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Posted: 19 years ago
i just got caught up with your fanfic 👏 👏 it was great 👏but can u plz bring AK 2gether cuz i don't like NK and plz don't tell me that prithivi is gonna B a BIG problem when AK gonna Bcome 1 soul 🤗


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WHEN I AM : KAREEB
THERE IS ONLY : KHAMOSHI
I WANT TO SPEAK : DIL SE
THAT'S MY KIND OF : ISHQ
I WANT THIS TO BE : GUPT
AS I ALWAYS HAVE : DARR
THAT I WILL LOOSE YOU : SAJANI
AND THAT WOULD BE GREAT : SADMA
I AM YOUR : MR.AASHIQUE
BUT SOMETIMES BIT : DEEWANA
TELL ME : HUM AAPKE HAIN KAUN
AS I FEEL : KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI
IN THIS : DUNIYA DILWALON KI
I TOLD YOU : MAINE PYAR KIYA
MAY BE : DIL TO PAGAL HAI
BECAUSE : JAB PYAR KISISE HOTA HAI
THE WHOLE WORLD APPEARS AS : DUSHMAN
BUT ANYWAY : PYAR TO HONA HI THA!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
continue soon 👏 amazing part 👏
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Continued~{!-~}

~{!.~}What the hell?~{!/~} Kripa yelled angrily at him. Her voice echoed all over the canteen. People stopped and looked at her. ~{!.~}Just because you show me this, doesn~{!/~}t mean that I believe you O.K, stop interfering in my life!~{!/~}

~{!.~}But Kripa I ~{!.~}

~{!.~}Just shut up!~{!/~}

Angad, who was just entering the canteen, saw her yelling came up to her. ~{!.~}What happened Kripa?~{!/~} he asked, putting an arm around her shoulder.

She showed him. Angad eyes widen in shock as he sees this and look at the state of her, angry, sad, and frustrated. He understood what she was going through and he doesn~{!/~}t want to make the same mistake nor will he let Kripa do it! ~{!.~}This is all rubbish, I don~{!/~}t believe this!~{!/~} Angad said tearing the pictures.

~{!.~}But Ang~{!/~}

~{!.~}No buts, Misty, we know what we are doing!~{!/~}

~{!.~}Fine, Angad and Kripa, this you both want do it your way as it is no one believes me. I didn~{!/~}t even believe when I saw this but I was only helping you~{!/~} Misty cried.

~{!.~}Thanks but No Thanks Misty, I know what I am doing and it is better for you not to interfere in my life~{!/~} Kripa snapped at her. How dare of her say Neal cheating her, making out with some one behind her back? She knew Neal more than anyone. He isn~{!/~}t like that!

Misty showed the pictures of Neal and A girl hugging, to Kripa claiming that she was right that Neal was using her.Kripa!

The pictures don~{!/~}t lie Kripa!~{!/~} Misty said.

~{!.~}Pictures could be fake as well!~{!/~} Kripa said looking at her.

~{!.~}Are you saying that I am just lying to you?~{!/~} Misty asked

~{!.~}May be you are! That~{!/~}s why you are jealous of me and Neal reson. No wonder I have thought about that, you were trying to separate me and Neal~{!/~}

~{!.~}Kripa!~{!/~} Misty yelled at her.

~{!.~}What? You can~{!/~}t face the truth?~{!/~} Kripa grinned at her.

~{!.~}Kripa!~{!/~} Misty yelled at her, raising her hand. Before she can slap her, Kripa held her hand,

~{!.~}It would be better if you put your hand down Misty, you don~{!/~}t know what mistake you were going to do. Don~{!/~}t even try to come n between me and Neal other wise you have to face with Kripa Sharma.

Angad wasn~{!/~}t at all surprised; he knew this was coming; however he smiled to himself seeing Kripa stand to herself. He adored her, her ways of handling things, talking. She can be both mature and immature at certain times. She was always there for him supporting him.

Angad and Kripa were more than ~{!.~}friends or ~{!.~}Best friends~{!/~}, it was not love. People would usually mistake them as their in love but only Kripa, Angad and Neal knows because they know each too well.

He held the glass tight, why was it happening to him? Why him. His life was perfect for him, he got love, best friend, parents than why to him. The dreams he have shared with the love of his life, the dreams that he wanted to make it true, for him, for her, it matters nothing now only just because of this ****

Pain, anger, sadness yet frustrated was all he is. He couldn~{!/~}t express it to the person he know that~{!/~}ll lead to more problems to him, especially the other part of him; Kripa.

He knows how is this going to affect her, furthermore it will build up to more pain it can cause then what he is doing know.

Oh how desperate is he to go and hug, share his feelings with her, only she can understand. Angad on the other hand will be depressed and this will make Kripa more curious, all he wanted to wake up some day and realize this dream.

If he wants, he can share his pain with someone but they~{!/~}ll feel sorry for him which he does not want.

The glass broke in his hand causing a sound, His hands was half filled with blood; he couldn~{!/~}t feel the pain because it was nothing compared what he is feeling now.

~{!.~}What the hell does she think of her self?~{!/~} Kripa muttered angrily as played with her food.

~{!.~}Kripa, it~{!/~}s not her fault, anyone would think that?~{!/~} Angad said reassuring her.

~{!.~}Oh great! Now you are siding with her?~{!/~}

~{!.~}I am not siding with anyone, in fact I am glad how you stood up to her~{!/~} he grinned as he took a sip from his drink.

~{!.~}Thanks but how did she get the pictures? I mean why didn~{!/~}t I have it?~{!/~}

~{!.~}I don~{!/~}t know, maybe some one send it to her purposefully~{!/~} he sliced the piece of pizza with the help of fork and knife and put it in his mouth. ~{!.~}Like someone did with me~{!/~} he said slowly not meeting an eye contact with her.

Kripa looked at him and understood what he was saying; he placed the hand on his and squeezed it, ~{!.~}It~{!/~}s not your fault Angad may be I would have believed it~{!/~}

Angad smiled a reassuring smile and they continued to eat in silence. After few minutes; ~{!.~}Damn!~{!/~} Kripa said getting up and straightening her clothes.

~{!.~}What have you forgot krips?~{!/~} he teased, ~{!.~}Oooh I am scared!~{!/~}

~{!.~}Shut up Angad~{!/~} Kripa said annoyed. ~{!.~}He~{!/~}ll kill me, if I am late~{!/~}

~{!.~}I~{!/~}ll be glad!~{!/~} he grinned as Angad quickly paid.

~{!.~}Oh joy!~{!/~} Kripa rolled her eyes as they walked up to the car park.

Coming up: Hot n Spicy.😉 😛

I was going to post this part yesterday because I hadn~{!/~}t finished it and I had some other work to do. KANK will be updated tomorrow!

Love

Sanya

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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 When are you getting kirpa and angad together 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago

I am glad you liked the part but this is not done. I have spent ages writing the part just for you because I have been getting so many pm~{!/~}s yesterday to update Barsaat!

Now I had other homework to do but I still updated it for you, I need long COMMENTS that I know that you guys love reading this FF. I

So please comment rather than saying in short words~{!/~} amazing part~{!/~} or ~{!.~}good~{!/~} or ~{!.~}continue soon~{!/~}. I write so long for you and you pay is back in just two words? I am sorry if it offended you but you have to realize I also had some other thing to do.

I can only update when I have time so don~{!/~}t further burden my by sending pms because it irritate me more.

I hope you all understand what I am saying.

Sanya

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Posted: 19 years ago
great fanfic.. i read it all today!!! i want to knw the neel mistery!!!!!!!! wait no.. its spelled mystery.. srryyy!!! 😳 😳

continue soooooooooonn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

plz reveal neal's mystery.. did he cheat her or is he dieing... thats my predictionn..
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Posted: 19 years ago
it wuz a nice part u posted after a long time n is neal gonna die? n when is angad n kripa gonna fall in luv?
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
hi just read the whole ff

i must say u r very good coont soon plzz 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
jus finished readin d hole ff n its jus absolutly mindblowing!!! ur an amazin riter n im jus adicted 2 dis ff big time!!! i jus wana keep readin mor its jus 2 dam gud!!! a-k r soooooo cute in dis, dey were dam hilarius as enemies, sooooo cute as frnds n i bet u'l make dem dam hot as luvers.. if dey bcum luvers dat is 😆 plz keep ritin soo briliantly!
i'v bcum a masiv fan of ur fan fic!!
xxMWAHxx
xx Saz xx

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