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Ika

@-De.De-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: siddiqa18
woowwww yarr!!!!
kya bat haii
chaaa gayi ho janeman!!

yar can u plz ryt somthin even more passionate than silent confession???
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

i lov d way u rytt!!
*sigh*

Janeman?😆 Thankyou ji, I'm glad you lurrved it so much😉
More passionate?😲😲😲 Mods se warning karwani hai kya?😆
Will try that sweetie, will definately try😊. But not just now.. will update.. in few days😊

Tc..
Ika (DD)😊

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-Mishti_Divz-

@-Mishti_Divz-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

hey Ika fainaly u update it

very cute and lovley part

but in the End 🥺

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Star

@starasdf

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Posted: 16 years ago

#23

woah obseesion wazz sad i relli wished it had a happi ending

Star⭐️

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Ika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: divyashaz
hey Ika fainaly u update it
very cute and lovley part

but in the End 🥺

Aww..thanx.. I know end is heart breaking. But it had to be this😛.

Originally posted by: starasdf
woah obseesion wazz sad i relli wished it had a happi ending

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Hey star, there's not always a happy endings!!😳 but thanx for reading😊

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Komal

@AshiYuvi4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Ika! Beautiful! The first one scared the hell out of me. Woh uss din waala Rahul yaad agaya. the aggressive one who was totally man-handling Muskaan before the confession. But the second one totally blew me away! So beautiful. I seriously had to wait 2 minutes and let it sink in. Most important thing in writing is that it should flow smoothly... like music. You did an amazing job of keeping the flow. They were both very different from each other, yet very unique in their own way. Mind blowing! Thank you so much for the PM. I'll be sending you a PM soon regarding something you'll be pleased about. 😉 Can't wait to read more of your work.

- Komz

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ankita

@muskaan_ankita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#26

first of all thanks a lot for the pm... 😊 you are an awesome writer yaar... very different!! keep it up!! 👏

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Ika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life
Ika! Beautiful! The first one scared the hell out of me. Woh uss din waala Rahul yaad agaya. the aggressive one who was totally man-handling Muskaan before the confession. But the second one totally blew me away! So beautiful. I seriously had to wait 2 minutes and let it sink in. Most important thing in writing is that it should flow smoothly... like music. You did an amazing job of keeping the flow. They were both very different from each other, yet very unique in their own way. Mind blowing! Thank you so much for the PM. I'll be sending you a PM soon regarding something you'll be pleased about. 😉 Can't wait to read more of your work.

- Komz

Hey Komz 🤗 missed you alot! Where did ya vanished? 😆😆 scared ya? woah, means did a greeat job😆😉 I know, I just fell in love with aggressive Rahul ALOT!😍☺️ Head over heals man!!😳
2nd one even I loved it alot😍😍 so full of passion na😍. 2 mins?😲😆 Awww.. chalo next time will make sure its more than 2 mins!!😉😛

Aww!! thankyou so much for all these comments, I'm so pleased to hear😃 Flow??!!☺️☺️ Thankyou!

And yea! PMS, I'm waiting for your pms missy!😉 oohhh spl PM.. waiting for it😉 send soon.

Love,
Ika 🤗

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Ika

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Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: muskaan_ankita
first of all thanks a lot for the pm... 😊 you are an awesome writer yaar... very different!! keep it up!! 👏

Thankyou😃

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Apoorva

@0o.Leah.o0

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Posted: 16 years ago

#29

amazing !!! I havnt read anything like it ! awesome !

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Sakina

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Posted: 16 years ago

#30

Ika that was awesome!!!!it was really cool!!!!!i personally like the first one better....but the second one was sooooo passionate!!!!!!i really loved both of them!!!!you really are a great writer!!!!do write more such stuff!!!!we RM fans are simply thirsty for stuff like this!!!!!