AMOR~MY RAHUL MUSKAAN FF~~updtd pg 11 - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Whoa ! Live-in Relationship !! Excellent.....Plz do continue !! And of course do PM me if u can !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks soooooo much for commenting guys!i'll update by tomorrow promise!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: ramusk

hey saku,,,
thanks for the PM and congo that u hav finally started and i am still in thinking busines....

plz update fast ur FF and update in Fanfiction forum dear...n ur title is really cool and awesome.......

thanx!

i'll update soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia

You title is cute.

It sounds like a good idea and its different.
In order for RM to be romantic romantic you will definitely have to change their characters from what is portrayed in DMG. But I look forward to reading something different.
You know we are always here to read, comment, and support RM.
Do PM me.
😊
- Sonia

yeah sonia.in this story RM will be totally different!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Sakina! So nice to see a new R-M ff. Thanx for the PM and I'll be looking out for your part very soon.
Komz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok guys i promised you that i'll post the 1st part today.....so here it is!
I REALLY HOPE YOU ENJOY IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
❤️PART~1❤️
CURRENT SCENARIO~its armaan and riddhima's 1st marriage anniversary party going in at their house.
anjali:bilkul nahi.itni badi party hai,aur tu aise kurti pehen ne ki soch rahi hai?
muskaan:anji pleeeeease!anniversary meri nahi un dono ki hai!
anji:shut up!26 saal ki ho gayi hai!its high time you start behaving like a girl!
muskaan:matlab tujhe lagta hai main ladka hoon?
anji:haan kuch aisa hi lagta hai.
muskaan:hey bhagwaan!matlab rahul ek ladke ke saath rehta hai?ek hi bed par sota hai?
anji:MUSKAAAAAAAAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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muskaan got dressed up in a rusty chanderi salwar with an off-white kameez and rusty dupatta.she kept her curly hair open and put on the lovely bracelet rahul had given her for her bday this year.even anjali was looking beautiful in a thin-strapped,blue salwar-suit.both came out to the living room where muskaan saw rahul(dressed in a prussian blue shirt and denims),sitting and chatting with armaan.
rahul stared at her from top to bottom.
rahul:tu ladki lag rahi hai!yeh normal nahi hai!
muskaan(furiously):huh!thank you my very optimistic and romantic boyfriend!mujhe laga tu kahaga-"you look gorgeous" ya phir-"wow!" par main toh bhool hi gayi thi ki mera boyfriend toh sharukh khan se bhi zyaada romantic hai!
rahul's reply was interrupted by ridhima's entry that moment.armaan quickly rushed to her and made her sit down comfortably.
atul:toh chalo ab cake kaat te hai!par cake hai kahaan?
rahul:kitchen mein.main lekar aata hoon.
he went to the kitchen.muskaan followed him there.
muskaan:oye!tu hamesha aise ulta seedha jawaab kyun deta hai?"tu ladki lag rahi hai"_kyun?main kya doosre time pe ladka lagti hoon?toh tu ek ladke se pyaar karta hai?iska matlab tu 'uss' type ka ladka hai?maine ek 'uss' type ke ladke se pyaar kiya hai?hey bhagwaan!
rahul(shocked):tune yeh sab ek breath mein kaise bola?
muskaan:meri speciality hai.
she turned to the other direction angrily.
rahul(lovingly):arrey-arrey-peeche kyun mudh gayi?idhar dekh-meri taraf dekh-
muskaan:bilkul nahi.main aaj saara din tujhse baat nahi karungi.teri shakal bhi nahi dekhungi.
rahul:tu 5 minute bhi nahi reh payegi!
muskaan:bet?
rahul:bet.yahaan paas mein jo park hai main wahaan tera wait karunga.time limit hai aadha ghanta.i bet ki tu mujhe itna miss karegi ki time khatam hone se pehle hi mujhse milne aa jayegi.
muskaan:i bet main tujhe bilkul miss nahi karungi!
rahul:dekha jayega.
muskaan(angrily):dekenge!
after 5 minutes.....................................
muskaan(to herself):arrey yaar!abhi toh bas 5 minute hi huye hai!usko itna miss kar rahi hun!kaankhajura!pata nahi kya hai usme ki main uspe itna marti hoon!
someone tapped her on the shoulder.
she turned to see armaan.
armaan:tu khud se baat kar rahi hai?waise toh yeh paagalpan ki pehli nishaani hai,par tu toh already paagal hai!waise rahul kahaan hai?
muskaan:phirse yaad dila di mujhe uski!!!!!!
armaan:kyun jaana kya hua?
muskaan:JAANA KE BACHHE!!!!!MAIN BET HAARNE WALI HOON!!!!!!!!
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the park was aa half minute walk from there but muskaan literally ran,so it didn't take more than 15 seconds.the park was deserted when she entered.
just then rahul held her by the waist,pulled her and hugged her tightly,nuzzling her nek.he always did the 'nuzzling' thing in such a way that it tickled her.
muskaan(hugging him back and laughing):achha-main-bet-haar-gayi!
rahul lauhed too,and kept nuzzling down her neck.
muskaan:rahul chod!mujhe hassi aa rahi hain!rahul!
rahul:oye meri soniyo,teri ek hassi keh liye toh main apni jaan bhi de doon!
muskaan:tu jaanta hai tujhse filmy dialogus nahi bola jaata!ab cho!
he let go.both sat on the swing and kept on laughing for at least 5 minutes.
muskaan:achha-achha-
rahul(still laughing):kya?
muskaan:achha theek se bol na!main kaisi lag rahi hoon?
rahul:bandariya jaisi!
muskaan snorted and turned her face away.
rahul:arrey arrey-ghussa nahi karte-ghussa nahi karte!
muskaan:tu na chup reh!theek se pyaar bhi nahi kar sakta!
rahul:matlab?main tujhse pyaatr nahi karta?
muskaan:aur nahi toh kya?
rahul:theek hai!nahi karta!
both turned to opposite directions.then muskaan turned to him.
muskaan:sach mein nahi karta?
he turned to her.
rahul:haan thoda thoda karta hoon.
muskaan:at least karta toh hai!
rahul:tu aaj bohot achhi lag rahi hain.bohot sexy.sachhi mein.isliye toh tere liye yeh laya hoon!
he took out something from his pocket.it was a gold pendant,wth a cute,heart-shaped locket.
muskaan:kitna sundar hai!!!!!!!
she took it from his hand and wore it immediately.
muskaan:achhi lag rahi hoon na!
rahul:bohot............................
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after the party.............................
muskaan:bye rids!bye armaan!thanx for the party!
she stepped into rahul's car.they sped home.THEIR home,which they had bought togrther 3 years ago with ALL their money.
muskaan was too tired to change in her pyajamas and stuff,so she quickly slipped into a shirt of rahul's.he stared at her.she always looked incredibly sexy when she wore a shirt of his.
even he changed into his pyajamas.when he came out of the bathroom,he saw her standing by the window.he went towards her.
rahul:achha muskaan,maine toh tujhe yeh necklace diya,par tune toh kuch nahi diya mujhe!
muskaan:i'm really sorry rahul.maine toh kuch bhi nahi diya tujhe..............
rahul:no problem.iska matlab hai ki jo main chahoon tujhe dena padega...................
he held her by the shoulders and pushed her against the wall.
muskaan:iraada kya hai?
rahul:samajh mein nahi aaya?JOH MAIN CHAHOON,TUJHE DENA PADEGA!!!!!!!!!!!!
muskaan:RAHUL YOU BADMAASH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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thats it guys!quite a long part!hope i didn't bore you!i really hope you like it!
please don't just read it,give your comments too,because i can't continue without enough comments!!!!!!!!!!!!
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaase!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Edited by justluvmayank - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
Great part Sakina! Different concept, although I'd never be able to picture them in this kind of a relationship, but it's good to be different. Thanks for the PM! Keep up the good work and continue soon.
komz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow wat a part lovely i loved it plz do pm me whenever u update
n thanks 4 the pm
love u n dmg n rm nar n aa
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hmmm saku .....

am wordless......maine bahut pehle kahan tha ki tu WWRM ke liye likh le par tune suna nahi lite liya......... par aaj patha chala hain ki tu bahut achhe likh sakthi hain.....kya start diya tune unko!!!.... i am actuaaly imagining them in those scenes right from the start and i wanna see them like this in DMG also.....

toh tu WWRM likhna shuru karde warna mein chodungi nahi tujhe

with lots of luv,
sri
Edited by ramusk - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
sri totaly mindblowing 👏👏 very good start 👏👏 thxxxxxx alot for the pm 🤗 u r gr8 writer keep going on 👍🏼

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