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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: *Izzy*

Hi Divjot, Thanks. Hmmm I like your thought but I was thinking something different šŸ˜‰. I will give my think to that.

Hey,

U work on thinking for next part...... but hellllllllll no DO NOT MAKE ANGAD A MURDERERšŸ˜”šŸ˜†šŸ˜†..... plzzzzzzzzz do not do it. It was a great partšŸ‘ And plzzzzzzzzzzzzz reveal what's bothering Kripa??? Is Neal involved with somebody else??šŸ˜•.... plzzzzzzzzzz the suspense is just tooooo much.... Under the table part was funny.. chipkališŸ˜†...U r awesome. Good LuckšŸ‘šŸ¼ Bye

Divjot😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
no no murderer. hehe. continue soon. can't wait.

shaheera
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Posted: 19 years ago
nice part.... šŸ˜› lookin forward šŸ‘ šŸ‘
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Posted: 19 years ago
your fan fic is great but lately its moving a bit too slow. i don't want to annoy u . maybe u want to build up suspense

i just want to say that please continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey
ok i have alot to say.......
1. AWESUM PART!!!!!!!LOVED it like always 😃
2. murderer? what were you thinking!
3. if u make angad a murderer then i will be ur murderer 😔 šŸ˜† ppl dont call me paagal for no reason! šŸ˜†
4. cant wait...cont soooooon
himani šŸ˜›

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow just read the whole ff its realllllllllllllly good! plz dont make angad a murderer!!! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago

Continued:

It~{!/~}s been a weak, Neal~{!/~}s strange behaviour continued to irritate and annoy her and sometimes it would make her so upset that she forgets to have lunch or dinner. Why was he doing to her? Did she do anything wrong, if yes, he could tell her. What has happened to him, she didn~{!/~}t know. She was supposed to know all this, as she knew him since childhood, they shared the entire secrets together. The thought of this makes her more upset.

Angad on the other hand worried about her, seeing her at this state makes him ache, he does not want to loose her again. After the death of his grandmother, she has been the one where he can share all the secrets with her, play with her. He on the other hand is also confused about the behaviour of Neal.

~{!.~}Kripa, come on, I am not going to listen any no, you have got to come with me~{!/~} Angad said softly.

They sat on the sofa, having a cup of coffee.

~{!.~}Take someone else with you, I am not in the mood!~{!/~} she moaned

~{!.~}You are never in mood Kripa, I am not going to leave unless you come with me~{!/~} he placed the cup in the table and took her hand in his. He played with her finger, ~{!.~}please~{!/~} he insisted.

~{!.~}No~{!/~}

~{!.~}That~{!/~}s it, you are coming with me lady. No more of your stubbornness!~{!/~} he stood up and tried to pull kripa up with him.

~{!.~}What the hell?~{!/~} Kripa yelled irritated, as she took her hands back. ~{!.~}You can~{!/~}t force me Angad, grow up!~{!/~}

Angad was taken back but nevertheless he ignored it. He wanted her to come back, the original Kripa Sharma, the one he knew. ~{!.~}I am not listening anything!~{!/~}

~{!.~}I am not coming!~{!/~} she said. He sighed as he flopped back in the sofa beside her. ~{!.~}And I am not leaving unless you come with me~{!/~} he said

Kripa looked at him irritated, ~{!.~}Fine, do what ever you want, I am going to bed!~{!/~}

~{!.~}Now? It~{!/~}s only 7.00~{!/~}

~{!.~}Any problem?~{!/~} Kripa scowled at him.

~{!.~}Yes, I want my original Kripa back!~{!/~}

~{!.~}What the hell Angad~{!/~} she yelled at him once again as she stood up. ~{!.~}You can~{!/~}t force me to do anything, why should you care? You~{!/~}re not my husband, fianc~{(&~}, you are only a friend! I am not like a toy to be play around with, do this and do that, I also need my space. Grow up!~{!/~} She looked back to see an heart broken and sad Angad.

~{!.~}I am sorry Kripa; I am only a friend and nothing else. Sorry I bothered you~{!/~} he got up and went to leave.

Kripa looked at him through her tears, she didn~{!/~}t mean that. She ran to him hugged from back. ~{!.~}I didn~{!/~}t mean all that, I am sorry~{!/~} she sobbed. He pulled away from her hug, without looking back,

~{!.~}If you to forgive you, I~{!/~}ll be waiting for you in the car!~{!/~} he left

Kripa smiled through tears, he is so stubborn!

Angad smiled as Kripa walked towards the car. She took a seat in a passenger seat and looked at Angad who was looking through the mirror. She smiled. He started the car and left for the club.

~{!.~}Angad, are you still mad at me?~{!/~} Kripa asked breaking the silence.

He put the radio on and put the volume on loud ignoring her. Kripa put the volume down, Angad then put it up. Kripa put it down; this continued for the while. Finally Kripa started to get irritated; she put her hand over the radio controls.

Angad and Kripa reached the club. He got out of the car and waited for her. She sat their cross armed, with an angry look.

That~{!/~}s it for now. I hardly have any time left for to continue as I am in Hurry. See this post;

Preview: Neal mystery solve reveals!, the new season of love starts!

Love

Sanya

SEE: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/346638/see-you-all-soon

Edited by *Izzy* - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey.....
i just read the whole part and it was awsome šŸ‘. poor angad šŸ˜†. he got scolded by Kripa. šŸ˜† i think your ff is going great and you should continue when you got the time and hopefully you have time everyday. absolutely love your ff šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘ .

your're leaving once again and we all have to wait for you to continue the ff 😭. you have a wonderful vacation and have lots of fun. also no worries that no one will continue your ffs. 😊 see you soon 😊 😊

bye bye
Edited by whats - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey....sorry 4 late replying anyways it was an awsome part


Iqra
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Posted: 19 years ago
gr8... 😊 😊 ...contInyue soon..!!

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