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pickytg

@pickytg

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#71

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yayyyyyy U!! luved d update..and i think i finally agree....i wudnt hve like AR in tis one! =)
soooo mny bits i liked...'papa'..adiz yes to her book offer..rahulz heart pang.. tes were ma favoritez!!!
hmm start wit...hiz thoughts...movin..settlin...adi accepting..all wrapped up in a few sentences bt tey said so much...adiz 'papa' was awesomeee!!!! bt adiz char descrip...ter was 1 thin..i felt it was a repetition..but it flowed well otherwise...u showed equal sides of d coin concerned wit adi....nicely done!(bravo!) i was thinkin abt pam...for those bits...not intentional..ovb! hmm...rahul goin 2 skool..meetin sissy and no..i didnt guess it was him..even wit d raised eyes..who else who be so concerned...and infact i was sidin n thinkin lke rahul for those bits..muski was dt headmaster frm dt movie 'matilda' ahhaa!!adi-muski scene...was d best..d convo..d obvious bond betn d 2..his acceptance mattered lke a winner for her..hmm!!rahul showin up....observin her doinz..ahhaha dt was sooooo cute...and dt point..i meant...soooo muski and only her..:D..rahulz confusion...his tlk wit muski...lol!! dt strong adamant self...even ten...ohhh weirdo! i luv her!..and ten his adiz likin 2 for d obvious reasonz now...ooohhhh bad bad!!
jauz m likin each part more than d previous..again yayy u for dt!

luved it ;) 315!!!

NZ!

Edited by missypatel - 16 years ago

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Qwerty123rty

@Qwerty123rty

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#72

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Aww…poor adi and uff!! Rahul just coz the teacher kissed u doesn't mean she bad…ok alrite the act reflects badly upon her character but doesn't he know adi likes the skul…hmmmm…hehehe the father son don't agree on the teacher…he likes her while Rahul is scowling thinking of her…ahaha…
And that moment when his hand closed around Rahul's finger..that was sooooo cute and I been missing Luci so much and that one thing reminded me of her more….loved it Nj…I like it when u keep including these little sweet things in between…I told you before I love how you successfully capture emotions and ur portrayal of them is amazing....

ahahaha...The woman did affect the heads of men in no appreciable way. lmao..

oh well...jealous huh...this guy really needs to get a life and Rahul not telling him the real puropose...good good...aww their bond sealed with a stamp...awesome...

and their convo was sooo funny...loved it but am sad that he moved Adi from his class and he too is guilty rite? hmm...kya yaar but the whole scene made me so sad...*sniff*

but i loveddddd this part...mindblowingly awesome...u doing a gr8 job like always..but i think this fic comes in the category of my favs on the forum...

315..

Kratz

Edited by krati.mehra - 16 years ago

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Hina

@hinz

Moderator

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#73

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Hey nj
me back
a lot earlier than usual
just loving this story hun
rahul's thots and behaviour was i think my fav this time
the way adi behaved was cute and his sleep lolz
awesomely described
just love their bond
and then came SPS,i knew only he cud be watching Muskaan and his visitors so closely
Muskaan and her interaction wid adi was too sweet
and her chirpy ways were very well penned
and then her meeting wid him
his guilt too gud and then her affectionate hug awwww
loved it nj
take care sweety
and dont be exerting your throat 😆

315 n more

Edited by hinanaziri - 16 years ago

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Krani

@Krani

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#74

thanks for updating! :D....I hope you feel better...really liked this class...and no offence but Muskaan's rule of not using those words are really getting to me...it's like sort of annoying me...I am sorry if you are hurt by this comment😳😳

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#75

waoh🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ superb😉 rahul is so cute😛 & muskaan is also nice one😳😍 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉 & sorry😭😭 for late reply😳 both parts r awesome one😳

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to FIND someone in every THOUGHT,
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luv_dmg_armaan

@luv_dmg_armaan

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#76

Wow that was truly fantastic!Seriously love your FF!No how could Rahul do that,poor Adi!feel for him...

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Ankita.S.Mansharamani

@moda.vintage

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#77

Ouch.....u r srsly doin stn 2 me it was the second tym i was knocked out last nite nd this tym in a theatre wid popcorns all over me
well anywayz the part was as usual fantastic aww poor adi cant understand wat has gtn over his dad nd rahul how cud he opt him out of da class atleast muskaan is way betta den sangeet i hope he soon realises
osm
cont asap
luv ya
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Pebblez

@Pebblez

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#78

*reserved again...

Nia, i am in no mood of the long essay kinda thing i wrote the last time, that was an overdose of caffeine, this time's its a lack of ti which is making me cranky n restless...so let me get that in me first and then a couple of hours for that ever-working mind to rest...then i will be back with LONG comments...you have to put up with me for this, i slept at 5 in the morning, doing NOTHING, and woke at 7 for college....life has officially begun to suck hehehe...

Get back to u soon, i am not getting off ur back without the comments, cuz i want em back for mine hehe...

P.s. I came up for another nick for u....and yeah, thanks for the part...!!

*hug-ness*

Okaayyyy....i am DONE with the reading and now its time to review...

Chapter 2.

This chapter was as gripping as the first one...the first scene, in the store, was hilarious...i mean, Nij playing that trick up on her and Muskaan, being the smart wit she is, actually falling for it...anyways....I simply LOVED the whole craziness of Muskaan in that part...she definitely takes away the award for being the crazy dimwit in the ff....ehehe...her whole 'landing up in the men's restroom' and then that amazing stroke of brilliance was commendable...Rahul and Adi, what can i say...Adi is fast becoming a favorite, i am brilliant with kids, all under the age of 4...hehehehe...but i simply love this kid...he is fast, he is naughty, he is just too adorable...

The kiss part was hilarious...i was like, Go Muskaan!! Heheheh...glad Sissy would be outta the way for some time...and well, kinda glad Adi missed out on this not too pleasant encounter too ;)

Chapter 3.

What can i say, the first half of the story made me go all awwwww...!! You know how to touch the chords well girl, i loved loved loved the first scene...the whole explanation of Adi as Rahul's pov was amazing...and that Papa scene, just literally made me say awww...!! Hehehe...WELL DONE AGAIN!!

Loved Muskaan-Adi's relationships....it seems they are gonna have a more than good rapport for that...and yeah, Muskaan shoving off Sissy in that way was hilarious...i just am falling in love with it...Nia, u have made me a RM fan, i just love the way this ff just seems to flow out with u....

Keep updating...looking fwd to tmw's update, hope Rahul duznt pull out Adi in reality...btw, when's the mommy making the entry?

Lov ya!!!

Kiran...or should i say, zia signing off hehee..

Edited by armaans*basket* - 16 years ago