SaJan&MayUr FF/Cant Help Falling 4u/Pt7 pg19 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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IT WAS A SWEET PART!!!
CONTINUE WHEN U HAVE TIME!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks fr the comment monica .. i ll continue soon ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow
v.good 👏👏
i'm also a fan of Camp Rock (especially Joe's...😉)
cant wait to read the rest of your ff
and you've gt my fav jodi in the leading roles!!!!
WOOP WOOP!!!!!
love,
kally
Edited by kal884 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kal884

wow

v.good 👏👏
i'm also a fan of Camp Rock (especially Joe's...😉)
cant wait to read the rest of your ff
and you've gt my fav jodi in the leading roles!!!!
WOOP WOOP!!!!!
love,
kally



thts kool then u shud definitely read this FF ..hehe .. cos u wont just find mitchie n shane in gunjan n sammy but i m also going to extend the story after the CR ends ..... wait n watch!!

WOOP WOOP!! 😉😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hello to all those who read.

I was writing a FF over here named 'Music My Life' which was only SaJan one based loosely on the Disney film 'Camp Rock'.

However, right now i have deleted all the introduction and parts (only 2) since i was not feeling to continue the same. Therefore i never continued.

But soon this weekend i have planned to start with my new FF in this same thread named ' Cant Help Falling 4u ' . Its going to be on Sajan and MayUr both. For this long i kept on thinking for a story on them.

I will fill the spaces tht i have deleted. That is page 1&2. Hope u guys will read it and support. This notice was spl for those who used to read the FF "Music My Life".

Thanks and sorry for the inconvenience. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok , so i have written the intro on pg 1. pls check and give comments. thanks.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i read d intro n i think ur ff is gonna b interesting........
plz continue it soon...........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks anjalika. i hve done pt1. a start ...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

After samrat snatches the phone from her mom.

S: hey di how r u ?

Nupur = N

N: Bhai is it u ? hru ? hows studies ? hows mom and dad ? do u take care of them ?

Samrat holds his another ear with his hand

S: wait di wait ... ek saath itne saare questions. i m here only. when r u coming over here ?

N: oh sorry. first u tell me do u take care of mom and dad.

S: haan babaa.

N: accha i wont be able to come till next week becos theres no ticket.

S: what?! hey di thts not possible. mom is just beside me. u told u will be here this week. i miss u di.

N: oh yeh yeh .... lets see... hw much have u missed me... i knw u cant just stay a single moment wout ur so called friends.

S: comeon di ... wait i ll give to mom. ab tum hi usi ko samjhao.

Nupur and her mom have a chat and they fix of samrat picking nupur next week from the airport.

**

The scene swtiches to a big bungalow. Dressed up in her T shirt and shots she dances on 'Dance pe tu chance marle'.Dancing she turns and all of her sudden her hair opens all coming on her face. She tries to put them away but she cudnt. Suddenly....

Mayank = M

M: Guni ......

Gunjan = G

G: oh no bhaiyya... *she runs and switches off the tv, ties her hair and opens the door slightly*

Mayank was standing outside with a glass of milk and toasts for her.

**

thats it. still waiting to see if anyone reads.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 yaar....plz continue soon.loved the track
plzzzzz make it fast

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