FF- PYAR YA DUSHMANI LastPartA pg44- 30/10/9 - Page 24

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shravu

hi,

i just wanted to give you some bad news and good news to you'll people.

first the bad news:- i will be continuing my all FF's, to your disappointment....................................................................i hope that you will forgive me for this. the complete part of part -16 of this FF will be up very shortly.......................................................................again Sorry.....for disappointing you'll people by continuing my FFs. sorry people i could not resist myself fro stopping it

and the good news is

i got my long lost job, which was on the verge of loosing it months back............................................................................😃




congo shravu darling for your job👏
& the bad news is not at all bad sweetie😃
thanks a ton for that😳
🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi




congo shravu darling for your job👏thank you for that
& the bad news is not at all bad sweetie😃 kuch logon ke liye hoga 😃
thanks a ton for that😳it's my pleasure
🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
cong for your job and good luck in the future thanks for cont your ff cannot wait to read thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago


well i am definitely not in that list😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi



well i am definitely not in that list😃

that's true

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Posted: 16 years ago






Sharvu sweety congrats
main tumhare liye bahut khush hoon jaanu

aur haan thanks 🤗 ff ke liye



sharvu tumhari uss list mein main bhi nai hoon 😊
Edited by -kiran - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: -kiran







Sharvu sweety congrats
main tumhare liye bahut khush hoon jaanu

aur haan thanks 🤗 ff ke liye



sharvu tumhari uss list mein main bhi nai hoon 😊

hey thanks for the bears and hugs

ha i's true tum bhi uss list mein nahi ho

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Posted: 16 years ago
Part-16
Prachi cuddled in Milind's strong arms, who sat there dreamily staring at the sea. "Milind what are you thinking", PRachi asked him when she saw him sitting quietly. "nothing, just thinking how would the meeting goes with your father. I don't know what does he says about our relationship. Does he approve or not." Milind replied dreamily. Prachi sits straight, leans on his shoulder. "don't worry, everything will be fine" Prachi cheerfully assures him. "if not one way there will be always the other way, Milind. If dad says no…….." "don't think of it Prachi, now and never. I have already told you." Milind cuts off her in the middle. "why Milind", Prachi suddenly pauses abruptly. "are thinking about my dad's property" Prachi asks him in a confused manner. "so this is called trusting me." Milind replied angrily pushing her slightly away from her. "anyways I don't need a penny from him. I have more than what he owns." Milind proudly declared. "is it so, Milind." Prachi cheerfully added sitting straight and attentively. "but why I'm telling you all this. You never trusted me." Milind added grumpily. Prachi's eyes became numb hearing that. "no, Milind I trust you. I just didn't mean to hurt you. I know you would keep me happy, even if you don't have a penny with you." PRachi said, hugging him tightly and started crying. "please don't hate me for this." Prachi started sobbing. "ok, enough of crying get up, I don't like to see you crying like this." Milind replied authoratively. "no Milind no unless you…..", Prachi started to sob more. milind understood what to do. He then pulls, facing her tear face, and started wiping her tears with his thumb loving, gazing at her intensely. Prachi not able to take his gaze, lowers her gaze. But his eyes were intensely locked onto her, not able to take this even with her lowered eyes, she hugs him tightly, "never say that I never trusted you Milind." Prachi says in a loud whisper. "never again, Prachi", he replies back in a whisper.

Both of them retorted back with a rain drops falling on them. Both of them looks up with a start. Milind just runs back to the verandah of the beach house, seeing that that it may rain. But Prachi stood there waiting for the rain to fall on her. In the next moment , the rain started splashing on Prachi. On the other hand Milind was avoiding the raining, and was going inside, but he felt someone pulling back into the rain. "stop it", he shouted making Prachi jerking away from, shivering. "it's you", Milind asked her surprisingly looking at her with awe struck without blinking his eyes for a second. She was looking more beautiful than ever, after drenching in the rain. He advances towards her slowly, wiping his wet face, for which Prachi slowly starts walking back, not looking back. she trips placing her leg on the rock unknowingly. But she was prevented from falling down by Milind's strong arms. Both of them started an eyelock , Milind ignored rain water runig down his face and Prachi ignored that rain water dripping on her face from Milind's. slowly Milind pulls her up, still in an eyelock and pulls her closely towards him. He removes his hands from her waist and cups her face with them, pulling her face more closely towards himselfs and pulls her into a deep and passionate kiss both ignoring the rain water running through their faces. After some time Milind breaks out from the kiss and stares at Prachi's face. Her lips were apart and her eyes were closed tightly, she was looking more beautiful than ever, after drenching herself in rain. Milind bends forward towards her and moves slowly towards her nuzzling her neck. He then reaches her ear, "do you trust me, Prachi." Milind whispers in her softly. Hearing this PRachi opens her eyes while her lips were playing a sweet smile. He immediately pulls Prachi more closely and kisses her again without a second thought, with more desire and passion than before. But suddenly he breaks the kiss and sees up at the rain which became more intense fluttering his eyes badly, leaving Prachi surprised by his action. He immediately drags her into the beach house, before Prachi could say anything. Prachi did not understand what Milind was doing. Once in the beach house, both stood facing each other. Milind stood lowering his gaze for some time, tries to leave the place. "Milind, why did you stop.", Prachi asked him gazing him in a puzzled manner. "Prachi, did you forget, I promised that this will not happen till our marriage is done. Did you remember." Milind asked her taking her into his arms. "but I regret it now, Milind." Prachi replied back hugging im tightly. But Milind pulls her back, "Prachi, don't tell like that. You are not going to regret on anything from now onwards." Milind tried to make Prachi understand. "but Mi." "shhhh not a single word from you. at present go and change your wet dress. You make fall sick and I don't you falling sick before our marriage. ok", Milind cuts off her in the middle. "now go and change", Milind pushes Prachi inside the room, before she could open her mouth. Milind also changes his clothes, and comes and sits down on the sofa. He switches on the tv and and surfing the channels, but he could not still concentrate on it. He did not why he was feeling like that, but he brushes of all that and suddenly turns towards room, from where Prachi came out. She was wearing a cream colour saree. It was the first time Milind saw Prachi in the saree. Her feminity was clearly visible to him. He stares at her with his wide eyes and his mouth opened widely. Prachi did not straight away came towards Milind, but went towards the kitchen, but Milind's eyes followed her where ever she went. Few minutes later, Prachi came out with a bowl of pakoras and sat beside Milind very closely to him. Seeing him, still staring her with his wide eyes and open mouth, Prachi, humoursly puts a hot pakora into his mouth. "ouch", Milind squeals spitting out the pakora, as it burnt his tounge. "what is this, Prachi." Milind said fanning his burnt tounge. "why are you staring at me like that as if you are seeing a girl for the first time." Prachi replied, cuddling herself into his arms. "nah, not like that, but I'm seeing you wearing a saree for that first time." Milind said gazing her deeply with passionate eyes. "why, am I not looking nice in the saree." Prachi questioned him. "it not like that. You look beautiful and tempting." Milind replied in a husky voice bending towards her. Prachi could not take the intense of heat from him, but she did not move away from him, instetad she closed her eyes tightly with a smile creeping on her. She jerks out opening her eyes with a start when Milind gives a gentle kiss on her cheek. She finds him bending towards her neck, with a smile on her face, she runs her hands through his curly hair, stroking it smoothly. But to her disappointment, he moves away from her picking up the remote which was near Prachi and then takes pakoras from the bowl that Prachi held and pushes into his mouth. Prachi gives a disappointed look towards Milind. Milind understood, Prachi's behaviour. "hey sweety, we are not going to do this now. Anyhow can't you wait for few days." Milind tried to convince her. "Milind not able to live without you anymore', Prachi replied leaning on his shoulder. "mee too sweety………" Milind said placing his hands around her.

"when will we marry, Milind", Prachi slowly questioned him lowering her gaze. "whenever you want sweety." Milind replied stroking her hair and pulling her more closely towards him. "then Milind, we will marry now." Prachi said hugging to more tightly. "what about now Milind." Prachi replied shyly. "not now. I'll marry you after meeting your father Prachi." Milind told her kissing on her forehead. "what if he doesn't agree to it." Prachi asked Milind weakly. "after seeing me, he doesn't say no." Milind replied back with a smile on his face. "really." Prachi said sitting straight. "yup", Milind replied dreamily, gazing at her. He pulls her towards him, so that their faces are only few inches away from each other. He pushes back her hair strands which were falling on her face. He then starts caressing her cheeks, sending shivers through her spine, due to his sharp gazing. "Milind you Promised me, that this will happen only after our marriage", Prachi pushes him back and and tries to get away from there. but Milind pulls her back making her to fall on his lap. He wraps his hands around her naked waist tightly. Prachi finally gives up after trying to get away from him. "it was you, na who gave disappointing looks when I retorted back. now what happened to you." Milind questioned gazing at her intensely. "now I happened to think that it would be better if this all would happen after our marriage. by the way, you were the one, who did not want proceed further. What happened to you now." Prachi replied with a lowering gaze, not able to face his intense looks. "I was controlling till now, Prachi. But now I could not control anymore. You really look sooooooooooooooooooo tempting and sexy in this saree. It's getting difficult to control myself. Can I keep the promise aside for this time Prachi." Milind asked her wickedly winking at her. "not at all." Prachi replied pushing his back and finally able to free herself from his clutches. "if you are not able to control yourself go and talk to my father as soon as possible." Prachi added showing her attitude. "yeah surely", Milind replied falling back on the sofa in a relaxed manner. "till then……..", Milind smiled at her wickedly. "till then,……what Milind", Prachi who was still standing nearby, asked him giving a puzzled expression. "don't you ask me that, you know, for what I'm asking", Milind added getting up the sofa. "you are an idiot, Milind. You are not getting it now. You got it enough of it." Prachi replied pushing Milind back to the sofa, and runs into outside blushing all the way. "I can't control myself Prachi, and I can't live without you anymore." Milind shouted loudly. "I love Prachi", he added loudly. " me too Milind." Prachi replied back with the same intensity, make their voices echoing all around the beach house………….

Now also I feel that I'm really wasting my time in this. But could not resist myself from updating it. Sorry if the mistakes have crept unknowingly. Silent readers, do comment compulsorily . This is how I'll know how my FF is………..surely needed honest comments. Ready to take your positive and negative comments cheerfully. If you don't like my FF, please tell me. If you feel shy to post it here pm me. I will see that I won't continue to write if anyone of you'll feel that my FF's are horrible and toturing. Hope everyone likes it.




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Posted: 16 years ago
i am the first one😳
yipee😆
me so happy😉
will read & comment😊
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

i am the first one😳
yipee😆
me so happy😉
will read & comment😊

that's true

becoz no one cares to peep through, read and comment and you are the only you does comment

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