Maslow's hierarchy of needs (AR FF) Pt 23 pg 153 - Page 106

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: kashishk

Hey Sam,
Fabulous part, I really really loved it especially when ammi calls ridzi, it was superb.
And congrats for being the WOTW.All the best. Ur work is truly awesome, u really deserved it, they titled it very good "romance in business school".
Continue soon and thnx for the PM.(I was just wondering where did u went, happy to see u and read ur FF).

Kashish

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Hi Kashish! Thanks so much...am glad that you liked it so much! Thanks for the WOTW, it was quite a surprise! You are welocme for the PM...shall try and complete the next part this evening and post...am sorry for the delay but this weekeend has been crazy!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Hey!

That was an awesome update!
I loved the phone call part!
I reckon if Anjali see's them leaving uni together she's going to fume again!
Can't wait till the next update!
and congrats on getting writer of the week!
xXx
Sunayna
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Hi Sunayana, Am so glad that you liked the part! Thanks so much for the WOTW! It was a pleasant surprise! Shall update as soon as I can! Though I must admit, right now, I am struggling for time!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: spln

reserved sam...i need to sleep over the part before i strike back!!

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DELICIOUS AMBIGUITIES.....

sam i read this on a quotation magnet once, n it held me by so strong that i stole the magnet from my friend...it was on her refrigerator n i told her if she wanted to read the qote on it anymore she wud just have to drop by over at my place n come to my room....i dont usually give ppl time to react n say no 😃 anywaz...so it said a whole quote, n ended in those two words....

ive come to realize they are two words i never quote used together before i read them like that n realized they were a perfect match....its wat ur part is about.....just for the heck of it...i will actually write the whole quote....

"some stories don't have a clear beginning, middle and end. life is about not knowing, having to change, taking the moment and making the best of it, without knowing what is going to happen next. delicious ambiguities..."...gilda radner....

somehow it sums up ur entire part this time....the story of ARMIDZ here is a story with no distinct beginning, middle or end for me....when wud u say hey started, at the beach, or at the ball??!!!!the middle, they are yet to figure...n an end u will give them, but wudnt that be just another start????

life is not about knowing....thats anjali....

having to change....thats ankit 😆 n i maintain the fact that hes the only one here i cant bring myself to emphathize with in the very least...its lke i want to shut him out of the fic for myself....dont mind me on hat, i rarely have repulsions when i do, there is no escape....

taking the moment and making the best of it...thats alot of RM...and not too less of AR either.....

without knowing wats gong to happen next....that sam, is ur fic to me...i know the end u will give us....but i never know wat will happen next, hopefully neither do the chars!!!

DELICIOUS AMBIGUITIES.....its wat makes me love life....n ur fic sam comes so close to that....

thanks for the wonderful update....it was ur best yet....i say yet, coz i have faith u wr born to outdo urself 😃

n with that um off....its a pity, the quote for me, held nothing for my fav char atul....il think of something for him myself....maybe when um on lesser meds, n my head is more in accord to sanity...

cheers,

nj

ps: gilda radner was a famous comedian, who died very young....if um not wrong of some form of cancer...bless her soul...she made some significant creations before she left....n this one of them defined a life to me!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: zhasan2

great part! hope armaan sets things right now! and yay ar on a sorta-date

Thanks so much girl, am so glad that you liked it!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

great part

i really liked the way u showed how armaan was trying to think about what atul had told him and he was willing to think about the problem and clarify it with anjali.The way u showed how armaan didn't ignore anjali in class proves he really cares for her as a friend and wouldn't want to do anything to hurt her.
Muskaan and ridz conversation was intresting the way riddhima was explaining to muskaan about not letting her love go was intresting hope muskaan follows the advice.The way u described how muskaan thought of ridz and how much ridz meant to her was amazing.
armaan and ridz phone conversation was really good i really liked the way u showed how armaan could guess how ridz is behaving and her expressions even without looking at her.

Hi there, Armaan is not a fool?he may have chosen to turn a blind eye to the rumours but remember so has Anjali. Yup I would have been disappointed too with a character who could completely write off a friendship on a whim. I would be worried how he would be with me if something ever went wrong!

And I guess Armaan has spent enough time with and around Ridhima to figure what makes her tick and what does not!

Thanks so much, am glad you liked the part!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sharvi123

OMG Sam i cant belive u actually updated in the morning! thank u so much it really made my day...usually i dont read FFs in the morning when I am awake.... bcos i am a freakie person! really if i read a ff in the morning and if it has some sad moments, my whole day is going to be soo sad....whole day i will be so upset bcos i am kind of emotional fool and i take all stuff so seriously...i even take fictional stories seeriously :D
so i was afraid whether i should read it or not but couldn't control myself and read it....but it made my day...it was sooo awesome
Armaan is impossible...first he called her at mid night and hung up pn her and called her again to ask her out😳 it was really wonderful....i remember u saying that u r not good with romantic parts😲....then i must say u should better go to doctor for ckeck up!...it was not exactly typically romantic but it was far way more beatiful than typicall romantic stuff
well i dont know how to put it but it was soo awesome😊
u know whole day i was so happy...i felt like armaan had asked me out rather than riddhima!

loved ur choice of songs both of them were awesome..my all time favourites.....cant wait till next part and there date!

u know bcos of u i won't be able to fidn any guy😆.....i mean after reading ur FF, my standards for my armaan have definately gone up...i dont think i will be able to find any such guy😉...the way u portray his character is definately amazing

btw after reading ur answers in WOTW, i feel like ths is almost ur own story....after reading singing as ur hobby, i had no doubt that i can consider u as riddhima for sure....bcos i think in every possible way u deserve to be riddhima of ur ff.....ur intelligence, reading, sarcasm, humour is just like riddhima!

really sooo dying to read the next part...sorry once again for not commenting on other parts bcos of my exams...but i promise u to comment on every parts now onwards...thanks for the pm
update next part super soooon!


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Just read ur post in WOTW.....gosh 30 people are lot!
So dont worry abt replying to my comment..reply later when u r free...no hurry
enjoy ur dinner:)

Thanks girl, had a great dinner, though as usual I overcooked (you would have thought that with so much entertaining I would have got a hang of quantities, but some things I just don't learn!) and now am going to be having left overs for the next 10 days I suspect 🤔?unless I have another party!

You're welcome! Its was such a sweet request that I had to post esp since I was at home waiting to be picked up for a meeting and not rushing to work!

And I love both the songs as well..I think Atif has done a wonderful job with this number, though again I think my visualization of the picturization was much better than what it actually was?.

Hmmmm as to Ridhima being me, I guess some of her is me??.and some incidents are part of my Bschool life?..

well i dont know how to put it but it was soo awesome
u know whole day i was so happy...i felt like armaan had asked me out rather than riddhima!😆 🤗

That is so cute! You are a complete doll!

As for your Armaan, don't be surprised, he may just be around the corner! I firmly believe that more often than not, we are not willing to look at what is right there under our nose, preferring to keep chasing a phantasm which is created by our imagination!

Hope your exams went well!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monadarling2628

wondeful part sam! such a huge turmoil of emotions in the track right now. i'm excited about armaan and ridhima's trip around bandra, hopefully both of them realize that they like each other much more than friends.

thanks for the pm, sweety. continue soon and do pm me.
mona :]

Hi there! You're welcome and am so glad that you liked the part…as to their trip around Bandra I thin I have butterflies in my stomach about doing justice to their unofficial date!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: yamnovbloom

plsssssss make things clear btw Anjali and Armi it would be oepractical and good hope the Ankit doesn't get his opes high then here's other heart break in line.
Hmm Atul has feelings for Anji but he himself doesn't recognise it weird atleast Rahul and Muski r on the verge of confession, at last knocked sum sense into her head.
hey u know i lik all the remarks and comments on luv u make in this FF they r fascinating yet so true and realisitic u see as shakespear said
"LOve has no reason if it has then its not love"
i don't know the staement is totally correct or not i'm not a voracious classic reader just wrote wat i heard once sumwhere so excuse me if there is sum fault in the line.
can't wait to read more plssss continue soon and yaar plsss pm WITH pG. NO or url of the post AS IT MORE EASY TO FIND THE PAR

I agree with you completely…love usually has no reason…like I mentioned, I think to Anu, that if there was logic to love, half the people I know who are together, should not be together!

Shall continue soon…am starting to write the next part, no struggling to rite it with friends over who refuse to let me near the laptop!

I guess Atul is being a good friend and concerned about Anjali…that what friends do!

And shall add the URL next time!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetdamage

Hey!.....sorry for the late comment...but the part was really good....I really hope Armaan tells Anjali that he just thinks of her as a friend!....do update soon! :)

Well, better late than never! Am so glad that you liked the part! Well Armaan plans to have things sorted out with her, lets see what happens!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: richakumar

thanks for pmi also like both the songs

wonderful update

Thanks so much! yup, they are both lovely songs!

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