!....yes SK r rockign no doubt😳...and dear Kashish ne aisa isliye behave kiya bcoz she doesnt have any kids aur usse ajeeb lagga...will surely update soon...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi😳

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1114

Originally posted by: lekhaishwar

arre yaar im just at a loss of words and awesome part 👏

Hey sweetheart thank u soo much 4 ure comments!!! we are glad u njoyed this part!!!!...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi😳

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1115

Originally posted by: angel 16
lovelyyyyyyy n cuteeeeeee part........starting as usual fantastic wid loadzzzz of romace😉.........than shooping part relli very nice specially that boy who called kashish her mom😆😆.n her reaction............than dinner was lovely bt this time sujal's kiss dose was xtra one bf4 dinner.......not bad.he never loase a single chance😆😆.lagey raho..........n now i m thinking that wen earlier they went to shimla sujal didn't get a single chance to get romace wid kashish.wat w'l happen this time..........😆😆.me waiting to know.love neach n very bit of d part..........overall xcellent one⭐️

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hey heenu sweetheart no thanx 4 ure comments!!! we are glad u liked this part....😆😆😆yhh the startings are usually romantic, ab shuruaat itni romantic hoti hai, tabhi tho poora din bhi hota haina😉😆😆...we are gladu liked the shopping part and that boy calling Kashish mom😆 poor girl was thinking yeh bacha kahan se aagaya.....😆sahi kaha is baar Sujal got an extra dose inbetween having dinner😆😆😆 and hw can Sujal miss a single chance, not possible!!!!😆😆😆...ab u must have seen Shimla mein kya hua by now so is baar uska Shimla ka trip kaafi acha gaya😉😆😆....no thanx once agen jaan...keep readiong and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi😳

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1116

Originally posted by: swetha10
Wow lovely update.. karva chauth was amazing.. SK at the romantic best...enjoyed it.. PLzz continue soon...

hey swetha dear thanx 4 the comments!!!...we are glad u liked it and enjoyed the karva chauth sequence....and yes there always at there romantic best.....we will surely cont soon...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi😳

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kashishdabest

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1117

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

hey summi and kashish...........................sorry 4 late coomment 😭...................buhat din ky bd kar rahi hon.........................actually mera pass time nai tha mein apne paperz mein buhat busy thi................................but now i m back 👏...........................aur ab mein coomment bhi karo gi..............................kia likh hon fic ky bare mein awesome going👏..........................kitna pyaar hai dono mein................................sujal ka birthday wala part buhat he acha tha.............................kitne pyaar se woh pura jannat ko sajathe hai.....................................aur phir sujal uss jannat ko dekh kar haran rha ja tha hai.................................aur kitne sare gifts uss ko milte hai aur sab se speciall us ko apni dulhan milti hai.😳.........................uss tarah kashish ko dekh kar samjh nai a raha tha.......................kashish kitna badle gai thi sujal ky pyaar mein.........................aur phir woh dono eik hogye...............................yeh part parh kare i was feeling so happy.................................kitna acha part tha...............................

after a beautiful night ..........................morning was so pleasant ........................kitne pyaar se dono uthe the...........................phir sujal kashish ko tang kartha hai..........................pyaar bari baatein kartha hai..................................cooking karte hai aur cricket bhi khile the hai😆...............................that part was superb .............................kitne pyaar se woh dono shaddi ko dekh the hai aur dono apni 1st anniversary per phir se shaddi kare gy..............................

sujal jab uss land lord ky pass ja tha hai tu kiyne gussey mein tha...................aur yeh abhay tu kitna bura larka tha...................................sujal ko hospital mein dekh kar kashish kitna roti hai aur sujal phir usse kitne pyaar se samjhatha hai😭..............................lekin injured hone ky bawajood sujal ka romance ka bhoot nai jata hai😆.................................woh kashish se usse tarah react kartha hai...........................abhay kashish ko kitna tang karta hai😡................ghar per bhi a jata hai...............................i m happy kashish sujal ko sab kuch bata deti hai................................sujal us se naraz bhi nai hoti balky uss ka saath deta hai..................................aur kia fighting kartha hai abhay se ................................bilkul eik action hero ki tarah aur apni heroine ko bacha leta hai uss se👏.....................................aur phir se sab kuch tek ho jata hai......................................and the never ending romance conitnues............................

last two patrs were mindblowing................................fic parhne mein buhat he maza a tha hai..........................dono ki pyaar bari fighting ,romance aur suajl ka tang karna..................................dono ka pyaar din ba din bar tha ja raha hai................................karwachuth wali night kashish ko is tarah dekh kar meri tu ankhaen koli rah gai😳...........................kis tarah se usne sujal ka rasta bolck karda tha............................aur phir dono ki pyaari aur romantice full night shuru hogi.................................

aweosme wirting summi and kashish👏 ...............................buhat maza a rha hai parhne mein jaldi con't karna.......................................

hey samrah sweetheart thank u sooo much 4 ure comments...we are glad u liked it....and dear dnt apologise 4 being late its ok we can understand u must be bzy!!.....we hpe ure exams went well...gr88 2 have u back and 2 read ure comments....thanx once agen dear 4 liking the progression of the ff....yhh unmein bohat pyar hai...we are glad u liked Sujal's bday part...aur waakay mein Kashish bohat pyar se sajati hai Jannat ko....aur haan Jannat ko dekh ke woh bohat hairaan hota hai aur gifts ka tho pucho hi math, surprises hi suprises uske liye😆😆...and yes finally usko uski dulhan miljaathi hai....yes Kashish has changed a lot in Sujal's love...we are more than happy u njoyed the part...we are glad u liked the mornign after....aur Sujal tho usse humesha hi tang karta rehta hai....we are glad u njoyed teh cooking scene and the cricket😆.....haan woh waakay mein bohat pyar se shaadi ko dekhte hain and yes they promised 2 get narried on their anniversarry....yhh we knw u all hated abhay, we did 2, and yes Sujal got hurt par phir bhi romance karna nahin chora😆...yes Kashish finally jaake Sujal ko bata deti hai and then Sujal Abhay ki pitai karta hai!! he deserved it!!...and yes finally phirse sab thek hojaata hai....😆😆😆yes the romance does continue!!!!...soo sweet of u!! we are lad ure njoying the fic!!!.....and hw there relationship is progressing....😆 karwa chauth ki raat Kashish ko dekh ke sab shocked reh gaye thay dear so dnt worry...thanku soo much dear 4 liking it...we'll surely cont soon...keep reading and commenting...luv Kashish and Summi

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1118

summi jaanu & kashu yaar pehli baat i'am sorry yaarrr... lo maine kaan bhi pakde.. i know main itne dino se gayab hoon.. aur maine comment bhii post nahii kiya.. lekin kya karti i was stuck with work.. issi liye karr nahii paayi.. i know tum dono kahoge kii i should not say sorry lekin kabhi kabhi kehna padtha hai...ab i'll start with typing of my comment... i hope tum dono ko meri yeh comment pasand aaye...😊 well itne saare parts likh diye tum dono ne tho here is my comment on what i liked... and what i loved.... pehli baat tho tum dono yeh jaanthe hii ho kii i completely love sujal, kashish in your fanfic.. sahii maayino mein kahoon tho yeh hoga kii sujal, kashish duniyaan kii world best jodi hai.. they are just too sweet... i know sujal, kadhish mein bhii kahiin na kahiin kuch khamiyaan tho zaroor hai... i'am saying like this kyunke it is normal kii har insaan mein koi na koi khami hothi hai.. no person present in this world is without flaws... lekin sabse badi baat tho yahii hai kii how people deal with their flaws... sujal, kashish kii khamiya ek doosre ke saath ke saath durr hothi hai... the flaws which sujal has is looked after by kashish.. aur kashish ke joh flaws hai unhe sambhal ne ke liye sujal tho hai na.. issi tarah se tho both sujal, kashish ek doosre ke liye perfect hothe hai... aur un dono ke saath kii wajah se both of them have over-come their flaws and together they have formed this special bond... a bond which can never be broken..i simply love their bond.. it is so pure.. real very sachcha & also very achcha.. jis tarah se sujal, kashish hamesha ek doosre se har ek baat ko share karthe hai... jis tarah hamesha woh ek doosre ka saath dethe hai... ek yakeen hai sujal, kashish ke anokhe rishthe hai... aur woh yakeen yeh hai kii chahe kuch bhii ho jaye, duniyaan kyun na is taraf se us taraf ho jaye, chahe yeh kyun na ho jaye kii the sun starts rising from the west instead of the east lekin itna sab hone ke bawajood bhii sujal, kashish hamesha ek doosre ke hii rahenge.. saari duniyaan kyun na un dono ke khilaaf khadi ho jaye uske bawajood bhii sujal, kashish honge ek doosre ke liye.. aur wohii dono ek doosre kii duniyaan bhii honge.. yeh sahii bhii tho hai... sujal's life is there because of kashish.. aur kashish life is there bacause of the presense of sujal... they are perfect to the T for each other... waise jin parts par maine comment nahii kiya un parts mein tho bohat saari cheezein aisi hui joh very too good.. mind-blowing.. waise i really enjoyed sujal ke birthday ka part.. the birthday part of sujal, kashish was so damn well written... kashish ne tho sachchi mein sujal ka birthday sujal ke liye bohat hii zyada khaas bana diya hai... that was just too amazing.. kashish ne har woh cheez kiya jisse she knew kii sujal ko khushi hogi... and that is the best part.... sujal, kashish ka dinner , their dance, unke beech kii baatein their love.. awwww yeh saari cheezein padhkar main sachchi mein khayalon kii duniyaan mein khone lag gayi.... then jaise maine kaha tha kii sujal ko sabse ahem tofhe ke roop mein kashish usse apne aap ko soupegi.. aur waise hii hua.. yaayy.. yippee... i'am really happy about this... and sabse zyada tho mujhe is baat kii khushi hai kii is baar pehla kadam kashish ne liya... she took the initiative of going close to sujal.... aur waise yeh sujal hai bada sweet... jab kashish sujal kii taraf apna kadam bada rahii hai, sujal tab bhii kashish se yahii kehtha hai kii he can wait for kashish if kashish is not readyfor it... yeh sujal na bilkul bhudhu hai.. he cannot the advances joh kashish uske taraf karr rahii hai.. hehehe... waise is baat par main sujal se yeh kehna chahthi hoon kii sujal tum agar aise hii wait karthe rahoge na tho kahiin aisa na ho jaye kii tum shaddi ke baad bhii kuwara hii banke raho... hahaha.. yeh tho achcha hua kii kashish tumhare rukh ne se rukhi nahii.. aur usne sambhal liya... just too good... i completely loved their romance bit... and mujhe behad khushi hai kii is stage of life mein jaakar woh dono hamesha ke liye ek ho gaye hai... do jism ek naam bann gaye hai... sujal kashish ke romance ke baare mein padhkar mujhe ek gaana yaad aa raha tha "baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hai.. jaane kya bole mann.. dole sunn ke badan.. dhadkan bani zubaan...." waise kashish ne us ghar ka naam jannat rakha hai na... it is the apt name for it... i'am sure jab sujal, kashish subaah jage honge unhe zaroor woh ghar, woh nazara, ek doosre ke itne kareeb rehne kii baat, sari bandishein thodkar ek hone kii baat all would have constituted the house as true jannat for them.. aur yeh sahii bhi hai... jannat means house of paradise na... aur sujal, kashish ke liye yeh bilkul sahii saabit hua hai.... waise i liked the next morning ched chaad between the two of them... un dono ka romance ke baare mein padhkar tho main sharam se paani paani hue jaa rahii thi... waise sahii mayino mein sujal, kashish kii asli jannat ek doosre ke pass, ek doosre kii baahon mein hai... tho ab jab sujal kii routine shuru hogi na i mean office jaane lagega tho i'am sure uske liye bohat mushkil hoga kashish se durr rehna.. ab kashish ke itne kareeb aane ke baad socho kii kya sujal usse durr jaana chahega.. naah.. mujhe nahii lagtha... hehehe... ab on the other side sujal ka woh land kii problem chal rahii hothi hai... aur yeh kya us landlord ne sujal ko hurt kiya.. uski tho main... bohat ghussa aaya mujhe us insaan par... samaj tha kya hai woh khud ko... aur doosri taraf yeh abhay ka problem.. yeh abhay ko koi kaam nahii hai kya.. hamesha kashish ke peeche hotha hai... ufff.... yeh abhay kii tho khair nahii.. bas ek baar sujal ko patah chalne do usse sach kii aur phir woh abhay ko thikhane lagayega.. i liked the part jahaan kashish ko sujal kii chot se takleef ho rahii hai... this clearly shows kii sujal, kashish ek doosre mein jite hai... dekho na sujal ko chot pohanchthi hai dard kashish ko hotha hai.. aur aasoo kashish ke behthe hai tho wohii aasoo sujal ke dil ko cheer kar rakh dethe hai... i'am smply fida over the relationship which the two of them share... tho finally sujal ne kashish se keh hii diya about his landlord problem.. and i'am sure sujal kashish ko sach batane ke baad he must have felt very relieved.. he must be feeling like uske dil se ek bohat bada bojh nikal gaya ho... aur i liked the kashish us mouke par sujal ko support karti hai.. and i also liked it kii woh landlord se milne jaana chah rahii hai.. she is taking up the matter in her hands.. sujal is reluctant i think sujal is reluctant because he feels kii that landlord may tell something to kashish or harm her.. aur sujal tho kashish ko isse bachana chahtha hai.. lekin kashish tho badi ziddi hai.. woh tab jaake maani jab sujal usse wahaan us landlord ke pass le gaya... mujhe achcha laga jis tarah kashish ne us matter ko handle kiya... the way she spoke to the landlord & convinced him... i'am so glad... joh kaam sujal nahii kar paaya woh kaam kashish ne karke dikhaya.. kashish taking the initiative also showed kii kashish ke liye sujal ka sapna poora hona kitna zaroori hai... and kashish is sujal's better half na tho yeh kashish ka farz banntha hai sujal ke sapne ko poora karna... chalo very good ab woh landlord bhii maan gaya.. ab sujal apne sapne kii taraf bina kissi rukawat ke badh saktha hai...aur agar koi rukawat aa bhi gayi tho sujal har rukawat ka saamna karr saktha hai with kashish by his side.. sujal, kashish ek doosre kii taakat hai... ab sujal, kashish saath mein khush hai.. unke beech kii katti-meeti baatein tho i seriously love.. unka pyaar... hyee.. kahiin meri hii nazar na un dono ko.... lekin mujhe lagtha hai un dono ke rishthe par yeh abhay kii nazar lag rahii thi.. ab tho yeh abhay ka kuch na kuch tho karna hii hoga.. he is just doing too much... aur ab tho woh sujal, kashish ke ghar par hii aagaya.. wish i could kick the life of him... God... just look at his guts... such a disgusting person... aur yeh kya kashish ko warn bhi karke jaatha hai.. what does he think of himself.. kashish ek shaddi shuda ladki hai.. and he is eyeing her.. sharam nahii aati hai kya usko.... aur yeh kashish hai kii sujal ko kuch nahii bata rahii hai.. this seriously is the worst part... i seriously think kii kashish has to tell sujal the truth... woh samaj kyun nahii rahii kii agar woh sujal ko saari sachchayi batayegi tho uski problem sujal samjega aur us problem ko kashish se koso durr karega... aur us abhay kii wajah se pehli baar kashish sujal par chillayi.. this is not fair on kashish's part.. yes i understand kii woh pareshaan hai.. lekin iska matlab tho yeh nahii kii woh sujal par chillaye... kashish ko koi hakh nahii banntha to hurt sujal, jab kii sujal ko tho is baare woh khud kuch nahii bata rahii hai.. lekin ek aur taraf se dekha jaye tho kehthe hai kii hum ghussa ussi par dikhathe hai joh humare kareeb hotha hai.. aur aise pareshaani ke mouke par kashish ne bhii woh kiya... woh sujal se beintahaan pyaar karthi hai aur ussi par kashish apna saara ghussa nikaal baiti.... agli subaah ka bit i liked jahaan kashish says sorry to sujal... and the talk between them was too good.. mujhe bohat achcha laga... aur kahiin na kahiin sujal bhi yeh baat mehsoos karne laga hai kii aisi koi tho pareshaani hai joh kashish ko andar hii andar khaye jaa rahii hai.. and sujal is being the best understanding husband.. he is waiting kii kab khud kashish usse apni pareshaani kii wajah share kare.. & he is not forcing her to reveal the matter... ab yeh kashish is at home aur yeh abhay comes again.. God.. mann karr raha hai kii us abhay ko main chappal maroon... uske liye sahii saza yeh hoga kii leave mad dogs on him.. aur saare pagal kutte usse noch noch kar khayenge & tab atleast uska pagalpann durr hoga... he is such a pschyo... uska naam lene se bhi mujhko ghin aathi hai... aur yeh kya uski itni himmat kii woh kashish se kahe kii he will tell sujal kii kashish is being unfaithful to him.. himmat tho dekho us abhay kii.. is baat par main abhay se kehna chahongi abhay tu ek baar koshish karke tho dekh sujal ke pass kashish ke baare mein ek bhii shabd bura kehne kii.. uske baad sujal ne agar tera mooh nahii toda na, tujhe zinda choda na tho tab mujhe kehna... he is disgusting , creepy being.. not fit to live... yeh ab achcha hua kii maria advised kashish to tell sujal everything.. well maria ne ek fair advise diya hai kashish ko & i'am glad kashish has accepted it... ab shaam ka bit i liked sujal, kashish ka bahar jaana... their eating at a dhaba all this was too good.. i completely loved it... then finally jab woh log ghar aathe hai.. kashish tears flow.. & she ends up telling sujal about abhay.. aur sujal ko i'am sure kashish par thoda sa ghusa tho aaya hii hoga kyunke kashish ne usse yeh baat nahii batayi.. lekin seeing kashish haalat he knows kii kashish ko uski zaroorat hai.. i liked joh baatein sujal ne kashish se kahii.. this shows how much, to what extent he trusts kashish.. and sujal ka support hai kashish ke pass this is awesome.. sujal ka idea is nice that they will both go meet abhay & teach him a lesson... well sahii hai kyunke humein hamesha humare darr ka datt kar saamna karna chahiye... we should face it head on.. jisse darr humse darr kar durr bhaag jaye.... after many days us din i'am sure kashish might have slept peacefully in sujal's arms.. ab agle din wahii hua joh socha aur chaha tha.. sujal, kashish go to meet abhay... aur atlast sujal ne mere mann kii muraad ko poora kar diya.. he banged abhay to my hearts content... mazaa aaya... achcha hua.. abhay deserves every bit of it.... waise sujal, kashish mein insaniyath thi tho they took abhay to the hospital.. lekin is baat par i would like to tell sujal kii there was no need... to take abhay.. usse wahii chod dethe marrne ke liye tho duniyaan mein ek bojh tho kum ho jaatha... aur jab doctor ne kaha kii abhay ko mental hospital mein admit karna hoga that was too good.. ab abhay sadega pagalon ke beech pagal bann kar.. us abhay ne kitni zindagiyaan barbaad kar dii... ab un sab ladkiyon ke dil ko sukoon mila hoga.. aur sab tahe dil se sujal ka shukriyada karr rahe honge.. jahaan bhi hai woh... ab atlast kashish ke dil se bhi us abhay ka darr nikal gaya.. waise bhi jab thak sujal, kashish ke saath hai kashish ko kissi se bhi darr ne kii zaroorat nahii hai... sujal, kashish par ek bhi kharoch, ek bhi aanch kabhi nahii aane dega... itna tho kashish bhii janthi hai.. aur kashish yeh bhii jaanthi hai kii she can trust sujal aankh band karke....
tho ab dekhthe hii dekhthe theen mahine ka waqt beet gaya.. & sujal, kashish are leading a blissful life... i liked the theen mahine baad ka karwachauth bit... it was too sweet.. both are fasting for each other... woh dono apne har kaam ke liye ek doosre par dependent hai... jaise kii sujal ke kapde... it is too good.. aur in theen mahino mein sujal, kashish ka bond has become even more strong... stronger then ever... i liked jaise sujal ne kashish ko mehendi lagayi.. yeh sujal na kashish ke pyaar mein poori tarah se rang gaya hai.. and ab tho sujal ke liye kashish se zyada kuch nahii mayine rakhthi, not even his business.. i'am sure sujal ke liye kashish ka ek halka sa smile is worth more than a million... i really liked their romance which followed the karwachauth.. in dono ko sachchi mein most romantic couple ka title dena chahiye... hyee... reading there romance i'am becoming laal like a tomato..i liked the scene jahaan kashish teases sujal by giving him the namak waala dhai... hehe... and sujal cornering kashish... hailaa... their jodi, their romance gives me high temperature fever.... waise is ched-chaad mein hii tho unki zindagi basi hai... their smile... their love all can be seen in the teasing bit... just too lovely, wonderful... ab ek aur mahine ka waqt bhii guzar jaatha hai & it is time for angad, kripa's shaddi... sujal, kashish, angad leave for Shimla.. wahaan i liked the teasing joh kashish aur angad milkar sujal kii karthe hai anurag ke saamne... sujal tho naraaz ho gaya kashish se... i'am sure this naraaz hona was a act by sujal taaki sujal kashish ke saath akele reh sake... lekin agar sujal sachchi naraaz hua to bhii kashish knows all the ways to manaofy sujal... just one kiss from kashish & sujal will be hooked...hehehe.. aur dekho kashish ne sujal ko mana bhi liya.. and their naughty talks... kii sujal kab ziddi hotha hai.. hyeeeeeeee.. main marr jawaa... now na chahthe hue bhi sujal has to stay away from kashish as kashish has to go to her home... ab jaise taise evening hotha hai.. & sujal comes to kashish's house.. aur yahaan yeh sujal phir se shuru hogaya apne romance ke saath... uff.. sujal sharam karo kuch tho.. neeche tumhare dost ka sangeet hai, meheni function hai.. aur yeh sujal hai kii kahiin bhi shuru ho jaatha hai... lekin phir bhi i like it... mujhe yeh bohat achcha laga kii sujal, ayan dost bann gaye hai.. nice to see that... waise ayan ki nayi gf uski maths teacher.. hahaha... lage raho ayan... then the function starts.. aur sujal ka kashish ke liye gaana aur dance karna.. yeh sujal tho chupa rustum nikla... shararthi dramebaaz hai woh... mujhe woh bit bohat pasand aaya jab sujal, phir se kashish ke haathon par mehendi rakhtha hai... and then the way anjali & kripa blame kavya , angad kii unhe sujal se seekhna chahiye.... sujal se kavya & angad surely need to learn the art of love...
and then sujal ko sab milkar ched na.. kashish kii sharam.... aww.. all this was absolutely beautiful... and then woh khana khilane ka bit was simply superb.. and angad, kripa, kashish, sujal kii baatein very well written indeed... i liked the night time of sujal, kashish ka night bit very much.... sujal ka he;ping kashish to change... too sweett... then ab agle din angad, kripa kii shaddi was nice... kashish ka jhoota churana, sujal ka uske saath dena was all ek dum mast.. aur waise yeh sujal ka idea itna bura nahii tha kii he & kashish also get married again along with angad, kripa... aur kashish ne sujal se kaha kii they will get married again on their saal-gira.. bohat achche.... finally even angad, kripa shaddi ke bandhan mein judh gaye.... aur kashish will have company back home... very good... ab waqt kaise beet gaya kissi ko patah bhii nahii chala aur che mahine ka waqt is over... ab is beech sujal ne apna dream project bhi poora kar liya hai.... angad, krpa, sujal, kashish dinner was nice... sujal ke saath saath ab angad ko bhii dhai shakkar kii aadat ho gayi hai... hehehe... sujal, angad both are foodies... i liked kashish's thought kii woh asli sujal ko sab se milana chahthi hai... she wants to show the real sujal to all.. she wants to be proud of her husband, her better half.. her life in front of the world.. aur aisa kabhi ho saktha hai kii kashish kuch chahe aur sujal usse mana kare no chance... kashish kii har baat sujal ke sarr aankhon par.. aur kyun na ho sujal ne kashish ko apni palkon par joh bitake rakha hai... tho sujal kashish kii party waali baat ko bhi maan gaya... aur mujhe khushi hai kii kashish asked sujal about keeping a party, instead of deciding it on her own.. this shows to what extent kashish cares for sujal's feelings..... ab agli subah it is time to inaugurate sujal's dream project.. matlab sujal, kashish kii zindagi mein one of the most important days... ab angad tho is so nervous kii usneapni chaar line kii speech ka practice do din kiya.. hehehe.. too funny... sujal was speech was fantastic, marvelous, superb, excellent, fabulous, out standing.. sujal kii speech padthe hue i was having goose-bumps... his speech brought tears to my eyes.. well done... then kashish ka speech.. that too touched my heart.. sabke saamne aa hii gaya kii sujal, kashish ek doosre ke liye jeete hai.. & i'am happy people appreciate it.. waise sujal bohat achcha hai.. uski wajah se us landlord kii zindagi sudhar gayi... he is just too good... kashish ka sujal mein Rab ko dekhna lazmi hai.. sujal hai hii itna achcha aur sachcha... tho kashish ne ribbon kaata aur sujal ke dream project ka Sree Ganesh kar diya.. awesomeee.... just too good.... aaj thak only the kashish knew sujal kitna achcha hai, aur sujal, kashish ek doosre se kitna pyaar karthe hai.. lekin ab sab ko patah chal gaya... this is just great... rocking... hat's off to both of you.. tum dono kii writing is lajawaab just like ou jodi sujal kashish.. keep up the good work going guys... it is absolutely stupendous.. out of this world..☺️
☺️ now my dearies coming to my guess on the coming up parts.. well mujhe aisa lagtha hai kii in the coming up parts there is loads of romantic moments which are coming up between sujal & kashish... un dono ke beech khatti, meeti baatein, chotti chotti nokh jhokh bhii zaroor hogi.. i think there will also be a bit jahaan shayad sujal kissi aur ladki ke saath hoga aur kashish yeh dekhkar bohat jealous hogi... aur kashish sujal kachcha chabayegi... hehe... may be sujal, kashish ko manane uske peeche papad belega.. and i also think kii lots & lots of masti is on the cards with angad, kripa, sujal, kashish... and also not to forget i think there will be loads of sweet, tweet moments between sujal, kashish... and too much of romantic scenes.. & i think the party is going to be filled with total fun... i also think kii there will be instances jahaan sujal, kashish, kripa , angad will talk about their past lives.. share their first crush, embarrassing moments & so it is going to be smiles all te way... so kashu, summi kya mera guess sahi hai.. mujhe zaroor batana.. i really want to know...😉 my dearies please post the next part soon.. waiting for it eagerly.. and this is my biggest comment ever hope you liked it..😊😛😃

Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago

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sheela

@Aamnakideewani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1119

nice part keep up the good work and plz post the next part soon i am thinking agay kya hoga?

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Nidha

@nidha1983

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Posted: 16 years ago

#1120

woah🤗 that's really an awesome one⭐️ superb😍 mind blowing dear☺️😍 sorry for late reply😳 jut read ur both parts😳😳 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

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