Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 123

Originally posted by: everlastingword

hey sam,

the date was fantastic!! You are right about it not being overtly romantic but that is how Armaan and Riddhima are, and it would have been kinda weird if they were to be toooo mushy on their first outing!

Continue soon...i just love your updates! thanx for the pm.

love,

mia

Hi Mia, am so glad that you thought so…and thank you for the lovely words! You are welcoem for the PM…shall update soon!

Originally posted by: Robin_M

*sigh* what a perfect evening! so glad they accepted the fact that it was indeed a date! hehe and dont worry, ridz choice of the word consummate didnt get me thinking into her having other plans!
loved the on going battle between the 2! shes right, you dont want to mess with her! haha the pani puri mirchi bit had me cracked!
must say i loved their mellow flirting, it wasnt over done. and for the type of people they are, it was perfect!
it was nice to hear more of armaans side, his parents sound awesome! and glad he shared this with riddhima!
but i do wish she would just be honest and tell him way she backed out on the date! the Tantanus reference was very well used, and i do see her dilema. but the poor guy deserves to know! so im hoping she will tell him eventually!
and ohhh i realy hope her father is alright! soo sweet of armaan to offer his help!
really enjoyed the part sam, and im sooo glad u didnt make it mushy and overly done...it had the perfect amount of romance and fun!
do continue soon!

Young Robin, yup, both of them are at least being honest enough to acknowledge that they were going out with each other….that's a pretty good beginning for verbalising what they have been feeling for a while….poor Armaan did not really know what hit hi, with the spice and an equally impish Ridhima having fun at his expense!

It was time that one got to know a little about Armaan's family…considering the fact that in the serial itself he seems to have dropped out of the big blue sky! Lol!

I am glad you liked the Tantalus reference…and the fact that it was not mushy…I firmly believe that one can be incredibly romantic without being mushy or soppy! Though it's nice to be so once in a while!

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Hey!

That was an awesome update!

The Date was cool, and there converstaion was funny!

I wonder if he's gonna find out why she refused to go out at first!

Can't wait till the next update!

Thanks for the PM

xXx

Sunayna

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Hi Sunayna, am glad you thought the date was cool! Shall update soon! Currrenty my brain has been fried by two kids wailing for the Big Mac in a land where it in not permitted! You are welcome for the PM anytime!

Originally posted by: spln

reserved sam....theres some extraordinary connection with this date to something more personal...il be back with my not brief at all n never so analysis!

edit*...

back sam...oki i cant think of when an update worked better in terms of timing for me...it was just this huge series of events of confusion which happened, tons of miscomm...n that leading to a kinda mess....so ameen n i (my brither)...we had this insane tiff...over something not worth it at all...n usually one of us gets mad n the othertackles...it works well that way i daresay, dont tell my mum this she will pledge in denial to any sense even traces of it in either of us...she shud know, having raised not one but two imposible kids!!!!...but yesterday we both blew of over the top n it wasn't a over a usual....then i read ur update with a half mind....wondering if i was gona do justice to read it just abt then...but the idea of distracting out of my mad head....anywaz so i read on...n the statement whr armaan talks of his elder sis....god sam u had me in teas coz just got up n dabbed the digits quick n called him back...yeh ye long convo n a supremem divertion form the part i had toi read...but well...i cant think of when reading something nocked better sense int me, i totally owe u that one...hes younger to me btw...4 years close to the gap armaan has with his sister....n ummm...its an insane bond, i duno if i know one closer in my life, i keep discovering with each day how theres its more of i um sill learning abt...

nonetheless i had to tell u this, since it mattered a ton...just one of those crazy days when everything looks messed up n tn suddenly u know it was u being silly all along, i accept um the mad head!

back to the part now...frankly i cudntdo much justice to atul here...somehow i was way too occupied with armidz...specialluy armaan talk of his fam um so glad u made him do that....it feels like u know my home hahahaha....i was missing my home tons after reading it, i never quite thought i wud be the ridhima in this fic even if there are some stark similarities...but now i know why...coz um much more the armaan so though there are those similarities like i said, the essentials still differ in alot....it was an awe struck moment...the whole date read for ...their jests...the spade is a spade naming for date n flirting..yeh all of it extrememly well hadled..nothing over the top i agree...ur doin abs justice to ur chars....!!!

treat reading the update sam...i cant wait to se the amn get into responsible action, abt time his nuances start uncovering unexpectedly before the lady, as usualy the case has been quite the contrary!

loved the part sam....for so much more than just the part...i needed it n just then...n it was 23...it cudnt be anyless special to me!!!the cosmic things, despite my scientifically honed head, work incredulously well for me!

nj

23, isn't that how young you are child? Indeed a coincidence and a fortuitous one and am so glad that the one line made you pick up the phone and sort things with your brother! 😆

And then it takes just a small little thing to make you realise that underneath all those differences we are so similar! And no matter how much we agree to disagree (and we do that almost al the time) we are two sides to the same coin!

Am so glad that you liked the part and the convo. Yup I thought it was high time that Ridhima got curious about Armaan and his family unlike the Ridhima of DMG who is happy assuming that he fell out of the sky!

Originally posted by: kvn1983

waoh🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ Armaan is so sweet😍 and caring one😛😛 so they enjoyed their date😉😉 mind blowing one😎😍☺️ plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Tuj se juda rehpana ab ghazab lagta hai.
Tere pass rehna b khwab lagta hai.
Har waqt karta hoon tere Naam ki Tasbeeh,
ab Tuje Nedo yad karna b sawab lagta hia!"

"A Rose's Tears
When a rose's tears may shed thay almost seem internal.
They go on and on until they finally love.
They will cry until they have someone.
They will cry, they will sob but
they will always hold grace, beauty, and peace."

Originally posted by: shriya12

sam!! thanks a lot..!! u have made this date more amazing thn wht i cud hv imagined..u wrote it so beautifully,i dint get time to realise i had reached the end..u have a gift with words..the conversation was framed beautifully! n the way u have strung the words together makes the concept very interesting..!the way armaan discussed his childhood as well the references to his name was jus so good to read,makes me go through the part agn n again..sam u r one amazing writer..u have done complete justice to the date..u knoe kind of reminds me of our own lives,,,thanks for telling us abt the origin of the word tantalising n aman..thts one of the various reasons i love abt ur ff..every part has something new n interesting to offer..

i jus cant express in words how much i loved ths part..obviously m not as gifted with words as u..it amazes me to c such gud talents in ths forumm..i love indiaforums for ths reason..the Bandra trip gave me an insight as to the place actually is since i have personally never been there..i waited a long time yesterday nite jus so i cud read ur ff,but cudnt make it..m reviewing now..jus feel like goin on n on..but i knoe thr has to b a limit set to my words..i jus want to say, MHON means a lot to me..keep writing n i also need to appreciate u for updating so soon..thanks a bunch honey..will wait for the nxt part eagerly!!

shriya

Shriya, am so glad that you enjoyed the part and that you thought I did justice to the date. More than that I am thrilled that you think I ma gifted with words – I don't think I am, but the words made my day! I have to show this to my other half who is the really articulate and witty one between the two of us!

Am so glad you enjoyed the reference to Tantalus and Armaan (as in the French family name)! The latter was a co-incidence as I was reading something on His Red Eminence and the dots just connected!

I am sorry for not being able to post the update earlier but I am still juggling work, and now house guests…the beginning of the year is always hectic as one tries to crack as much of your targets as you can so that you are not under pressure end of the year! I think that's obvious in the pace of my updates, lol! They were much faster in dec last year when I started than now, lol!

Shall post the next part soon!

Originally posted by: krazyboutkaran

OMG!!!!!!!!!

i am so in love wid dis fanfic......itz as amazing as dmg if not more.....

.....nd im nt kidding.......fabulous.....words cant convey d exellence of ur fic....

its addictive......reading it is lyk one big treat!!!...lol....

Hi Krazyboutkaran! Welcome to the thread! I am honoured, kind words indeed! AM so glad that you think the fic is good! I hope to see you on the thread more often now!

Originally posted by: richakumar

loved it thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

part 22 and 23 were really amazing i really liked the way u described their first outing and the way u got armaan to share things with ridz was amazing.