Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 81

Originally posted by: akaur

Hey Sam

nice update

im luving atul's character in this

hopefully armaan will realise about anjali soon

Thanx for the update

ps congo on 100 pgs

Originally posted by: Robin_M

seriously, is atul the only sensible one here?!? lol it seems like everyone else are clueless! hmmm but its very interesting to see the different thought processes of all the characters! very insightful!
great part sam, looking forward to the next one!

Originally posted by: sanayq18

hey sam im back...n this time...im not sleepy...hehehehhee.....awwwwwwwwwwwwwww...i mean this part was ...awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww....for me..srsly...muskaan getting worried about rahul ignoring her...ridzyy probing her to spit it all out...muski retorting back with armaanz episode...n both of them feeling embarassed...atul teasin and confronting armaan...armaan rememberin his night with ridzyy bringing a smile to his face...atulz concern for anjali...in case she might get hurt....awwwwwwwwwwww...i mean....isnt it the best word to describe what u have written...showz a sensitive part of all the characters u have written about in this part....made me fall even more deeply in love with ur writin skill which never ceases to surprise me ...n ofcourse entertain me....rocked big time gurl

u are one hell of a writer...update super duper soon

👍🏼

Sana

hey Sam

my apologies for being lazy to comment
i dont think i did one for part 17 either :(
well it was a delight to read both parts
u bring our the best of the emotions in your characters
they sound so right and yet so real
Armaan whisking away Riddhima for the late nite coffee in seclusion
was a great one,absolutely loved her expressions in that scene
Rahul and Muskaan part in the beginning was a little strange but it was fine after when muskaan was all normal and back to her teasing self
and Atul * sigh* I just love your Atul ,i think thi sby ar has been the best character description for him
u make him sound so down to earth but important,not only for the fillers
i just am in love with Atul
his concerns about Anjali were so heartfelt
and then his new bond wid Riddhima,he balanced it out so well
an dthe best was Armaan letting him in on the story of Ridz not being ill really,the bond is so sweet and cool
and then she leaves the books for him
ok loving your fic Sam
hope u get some relief at work
take it easy hun
and do updt when u can
love
Hina

hey sam
umazing part yaar
um enjoying RM equally as i do AR
its sooo much fun to see naa read muski trying to decipher the reson underlying change in rahl's behaviour was just imagining muski running behind rahul n he ignoring her aww that would be so much fun n then finally she wud realize her true feelings
oh about armaan n ridzi i want more of them yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
post some more scenes of theirs
n this part naa the best scene was armaan-atul scene i mean their scene depicts how closely knit they r n how well bonded their frndship is wow thats applaudable yaar
keep posting

Originally posted by: krati.mehra

Hey sam

awesome update...enjoyed reading it totally esp the part where muski is getting all restless about Rahul ignoring her...that was fab!! she gonna soon realize her feelings for him..hehe...i so want to see how you make them confess and than Atul teasing AR...that was such fun to read but about how A is all taken by Riddz that was even better...but just a friend huh..heheh we'll see about that...and Atul worried for Anjali...hmm...lets hope they clear the air soon

You done a fab job here Sam and am loving this fic...kudos to you!!

love

Krati

Originally posted by: dmgfan19

i love atul in this fic!! nice part sam!! rahul is ignoring muskaan..hehe...n i loved his self talk abt it....i love how u give each character its own space in the fic n bring them out so neatly for us thru their thoughts...great going dear!! armaan's perception abt anji is so very common, ppl tend to take their own observations for granted as real...waiting to see how to take this further...great part!!

-harika

hey!!gr8 part...!!

Originally posted by: bernard shaw

You are forgiven missing and everything since you've put up Unleashing...will comment once I am back tonight and read it in peace...I swear I happoily substiture my books for a part of your fic when ever you post!

aaawwww sam...um really taken to this bit,....thanx a bunch, ur lit reading is a dignified level....um certainly no where in the league of even amateurs yet, but ur saying that i cant say um not flattered!

cheers,

nj