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@bernard shaw

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Posted: 16 years ago

#81

Lord, I was sure that I had lefta resreved somewher but cannot find it...so am postinga fresh!

First of all a big aology for the delay in commenting butlife has been madness between writing Maslow, workinga nd now travelling...dont know how you juggle so manythngs girl, hats off to you!

Now for Part 1

Perhaps the cute boy edition was now available only in such models, limited up to the teens, up and beyond they were not an endangered species; they were most certainly extinct. Instead they were replaced by the likes of Sangeet Pal Singh

Just loved this line! I am hoping this is just the character speaking and not an experience!

You know what caught in the first part was the poignancy, don't know whether it was intended or not, of Muskaan's situation…some extent of loneliness in a regular life and the only saviour from all of that a sissy who she can't stand, how much more exasperating can life get? But glad to see that in all of that she retains a sense of humour if not an outrageous attitude as Rahul discovered to his great discomfort!

And I absolutely, absolutely loved the interaction between Adi and his dad esp Adi sagely telling his dad that he had finally become a man, lol! Why I do I feel it would be close to the kind of comment I would expect from a certain someone I've got to know on this forum?

Loved Part 1, shall read the next two and then comment…am actually glad that I finally got around to reading it when there is more than one part on the board.

Girl, I am genuinely intrigued..how do you manage to find the time to study, write, read and have fun!

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harika

@-harika-

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#82

finally!! u donno nj how much i was trying to post this comment...so here i am...read all the three parts, this one is a lovely fic dear!! i never read any RM fic before but its really a refreshing experience, AR r my fav but RM have their own aura, being very relatable

ok coming to the fic, i loved the storyline, intro got me hooked with the four phrases thing n the parts r just superb...loved adi n his bonding with rahul...RM's fights n then his sudden pang of guilt for being prejudiced n hasty...loving the flickers of feelings...its all going very smoothly...njoying it a lot!!

urs was definitely a wise choice for taking RM, it had once occured to me to write a fic abt RM when i wanted a simple pair but this fic had re-inforced my thought..awesome job NJ!!

cheers!!

luv u

harika

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lookwhoshere

@lookwhoshere

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#83

hey...omg!! thoroughly enjoyed reading part one!! will comment in detail by tomoroow hun..on all the three parts..hows ur sore throat though?? hope it'll be gud soon..

reserving this for now!!😊

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m so thrilled with this new idea of not using magic words that i donot wish to use the 'S word' today....would u like a biggg hug instead?? 🤗

THIS fic of urs has captivated all my interests this afternoon..i cudn't just put the laptp away!!! let me begin frm the beginning...the banner(dunno wat u guys call it) itself had such an apt line written below it...i cudn;'t help but smile..the intro gave me quick images of muskaan as a school teacher immediately.. as gentle, n caring as she could be..i remember once to have imagined shilpa anand as a nursery teacher..when i was wondering wat these ppl could hav been had they not been real-life actors or reel-life doctors...😆 but now i know who fits the role better!!

aditya as rahul's son.. the awesome twosome!! at first i thought the boy was quite a sharp brain, especially wen he's motivated by ppl his kind..but sumwhr in part 1, found him too smart for his age..which did not pass off as a very gud trait , considering it didn't fit in, in the 'gud habits n behaviour' list etched across our minds..but now after having read 4 complete parts...i have almost..close to fallen for his innocence!!😆 i loved especially the bit whr rahul puts him off to sleep, ruffling his hair...i've seen most elder ppl get very vulnerable while doing this very thing..n wen u described the way adi slept, it felt so...heart-warming!!! just as warm as i felt wen muskaan hugged adi wen he was being transferred..😳 i felt like desperately congratulating u to have written a scene so beautifully..the way she avoided rahul's eyes..the way her throat tightened ..loved it..n then the scene whr she talks of how striking their eyes r, n rahul tries hard to notice resemblance in the mirror n all...playing snow white!😆 mirrror mirror on the wall, r my eyes hazel at all??..hehehe..😆

oh n mr.pink whistle?? haven't heard of him...or may be i have, dunno..even i remember to have read most of Enid Blyton's amazing works..famous five had me gripped in school..boy, how i adore those buks still!!

those 'co-incidental' encounters were damn gud..both awfully awkward, n m sure i wud have enjoyed them had i been a spectator myself!! 😆 the mall thing with nij was gud too..n it was a loonngg time since i read French again..cud figure out the words though.

m glad rahul chose to undo his mistake, leaving aside his male ego, which shows how much he loves his son..yeah, just his son, as of yet..😊 their talk in the cafeteria, whr he deliberately avoided using golden wrds despite his usual practice showed his acceptance of muskaan sumhow..

and u know wat naseem?? i've especially thought of telling u that m simply bowled over with the lines u use everytime to end a particular scene...they all sounded so perfect, so thought-provoking!! i have to tell u this ff is one of the best things u've written...m feeling so gud after reading it..can't tell u how much i enjoyed the read..plz do reply!!

luv,

anu.😊

ps: i prefer to not talk about sangeet praji..isn't this a proof enough of my disapproval of him??😆

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#84

okay i'll straight away launch into an abject apology...and believe me you deserve every bit of it. your comment at the end of the last update made me so guity. i mean i've been reading each part as soon as i had a bit of free time and till now i haven't commented even once.

it's just there's so much administrative work at the beginning of each sem what with paying the fees and registering for the new sem and everything and since in our uni the only two options are walking or cycling i end up covering nearly 15 kms each day either on foot or by cycle...add to that the hyd. sun and i'm just too tired to do anything even faintly intellectual. so i sincerely beg your pardon and asssure you that i adored your central characters...i have a feeling this might replace perfect imperfection as my new all time fav. and it almost...not quite but almost makes up for mayank leaving DMG...i can't believe they did that to the RM jodi 😡

anyway give me another week and i swear things will be better!

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pal234

@pal234

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#85

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awesome update....👏
m luving d story more nd more wit each update...
their thoughts, their bond, that deja vu...its all jus remarkable...

Edited by pal_279 - 16 years ago

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namelesssr

@namelesssr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#86

I'm so sorry that I couldn't get on to this one immediately after I got your pm... but I wanted to take time out to read your pithy updates and not miss anything out rather than rush through it in a hurry. Well, and my take on this one is... scintillating as usual. Loved Adi's trying-to-be-grown-up takes on his dad, and Adi-Muskaan bonding. Looks like Rahul has a propensity for making his appearances right when Muskaan needs to fob off her admirers... no guesses for where this is going to lead to 😆
This one is going up my ever growing list of to-watch-out-for titles 😊
You're a wonder... writing multiple ffs and long essays on the writings of others on this forum, as well as managing your time away from the forum... while I struggle to balance my work and home life 😕

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rahayma

@raym

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#87

awesome ...iloved it ..ur an awesome writer...do continue soon

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Pebblez

@Pebblez

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#88

updted comments on page 9...they aren't the usual essay style...but aah well...thats all i ud cum up with ryt now...!!

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#89

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTT PART 3 ALREADY?!?!?! yikes I'm already behind!!!!!!!!!! reserved!!

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kashish

@kashishk

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#90

***RESERVED***

I'll be back soon, I give a look at the beginning of the part two and I was shocked reading french(can u speak french?),it was fantastic.
I'll read from the part one and leave my full comments.

Hey I am back and the parts were truly awesome, I really loved them.
Pls PM me if possible, continue soon.

Kashish

Edited by kashishk - 16 years ago