FF An ugly truth part 35 pg 97 1.7.11 (new)

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preeti73

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Posted: 16 years ago

#141

very well described............both Jai and Bani's feelings..........

Excellent...........continue soon.

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princess14

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Posted: 16 years ago

#142

great update!!!poor bani i hope she gets the happiness that she deserves!!

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nema123

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Posted: 16 years ago

#143

Hey Ranjana... It was a Great Part.....

Poor Bani.... Your writting is very very good...

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btkr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#144

Very well written, RR. The family relationships and the effect her divorce would have on them, Bani's agony all depicted very well. 👍🏼

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suwas

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Posted: 16 years ago

#145

When is jai going to realise that he is torturing an innocent gorl & real culprit Pia is going on with her life without paying for her mistakes😡. Feel bad for Bani. She can't break off from this relationship . Again because of Pia.😡

Its high time Jai knows bani is not Pia. He should know how she is.

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Yoga4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#146

Hey Ranjana,

I am not satified with the teaser 😔, i need a full fleged chapter.

The way you have weaved the story is such that i felt the pain for Bani, she does not want to be in this relation but cannot go back because of her concern for her parents. This is the fact with majority of girls who keep going in an abusive relation because they don't want their parents to suffer.

waiting for the next part, please update soon.

take care and keep writing

Shweta

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vardhani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#147

Hey ranju,

Awww!!! That was such a depressing part!!!! I hate jai, he just has no right to do it yaar!!!! He is torturing bani for pia's mistake whereas pia is happily basking in her sweet life!!

Continue Soon!!

God bless

Dhani

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visma

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Posted: 16 years ago

#148

So when are you going to break the suspense between Jai and Pia. And Bani how long does she plan to continue this charade. one day things would surface then what explanation would both of them have for the family. If Jai is looking for a show down witht he dixit family I do not think so that is going to happen any time now. But waiting for you to unfold the realtion between Jai and Pia.

Bye