SaJan&MayUr FF/Cant Help Falling 4u/Pt7 pg19 - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
loved it 😉😉 Gunjan and Mayank sister and brother ... new twist loved it 😉😉 same way nice to see Nupur as Samrat's elder sis... Do include me in your pm list ..... keep on writing 😉.... the relationship b/w siblings seems very sweet...😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Plz pm me when u update! I'm already in love with ur ff.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks all i m gonna update soon. maybe tonight or tomm morning. and i m really glad u all like the track.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow its tooo gud
even ur way of writing is superb
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg!!seriously that is such a good idea of making them bro and sis!!ur ff is really cool!!i want to read more!!plz plz plz continue soon and plz pm me if u can😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg!!!!!! ur ff is sooooo dam good!!! oh gosh i really like ur concept !! its got me sooo excited!!
plz plz plz update soon!!
btw... can u pm me wen u update????
and once again-- pleaseeee update soon!! i am dying to read wat happens next!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 3

Gunjan opens the door properly.

G: bhaiyya, why did u bother to get the breaksfast for me.

M: come on guni... u knw it, i love to do it for u when ramu kaka is not at home.

G: why where is he?

M: nothing babaa. he has gone to drop mom at her friends house. *mayank makes a bad face*

G: oh ok. but why r u so unhappy. just bcos mom dont cares for u?

M: *nods* no bcos she dont have time for u.

G: *tries to cheer him up and raises his jaws* so what. i m knw u r there for me. u r the beeeessstt bhaiyya in the whole world *she hugs him tightly*

M: ok ok stop, milk will fall down. *few minutes later* now get ready i m going out u go and change fast. by the way what were u doing when i was at the door.


G: putting milk inside her mouth ... dancing ..oops...*she lks at mayank with a puppy face*

M: pakdi gayi ... anyway chal lets get ready ...

Gunjan gets up and goes inside the bathroom. But b4 she closes the door she tries to see wht her bhaiyya is doing.

M: *he tries to do few dancing step what gunjan was doing few minutes back* ye guni kaise karti hai ..haa aise aise.

Gunjan giggles from the bathroom

G: *whistles* bohat acche bhaiyya. good job.

Mayank feels embarassed. and runs behind her to beat her

M: guni ki bacchi *gunjan shuts off the door quickly n laughs loudly*

G: sorry bhaiyya *giggling*

**

Mayank, Gunjan and Samrat , all reach EXCEL College.

Samrat was sitting with the gang of his friends having drinks together. lking at the empty bottle one of his friends said.


hiten: hey guys, i have got an idea.


mohit: what idea man?


hiten: why dont we play truth or dare?


mohit: ask samrat. what say sam ?


samrat: umm ok.


they all turn the bottle and wait where the bottle face. after sometime the bottle stops and voila it is facing samrat.


hiten & mohit : yuhoo!! its u sam! come on what do u want to chose - truth or dare ?


S: *thinks* well anything, sam can accept any challenge.


mohit: thats not fair , u will have to chose one.


hiten: yes , its long time we have got a chance to try our hands at you.


S: ok , why dont we toss. if heads then truth and tails then dare.


mohit&hiten: alright.


samrat tosses the coin and tries to catch it but it falls on the ground and rolls far away and stops at someones feet. samrat runs to see it. the person picks it up and says "tails"


S: mayank, give me the coin!


M: *lks with red fierced eyes in samrats eyes* haan lelo waise bhi aaj kal khairat me koi 1 rupee nahi leta.


Samrat gets angry and picks up his hands but quickly his friends just stop him.Simultaneously mayank picks up his hands but stops when samrat stops. Samrats friends take him away from there.


Hiten: kool down sam. take this drink.


mohit: ok so its tail. samrat its dare. hiten tu dare dega ki main du ?


hiten: tu dede yaar. par kuch mazedaar dena. samrat phirse haathme aayega kahan. *he winks at samrat n samrat laughs.*


mohit : hmm so i have got a master blaster dare for u samrat my friend. mayank ke saath tera lafda dekhkar mera mind bolta hai ki .. bolu kya ?


samrat : tell na yaar.


mohit : i have heard of mayanks sister gunjan sharma...she is going to get shifted in our division fron this year... tujhe uske saath pyaar ka natak karna hoga!


Samrat was terribly shocked. he stood up


S: what?! this is impossible! pyaar ka natak .. woh bhi mayank ki behen ke saath.


mohit: sochle sam ...


hiten: sam, mohit sach keh raha hai. afterall sam can accept any challenge.


S: *thinks for a while* ok, but i ll need around 1 month time for this.


mohit: manzoor.😉


***

that's it for part 3.

do leave comments. thanks.


note please: since i m not aware of samrat's surname i have decided to keep nupur and samrats surname as bhushan. and gunjan and mayanks surname as sharma. afterall this is FF where anything is possible 😆

Edited by talkativetaurus - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
really nice part!
plzz plzz update soon with mayur too....btw i like ur story:]
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
yup definitely. that will come slowly when after nupur's entry. most probably next or next to next part. till then enjoy these updts. seeya!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
wow
its great yaar
i really want u to continue soon
waiting 4 it

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