FF- PYAR YA DUSHMANI LastPartA pg44- 30/10/9 - Page 23

Originally posted by: $ara_$hachi

beautiful update ........ honestly👏

love michi small argument over money ....... milsi & chi really do trust each other ...... waiting for inder-milsi meeting ..... what will be the outcome of their meeting ? ..... & sweetie don't say that you feel insulted ..... more comments don't means that you are excellent writer ....... same way few comments don't convey that you are not a excellent writeri should get something for my hardwork na. it's almost 24hrs after updating, no one cared to peep in also. i know no one likes my FF

Originally posted by: shravu

Originally posted by: -kiran

awesome update sharvu 👏 ⭐️ sorry for late comments 😭 maine dekha hi nahi tha 😔

waise michi ki pyari si ladai aur tumhara chota sa update bahut achha tha 😊 😃sweety i knw tum hurt feel kar rahi ho per plz baar baar ye mat kaho ke tumhare ff achhe nahi hai ....tumhare ff bahut acche hai 👏 👏mujhe personally tumhara ff dosti pasand hai 😃woh aisa ff hai jisme koi villain nahi hai... jise padh ke koi tension nahi hoti balki chehre per smile hi aati hai 😆 ek aisa ff jisme dono pitashree bahuuuuuuuuuut achhe hai 😆 sharvu plz sweety believe me....you are a excellent writer 🤗

achi hai tho itni hi comments kyuon milthi meri FFs ko....................................😭

Originally posted by: shreenithiks

Hi Shravu,

Still Angry?Sorry fom my side.........

Nice update shravu.Milind and prachi's love towards one another

was very nice.

Shot update or a long one,how much thinking u should have done to portray that part exactly the way u wanted.Selection of apt words etc.It is very difficult,i understand.

Thank u so very much for this update Shravu.

thank you for this.

i'm not angry on anyone, but💔🥺

Originally posted by: -kiran

i'm not angry on anyone, but 💔 🥺

awwwww sharvu jaan 🤗

thnks for that hugs. but anyhow that doesn't work now

hi,

i just wanted to give you some bad news and good news to you'll people.

first the bad news:- i will be continuing my all FF's, to your disappointment....................................................................i hope that you will forgive me for this. the complete part of part -16 of this FF will be up very shortly.......................................................................again Sorry.....for disappointing you'll people by continuing my FFs. sorry people i could not resist myself fro stopping it

and the good news is

i got my long lost job, which was on the verge of loosing it months back............................................................................😃