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Posted: 16 years ago
Well ranjana let me tell you that I really love your FF its really awesome babez.
But I also hate jai for making bani life a living hell you know what happened in the past is past move on and live in the present.
I really dont wana know what happened in jai and pia past but yes I do want to know how thing are and would work out for jai and bani what is in store for bani?
Will be waiting for your uodate sweety....
Byebye
Love Perveen
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Posted: 16 years ago
I know I am very very bad I am so sorry. I hope you will forgive me for dissapearing again. 😭
Thank u 4 the lovely comments you all have left. Thank you so much. I promise I will update Ankahee as soon as I can. I just need a bit more time to write one chapter of that with all the visions and mixing up I do.
Hope You will like this part (although I know you will want to kick me, but the the next part, and the part after that will bring JB together and the entire thing about Jai and Pia will be out in the open.

Love,
Ranjana





Part 7

'Pia, will you marry me?' Pia was silent. After all the complaints about not spending time with her, not being able to see him as much as she wanted to, she was silent.

'Tell me Pia, mujhse shaadi karogi?' Jai asked her.
Pia's face blanched. In the midst of her tirade against him he asked her a question she hadn't anticipated. Jai was sitting across her on a rock, near the beach.
'Are you serious?' She asked him. 'Ofcourse, aisi baton me main mazaak nahin karta.

'par, Jai my parents.' 'To theek hai, I'll meet them. Kal hi. My freelance work is going well, in a few months I'll be able to rent a house in a nice neighbourhood. Mausi ki bhi umr ho rahi hai. Abhi roz roz unko chawl ke doosre auraton ke saath line me khara hona par raha hai pani ke liye. Accha nahin lagta. I have seen a few flats we can visit them again. You can choose. Aakhir tumhaara ghar hi hoga. Mausi and Nachiket won't be interested in housesearching.' Jai chuckled. He noticed Pia's stoic expression. 'Tumhe koi aitraaz nahin hai na?'

Pia sat unmoved on the stone with only a bag of peanuts in her hand.
'Pia! Pia!' Jai called out to her. Jai stood up and sat next to her. He placed his hand on her thigh to brake her reverie. 'I promise, mai tumhe har haal me khush rakhunga. Ill take care of everything. Tum jo chaahe kar sakti ho. Whether you want to study or want to work. Whatever you want you can do. Mai ya mere parivaarwaale tumko nahin rokenge. Bolo, mujhse shaadi karogi?'

Pia sighed and rested her head against his shoulder. Jai was feeling content. They sat there facing the see with the salty air touching their skins.

***

Jai was walking in a huge building. At the reception he asked for the way to Mr. Dixit's office. The girl behind the desk mumbled some instructions until she looked up and a dreamy look formed in her eyes.

'Miss, Mr Dixit's office?' Jai reminded her. 'Oh, Yeah. Tenth floor, down the hall. But ..'

Jai turned heels, mumbled a 'Thanks' and made his way to the designated floor.

He was nervous, his life depended on the conversation he was about to have with Pia's father. He was glad that Pia was going to be there. The future of both of them depended on this. Last night Jai kept pondering about his relationship with Pia. He was confident that Pia loved him as much as he loved her. Maybe even more then he loved her. Yes there was a difference in their status. Pia's family was rich. There was a possibility that they could object to this alliance because he wasn't as rich as Pia's family, but he never heard Pia say anything about this. Would there be a possibility that they would object, then Pia would have told him before. No such thing reached his ears ever. Jai reached the door to Mr. Dixit's cabin. He raised his hand was about to knock on the door when he heard a male voice.

'Tum pagal ho gayi ho Pia. You will be the wife of a beggar! Say no to him! Do you know what kind of life you will have!' Jai felt his head spin. His mouth suddenly felt dry and he was rooted to his spot. His hand stopped somewhere midair. 'Woh khudh bhi hai kya? He was a teacher. Ab na dhang ka kaam karta hai, na dhang se kamaata hai. You want to be a maid servant to his family?' The male voice reverberated in the room. Jai could hear Pia gasp for breath. She was about to say something but was cut off before that.

'Pratham se shaadi karlo aur khush raho. Why do you want to ruin your own future? Pratham, he is the kind of man you should be marrying! Not some bhikhaari chawlwaala! Na koi class, na koi future!'
Jai couldn't bear to stay there for another moment and listen to the rest of the conversation. He felt suffocated in this building. He unbuttoned the first two buttons of his shirt and ran out down the hall, flew off the stairs and didn't stop until he was standing outside on the street, running his hand through his hair. He didn't know what he should do now. Jai looked around for a telephone boot. At the corner of the street he found one and he ran. He dialled Pia's number. She didn't pick up. He dialled a few times more but he didn't get any response. Jai felt defeated in just one stroke, but there wasn't a weapon. Just words. Those words which he did not want to hear.

Jai didn't know what to do. Jai stood there on the street and before he knew it was dark and the day had passed. His feet didn't carry him well enough but somehow he reached his house. The second blow that day reached him. Nachiket was sick. He was admitted in the hospital in a critical state. Every day Jai had tried to call Pia, in between taking care of Nachiket. He wanted to know what Pia was doing and thinking about their relationship. She had picked up once and told him in between tears that her parents were preparing for her wedding. Mr. Dixit's voice rang through his ears every day. Nachiket's state worsened every day. The doctor's couldn't find any cause for his illness but he was in immense pain. All the money Jai had saved to rent a flat was spent in Nachiket's treatment. It wasn't enough though. He needed more money for Nachiket's operation. He had mortgaged his house first, and then sold it. The house which was his father's hade bought saving every penny and eating just one meal a day. But the truth was that Jai didn't have a job and in spite of turning to every bank and every moneylender he knew, Jai couldn't raise enough money. His brother, his life was leaving him and he couldn't do anything, Mr. Dixit's words taunted and tormented Jai every time another door closed on him. In the end even the doctors were helpless. Nachiket died a month later and Jai didn't even have enough money to give him a worthy funeral. His little brother left him.

After performing Nachiket's last rites Jai turned to Pia's house. There he found out that Pia wasn't there anymore. She was married to someone else.

Jai left Mumbai the next day.

***

'Nattu' Jai whispered. His neck ached and when he opened his eyes he saw his office covered in the darkness. He had to blink a few times before he realized that he was dreaming again he fell asleep in his office. Every time his dream seemed so real. It was like he relived all those moments in a few minutes again. Jai sat straight in his chair Through the glass he saw that the rest of the people had left. It was after eight. Jai picked up his jacket and his briefcase in one hand, and a few files in the other and made his way out of the office to his house.

***

Bani felt the weight of her backpack on her back, as she walked to her house. She had made the rickshaw stop at a distance from the Mansion. She always used this short walk to order her thoughts and straighten up her act. Bani needed this short time to put on her happy face.

For the first time in months he spoke to her this morning. He told her to stay home, mausi wasn't feeling well. Bani was surprised. Normally he wasn't this involved in the matters of the house. That included his family too, but mausi's case was different. He had a different bond with her so that might be the reason why Jai told Bani that she had to stay home. No questions were asked, no answers were given. He just told her and left the room. Bani wanted to tell him she couldn't, not today, but he didn't give her the opportunity.

Bani almost reached the gate. She entered and saw the cars lined up in front of the house. That, somehow, reminded her that the money she had saved from her part-time job was almost spend. She had to find a way to earn some money. She stopped working when she got engaged. Her parents thought that juggling studies, work and running a house would be too much for her and Bani agreed. Now her money was almost gone and she didn't want to ask her in-laws. What would they think about her? It would be a dead giveaway about the relationship she shared with her husband. And asking her 'husband' or her parents for money? She would rather die.

Bani crossed the threshold of the mansion when she heard a car approach behind her. Bani didn't have to turn to know that it was her husband's car. She found the hallway empty which was unusual in itself. Bani looked around and decided to go upstairs and get out of her jeans and top and change into something more traditional before she would search for her family members. They didn't mind her dressing like this, as long as she was comfortable they were fine with it, but Bani wasn't comfortable with wearing western clothes in front of them. Outside it was fine for her, but not in the house.

She put a foot on the first step of the stairs when she looked next to the staircase and saw everyone assembled in a guestroom. Curiosity took over and Bani joined hem. There she saw Mausi lying on a bed and everyone standing around her. Mausi had a bandage on her head and one wrapped around her arm. Bani looked at the first person next to her.

'Jijaji, yeh kya huwa?' She asked Aditya.

'Woh, Mausi wasn't feeling well, but still was climbing the stairs. Chakra kar gir gayi.'
Bani gasped and dropped herself on the bed. 'Mausi. Mausi aap theek to hai na? Are you in pain. Please. Tell me.' Bani started worrying.
Mausi laughed at her fussing. 'mai theek hoon pagli. I'm not made out of sugar, I wont melt. I can deal with a little blow.' Bani hugged the elder woman. Mausi was about to ask Bani something when a male voice echoed through the room 'I told you to stay home didn't I?'

A shudder ran down Bani's spine. The next moment she felt herself being pulled on her feet with a tight grip around her wrist. She was being made to face Jai. 'Maine tumse kaha tha ki ghar par rehna! To phir gayi kyun?!' Jai hissed at her. 'Tumse ek baar kahi huwi baat suni nahin jaati?!' Jai's voice, his grip, his eyes stunned everyone in the room. Bani tried to free her hand but his hold was stronger then before. 'Woh.... mujhe....i needed to...' Bani stammered.
'I told you to stay here! Didn't i???!! jai shouted at her.


Bani closed her eyes. 'Dont cry, dont cry.' She repeatedly told herself.
'Jai kya kar rahe ho?' Aditya tried to free Bani's hand.
Jai's gaze was fixed on Bani's face. 'I told you to stay here didn't i? He repeated again. Bani nodded.
'To phir kya kar rahi thi bahar??!!' He shouted at her.

' Jai! Pagal ho gaya hai? Chor do Bani ko!' Jai looked at the person whom just ordered him to leave Bani's hand. Mausi sat on the bed and saw her glaring at him. With a jerk Jai released Bani's hand from his grip and walked out of the room. Everyone watched him leave, not believing what happened moments before, after that they saw a flash of Bani's backpack when she ran out of the room.

Jigyasa and Aditya followed Jai to his room, angry at him for the treatment he just gave Bani. Jigyasa saw the door to his room close and figured that he must be in there. 'Jai what the hell were you thinking? Have you gone mad?!' Jigyasa shouted straight away after entering her room.

' Sab ke saamne usko daantne ki zaroorat kya thi?'

' didi, I told her to do something!'
' And we told her to go jai! Wo to jana nahin chaahti thi! Usko paper submit karna tha aaj otherwise she wouldn't get her grades!' Aditya shouted.
' And you know that!' Jigyasa accused him.
' No I didn't, and I don't care!!!'
' How could you not know that? Itne dino se mehnat kar rahi hai. Na theek se khaati hai, na theek se soti hai!'
'If you don't care then what right do you have to shout at her like that?' Aditya asked. ' Khareed ke nahin laaye ho usko. Patni hai tumhaari! Gai-bail nahin hai woh! Sab ke saamne usko aise daant diya!'
'Yehi theek hai uske liye.' Jai mumbled.

Aditya and Jigyasa didn't understand anything.

they stared at Jai. He turned around and continued with what he was doing. 'Tum pagal ho gaye hai Jai!' Jigyasa shouted and left the room. ' Jai, tum gusse me ho abhi, but be careful. Baad me shayad patchtaana na pare.'I dont know what is going on between you and Bani but she is a nice girl and no matter when and how much you quarral with her, you cant treat a women like that.' With this piece of advise Aditya left the room.

Jigyasa searched the entire house for Bani. In one of the last room she found Bani putting a yellow paste on her wrist, seated on the bed. Jigyasa entered the room without knocking. Bani didn't have the opportunity to wipe her tears. An red, angry spot on Bani's wrist was half covered in the yellow paste.

' Ow God, you got burned yesterday.' Jigyasa remembered suddenly. 'Bataaya nahin itna bara ghaaw ho gaya hai!' She scolded Bani.Jigyasa took the paste and applied it on Bani's wrist. She winced in pain when Jigyasa touched an open spot. It showed remnants of a blister which Jai's grip had opened.

'Mujhe ghar jaana hai.' Bani whispered softly. Jigyasa saw Bani hurled up on the bed, scared and scarred like a little girl. In just one moment Jigyasa confirmed what she had been suspecting for a while now .

Edited by RANJANA_RRJ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Great part as usual 😊

Poor Jai he had to suffer a lot...I guess he got his reward already (i.e. Bani 😉 ) but he has not realized that yet... I hope they dont let her go back to her home.....and Jai says sorry to her for treating her sooo badly....

and you also gave us a sneak peak that we should expect some JB moments 😃 waiting 😍
Edited by riahasan85 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

excillent part

now i understand Jai's pov.
it appears Jigyasa seems to be knowing some of the stuff.
Pia had seems to be made up all the conversation . i think the receptionist was trying to tell that mr.dixit is not their today.
can't wait for next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG poor girl... JW had no right to treat her the way he did.. atleast they were there to stop him.. I bet he will stop her from going home and put in charade in front of masi again.. cant wait for the next.. pls pls pls update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
ooo... the last two paras were so touchy...
nice part... something is really fishy about pia...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Oh now Jigyasa knows all is not well. Looking forward to Jai's repentance.
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Posted: 16 years ago
OMG....first of all i demand another update tomorrow lol
Aww...poor girl...i can't believe jai would do something like this to bani when she has not committed a crime..she doesn't even no about jai n pia ....this was written very nicely...please please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww this is a really good update...i feel bad for bani....but good to hear that they'll be together in the next two parts!! plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Bani has reached her limit now....the whole JB scene was very shocking - good going, RR!!!
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