She's My Jannat. PART14 Pg.34 (09/04) - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
hey just read ur fanfic its very gud plz continue and ad me in ur pm list

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey i just read ur ff...
I'm really enjoying it!!!
Can you plzz pllz plzz add me to your pm list.....
nd plzz cont. soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Guys!! Fridee Niyte!! Update Time is Here!!
Sorry, i cdnt update i wsnt in town but now i am!! soo...Update coming up in 2mins!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😊 After a Long Wait! Here is Part5!


The Mystery Continues…


Firescape! 8:15pm.

Armaan was sitting on the stairs holding his head down.
Thinking: What to do?? What is going on? Ridhima aise…C'mon Armaan! Think! What's right? What's wrong?

Just then, the Firescape door opened. It was Rahul…

Ra: Oyye…tu yaha kya kar raha hai? Utt, chal waha Ridhima bula rahi hai tujhe kabse.
A: tu chal main ayya…(still not raising his head)
Ra: is everything alrite? (Armaan doesn't answer) Armaan!
A: All's well! Just leave me alone Rahul! PLEASE! (he shouted)
Ra: alrite. Ridhima tujhse milna chahti hai..Bye.

8:35pm.
Emergency Room…
Rahul entered.

Ra: Ridhima..
R: Rahul? Armaan kaha hai? Woh nahi aaya tumhare saath?
Ra: acturally woh ek surgery main busy hain. Aur usne kaha hai ke tum ghar jao Anjali ke saath woh tumhe ghar pe milega.
R: oh…ok thanks.
Ra: nora problem. Main chalta hoon, last rounds hain phir home time! (he smiles) bye.
R: (smiles) ok bye..

Rahul walked out of the room..
Ra: (taking his fone out) Armaan ko sms kar dehta hoon warna baadh main mujhe gaali dehga.

1:50am.
Mallik House.

Armaan opened the door and quietly made his way to his bedroom. He opened the door and was shocked.. Ridhima was sitting by the window looking outside.
She was still awake?!

Ridhima turned around saw Armaan standing by the door. She ran up to him and hugged him.

R: Armaan! Tum kaha the? Maine Sanjeevani bhi fone kiya tha aur tum waha nahi the? Aur tumahra fone bhi switched off tha! Kaha the? Main kitni pareshaan thi!

Armaan pulls ridhima apart.
A: Abhi ke saath tha.
R: abhi ke saath?!
A: haan…(he moved away)
R: kya hua Armaan? Tumahari dabiyat to theek hai?
A: yeah, im just tired.
R: oh yeah, main bhi bulakar hoon. Rahul ne kaha to tha ke tum surgery main busy ho. Kaisi rahi? Patient ki koi problem toh nahi haina? Aur tum kuch khao ge? Main leh ao kuch? Coffee?? Sandwich??

Armaan held Ridhima's arms tightly and pulled her closer.

A: SHUT Up! Mera sarr mat khao PLEASE!
R: Armaan, choro, dard ho raha hai.
A: GOOD! Hona bhi chahiye! (very angrily)
R: Armaan? (shocked) tum..
A: don't look at me like that! Pichle dino se tum mujhe bohat irritate kar rahi ho! Please stop this weird behavior.
R: (pushed him away) main weird behave kar rahi hoon? No, its you! Pata nahi kya hogaya hai tumhe?
A: Oh im sorry! I fogot! Its always me! Ur perfect!!
R: (started crying) tum aise kyun keh rahe ho?
A: apna natak baand karo! Pyaar karti ho na mujhse??
R: haan..
A: (holding her again) toh phir tum aaj terrace pe kya kar rahi thi??
R: matlab?
A: SEE!! Natak again! STOP IT!!

Armaan let go of ridhima. He walked to the mirror and punched it really hard.. The mirror was in pieces and armaan's hand started bleeding. He threw everything on the dressing table.

A: tum abhi ke saath?! CHI!

Ridhima looked up at him in horror. What was Armaan saying? It was him on the terrace with her?!
She quickly ran to him.
R: Armaan!! Tumahra haath?!

She held his hand, it was bleeding really bad.
A: choro!
R: Armaan, yeh tum kya keh rahe ho? Tumne mujhe terrace pe milne ko kaha tha.
A: maine???
R: h..haan
A: main pura din OT main tha! Please just accept it!
R: lekin Armaan, maine kuch nahi kiya woh note..
A: yeh great! Sach chupane ke liye ab tum bahaane bana rahi ho!
R: aise kuch nahi hai Armaan!! Woh sab uss Abhi! Woh aisa pehle bhi ..
A: Shut Up! Apna gunnah chupna ke liye tum saara ilzaam abhi pe laga rahi ho!
R: Armaan, tum mujhse zaida uss abhimanyu pe vishwas kar rahe ho?
A: haan!! Woh mera childhood friend hai! He wont lie to me! Im stupid! Im stupid ke maine tumse shaadi ki! I mean I only know you since two years. In doh salo main bhi main tumhe samaj nahi paya!

Ridhima was drawn back with Armaan's words. She couldn't believe what he just said.

R: Armaan..aaj tumne mujhe koh diya. Maine tumahra vishwas koh diya?? Nahi Armaan…vishwas hota toh toot tha nah!
A: toh chali kyun hai jaati?? Chaur ke chali jao mujhe!
R: chali jao?
A: haan! Chali jao! Like I care?

Tears fell from ridhima's eyes…in one mintue what had happened?

A: pata nahi kitni baar bewafai ki hogi! Kitni baar abhimanyu ke saath soh kar ayi hogi! Vishwas? Yeah! (he laughed sarcastly) ab toh abhi haath se gaya? Toh ab tum kya karogi? Is it Rahul next?? Or koi aur hai?? Batao?

Ridhima eyes fumed with anger. She couldn't bear all this nonsense. She grabbed Armaan's hand and turned him to face her. She raised her hand and slapped Armaan really hardly across his face!

R: Bas!! Bas, bohat ho gaya! Main kabse tumhare bakwaas sun rahi hoon iska matlab yeh nahi ke main galat hoon! Tumhe lagta hai ke maine tumse bewafai ki hai? Toh mujhe batao Armaan ke maine kab ki?? Subah? Jab main tumahare saath Sanjeevani jaati hoon? Lunch break main jab hum saath caf main coffee pete hai?? Ya duty ke baadh jab hum Firescape main milte hai?? Ya shaam ko? Jab hum ghar saath aate hai?? If not that, toh phir jab hum saath raat ko sote hai?? (she shouted) Tell me?? Tumhare phaas koi jawaab nahi hai Armaan!!! Kaise hoga?? Tum galat ho Armaan! Tum galat ho!!
A: Well done!! Wow, what a speech! (he clapped) This is really great! Galati hudd karo aur ilzaam Armaan ya abhimanyu pe!! Wah! Truly Great!! Tum abhi isi waqt apne bags pack karo and GET OUT!

Ridhima looked up at Armaan, her eyes were filled with tears.
R: kaise tumne mujhe pal main parays kar diya nah Armaan? Kaise?? Woh bhi uss galti ki wajah se jho maine ki hi nahi! Tum uss abhimanyu par vishwas rakte ho jho har ladki ko ek kilona samjta hai! Kel ke phenk diya??

Tears were rolling down Ridhima's face. She burst out crying and ran out of the room.

10 minutes later…

Armaan was sitting on the swing outside on the terrace.
Ridhima entered the room and waked to her wardrobe. She opended it and took her suitscase out and started packing.

Ridhima walked to Armaan.
R: aaj raat ko main guest room main soongi,
ghar gayi toh mom dad ko shaq hogaye ga. Lekin..kal subah hote hi main yeh ghar, tumhe, tumhare zindagi and tumhare so-called pyaar ko chaur ke hamesha jaa rahi hoon.
A: Good! Now please leave.

Armaan got up and sees ridhima off to the door. He closed the door and locked it! He walked to his bed and burst out crying!

That's It!!
Whose Right? Whose Wrong?
To Find Out
Keep Readiing:
She's My Jannat!
Phew! Long Update! Lol.
I hope Yuu Guys r happy now!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy really liked it update soon
Armaan-ridz so sad

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey soni...... loved it man!!! the emotions........ soni.. how can u do this man.... 😭😭😭... soooo sad.... urghh... i so want to muder abhi right now.. may i? 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#97
ThankYuu!!! Glad Yuu Liked It 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@Rav: Ofcoursee, yuu can! Lol, its yuur choice! hehe x
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Posted: 16 years ago
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What a turn??? And am seriously still confused who was on terrace. At times feel that it was Abhi and then thinking how can Riddhima percieve Armaan's touch in their intimate moment, I feel it was Armaan only. Huh ... lets wait to read further.
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Posted: 16 years ago
omg yaar u making me cry....this is soo emotional...hope evrything works out good

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