Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153

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Tanasha

@tanasha1993

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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

Cool;D

just got the time to read part 2 and 3...

and it was awesome...loved how armaan and ridzy became well acquainted in such a short time

and armaan seems so down to earth...trying to fend for himslef and all but haha in the end itll be hard since he has grown up in such an environment though he did try

cant wait to read about the freshers bash

i bet something big will happen there..ok not so big but something significant

and I will definitely watch this space

continue when you can yea?

love

tanu

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@bernard shaw

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: aravi
aahaa dyer u updated!!!! gosh somehow i feel armaan isnt d president here or maybe he is???? still poor fellow wants to meet riddhima again to fetch himself a maid to help in his regular chores poor boy!!!!!! n muskaan i like d girl sooo much well i have no clue bout B skools but d only class i slept off was when i was in my10 th grade n had to study history for 2 hrs together GOSH butas you say we have to wait for a few more parts for AR to meet again !!!! well atleast both still remember each other means their first meeting did leave an impression!!!!!!! cant help wondering wat are dey gonna do wen dey meet up again lolzzz..

just read u a HP fan too so have u read twilight by any chance just curious!!!!!! and well for bernard's witty reply it was a good one massi tells me he was one of the most intelligent writer's of his time!!!
love aravi

Aravi, your massi is right! Shaw is an intelligent writer.

As to sleeping in class, I completely sympathise with Ridhima. I have done this ever so often esp after a late night.

As to Twilight, nope I have not read Stephanie Meyer. The closest that I have come to her series is trying to buy Eclispse for a young cousin. I know its been a huge success so hopefully, one day I might get around to reading it!

You'll hav eto be patient with my FF cos I'm a first time writer and i tend to develop the story slowly.....I just hope people have the patience to read the story, lol!

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@bernard shaw

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: Robin_M
ohh its party time! hehe i can imagine what ridz and them are going through, school can be sooo grueling! right now i feel like i have no social life either *sigh* cant wait till im done finals and can enjoy winter holidays!
alright enough of me...really great update! the whole lecture on Maslows heirarchy of needs was very insightful, i had learned a bit about it a few years back, was nice to refresh things! so thanks for adding that bit in!
im glad to see the three (ridz, rahul and muski) have become good friends, i especially love the close friendship between rahul and ridz, the way her parents trust him to take care of ridz, very nice!
the scene with the parents was cute!
hmm why do i have a feeling we may know who the president is going to be! lol
cant wait for the party, looking forwad to ar meeting again!
continue soon, your doing great!

Thanks Robin! I am glad you like it. I suspect the FF is too slow since not too many people read it, but I am enjoying the experience of writing, and, words like yours and the others who have so sweetly posted, make it worthwhile writing!

As to Ar meeting, unfortunately, it will take some time!

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Isha

@Sidarth_lover1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

hey i luv tha update! cont soon! thnx 4 tha PM/update!

❤️twinkle!

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@spln

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

Dr. Phil um back...with my rather delayed comment....the part was such a fun read again...the president...uff if only he shows up soon, cant wait...n yet like u said, the sweet pain of waiting is like none other, id rather u took it ur own pace i conclude alas!...rahul is my fav so far, sorry if i disappoint u with this, but hes such a charmer, if i was there it wud be him for me not ammy!...ridzi can have her guy, muski of course neeeds to beware since um going to be in the race now!...

overall, natural, nothing dramatic, well paced, n yet the wait...u know how to grip a readers mind i guess!

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meghap90

@meghap90

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

hey just read ur ff (instead of working on a paper 😆) .... must say truly unique and great writing style👏 .... cant wait for you to update and please pm me when you do! thanks!!! will be waiting...😍

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@bernard shaw

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: twinkle94
hey i luv tha update! cont soon! thnx 4 tha PM/update!

❤️twinkle!

Thanks Twinkle, am glad you enjoyed the update...

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@bernard shaw

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Originally posted by: spln
Dr. Phil um back...with my rather delayed comment....the part was such a fun read again...the president...uff if only he shows up soon, cant wait...n yet like u said, the sweet pain of waiting is like none other, id rather u took it ur own pace i conclude alas!...rahul is my fav so far, sorry if i disappoint u with this, but hes such a charmer, if i was there it wud be him for me not ammy!...ridzi can have her guy, muski of course neeeds to beware since um going to be in the race now!...

overall, natural, nothing dramatic, well paced, n yet the wait...u know how to grip a readers mind i guess!

Dr Phil, 😆😆 I quite like the sound of that NJ, though I am not whether I derserve it. By the way its Samyukta though all my friends call me Sam!

Thanks so much, I was wondering whether the pace was too slow, but for the life of me I cant manage to chnage. Tried writing this part a lil racier but doesn't work for me...I like to take things nice and slow...it took me ages to finally say yes to my guy, so I guess this is much faster, lol!

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@bernard shaw

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Posted: 16 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: meghap90
hey just read ur ff (instead of working on a paper 😆) .... must say truly unique and great writing style👏 .... cant wait for you to update and please pm me when you do! thanks!!! will be waiting...😍

Megha thanks so much! I am so glad that you liked it. Am trying to update apart every night but not sure whether I can manage to do that tonight, but will surely PM you when I update...

Thanks....