Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 112

ohh sam im soooo happy you took the time to give us a update, was eagerly waiting! but work first right!

really really good part! more insecurities and second thoughts being layed out! angie almost backing out on the appology but am glad she had the curage to do so! must say i loved muskaans comment hahaha and im glad that issue is resolves...well at least somewhat!
was also suprised to see armaan so hesitant to ask angie about her feelings and their relationship. i guess thats for another time!
im also suprosed about muskaans little dilema. to be jealous of rahul and ridz friendship!? i do get her point, its not easy to see your boyfriend best friends with another girl, especially if they share such a close life long bond! looking forward to seeing where the RM track is headed!
hmmm ridz is really something!!!! im quite proud of her! firstly forgiving angie truely, then realzing and accepting the fact that maybe angie harbours feelings for armaan, and backing down from their 'date'. most girls would just ignore something like this. if a girl reallly likes a guy, its easier to just go with and ignore the fact that they maybe hurting another girl over it! but the last thing ridz wants to do is hurt angie, which is so great of her!
then after seeing the hurt she caused armaan (which he made very clear with his cold tone, not that i blame him, poor guy was so dissapointed, and she didnt offer a proper explanation!) she decided to follow through and also appologize! im sooo proud of her! she waited for him for so long, and gave a very sincere appology. and then very sweetly got their 'date' back on track! that last scene with them was sooo sweet, i loved their attitude with each other!
and now im sooo looking forward to their "long night about town"!!!! please try and continue soon, but if you have tons of work, make sure you finish up with that first, cause you know we can wait faithfully!

U reli made my day gal.............!!
update as usual was flawless and for sure u wer at ur best..!!
mANN!!the characters in ur ff luk so real,you make them come alive..!!
Characters dont appear shallow, there is no excess of internalisation...sumtimes excessive internalisation slows the story and foreshadows the plot.
Not even one time u alienated the readers desire to continue reading.
too much of praising..hehe...alwyz u render us speechless...wat can v do..

ahh..!!Anjali,she really is a catch...!!
ridzi with a pinge of jealousy huh..!!But i realy like the jealous urchin thou..!!
Rahul and muski...hmm...muski she thinks a lot ..!!goes arnd the bush..!!worries regarding their frenship is the sole reason nw ...hope its resolved soon..n WITCH AHH..!!tat seems like my real muski..!!
Oh shit..!!Armaan cudnt bring upp the topic..!!chay..!!Fortuantely enuf,atleast anjali din propose....nw i guess i cnt undrestimate her guts..!!before she does nything pls let armaan confide and clear owt the mess..!!i dont mind anjali getting hurt thou..!!hehe...
Atul is so adorable ...!!he's on his other mission nw...Mission Ankit..!!hes very good at mind reading,so sureli he will crack upp soon.And find owt the love square so formed.

Split sec i jst felt like strangling that ridz....omg..!!she dint want to hurt anjali..tats silly to the T.
Becoz of all the silly reason,my dear ARmi got reli pissed..tat scene reli ws so well writtn dear.

AWWWW....i ws so happy..!!i just felt like jumpimg..!!Mann..!!relief...Ridzi got back her brains..!!
Finally,they r off to their date.
missy..!!hope u r nt turning off their date..i rmbr u saying that u r nt sure about writing the romantic stuffs....but i guess this is unavoidable...hehe...being a avid reader,i guess it will just be a cup of tea for you...we all know that u wud really excel in those parts....
and pls update soon..hope u dont have ny tight schedules...
THX A TON 4 DE PM....IT WS RELI VERY SWEET OF U..!!
luv u lts
crazy ashu

PM:hehe..sry i jst said u 2 pm the part i no..sry 4 de trouble....i had to go 2 out to a grocery shop..so thot of barging in to a cafe...n yhh as ma comp is down..i just started reading scarlet pimpernel....alrdy running late...

Hey Sam,
As usual, the part was fabulous, I completely loved it, have no words.
I hope Angie has understand that Ammi is only looking at her like a friend and nothing more.
Thnx a lot for the PM, I am waiting eagerly for the next part, continue soon.

Kashish

Originally posted by: richakumar

thanks for pm lovely update

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Originally posted by: missypatel

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*edit* hate wen dt happens...an essay and IF processed sum error :(

ait!! it was an awesome update....worth d wait!! muskaan feedin on pizza and rahulz thought..hmmm cute!! atul is such a sweetie...up for mkind things work in d best interest of anjie, armaan and ridz tooo!! :D nicee!! armaan wordin his doubts abt anjiz feelinz for armaan...and it seems hes seein d doubts clearin out to become facts...ouch! dts gonna be a bad scene!! lol!! ridz is sucha kid :) i like dt!! AR were adorable...!! i wodner wat helped ridz escape her jumbled thoughts abt anji-armaan...bt nevertheless tey goin off for a nite...fun times!! grt doinz!! sexy flow and events cornered...so realistic!!

TRY to gve us a update soon.. =)

aloha,

NZ

Originally posted by: meow23

dis was a superbbb prt..... superb n brilliant... luvd it

hi, its just amazing,different & beautiful.I Just start reading ur ff and its just awsome.

awww...sam...what a comeback yaar...i srsly loved this part...have been waiting for u to update for soo long...was caught up with tests and God knows what not..and today i got 4 updates which is like a realllllllllllllllllllllyy big treat...two from kiran one from u and one from nj...srsly..u guys should join some writerz community which is very prestigious ofcourse and im so sure uu guys are going to make it REALLY big :)...hehehe ok enough of my babbling....now here goes the detailed analysis of what i really liked about this part of ur ff

Sam- That was a great update! I must say I really admire the strength of your characters. Anjali though embarrassed by her outburst upon Ridz had the courage to apologize that too in front of her friends. I feel it's sometimes easier to apologize to someone in front of strangers rather than your friends as strangers don't know the real story. Though am not a great fan of Anjali in your story, I must say hats off to her for the apology.

Muskaan is simply adorable and I happened to fall more for her character with each update. If Atul described only Ridz as sunshine then I will have to disagree because I feel even Muskaan should be classified as sunshine. Her bubbly loud behavior can wake everyone up; sun or no sun! I am glad Rahul and her are pondering over their feelings for each other, I hope to see their love blossoming soon.

The Anji-Armi convo was undoubtedly one of the highlights. I liked how Armaan guessed Anjali's feelings even though it was put forth rather indirectly. Of course Armi's response took the cake. It was about time he told Anjali that she was nothing more than a really good friend.

It seems you are turning our dear plant lover Atul into a Sherlock Holmes! I will not comment much on Ankit as I am not liking his affection towards Ridz.

I could understand Riddhima's plight, hence I couldn't get myself to be angry at her for her behavior towards Armaan. However, I do wish she had told him her reasoning so he could rectify, good to know Armi knows Riddhima so well that he could tell she was fibbing, but him getting upset and crestfallen would have to be my best part. It seems our scarlett pimpernel was looking forward to a trip with his sea urchin. I was expecting you to end the part without any more AR scenes but let me tell you that I was pleasantly surprised to read of Riddhima waiting for Armaan to apologize. It was a perfect ending to this part and now I am very eagerly awaiting the next update.

Also, I will be attaining my copy of The Scarlett Pimpernel this weekend. I had come across a copy back in high school but having an English professor who made us read nothing but Shakespeare, I wanted to skip the classics that year and read more modern literature. That also happened to my last year at the high school as I graduated that summer. Girls at my firm lean more towards Nora Roberts and Dean Koontz hence I never had a chance to return to the classics. Hence, I wanted to thank you for sparking my interest in the classics again, the last time I read a classic was back in the 11^th grade and that was Emily Bronte's Wuthering Heights.