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Posted: 18 years ago
hi izzy just finish reading your ff and its mindblowing awesome can't find more words 😆 but i have one question why ak are not together i just want them together 😉 even neel's death is painful 😭 hope angad get to kirpa soon but why is he sleeping 😕 and what is ham hem doing their 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: love_jaan

hi izzy just finish reading your ff and its mindblowing awesome can't find more words 😆 but i have one question why ak are not together i just want them together 😉 even neel's death is painful 😭 hope angad get to kirpa soon but why is he sleeping 😕 and what is ham hem doing their 😡

Hello Love jaan, First of all, Thank you that you liked it. Wow u just read it all in one day, that's very enrgetic of you, did you have to go through lots of pges?

AK will be together soon. u cracked me again, the way u said it, "ham hem" doing there 😆 😆 😆😆 😉.

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Posted: 18 years ago
Awesome part!!!!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
Great job. You really are a great writer. Continue soon. I hope now Prithvi doesn't do anything assuming that he is the mystery man.
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi izzy nice part pls conti soon👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
awsome really exquisitely written sadly tragic poor neal well no offence dont u have got enough space in ur pc to save the parts u have written 😆 sorry pls dont mind but u con after like ages but ys the part called heaven or hell anyways great part but real short
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Posted: 18 years ago
K Guys, Next part is coming up soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Continued

Recap: Neal dead because of accident. Kripa in denial.

Amber informed all her and his family members about Neal death. According to Neal wishes, he wanted his body buried in his hometown, New York. The body lay in the coffin as it was going to be transported via Airline to New York. Amber made sure that they get the private airline with all the family members. All this happened in last three hours, that kripa was barely showing any signs. She was still in her position gazing at his lifeless body in the Coffin. They were now waiting for their flights and sat in private hall. She remembered Angad and decided to call him. It's 2am at night.

She heard a girl's sound and immediately asked for Angad. It is Louise, "He is sleeping can I give him any message?"

"Please, can I speak to him, it's urgent" her voice was teary. Louise felt something was fishy, first it was kripa and now some other girl. But what was so urgent that they couldn't tell her. Minutes later Angad was back and was surprised to see it was Amber.

"Amber?" he called.

Amber didn't know what to say broke down. She was crying and was wordless. She looked at kripa who sat still. "A.-N-G-A-D, -"

"Amber, where are you and what's wrong?"

"Angad, we are at the airport and our flight will be soon, me and kripa are going to New York."

"WHAT? Amber is everything alright?" he said sounding worried.

Amber sobbed more, "Angad Neal's dead. He's no more" she cried, "he's no more left. He died in accident and right now me and kripa are taking his body to New York"

He was shocked and was left dried in throat, "How's kripa? Why the hell didn't you inform me sooner?"

"I got to go Angad. Our flights are announced and Kripa tried to tell you but someone said you were sleeping" The phone line went dead. Angad stared at cell phone. He quickly changed into jeans and dashed out of doors and heard Louise calling her.

"Kripa" Amber shook her as she sat beside her. She was starring endlessly to the coffin and Neal's body. "Kripa" she said, "I have informed Angad..." she looked at her and blinked. In an instant Amber hugged her and cried.

After twenty minutes, he ran through the crowd in the airport. Seeing no sign of them he ran to the boarding area, the security guard caught him. After much pleading he asked them to accompany with him. They asked for whole he was looking for, "Amber and kripa, a flight to New York where they are also carrying dead body" They nodded and took him to private direction.

Meanwhile their flights announced, two guards came and held the coffin by both ends, Amber took hold of kripa and led her through the gateway.

The guards took Angad to private room and told him that the flight has announced and they left for plane. He begged them to take him to the plane but they refused, seeing no way, frustrated, he ran to the gateway with guards chasing beside him.

As kripa step into the plane, she turned to look back. "Kripa" Amber called and they both got on. Angad ran through the private New York flight gateway. The engine turned on and plane took its direction and sped away. Angad opened the gate door and saw the flight leaving, he sighed. The guards caught him and put handcuff on him.

The proper funeral ceremony took place in New York with both Neal's family and Sharma family attending the function. Kripa didn't let go of his body when it was ready for burying, she was crying constantly and not believing it was happening to her. The family member has to take her away but she still stood on her ground and watched the pope say the prayers and finally bury him. She closed her eyes, in front of her flashed her whole life, from childhood to present with Neal.

She stood beside the grave and watched the handwriting graved on the stone, "In the loving memory of Neal kapoor, beloved son of Mr. K Kapoor. 1982 – 2007. How strange life could be? It turned her life upside down in matter of few minutes, she thought she could save him and he would be there for her. May be it all was a dream and she would wake up to see him there for her. It was a horrible dream.

Meanwhile In India, Angad got sent to jail due to his runaway. He did not care where it was, it upset him for not being there for her, for them. It was hard to believe Neal was dead, a man he thought of his best friend, with who he can share his thoughts. Although he knew him for a short time, he stood out to be a great friend and he was proud of kripa's choice, he wasn't a play boy. He didn't want to see her hurt. Minutes Later he saw Naina with Louise standing outside his cell. "What's this Angad, you ran away with out telling her? Did you even wondered how tensed she was?" Naina said, flaring up. Louise put hand on her shoulder to calm her down, she smiled, "Would you mind giving us some time Louise?" she asked. "Sure" she said.

"What was so important that you ran out with out telling her or me?" she asked again. She paused for a bit and stared at him, "it's her? Isn't it?" Angad looked at her confused?

"I knew it, she was nothing for you. Don't you see, she's trying to ruin your career? And she just did it."

"MOM!" Angad yelled at her, he wondered could this be his real mom. "Don't even try to compare yourself with her? Look at yourself first and then her"

Naina fumed at him, "I knew it. And tomorrow it would be all over in paper, Super star Angad khanna in Jail? This is how you repay me after all my hard working? Don't you see Angad? She's trying to win over you"

Angad looked at his mom disgusted and shook his dead, "Just leave me alone"

She continued to ignore him, "What are you doing with her? Louise, she has everything and she's still there for you. I don't understand what you see her"

"She left for New York" Angad finally said.

"FINALLY! Even if she did, she still landed you in jail. No more of kripa, I want you to look after someone who cares for you not your money, look at Louise." Angad snorted. "Mom, Just leave I have had enough for now!"

One Week later…

Angad was out of jail and was constantly trying to get in touch of kripa; there was no response from her side or Amber's. He tried to get contact of her family but didn't exactly remember there names. Exams has started for him, he tried his best to stop his mother to continuing bugging him. Yet in the week, he has managed to avoid Louise just giving away the excuses of exams. Now the prom was near, he didn't have any mood to go but Naina kept forcing him to take Louise with him. On the whole, Louise tried to stay close to him so that he'd take her out.

Kripa was now staying back with her family. They were worried for her specially Josh, her brother. Kripa spent most of her time in her bedroom or kept quite all day. It was not the kripa they knew. They felt as if sending her back to India was their fault but knew it was all to do with Neal's death. Although Sharma loved Neal like their own son as they watched him grow and play along side, it was sad but sadder to see their own daughter suffer.

Josh entered kripa's room to see her laying the bed. He went near her and sat beside her, caressing her hair. She moved a little, her face was dried with tears. He noticed pictures of Neal scattered under her pillows. A tear dropped from his eye, he treated him like his own brother.

"Kripa" he said softly. She moved a little and put her head on his lap and hugged him around stomach. He laughed a little. Kripa slowly opened her eyes and looked at Josh; she got up and sat on the bed.

He sighed. "I missed you a lot. What happened to you lately kripa? This is not the kripa I knew? I want my kripa back!"

Kripa instantly hugged him, "Josh you know the reason and why are you asking me. I still can't believe this much has happened. It's my entire fault, IF I didn't..."

Josh looked at her shocked, "Kripa, stop blaming your self. It wasn't anyone's fault" he looked at her, "It was bound to happen sooner or later. This was why Neal hadn't told you because you'd break down and now look at yourself. He knows you too well."

"No Josh! If I wasn't too stubborn at that time this wouldn't have happened. If I'd have taken him for surgery in time, you know he had a chance to recover but he didn't go. I believed it was all stupid mistakes and he would be all right, he seemed fine to me. Even if he did have it I could have taken to doctor and I didn't! Don't you see I killed him?" Josh gave her a tight slap, he held her from shoulders, and "It's not your damn fault kripa! Why don't you believe it?"

"Stop trying Josh" she said weakly looking at him straight, "you and I both know that it's useless"

Josh left her and turned to go, "If not for me kripa at least for Neal, don't blame yourself."

**

Meanwhile back in India, It was prom night today. As per routine Louise stick to Angad like a satellite hoping he would ask her out. it was getting frustrating for him even his own Mom, Naina sided with her.

"Angad!" Louise rushed to his side and he came downstairs, "I am getting very bored now, Can you take me somewhere?"

Naina who was sitting at the sofa watching this smiled. She was after all right girl for him. It didn't matter to her that she was half Indian and half French, she was suitable for him in every way, financially, good status, good looking and over all has experience. "Not now Louise, I am busy right now. Why don't you watch movies with mom?"

Naina smiled and walked to him, "What's so important that you have to leave at this time? If I am wrong, don't you have prom today, why don't you take her with you and she can meet your friends too"

"Oooh" she cooed in girly voice, putting an arm around him, "why didn't you tell me? I would have gone shopping with you Angad but it doesn't matter anymore. I still look good"

"I am not going to Prom!" he said, "I have an important work" he abruptly left her shoulders and walked out of the door. He put the keys in the car, "ANGAD, Wait for me" he heard her calling, he turned around to see her again, "What's the matter now, Louise?" he said through gritted teeth.

"Can I also come with you wherever you are going, I won't disturb you?"

"No! Why can't you leave me along for a moment?"

"ALONE! Did you say alone? How would I know that you are not off with some girls? We are going to get engaged soon. And why do you keep avoiding me?"

It was getting hard for him to control his anger, there was a limit of everything and she broke it all, "AVOIDING YOU?" he yelled at her, "You follow me like a satellite 24 hours a day and you say avoiding me? And for your information I don't even l-i-k-e you so get that in your head I am not going to marry you!"

"And Might I know who says that?"

"Of course, it's me" he said with a hint of sarcasm.

She smiled, "You can't do that Angad because you don't have a power to do it. And even if you do you will be doomed. You see your company, khanna enterprise has merged with Ted baker, that to say my company and even If you brake away, your company would be sold away because I own 52% of the shares. So what do you say honey?" she asked him sweetly with a gleeful smile on her face while Angad stood there as if something has hit him hard.

**

Coming up: Kripa and Angad meet now with a new turn!

See I have posted the next part quick! I was planning to make it more bigger but didn't have energy left, lol I am getting lazy during holidays. I am still working on the golden moments and will post it soon. Have a lovely weekend and love to hear from you soon J

Love,

Sanya 😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: popgirl

Awesome part!!!!! 👏 👏 👏

Thanks

Thanks! 😃

Originally posted by: jdsean

Great job. You really are a great writer. Continue soon. I hope now Prithvi doesn't do anything assuming that he is the mystery man.

aww Thanks and I am glad you liked it btw nice guess for prithiv! you will see it soon! 😉

Originally posted by: dostokedost

hi izzy nice part pls conti soon👏

Thank you and Next part is posted! 😃

Originally posted by: armaghan0

awsome really exquisitely written sadly tragic poor neal well no offence dont u have got enough space in ur pc to save the parts u have written 😆 sorry pls dont mind but u con after like ages but ys the part called heaven or hell anyways great part but real short

Thank you armaghan and I am glad you liked, it is sad! No offence taken! I do have enough space but I save my work on my USB and on my comp. If I have extra time in college I cont it from there. Sometimes when I left my usb in lockers, the part in my home comp isn't updated! I doo cont after ages cuz I hardly get time and beside you'll know once you start wrting it! 😆 Now that I have posted it soon!

Heaven or hell, to see where Neal did go? Hell cuz it's hell situation for both Angad, kripa and ofcourse Amber!

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: shiv-gauri4eva

awesum update....continue asap

Thanks and it's posted!

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