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I don't know who you can post a post with lot of quotes on it 😕.

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I am sorry that I haven't been able to continue for a while but I have got exams starting this wednesday and will finsih at 27th January. It's really hard to find a time to post a part. I know what you feel but for know patience is the best thing.

I promise after my exams I will treat you with big long parts, you know me.

Thankyou for all the patience.

Sanya

I will now cancel the idea of game as preeti said it's not allowed. But the draw of last Q will b up soon as i post the next part.
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oh thts fine...... all d best!!! 😛
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Continued…

Recap In case you've forgotten 😆 😳:

Tears streamed down her face as she stood their shocked and traumatized, she knew it all way along but it was her heart who was stopping maybe she was wrong. Angad stood beside her with shock yet feeling sad to see her apart, he once again tried to go further she stopped him and nodded "no."

If Angad wanted he could have beaten him to death but he stopped because he was once his friend and it was because of Kripa he stopped.

There was sudden silence in the room. Kripa looked at them disgusted and said, "I'll wait for you two in the living room and slammed the door with Angad following her.

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As Amber and Neal came out dressed, they were holding hands. Kripa looked at them heart broken yet angry and mad. She walked up to Amber and gave her tight slap. All three were shocked yet Angad was expecting it to be Neal.

"Kripa! Don't you touch her?" Neal said.

Kripa looked up at with teary eyes, "you don't get it do you, that ***** has used me to get you. She's using you…"

Before she can say anything Neal slapped her, Amber was crying. Kripa looked at him shocked. "You slapped me for her!" she cried. And then she looked at Amber with hatred "congratulation you have succeeded in your tramp!"

"Kripa, Don't blame her" Neal said.

Kripa looked at him, "Who should I blame, you or her, How long has it been going on for?"

Neal looked down and avoided the tear that was coming. "TELL ME, damn it, will you?" Kripa screamed at him.

Her eyes widened in shock, "Was it her from the start?"

Neal nodded in shame. It was time for her to slap him "you cheated me for one month that too because of her? Why did you that? What did I lack that you went to her? Tell me!' she grabbed him from his collar and shook him. "You knew I loved you yet you used me"

Angad grabbed her from her arm, "There's no use of wasting your tears on someone else that isn't worth it" he said angrily, looking at him. Kripa freed her self from Angad and looked at Neal right in the eye, "I am not leaving until I get answers"

"It's not him fault Kripa" Amber said speaking for the first time. Kripa looked angrily at her, Neal her best friend, her love, defended her in front her, he slapped her. She went up to her and grabbed her hair and pulled it down. "I am not going to leave you, tramp. You played with me!"

"Leave her, Kripa" Neal shouted at her. He went up to them and pulled them apart. Amber was still crying, holding her head.

"I don't deserve you Kripa because you are not my type. What the hell I know about you. You might been sleeping with other men behind my back"

Angad slapped him hard and punched him hard on the stomach. He stared right into his eyes, "Don't you dare say about that to her". Neal freed himself from her, "What's the matter, can't you see your love getting hurt. I knew it all way long that you both have been doing things behind my back."

Kripa was crying silently, she is stunned in a bad way to hear these things from her. She went up to him, "What did you say?"

"You two are having affair behind my back?" Kripa slapped him twice and again.

"You deserved it. I wish you were dead for me and I haven't known you all along!"

"KRIPA!" Amber shouted angry at her. "Do you know what you're saying?" Neal looked at Amber with fear in his eyes and silently prayed she won't let anything out. Amber looked at Neal sadly, "What kind of girlfriend are you, to give them death wish?"

"Who are you to say that Tramp, if you play any more games with me I swear I'll kill you!"

Angad went up to Kripa. He first of all gave a slap to Amber that made her cheeks red. Kripa looked at him shocked. He looked at her, "That's for making my friend sad" and took Kripa away.

As soon the door slammed, Neal fell on floor crying. "I've lost her, Amber, I've lost her forever" Amber went up to him and helped him to sofa. "Don't you say that, we'll go to the doctors and get all the treatments? You should have told her!"

Neal looked at her. "You should've saying bad things to her as what she did to you not defending her!"

Amber looked at him, "I deserved it for playing stupid game with you. She's real nice girl but have a bad temper"

Neal laughed and cried at same time. "Sure she does, you don't want to know how bad temper she has and angry she gets. I have hurt her so much and I have lost her1" he hugged her at last.

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Kripa entered the college noticing the people's stares at her. Just then a guy came up to her, "Is it true that Neal dumped you for Amber?"

Kripa looked at him furious, "Get lost!"

The poor guys hurriedly went away as if he was scared of her. Kripa didn't like being called "dumped that too for Amber". She wanted to show Neal what he has lost. Just then to her trouble, Misty showed up walking towards her way, grinning inwardly yet putting a sympathetic face.

"Hey Kripa, I am sorry about what happened earlier. I already warned you but too bad you didn't hear me out"

"Misty, too bad, you didn't get him as you wanted. Don't feel sorry for me, I am O.K."

"What do you mean that I wanted him" Misty asked annoyed at her super confidence.

To her relief Angad showed up at right time. His face turned into frown when he saw Misty. "Hey Angad" she greeted him happily yet flirtation manner. Angad smiled and greeted her but then took Kripa away soon.

Angad smiled at her when there were alone. He held her by shoulders, "I am glad you took my advice yesterday besides I want my Kripa always to be like this"

Kripa smiled at him. "You'll always find me as Kripa Sharma."

Angad kissed her cheeks, "you better be there, otherwise who'll take care of me"

Kripa grinned, "Misty"

And they both burst into laughter, far away Neal watches her, he smiled sadly as his mission was accomplished but he needs to do more. Amber came beside and put a hand on his shoulder, Neal smiled at her, "See I told you, she'll always have someone but right now I want something else"

"I want to see Kripa being married last wish before I die". Amber quickly hugged him and cried, "Don't ever talk like that, we'll go to specialist Doctor today"

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After one week:

The canteen was full of chaos. Suddenly lights went black and a spot light hit Kripa who looked shocked yet surprised. And another spotlight hit Angad who just entered the canteen, wearing ripped Armani jeans and tight t-shirt that revealed his body figure. He was simply looking hot.

He checked the microphone that was attached to his ears. Everyone was silent, they know what they are going to expect but wanted to see in front of their eyes.

"Kripa" Angad spoke in his headphone as he walked up to her. "How do you do this?"

"Do what" Kripa whispered, who was completely shocked didn't know what to expect.

"You are asking me that? You spelled a magic on me since the day we met. I remember our first meeting in airport where you thought I was a taxi driver (he chuckles and laughter are heard) I hated you since that day. But then when I came to know the real you as how we get along, you amazed me, I realized you were the woman who, I, Angad Khanna have been looking for..."

"Don't do this" Kripa whispered who knew what was coming along. She felt weak.

"Don't do what? I was very mad at myself what I did to you that day, it made me angry and guilty, nothing can be done to make it wrong and sorry won't bring time back. And then when we saw each other after our first break-up in the concert, you amazed me more, you're the lady I always wanted to be. I at that moment was top of the world when I found out"

And as he stood next to her and looked at her eyes, who was shining yet showed nervousness, it was a mixture of emotions. "I realized I was in love with you along yet I kept it to myself. It was hard for me to see the love of my life with some yet I wanted to see you happy. But Now I don't want you to go be away from me, I love you" "I love you" he said again, his voice echoing through in canteen. He bent down in his knees, "I, Angad Khanna ask you Kripa Sharma, and will you marry me?"

She felt her knees weaken, "what are you doing Angad, are you drunk?" she whispered

"No I am not drunk, is it that hard for you to believe me. Let me rephrase it for you, "Will you Kripa Sharma marry me, Will you do the honour of bringing colour in to my life, I want to see you every day beside me, I want to see you as soon I open my eyes the first thing in morning, Will you marry me?"

Everyone was quiet and all eyes were on her, waiting for her to speak. It was as if they are not going to breathe when they won't hear the answer.

Neal and Amber were shocked. Neal was shocked, sad yet happy at the same time. Amber looked at him to see tears running down his face; it's time she has to tell her even it means in front of everyone.

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New Part - Continued

Neal caught Amber hand as she was about to pull away the whole drama by revealing everything to her. She glared at him while he smiled as if trust me everything will workout.

"I am not going to leave you until you say YES" Angad said who was still kneeling down in front of her.

"Yes" she whispered finally.

He heard her but he wanted to everyone to hear it nice and loud. "What did you say? I can't hear you"

"Yes" she said a bit loud

"Once again"

"Yes Angad I am ready to marry you" she said louder this time.

He pulled her into tight embrace. Sound of loud applause can be heard.

Neal clapped endlessly in the moment of joy yet sad. Tears formed in his eyes and turned to Amber wiping his tears away, "I've won; I have done what I wanted to do" Amber pressed her lips and hugged him. "You still have got time" she whispered. "You'll never change, Amby!"

"It's Amber not Amby" she said in between tears.

He slipped a ring into her fingers. Kripa looked at her hand and saw a ring with that was carved with AK signature and have a diamond. "It's beautiful but I don't have to give you anything."

"I don't want anything from you but I want you to be with me with every step of my life"

She looked at the man in front of her; he is everything a girl could have dreamed for, Charming, Handsome, romantic, caring, sweet. He was an ideal man. It still felt incomplete when she had everything. Why?

Prithvi and Misty watched in surprise and in disgust. They felt betrayed by themselves and their own life. Love is said to be blessed but they were desecrated. Why love the person when you know they aren't in your destiny? Unpredictable, hate, obsession are the new names of love.

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"Congratulations Kripa" Neal said to her next day as they met in canteen. She looked up at the man in front of her; he was so different from what she could have thought. It is said when you look at someone's eye, you find the answers of every questions, they speak the truth. She saw love, confused she looked away.

"Thanks" she said.

"Are you still mad at me? He asked

"What do you think? Shouldn't I be?"

He smiled, "I don't know. You tell me"

"Just Leave Neal, I am not in a mood to talk to you" she said frustrated. What was this man trying to prove to her? Having known him all her life he suddenly seems a stranger to her. And now he claims as if he doesn't know her.

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"What part of it don't you get?" she screamed at him.

He looked down. "Don't you keep quiet in front of me, I want answers otherwise I will her tell her everything"

"NO" he said instantly looking straight at her, "you will not tell her anything, she has finally been settled. She has gone through so much and I don't want her to go through it same."

"What about you?" she walked up to him and held him by his shoulders, "why do you not understand we are talking about life and death, dammit!"

"What do you want me to do?" he said

"Don't you lie to me, you could have done everything but you have done it on purpose" she left his shoulders. "Why did you do that? Don't you understand you are not only hurting her but your family and me? Don't you care about us?"

"I do. What if I have gone through the operation and came out all right, what would I say to her? She would never believe me, even if she did, I would be creating more difficulties for her and Angad? I can see the love for her in his eyes"

"He'll understand but Kripa would have been happier than she is now. Don't you understand, she has done this to make you jealous, get you back? She still loves you!"

"It's too late"

"Fine, Die here, alone!" she yelled angrily and left his apartment.

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"Missing me already?" A hard voice tickled in her ears. He hugged her from behind and rested his chin on her shoulders.

"No, Actually I was hoping to go on a date with John Abraham?"

"Forget John when you got Angad khanna with you"

She smiled, "Now that's hard!"

He frowned, "Why, what's so good looking about?"

Kripa grinned to herself and turned around to face him, "Now do you see someone getting jealous?"

He snorted, "Jealous and me, that too of John Abraham? I am far better than him!"

"What ever! Now tell me what brings you here?"

He frowned, "why, can't I see my girl friend and soon-to-be fianc!"

"Well let's see your girl friend have been waiting for you for past thirty minutes and now she is thinking of going on date with John who is much sweeter and caring…"

He grabbed her hand "Let's go I am hungry!"

"Aww You're simply jealous!" she laughed

"I am not!"

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"What's wrong?" Kripa asked. She has been noticing Angad's strange behaviour since the morning.

Angad looked at her and smiled. "Nothing I am bit tired". Kripa narrowed her eyes and leaned in bit closer and touched his temple and her eyes widened and glared at him angrily"

"YOU CALL THAT NOTHING" She yelled at him. He looked down while everybody in the restaurant turn towards their table. She felt her cheeks red. Angad smiled as he saw it.

She quickly paid the bill, grabbed his hand and left the place. She demanded the car keys from him and let him sit in the front passenger seat.

She parked the car outside her apartment and walked in. Angad silently obeyed her as he knew he would be in trouble.

She put the thermometer in his mouth and looked at the clock. Angad motioned her to get him a glass of water. "Why, So that you can reduce the temperature by putting on cold things, not working this time mister!" she took the thermometer from his mouth.

"You have 105 temperature and you call that nothing" she snapped at him

Just as he was about reply, he sneezed, looking more embarrassed than before, looked down. Kripa wanted to laugh at him as he behaved like kid.

"Why didn't you tell me?"

"I already had a dinner fixed with you so -"

Kripa rolled her eyes, "you could have told me stupid! And what did you do in the morning as you weren't in college?"

"I was having rest" he said. Just then his cell rang; Kripa grabbed from his hand and did the talking. As she put it down, "So you were saying you had a rest, did you have rest in rehearsals!"

"Kripa it was important, Mom wanted me to go there as it was important."

"Your health isn't that important?" she knew what kind of woman Naina was. Angad have told her all about it, she felt like killing the lady, what kind of mother was she. She sometimes thinks that Naina may be his step mother.

Kripa took his shoes off and let him lie in the sofa. She pulled the recliner button so that he can lie down easily. She got him a blanket and pillows.

"You are not going anywhere!" she told him strictly and left the room.

The TV was on but his mind was somewhere else. He was luckier to have her as how she takes care of him, she was like a proper loving wife to him, and he smiled. He vowed to himself to never let go of her and keep her happy no matter what.

Kripa came out with a bowl in her hand. He watched her put the ingredients in a bowl and mix it. She then came up to him and held out a spoon for him.

"We're not in a hospital honey that you're feeding me this soup!"

Kripa grinned at him, "great idea Angad, you don't want to me appoint a 24 hours nurse to look after you"

"Make sure the nurse is hot"

"I'll try to make an old lady look hot"

He opened the mouth and gulped the hot soup down. "Now that's like a good boy!"

Kripa sat next to him and pull her recliner up. She watched him change channels again and again making her annoyed. "Would you just please put on one channel!"

"There's nothing to watch, it's all boring. Let's do something else"

"You're not moving anywhere Mr.Khanna. I have got a DVD of ring"

"I will of course watch it only if you promise to keep your hands away from me!"

"I do not get scared like girls" she put the DVD on and soon both were absorbed in the movie. Kripa found herself feeling cold. She shared the blanked with him. "Get your own blanket, you'll get fever"

"I won't and let me watch the movie" If it would be given an award for the world's no 1 Stubborn female, it would go to Kripa. She'll win it with out any doubt he thought.

The movie finished soon but they weren't any near to go sleep. He glanced at the window as it was heavily raining outside.

"You're not going anywhere outside, if you do, don't expect me to speak to you for a month!"

"Sweetie, I wasn't going to but Thanks for taking care of it!" Angad said in a tone of teasing while she looked away. He smiled to himself. It was ironic she just what he was thinking of at the moment.

*****

Naina Khanna looked at his son, Angad, "What did you just say?"

"I want to get married to Kripa Sharma"

"And you know that she is your rival and you wanted to get married to her" she said angrily.

"I don't care if she's my rival or not, I love her!" Angad said, frustrated and disgusted by the woman in front of him. He felt ashamed to call her his own mother!

"Love? You are too young too understand what love is? I am telling you she is only after your money and nothing!"

"Mom!" Angad shouted for the first time at her, he can't tolerate anyone *****ing anything about her, even it means his own family. What they share was a bond that he can't share with anyone. Aaliya on the other hand is a different story. "She is nothing like that and for your information she is rich"

"I don't want to hear anything that's it. You are only marrying Miss Vuitton" she said proudly.

Angad stared at her shock.

SHE SAID YES!!! 😉 😛 😡

This was long part I hope. I want comments more than "Continue soon or it's good" Brief comments would be good. And I want more than 20 to encourage me to continue.

The winner of last time Game, Who wants to be barsaatian would be announced at next part. For your reminder again, the game is not being continued as it's paused. The next part will be up after my exams are finished.

Please Do COMMENT! I want a good response... I will reply to your comments soon.

COMING UP: BIG TRAGEDY! A HINT TO EVERYONE!

Love

Sanya

Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8 part... n u finally continued 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
great part!! ok, so she said yes!!! i am soo happy!!!!1 😳 lol 😆 ...k...and what else...umm..angad's mom is soo mean!! who is miss. vuitton..(hope i spelled that right?!)...and why is angad so shocked..i think angad is never gonna talk to his mom or something...hmm....big tragedy coming up...uh, is neal gonna die and then kripa will find about his illness and be in a depression for some time and then angad's mom will somehow try to get angad married to mis.. vuitton or whoever...stupid guess, but w/e lol..contine soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
it was 2222 GOOD!!!!!! 👏 👏 i wonder what 'tragic' thing will happen???? continue soon!!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
yay. im so glad dat u finaally updated. im so happy kripa sed yes. i don't want her 2 fnd out bout neal having cancer n stuff. wats da big tragedy. can't wait 2 find out. cont soon. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
finallyy!!!! i thought u would never continuee!!

neel is an idiot!! whhy doesnt he just tell her.. on one side he is rite but then he is wrong too.. he has cancer.. i am so sad... but i want ak together forever so w.e!!lolz.. no, i think neel and amber would do good so get ak married and neel better so he'll be wit amber...

waddyo think.. well, hope u do well on ur exams and u continue soooooooooooooooooooooooonn!!!

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