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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_51_girl

hey hi.... 😛 gr8 n interestin part....!!!! 👏
n thnx 4 updatin..... 😃
nw tht d villion is gone... 😉 😆 finally.... I m lookin forward to sweet n romantic part.... 😊
n hws ur vacation goin..... 😊
hope to c d next part soon..... 😊 👏

Hey Swweti!

Great to C u hun! My vocation has been gr8, how abt urs? The next u'll definately find romantic!

Originally posted by: armaghan0

exquistely perfect loved it kripas great amazing 😆 pls con asap

He Sidra,

Thanks and glad u like Kripa! me too 😆

Originally posted by: amber0802

I just read whole of ur fan fic....gawdd u write AWeSOME!!!...great job mann...cont soon 👏

Hi Amber,

Welcome! I'm glad u r liking it so far! Thanks!😃

Originally posted by: monikaseth

👏 great part dear 👏

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Originally posted by: popgirl

Awesome Part Continue Soon

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Originally posted by: Mimi_Rani

wow i just read the entire fan fic..hurry up and update cant wait to read the next part...continue soon 😃

Rani, Welcome first! I hope u didn't have problem going through a lot pages! 😆 glad u r liking so far...

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_51_girl

( a sigh of relief!) so u finally updated...😆...ha ha Thanks!.... thnx a lot......... ya it ws indeed a short update to makeup 4 ur long break 😭 😆 ......hehe Don't worry hope next part will ne enoguh.. bt its ok....... 😉 😆 it ws nice........ so update looooooooooooooooonger part soon......!!!! 👏 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago

Continued…

Warning: This part contains very sexual stuff and moderate. Read at your own risks. READ THE PART THAT'S IN RED IF YOU DON'T WANT TO READ SEXUAL CONTENT.

Kripa opened the lock of her apartment and let herself and Angad in and closed the lock. The apartment was dark and the curtains were drawn together. The moon shone high casting their shadows on the wall. She turned to switch on the light and felt a weight on her. "Don't" Angad whispered in hoarse voice on her neck, with his hand on top of her and his body leaning on her.

He moved the hairs from her back and kissed her. He felt her shudder and continued to kiss her. This time he used his tongue nibbling her neck, Kripa groaned. Kripa turned to face him, his eyes piercing with passionate look. She felt herself naked in front of his hungry passionate eyes. He put his hand under chin made her look up at him, "why are you doing this to me?" reading the confusion on her eyes, "torturing me? I have always wanted to see how it feels like kissing you." Kripa blushed deep red and looked away. He smiled and bent down to kiss her cheeks.

He leaned again and brushed his lips with her once and twice. She felt his hands on her waist bringing her close to him pressing his lips to her. Kripa groaned and shuddered as his tongue licked her mouth forcing his way on her mouth. She didn't know how it happened, she found herself leaning into him with her arms around his neck and her finger playing with his smooth silky hair. Their tongues mated and danced together. Soon the kiss began to take into another stage, passionate, hungry. Kripa groaned into his mouth pulled away slowly. Their eyes met and she saw the passionate look in his eyes again and looked away. She was about to leave when he said, "look at me, Kripa, and don't tell me you don't want it."

"It's not right" she said pulling away from him and standing at a distance from him.

"what's not right? Me and you?"

"I don't love you". Silence fell in the room, after few minutes he broke the silence;

"This is not about love; tell me do you want me as same way as I do?"

She felt his eyes on her, gulped. "I don't know. We're friends!"

"Wow what an answer. We're both adults Kripa; it won't hurt us to give what our bodies want. I know you want me; I saw it the way you kissed me back. I felt it. It won't destroy our friendship" he walked towards her, "tell me Kripa, you don't feel anything when I touch you?"

He pulled her towards his, his lips inches away from her, breathing in her face, "Tell me Kripa, what do you want" he brushed his on her for few seconds then raining the kiss on her face. She felt his hands feel down chest and resting it on her breasts. She moaned and looked straight into his eyes, "you don't play fair!" His seduction was working on her, alright. He lingered a kiss on her lips again and looked at her, "Is that a yes?" At the same time, his hands held her breast and teased the tips by brushing his thumbs. Even though through the fabric, she cried out! Pulling him close to her, she kisses him. "I want you …right now!" He chucked, "you'll get what you want Angel!"

"Kripa" Angad said in between the kisses, "put your tongue out for me." Kripa looked at him and did as he said. Adrenaline rushed through her body as she realized his hands were on her hips and she was pressed against his flyer. Her face flushed with heat.

She let out a cry as Angad sensually licked her tongue and had it in his mouth. Lips pressed tight, his tongue touching hers sensually, they kissed, exchanged saliva. She pulled away from him breathing hardly. If he wasn't holding on to her she'd have fallen down. "Is that how you kiss your girlfriends?"

"You mean the French kiss, No, I wanted to save for someone special and that's you"

Her heart did a quick flip-flop. Angad swept her in his arms and bought her to the couch in the living room. With her on his lap, she felt his hand under blouse and then on her abdomen finding his way to the back of her and unclasped her bra. They both heard the sound and it fell on his lap. His hands cupped her breast and teased the tips by rubbing his thumb on it. Kripa suddenly felt wet and trembling and looked at him to see his eyes darkened with passion. She didn't how it happened, he suddenly tore open her blouse and she was there revealed in front of his hungry eyes. She heard him gasp, running his hands up and down on her skin. "You're beautiful more than as I imagined being" Did he just say that he fantasized about her?

Suddenly he dipped his head and put her mouth on her one breast. She arched back and moaned with her clutching him tightly as he run down his tongue up and down her tip and sucked it. "Angad" she cried now holding his heads close to her. She closed her eyes as he did it again and she felt him pull away. Kripa pulled him down again; he repeated the same steps with her breast. Before they know it they were pulling off each other clothes and lying their naked in the arms of each other making love to each other. Both trembling and meeting each other demanding needs of love and passion.

She lay there trembling and feeling wet on the bed. She forced herself to sit up and leaned back, calming down her breathe. She was back on her own bed and in her own clothes. It was a dream but nothing else but somehow it felt so real. The swollen tips felt wet and arched with the need to be touched sucked again. Kripa shivered with the thought. What was happening to her? She drank the water out of glass and read the clock it was 6 in the morning and today they were to start rehearsals in the studio. Somewhere in her she felt little disappointed that it was just a dream.

Getting showered and dressed in track suit, Kripa left her apartment for a jog. A quick good air and jog would fresh her mind and let her ready to face today.

Hiding behind the bush few meters away from her apartment, Angad watched her lock the door and break in a jog. As she jogged his way, he watched in fascination the rise and fall of her as she run, her face looking fresh as ever with no make-up. She looked so innocent yet beautiful. What had made him drive that crazy that drove him here? The dream flashed in his mind again and again making arousal arched with the need of her touch. He wanted her that drove him to come to her house. Then what would she think of him? Their relationship won't be same again; he decided to keep the distance from her and prayed in his mind that she won't notice anything. Why was he attracted to her suddenly in sensually and sexually? He can't go knocking on her door saying; hi I've had a dream about you. Can we have sex to calm me down? I want to feel you naked, skin to skin? He groaned, how would he face her in rehearsals? Surely he couldn't stay away from her that long she'd sense something wrong.

Hope that's update long enough to satisfy you! The next part will have how they'll face each other in rehearsals? You all thought it was real all of a sudden right? Haha but that's not fat away!

I see a lot of new readers here! A big warm welcome to you all!! To all readers, Do comment ANYTHING but long cuz I love to reply!

Love

Sanya

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: Dark Love

Great part!! Woohooo go kripaaaa!!!!! yay cnt wait for a-k to get close!! lousie is gone for good na? huahahahahahah!! I think you should open up a new topic since this one exceeds the 150 page limit 😳 anywho cont soon!!!!!!! 😃

Hey Madiha,

Nice to c u here. I didn't know u were reading mine 😳... I still have to catch up wuth urs. I didn't like louise either but wait how her kids go 😆 Yeah I'll start new topic once this FF ends! But I'll start new with next seasons 😃

Originally posted by: deeya123

hi.when r u continuing

Hey deeya! I hope u've read da parts!

Originally posted by: yourmom

amazing amazing amazing!!!! lol i cant say much more. except that you've got me HOOKED!!!! 😃 aww Angad has started to have feelings for Kripa...hopefully she starts to have feelings too.....and that should be soon!

aww Thanks! M glad u'r likeing so far.....😃

Originally posted by: jiya imdad

Welcome back Sanya from your long long vacation, u've kept us waiting for ages now.You better continue soon hun! Will be waiting 😳

Hi Jiya,

Where r u nowdays? I don't c u anymore... I have started continuing 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part.
liked it.
wow that ws the dream...and they both had it
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 18 years ago

i m speechless. it was tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo hot!!😉

u hav to post the next part soon!

Edited by deeya123 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Sanya,
You got me really excited with your warning in red, God i was blushing while reading the part and feeling extremely hot considering the fact i was wearing a red dress. Good thing no one was around while i was reading otherwise they would have thought i've crazy!!
I was like the long awaited part is finally here only to realize it was a dream (lol), seemed too real to be a dream. Both angad n kripa had a same dream , wow what a co-incidence. Lovers really think alike or as in their case "best friends" think alike 😉
Now i can't wait to read about their meeting at the rehearsals, awkwardness is most likely to take place!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
woahhhhhhhh!!!!
what a part!
amazing description and writing
hope you update soon!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
whoa...haha wut a dream!!! 😳 😆
plzz cont soon! 😉 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
speachlessssssssss.....i dont know what to say.....um...wonderful part hun, continue soon 👏

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