Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 113

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Posted: 16 years ago
sam di..
ive updated my comment on pg 143...
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi sam!!
after a very very longgggg time!!!
well i dont know i kinda felt a .00000000...................1% disappointment
coz of exclusion of the date which i was anticipating!!
well as u said at the end, the day's appointments were needed to be shown and completing the tasks was appreciated
finally anjali's notion was cleared
muskaan whispering the answer was so cute
mark twain line was on spot!!!
ridz is so touchy as in she gets so worried abt others as how they would feel when she does something
and the negative response did upset armaan
i mean anyone would have got upset!
just imagine a person thinking abt the date whole day and finally the result is nil
atul will again find disappointment after the "so called investigation"!
muskaan thinking abt rahul was hm.. a progress
he is now in her thoughts while eating food!!!
it was very sweet of ridz apologizing.

eagerly waiting for the date!!!
thanks for the pm!!

love:
aishwarya

p.s. u will rock as usual in writing the romantic parts!!
so dont worry!!!
take care



Edited by rhama2 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey Sam

fab update hun
well stuff that u covered in this part made up for the missing date
and since we know its coming soon,i dont mind at all
now the part i loved as always coz
the characters are so real like people from our everyday lives
Anjali is one character i find the closest to reality ,all her emotions are so real yet special in her own way,the situation she is in is a regular one but the way u've made her and Armaan deal with it made it awesome! I must say ,i do get inspired with a few fics here,u'rs and nj's top the list,coz u make it believable

absolutely loved Muskaan in here,another strong ,full of life character
all her feelings i can so relate to
Atul always is a star,nj is actually debating over the Atul from my fic and yours,i can so see u'r Atul beating mine lolz
anyways

Ankit,for some reason i thot wud be with Anjie,i do find him selfish ,or may be i'm comparing him too much with Atul

Armaan's talk with Anjie,was just so needed and well done for covering all and still leaving that slight hope,it will sure make the story interesting

and finally Riddhima,her change of mind,haha,she certainly is great with her transparent emotions,Armaan's reply to her in the end was cute

i might have missed a lot i had to say,but thats it for now
will save it for the next time

oh yeh Anjali's public apology,very well written

ok me done i think
do update soon if u can
take care and hope work treats u better soon
love
Hina



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Posted: 16 years ago
waoh🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😍 so cute😎😍 plz continue it soon😛😉


"Pyaar mein ajmaish hoti hai,
Dil mein milne ki khwaish hoti hai,
Aapko hum yaad nahi karenge har pal,
Kyunki yaad unhe kiya jata hai,
Jinhe bhul jane ki gunjaish hoti hai."




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Posted: 16 years ago

Sam,

Thanks for the PM! I lije the way you take time to express each and every characters mindset. It plays a beautiful drama when reading. I had anticipated that this part wont have AR date because a lot need to be achieved before that and I am glad you did complete justice to the situation, but now I am very desperately waiting for the Bandra tour. So bring it on girl!
RT
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Posted: 16 years ago

sam honey thanks a lot for the pm..the first pm..i m actualli honoured!!

abt the AR date whether u blv or not,ths part was much bettr,i guess evn the date wudnt hv been so gud..armaan getting pissed wth ridhima,tht for a change was exciting..i mean ths was the 1st time he was angry wth her..so the two r actualli falling for ech other..hw blind can one get..u know u hv sketched all the characters so beutifully my heart actualli goes out to them..b it atul,or ankit,anjali..n specially our armaan riddhima,bth of them r juss too sweet,made for ech other kind...so they r goin to bandra..hope it turns exciting n dnt u think u cnt do justice to the romantic parts..if U cnt then who can..blv me once u write u ll hv us readers craving for more..u mus b one amazing students..the amount of words u use,hv to constantly refer the lexicon...n man i love the one liners u use..a pupil knows he is in trouble whn ateacher calls him by his full name..(not the exact quote) but ths one was great..i m making a note of all the one liners tht u use..n these days busy surfing the bookshelves for "the prisoner of zenda" the update was awesome but a lil delayed..no problem though..do update soon..will wait for ur pm...shriya
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Posted: 16 years ago

Damn, what a mess! I feel guilty for my earlier comments asking you to turn up the heat and add Angie and Ankit into the mix. All of them have become so dear to me and the truth is someone is going to end up getting hurt and nothing can prevent that. Sometimes even with the best of intensions you end up hurting people and that's simply tragic.

Angie simply stole my breath away in this part. Truly I feel like echoing a fellow reader and hope that she finds her own special someone soon. And I never expected Ankit to get so deeply involved. Another equally unavoidable, potentially tragic situation…all in all, a complete mess.

But while I freely admit it's nasty of me I have to say I'm happy to see Armaan finally fallen from his Olympian heights to join the rest of us lowly mortals. After all, No one, not even armaan malik is perfect and in fact it's that mixture of the perfect and the imperfect that binds us in a relationship.

Speaking of relationships, this is totally unrelated but Sam how can you be sure whether you know a person or not? How long does it take? And how do you know he's the right one for you?

But yeah, writing romance is horrible, I really admire people who can produce it effortlessly. My own proposal (er, Armaan's that is) had me sweating blood, so much so that now I'm cursing myself for making it a two-couple ff, which means twice the romance requirements. I end up feeling so self-conscious, and on top of it, my characters refuse to do what I want. Btw, thanx for the lovely comment, have answered it, along with a new but short part.

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Posted: 16 years ago
aww such a cute part!! i really want armaan and anjali to clear things up between them! plz cont soon and thx for the pM :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
superb update, sam! i'm excited about AR's date and AA's dinner talk.
thanks for the pm. continue soon and do pm me.
mohini :]
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Sam...finally got an amazing treat 2 read!
it was fabulous...part was magnificent though riddhima's actions kind of confused me:P
It is the second time that 'first she refused and later on agreed'.....when armaan asked her for a dance she refused and then later on agreed...and this time, too!hope she is not planning to break poor guy's heart when he will propose her!:D
but it was such a treat 2 read her emotional turmoil as it was totally different ride for me...
but person of the day 4 me 2day was Anjali...seriously that girl has got some guts...i mean appologizing in public, in fron tof almos everyone is not easy as it sounds like....if i were at her place i would never dare 2 do that no matter what!
i can imagine how heart wrenching for a confident girl like Anji can be when a person whom u love can not reciprocate it back...
atul....should i say the most sensible person in the whole group ??:P
but i really loved the pace that the track is going....its just such a masterpiece 2 read i must say....
oh btw remember once i asked abt ur favourite book and u replied that u were currently reading Not without my daughter...i got that book and i am half way through it...i really dont have words 2 thank u for reffering that book.....its such a heart wrenching book.....i guess it is the forst book that made me cry over it.....whether it is an incident when her daughter got injured and had 2 get stiches without anesthesia.....oe when her father almost beat her up.....it is aweful how worse people can get
thanx once again for reffering the book and also for an amazing update as usual...
btw when r we getting next update??...plz plz plz update soon! cant wait to read abt their date!

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