~~ When Hearts Met ~~ ( AR n RM FF ) - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: I-luv-Mayank

Similar to whose FF May I ask ?

look i call it like it is. and im sorry if my abruptness bothers u but thats howi am.
mansi and sonia are already doing the whole how did rahul and muskaan meet thing and now you are also. i just fee like every1 keeps copying but no one does anything different.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
hi apoorva!!!
rocking ff
loved the whole drama unfolded till now
can u pm me for this ff too???
love:
aishwarya
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: stellarwind

look i call it like it is. and im sorry if my abruptness bothers u but thats howi am.
mansi and sonia are already doing the whole how did rahul and muskaan meet thing and now you are also. i just fee like every1 keeps copying but no one does anything different.

Loz...Chillax...Thi is sumthing diffrent frm Sonia's and Mansi's FF as this is based on a college backround unlinke the others and besides is sumthing tht formed in my mind while I was sleeping...I watched Life With Derek before sleeping and I was so impressed with that idea that I decided to make an FF similar to it...and besides No one else has potrayed Muskaan and Armaan as step brother and sister have they ? and I solemly swear this is an original and I havnt copied the idea from anyone. And by the way in any FF the main charecs have to meet right ?
Edited by I-luv-Mayank - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
you can do what u want, i cant changethat. i am so sick of ppl copying each other, i am quite relaxed. just calling what i see. i am free to make my comments nd u r free to write whatevea you want.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hey dear
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muski's mom remarried lolz😆
thats quite wierd n funny too
well um relieved that muski n armi r sis n bro lolz😆
but seriously yaat nice start
liked it quite
um waiitng for the next part
update soon if possible plz pm me
ohh um first yey

Thankz a LOT ! Willl surely PM !

Originally posted by: SaziArmaan

hey dear reli nice... muskaaan nd armaan are brotherz nd sisters.. reli cute.. plzz do cont. and pm me if u can😃😃😃

Thankz...Will PM !

Originally posted by: KaSh_4_eva

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awesome start it's funny that muskaan's mum remarried but i'm glad that armaan & muskaan are brother-sister
i'm eagerly waiting for the AR meeting
plz continue soon & pm me if you can

Thank You !! Will definatly PM !

Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh🤗 sound interesting⭐️ awesome one😛😉 plz continue it soon😊 & pm😉 me when u update😳 it if u don't have any problem😳


"tum meri soch ho tumhe koi soche kyu,
tum meri chaht ho tumhe koi chahe kyu,
tum mera aina ho tumhe koi dekhe kyu,
tum meri dua ho tumhe koi mange kyu"



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Thank you ! I will PM u !

Originally posted by: perfectpiscean

Hey!

I have already begun liking ur FF...And not just because it has AR...I actually really liked the whole re-marrying concept!
Really look forward to reading more =D
Pls PM me when u upd8 too!
-Marisha

Sure...

Originally posted by: KaSh_4_eva

fantastic part

armaan is already falling for ridzi i can't wait till RM meet
plz continue soon

Thankk you !!

Originally posted by: mossfur

awesome parts
armaan is already falling for riddhima
i can't wait till Rahul-Muskaan meet
cont soon
pm me

And I cant wait to write the RM meeting...Will PM !

Originally posted by: tava

hey

great ff i love it can't wait for the next part😊👏😊

Thankz !

Originally posted by: Radhika Shah

It was awesome and the way armaan react toward muskaan it was really nice of him.

please continue soon

Thank you Radhika !!

Originally posted by: preet916

hey
awesome start
something totally different frm other ffs
luved AR's meeting nd Armaan already falling 4 Riddhima
plz update soon wiv RM meeting

Thank you !!

Originally posted by: samyra

that was actually great i really liked it and you did a great job

do continue soon
can you pls pm me when you do the next part

Thankz for commenting...Will surely PM !

Originally posted by: rhama2

hi apoorva!!!

rocking ff
loved the whole drama unfolded till now
can u pm me for this ff too???
love:
aishwarya

OFC Aishwarya....My fav reader !

Originally posted by: monadarling2628

hey apoorva! you're back with a bang! i truly adore the concept of this new ff.

do continue soon and add me to your pm list as well.
thanks,
mona :]

MONA !!! Thankz for commenting....Will surely PM you !!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

OMG... appu! You're dedicating this to me? 😳❤️🤗 Thank you sooooo much jaani! Well, I have yet to read it, but I'm going to do it in a few hours. and i'll comment again. i just happened to come across this and got all excited because A) it was by you and B) because it was another RM FF. I was seriously beaming when I saw ur dedication! Aw but don't close RM Story #2. It was so good! Thanks again. Will be back to comment!

Love u hamesha,
Komzie

Aww !! 🤗 Yes I am dedicating this to you too...!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
omg very nice FF yaar..............
i really liked it...............
plz do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
Just read it! Amazing! It's completely different! I love the concept. Step-bro and sis. nice. I really think you shouldn't end ur other one though. I liked it very much! continue soon!!!!
komzie
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
WOW... quite a different approach... seems very interesting... eager to know further... plz continue soon and if poss plz PM me....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30

Chapter - 3

Rahul's POV -
" Oh , Hi Rahul " My best friend greeted me with a grin. I grinned back.
" Woh do kladkiyan kaun thi jiske saath tum abhi baat kar rahe the ? " I asked tauntingly " Girlfriends ? "
" Sheesh ! NO ! " Armaan exclaimed, " One of them was my step sister and the other was Riddima her best friend "
I couldnt help but notice a faint tinge of pink on Armaan's cheeks as he said Riddima's name.
" Why the heck are you BLUSHING ? " I asked disgusted.
" NO I am not ! " Armaan proteststed
" YOU ARE ! You are a GUY Armaan, and GUYS dont Blush ! " I informed him
Armaan gave me a look that apparently suggested that I shut up. So I changed the topic.
" So how is it going ith your step-sister ? " I asked him.
" Not that good, she does not exactly like me. But it is improving " He said with a smile
" Thats good ! " I exclaimed. " Anyways I gonna go to the room , I forgot my mobile phone ! "
" You are going to our room ? " He asked " Then please get my mobile too, Its on my bed "
I nodded and head towards the college rooms. Our college was huge. There was nothing like it in the whole Mumbai. It was magnificent. Our college was divided into two blocks. The first block was where the real college was and the second block was where the rooms where located. Armaan and I shared the same room on the 12th floor.
I slowly made my way up the stairs. Our floor was deserted. Me and Armaan were the only occupants of this floor as the other students were a little hesitant to climb all the stairs to the 12th floor.
I opened the door the leads to out corridor and the moment I opened it someone dashed into me. It was a girl. She had a stack-full of a paper in her hands which flew in the air when we dashed. She gave a small scream and hurried to pick up all the papers on the floor. I coudnt see her face. It was covered by a bush of her hair. I slowly bent down and helped her in picking up the papers. I craned my neck to see her face. but I was still unsuccesful. Her face was still hid by her bushy hair. Soon she picked up all her papers and slowly stood up. I stood up too . Her face was turned the other way and suddenly she jerked her head to face me. Due to the jerk her hair hit me lightly on my face. I closed my eyes and inhaled the sweet smell of the shampoo she had used.
" Oye ! " I heard her voice.
I opened my eyes and I was awestruck looking at the girl in front of me.
" Dekh ke nahi chal sakta ? " She demanded angrily " Yeh sab tumhari galti hai ! "
MY fault ? How was this MY fault ? She was the one running like a maniac. I wanted to yell back at her but all the managed to say was " mhh hm hmm "
She gave me a disgusted look and left me standing lost in my own thoughts.
I stood there for and another 10 mins. Then suddenly -
" Oye, Rahul "
I turned to look who the oerson was, It was Armaan.
" Yaha kya kar raha hai yaar " Armaan demanded " I was waiting for you "
" Oh sorry ! " I said in a dreamy voice I was not back to my usual self yet.
Armaan looked at me concerned.
" Rahul, Tu theek toh hai ? " He asked
" Hmm... " was all I could manage to say.
" Rahul, Rahul " Armaan shook me . " Are you okay ? "
" No..I am not okay " I said
" Tumhe kya hua hai ? " Armaan asked
" Pyaar..." I replied not back in my usual senses.
" KYA ?? " Armaan scremed " Pyaar??? Kisse ??
" Pata nahi " I replied
" Pata nahi ? Tu paagal ho gaya hai " Armaan exclaimed. Annoyed by my dreamy state.
" Haah mein pyaar mein paagal ho gaya hu ! " I replied
Armaan rolled his eyes. " Tu sach mein paagal ho gaya hain ,chal canteen mein chal, Wahan baat karte hain "
Armaan's POV -
Rahul is put of his mind. I dont know whats got into him . He is acting really silly. I tried talking to him, but it is of no use, He is in his own world. God knows which ghost he had seen that made him so freaked out.
Now Rahul and I are sitting in the college canteen which a cup of coffee in our hands. Suddenly heard familiar vocices behind me. I looked around to see who it was. It was Muskaan and to my great joy Riddima. Riddima smiled at me when she saw me looking at her. Muskaan waved a hi at me and I waved back. They both sat diagonal to where we were sitting.
Rahul gave a jerk. I looked at him
" So will you tell me what happened now ? " I asked annoyed
" Mujhe pyaar ho gaya hain " He said
I rolled my eyes " Mujhe pata hain , par kisse ? " I asked.
" Usse " He said poniting, I turned and looked where he was pointing. He was pointing at Muskaan and Riddima's table.
" Tum Riddima se pyaar karte ho ? " I asked shocked.
" Uska naam riddima hain ? " He asked " Sweet name "
OMG ! This is horrible ! My best friend is in love with my sister's best friend. I dont know why but I feel at little uncomfortable. Is it because I like Riddima ?
( PS- The girl Rahul is actually in love with is Muskaan. But then Armaan thinks its Riddima )
Thankz for reading guys...More confusion in the next chapter !
Edited by I-luv-Mayank - 16 years ago

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