LaagaChunriMeinDaag(AR)#2 LAST PART PG-15 02/05 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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congrats on the second thread pinky2

continue soon pls!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hiiiiiiii everyone.......I'm finally back.......I know you all must be wondering how I disappeared again but sincerely sorry my exams didn't give me time to write this ff......anyways now they are over(for sometime atleast 😆)so i'll be updating next part sooooon....by tomorrow or monday.....will surely pm you all.......thanksssssss to everyone for your wishes & comments & most importantly being patient with me.......😊
lots of love,
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pinky yeyy finally ur back hm tabhi socho na koi reply na online ati o hmmmmmmmm gud 2 see u back yaar missd u sooooooooooooo mch........nd hows ur exams went hmmmmmmmm........cont sooooooooon
tc
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pinky.... finally ur back
missd u very much
hope ur papers went well
cont soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
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please update soon.we all are waiting.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pinky good that ur exams are over!

now we can demand updates everyday!

continue soon pls!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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YAY!....cant wait till u update....
we missed ur ff!.....
hope ur exams went well
-Simran
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Posted: 16 years ago
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RECAP:

AR become good friends.Ridz is admitted in hospital.She gets a clue regarding the sanjeevani case.Everyone in search of the ward boy who was harrased.Someone comes to ridz room at night.

PART 15:

Ridz was sleeping peacefully but like yesterday even todays sleep got broke when she realised someone was very close to her....someone was about to kiss her....someone was touching her.....She very well knew it was not armaan & in an instance pushed the person & opened her eyes shocked.She realised this back of the person.It was the same man.She recognised him because of the small pony tail he had.The person turned around having an evil smirk on his face....

Ri: TUM!!!!!!TUM HO IS SAB KE PEECHE.....

Man: tut....tut......miss riddhima....bahut madad karne ka shauk hai na....aaj tumhaari madad kaun karega????is samaj mein tum jaisi prostitute ko mujh jaise shareef doctor se kaun bachaayega????aaj tumhaara anth hai....

Ridz looked at him shocked.

Ri: tum meri sachaai kaise jaante ho???tum aisa kyu kar rahe ho????tum to armaan ke dost ho na aur tum us hi ke hospital mein kaala dhandhaa kar rahe ho…..

Man: kaala dhandhaa….hahahaha….tumhare mooh se yeh sab kitna khokhla lag raha hai….tum jaisi dhandha karne waali mere kaale dhandhe par sawaal utha rahi hai…riddhima sweety yeh sab tumhe shobha nahi deta…..theek kaha tumne 'main amit sharma armaan ka so called best friend insab ke peeche hai'….par yakin maano mujhe iska koi pachtaava nahi….jab hum college mein saath the toh woh mujhse hamesha aage rehta tha phir chahiye woh padhaayi ho ki ladki…kehne ko toh hum best friends the lekin dosti jaisa kuch tha nahi humaare beech….jo ladki par mera dil aata woh armaan mujse cheen leta….yahaan tak ki log mujhe uska 'chamcha aur assistant' bulate the….lekin fir bhi main haskar sab mazaak mein le leta…usse har baar yahi jataa ta ki woh mere bahut kareeb hai aur yeh cheezon se mujhe farak nahi padta…fir hum sanjeevani mein interns bane udhar bhi woh hi aage rehta….mujhse saare intern of the month ke awards le jaata….uske paas amit naam ka koi ladka khadaa hai yeh toh kissi ko nahi dikhta….armaan ko apne stardom se bahut pyaar tha…who hamesha famous raha…..basketball,bike racing,football,studies sab jagah uska hi naam gunjta….woh apni kaamyabi mein itna kho jaata ki usse pataa hi na rehta uske baajo mein kissi ka dum ghoot raha hai…jab mera transfer yahaan hua toh mujhe bahut khushi hui ki mein armaan se door jaa raha hoon lekin saath mein ghum bhi tha….

Ri: kaisa ghum??

Amit goes really close to her & speaks slowly looking straight in her eyes.

Am: ki main tumse door jaa raha hu….

Ri: mujhse??tum mujhe kaise jaante ho???

Am(laughing): tumhe kya lagta hai itne saal Dr.Armaan Mallik ke saath rehte-rehte mera dookh badh nahi jaayega kya???har ghum ki dawaa hoti hai aur meri dawaa tum thi…

Ri: kya matlab?

Am: ek din mein itna dukhi tha ki apna dukh bhulaane us jagah pahunch gaya jahaan koi nahi jaata….main bhatakte hue tumhaare club mein pahuncha…..sharaab ki bottle lekar main apna ghum bhulne ki koshish kar raha tha ki tabhi maine tumhe naachte hue dekha…uff….tauba….tumhe dekhkar mera saara nasha utar gaya aur ek naya nasha chad gaya mujhpe….woh thi tum…tumhare dance ka kya kehna…mere jaise tumhaare kaafi saare dewaane the isliye kabhi tumhaare bahut kareeb nahi aa payaa…us din toh main ghar chalaa gaya tumhaara naam neendh mein lete hue… jab doosre din mein hosh mein aaya tab maine tay kiya ki main dobara itni giri hui jagah par kabhi nahi jaooga lekin shaam hote-hote phir ek baar tumhaara chehra saamne aaya aur main khud ko roh nahi paaya….tum mein ek ajeeb nasha hai jo sabko tumhaare paas khichta hai…..roz shaam ko main aata aur sirf tumhe dekhta…(looking in her eyes)tumhaari nasheeli aankhen,tumhaare rasilein honth(touching her lips while ridz jerked his hands away),tumhaare khubsoorat baal(kissing her hair),tumhaari yeh mulayaam twachaa(touching her skin….ridz again jerked his hand away)…tumhaara yeh badan aur bataao tumhe kya???(he winked & bought his hand near her breast & she just pushed him away angrily).

Ri: tumhaara jaisa gira hua insaan maineaaj tak nahi dekha.

Am(laughing evily): sach mein riddhima bahut intzaar karwaaya tumne…..tumhe yaad hai woh gifts aur flowers tumhe 4 saal pehle koi bhejta tha….(ridz remembered some unknown person would keep her sending gifts & flowers long time back…even before she met armaan but she would just dump them)…woh main hi tha…tumhe roz dekhkar mujhse raha nahi gaya….bas ek raat ke liye mein chahta tha ki tum meri ho jaao….mari baahon mein aa jaao aur mein tumhaare saath jo chahu woh kar saku….tumhaari zulfoin ke saath khel sakoon,tumhaare laboin par apna naam likh sakoon…aur jab mujhe pata chala ki tum bikaao nahi ho aur kabhi koi mard tumhaare paas nahi aaya toh mera iraada aur bhi mazboot ho gaya….is khilte hue phool ko sabse pehle main todna chahta tha….maine kaafi koshish ki tumhe apne paas laane ki lekin tumne bagair mujhe dekhe mujhe reject kar diya…..aur phir mera yahaan transfer hua….mujhe tumse door jaane ka bahut dukh tha….lekin maine tumse apna naata nahi toda…mere aadmi hamesha mujhe tumhaari khabar dete rehte….teen saal pehle unhone mujhe bataaya ki tumne dance karna chod diya aur tum pregnant ho gayi ho….yakeen maano us waqt mujhe bahut gussa aaya kyunki woh sab tumhaare saath main sabse pehle karna chahta tha…fir pata chala tum maa ban gayi ho aur main khud ko hi kosta ki yeh meri galti hai…agar pehle hi maine tumse zabardasti kar li hoti toh yeh pachtaava na hota….main yahaan drugs mein doobne lagaa kyunki yahaan koi ladki nahi thi jo tumhaari kami poori kar sakti….har raat ek ladki ke saath guzaarta lekin fir bhi tumhaara hi chehra yaad aata…fir maine plan banaaya paise kamaane ka yeh soch ke ki agar main amir ho gaya toh tum mujhe inkaar nahi karogi…main tumhe ek raat ke liye mooh-maangi keemat deta aur tab tak tumhe use kar sakta jab tak mera jee nahi bharta…aur saath hi saath main apna bhi hospital khol sakta aur armaan ko neech giraata…armaan se badla lene ke liye isse acha tareeka koi nahi tha…maine patients ki surgery ke dauraan unke organs nikaalna shuru kiye….kissi ki kidney toh kissi ka heart toh kissi ka brain….agar patient mar jaaye toh main reports main aise manipulations karta ki patient ki bimaari hi uske maut ka kaaran hain yeh saabit ho jaata…armaan ka best friend hone ke naate koi mujhpe kabhi shak nahi karta….maine kuch nurses aur ward boys ko bhi saath mila diya tha…badi aasaani se maine sabko bewakoof banaaya…armaan ke saath is case par kaam kar raha tha taaki uspar nazar rakh sakoon…woh aur vivek toh bewakoof the ki main unke saath hi tha fir bhi mujhe pakad nahi paaye….

Ri: MAIN TUMHE ACHAA INSAAN SAMJTH TI THI…JAB ARMAAN NE MUJHE BATAAYA KI TUM USKE BEST FRIEND HO TOH MUJHE LAGAA KI WOH BAHUT LUCKY HAI KI TUMHAARE JAISA DOST USSE MILA HAI….TUMHE ARMAAN KABHI MAAF NAHI KAREGA….TUMHE KHUD PAR SHARAM AANI CHAHIYE…JAB ARMAAN KO PATA CHALEGA TOH….

Am: armaan ki fikar karna chodo aur apne baare mein socho….

Ri: kya matlab hai tumhaara??

Am: tum abhi tak nahi samjhi????peechle paanch saal se maine tumhaara intzaar kiya hai….jab armaan ne humme milwaaya toh mujhe yakeen nahi hua ki tum goa aagayi ho…..main bas mauka dhoondh raha tha apne saare armaan poore karne ka lekin tum kabhi akeli milti hi nahi…hotel main tumhaare saath hamesha woh poora emotional fool mallik pariwaar rehta….tumse dance rehearsel ke baad milne ki koshish karta toh armaan rehta….sach bataoo kya hai tumhaare aur armaan ke beech…jo main dekh raha hoon woh sirf dosti toh nahi hai…yeh dosti se zyaada kuch aur hai…

Ri: apni gandi zubaan se mere armaan ka naam mat lo…

Am(raising an eyebrow): mere armaan????tumhe sach main lagta hai woh tumhaara hai???hehehe armaan mallik kabhi kissi ek ladki se wafaadar nahi hota...tum toh bas uska time paas ho jaise college mein ladkiyaan thi....yakeen maano mere tarah woh bhi is hi intzaar main hai ki kab tum usko apne paas aane dogi.....meri baat maano aur us he bhool jaao aur mere baahon mein aa jaao....maine itne paise kamaaye hai ki tumhe saari umar kamaane ki zaroorat nahi padhegi....aur woh tumhaara koi bachaa hai na usse hum kissi achche orphanage main rakh denge.....bas tum mujhe poora karti rahon aur meri rakhail ban jaao...

*SLAP*

*ANOTHER SLAP*

Amit was standing there horrifed looking at ridz fuming in anger.She was standing in front of him.She had removed the needle from her hand which was connected to the glucose bottle.Her leg still had some pain but it was nothing compared to the rage inside her body.

Ri: TUMHAARI HIMMAT KAISI HUI MUJHSE AISE BAAT KARNE KI???TUM JAISA INSAAN ARMAAN KO KYA JAANE????ARMAAN JAISA BHI HO LEKIN TUMSE TOH LAAKH GUNAA ACHCHAA HAI...AB MAIN TUMHE NAHI CHODUGI....SABKO TUMHAARI ASLIYAT BATAA DOOGI...

Am(anger in his eyes): yeh tumne bahut badhi galti kar di mujhe maarne ki.....jaanti ho main yahaan kya sochkar aaya tha???ki pehle tumhe pyaar se kahooga lekin agar tum nahi maani toh tumhe zabardasti apna banaa loonga....aaj raat kissi bhi kimat par main tumhe haasil kar doonga aur is ke pehle ki kal subah tum apni zubaan khol sakti tumhaara bhi operation kar deta aur tumhaari bolti hamesha ke liye bandh ho jaati aur koi yeh nahi jaan paata tum kaise mar gayi....lekin ab main aisa nahi karooga...is do chaantoin ki kimat toh tumhe ab har din chukaani padegi....ab main yahaan jo karne aaya hu woh zaroor karooga lekin uski baad tumhe itni aasaan maut nahi doonga....tumhe yahaan se agwaa kar loonga aur aisi jagah bandi banaaoga ki tum kabhi wahaan se bhaag nahi sakti...aur jab mera mann karega tab tumhaare paas aakar jo suluk karna chahta hoon karooga....tumhe jab mann karega tab marooga aur jab mann karega tab zabardasti apna banaa loonga aur sirf main kyu aise bahut saare aadmi hain jo tum jaisi mast cheez ko haasil karna chahiyenge.....ishi bahaane main bhi toh thode paise aur kamaa loonga.....yahaan jab tumhaara armaan aur doosre tumhaari pooch taaj karenge toh main yeh sabit kar dooga ki tum ek vaishya ho aur tumhe pataa chal gaya ki main jaan chuka hoon isliye badnaami ke darr se tum bhaag gayi....

He moved towards riddhima.Ridz anger was now replaced with fear.She looked at the determined look in his eyes & was now more scared.She tried backing out.

Ri: mere paas mat aana warna main chillaougi....

Am: tumhe kya lagta hai main yeh nahi jaanta???rape ke samay koi ladki shaanth nahi rehti isliye maine pehle se is floor ke saare patients ko behoshi ki dawaai de di hai aur bahar jitne ward boys duty par hai sab mere aadmi hai....isliye tumhe bachaane yahaan koi nahi aayega.....

Ridz ran towards the door & tried opening it but it was locked from outside.She looked at amit smiling evily.

Am: tut....tut...riddhima sweety maine pehle se saare raaste bandh kar diye hai....ab kuch nahi ho sakta....ab wahi hoga jo main chahuga because i'm the player....

Okay sorry again for the extreme delay......hope you all like this part.....cant promise when will I post the next part but will try soooooon....plzzzzzz leave comments/criticize....they mean a lot to me....

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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG!! So he was the guy!! Shocking!! Very well written!! But no RM!! :( Pls continue soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sweety wat a fab part......................that Amit😡😡..God feel like kiling him..............I hope our hero Ammy cums at the ri8 time................plz continue soon & thnxs for the pm

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