Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

amazing parts

i really liked the way u showed armaan and ridz first meeting it was really good.also the way u introduced each charachter was really intresting and muskaans was really funny when mimcking the dialouges.
cant wait till ridz and armaan meet again.

Thanks so much, I am glad you liked it...well I guess theyhave to wait a little till they meet agian....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Robin_M

very well written, your a great story teller! i think im really going to enjoy reading your ff, im already hooked!
armaan and ridhimas first meeting was awsome! hehe cant believe she said ridhima malik! ohhh gosh i would have died of embarassment! lol but shes a smart one! was able to comback fast! the easy flow of conversation between the two, their little banter, the walk home, it was all very nice! cant wait for them to meet again!
glad u could update so quick, looking forward to the next one!

Thank you, you've been very kind...I just hope that I am able to do justice to your expectations...Ridhima Mallik, that happens ever so often when you are thinking of something and thats right up there in your mind and you just blurt it out...
Will try and update tonight as I will probably be travelling ot of town tomorrow night.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: simran1285

Wow! Awesome! Am Stumped! you write extremely well. When I first read mention of Gone with the.. I nearly jumped, the movie and book are a personal fave; especially the movie (courtesy clark gable)

Loved the pace and the characters. Will definitely look forward to more updates!
Oops, forgot to add welcome to the forum!

Simran thanks for both the welcome and the lovely comments. I just love Gone with teh Wind as well..for a long ime Rhett Butler was my ideal man, now a few others have been added to the list, lol!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: missypatel

Hi ter....do we have a name now...or u prefer we stick to B. Shaw?

That was a nice update...u penned down armaanz char wit such easy...d ringer for ridz 2 mke her Mallik..was a knocker for me!! their lil no nonsense chat was pretty smooth...neither was swept ovr by others charm...not in d slightest for juss d looks atleast...grt goin ter!!
u gotta update soon..!!

nijal


Nijal, the name is Samyukta but everyone calls me Sam for short...I agree with you, looks are not a great turn on for me...To me its important that A & R like each other for the people they are, if they are to like each other at all.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: spln

Touche indeed hahaha....for some reason, not too strange that word was my fav bit of the update...iv alwaz had an inclination for the use of that word i think, n i think more than the previous part now, we'd click, if on nothing word dueling!

great part hun...i lovd their first interaction, the fact that they are B school students, even if she only just started, was screaming from evry bit of them....a great portrayal....they are one of the two categories of ppl i harbor a soft spot for i guess...B school folks, and the law students....think its their talks....n ur part did abs justice to the birth right they claim on it....kudos hun!...n update soon!

ps: the colored eyes are predominant pof DMG fics....n somehoe i never tire of imagining them on a real indian guy! :D

Thanks sweetheart! Yup, I enjoyed writing the exchange as well. To me, more than looks, its very important that the guy has brains, is sensitive, can talk well and has a sense of humour! Looks are pretty secondary unless he plans on giving Frankenstien a run for his money.
Thanks for the help with editing thetitle, sometimes I really think I am technologically and common sense challenged, lol!
I guess the blue eyed Armaan of DMG is such a strong character that an Armaan with no blue eyes is no Armaan at all.
BTW, the name is Samyukta but everyone calls me Sam..
Edited by bernard shaw - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: aravi

hey 😃😃!!!! dat was pretty quick srsly u are very talented gurl i loved deyr first meeting though it started with a bang but den d sober n gentle flow i loved it!!!! i like the way u shape ur characters here!!!!! aaahaa mr.gentleman is quite different frm the usual i have read on dis forum!!!!! i liked deyr subtle talk n goshh riddhima mallik damn embarassing but she recovered pretty soon!!!! deyr normal conversation d silent walk back home it was all very simple yet touching!!! hope u cont soon!!!! by d way i have read "arms and the man" i so adore it i tell u both raina n her chocolate cream soldier 😉😉 it's of d best romantic comedy 's dat i have read!!!!! esp wen d first night he climbs up to her room and mocks at her fiancee and to her horror devours his CHOCOLATE 😆😆😆 i better stop!!!!! still hope u leg feels better now!!!!!! love aravi

Aravi, I couldn't agree more with you...I think its a really cute play. Do you know that when Shaw came on to the stage at curtain call, everyone was clapping enthusiastically save for one person somewhere in the sudience who booed. Shaw in his characteristic dry humour responded "My dear fellow, I quite agree with you, but what are we two against so many?"
Thanks so much for the lovely comments! I just hope I am able to do justice to all your lovely comments gpoing forward!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57

MAslow hiearchy of needs.............wow now principles of management

r also

will read it comment later

im a management student myself.................n the concept intrigued me

very nice

chandni

Edited by bernard shaw - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

hey!!

i jst sw de ff...
mann!!its completely new concept huh!
n gr8 job dear..
rocking 2 parts.......
wud luv 2 read more n more
so do cont soon
pls do add me 2 ur pm list if u hav ny...
luv u lts
crzy ashu

Thanks, will try and post another part tonight if I can manage to finish it. Will add you to the Pm list...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
HEY!!SO R U UPDATING NW??
ASHU
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: ashluvdmg

HEY!!SO R U UPDATING NW??

ASHU

Ashu, I have updated Part III, though Part IV will take a coupleof days since I have a few deadlines on the work front....

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