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Posted: 16 years ago
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raj-ek mamule larka ha chotta motta kam karta ha raj ka is duniya main koi nahin ha.raj 3 anant baccho ko samalta ha raj ke duniya ha woh 3 bacche

lala jee-he is a ery cleaver person

naina singh alluwalia-she is the only daughter of mr and mrs alluwalia.mr aur mrs alluwalia kuch he din pahele ek car accident main mare gaye ha.naina america main rahete ha .india main sara business mr alluwalia ke dost lalajee samalte ha. naina bohot he stylish ha

jay -naina se bohot pyaar karta ha.he also leaves with naina
pooja-naina saath ek he flat main rahete ha .she is a good friend of naina
p-naina plz get see the time its already 8
n-hey poo shut up dont shout
p-ok sleep as long as u can i am going
n-off
n thorows a pillow over p
n uthte ha
p-n see the time we r alread late
n-just chill yaar
n aur p jaate ha aapne office
madam-naina pooja do u have waich
p-es mam
madam-then see the time
p-soory mam
madam-i am warning u both for the last time if u r late for the next time then i will fire u both
p-sorry mam
madam-naina u have completed the designs
n-yes mam
madam-ok
n aur p cabin se bahar jaate ha
jay-he gorgeous kya hua
n-tera sar
ja-what?
p-mujhe aur n ko mam ne datta
jay-wow toh koi tumhe datt sakta ha n
n-sut up jay
jay-ok ok
n the evening
n p aur ja ghar aate ha
p-naina tere lie ek letter aaya ha
n-ok
n -off this crap
jay-ka hua
n-jay lawyer ka letter aaya ha mujhe pappers sign karne ke lie mumbai jaana hoga
jay-kya
guys i will cont m others ff also

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Posted: 16 years ago
#2

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Naina aur Pooja dono ko late aane ke liye daat padhti hai!!!! Thats bad!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina ko papers sign karne Mumbai jana hoga!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
#3

heyzzz

👏👏👏gr8 part👏👏👏
😊😊😊i like the story so far😊😊😊
jay luvs naina
does naina luv him bak?
😛😛😛dono ko dat milie naina ki waje say>>>.lol itz the sme wid me but fo skool😛😛😛
😃😃😃W8ing fo RN's meeting😃😃😃
plz cont. soon
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Edited by starasdf - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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n-ja mainne lawyer uncle se baat ke the e said that i have to go to india

jay-jaan main bhi tumhare saath india jaunga
n-sach oh jay u r just so sweet
jay-ok n ab main chalta hu
n-ok
next day
n aur ja madam se leave ke permission ke lie jaate ha
ja-mam
mam-yes
jay-i and n wants to take a leave of 1 month
mam-wow both of u wants leave may i know the reasson
n-mam my parents past away last month so i have to go to india to sign some pappers
mam-oh n i can sanction ur leave application but jay i cant give u laeve
jay-but mam
mam-i cant jay
jay-mam plz
mam-u can leave
n-jay plz
jay-n main kaise tumhe akele india bej sakte hu india is totall an unknown place for u
n-jay america bhi mere lie kabhi ek unknown place he the dont worry jay mujhe kuch nahin hoga main jitne jaldi ho sake wapis aanne ke koshish karunge
jay-n i feel really bad for u
n-oh jay
jay hugs n
lalaje-off
bini-kya hua jee
lalajee-are woh n india aa rahe ha
bini-toh kya hua
lalajee-are bewakooff agar woh india wapis aa gae toh humare pass sab kuch le lege
bini-oh
lalajee-off kya karu
n packing kar rahe ha
poo-n india jaake phone zarur karna
n-ha poo
jay-n poo chale
n-ha
jay poo n ko airport see off karne jaate ha
jay bye jaan
n-bye ja
poo-khayal rakkna
n-u too
n reach india
n-off india main kitne garmi ha
n calls lala
n-uncle aap kaha ho
lalajee-aa rahe hu beti
lalajee-are beti kaise ho
n-main thik hu
lalajee-chalo beti
n lalajee ke saath ghar aate ha
bini n ke aarti thtarte ha
n-oh oh plz yeh sab bad kijiye
lalajee-jaa bini n ke liye kuch khanna le aa
bini-aa beti
n -uncle main fresh up hone jaa rahe hu
n fresh up hke aate ha
n-oh god yeh sab kya ha
bini-beti khanna ha
n-auty main itna oily khanna nahin khate plz aap mere orange jice aur fruits le aaye
lalajee-jaa
n ka mobile bajta ha
poo-hello n
n-ha bol poo
poo-kaise ha
n-poo i am fine
poo-waha sa kaise ha
n-yahaan woh poo sab ek item ha subhe shayam khanna ar khanna
poo smiles
2 din bad
n-uncle main ghumne jaa rahe hu
lalajee-thik ha beti
n ghumne jaate ha
n-driver plz car tez chalao
n ke car jaake ekthala ko lag jaate ha
n car se uthtarte ha
thalebala-hey memsab mera pura saman phek diya
n-shut up
voice-hey madam
n turns
n-hey woh r u
voice-main jo bhi hu aap andhi ha kya
n-hey listen u dirty man
voice-hey madam aapna yeh english bhasa bad karo aur baba ko paise de do
n-what main is shut up
n jaane lagte ha
woh guy jaake n ka haath pakkara ha
n-how dare u to catch my hand
voice-chup
n-leave me
woh guy n ke purse se paise nikal ke thalebale ko deta ha
n-how dare u to touch my purse u dont know me main kya kar sakte hu
thalibala-sukriya raj bhaiya
ie our raj
r-jaiye aapne ghar madam
n-i will see u
r-ha mera photo ej dnga jee bhar ke dekh lijiega
n-u u
r-u u ha mere dil main ho raha ha
n-shut up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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👏👏👏gr8 update👏👏👏
😡😡😡ehh lalaji hate him😡😡😡
😆😆😆RN's fight waz funny😆😆😆
cont.soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#6
grt start.
naina ke ma pa iss duniye nahi ab
is vry sad.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#7

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Jay bhi Naina ke saath India jana chahta hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Magar Jay ko leave nahi milti!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Lalaji nahi chahte ke Naina India aaye warna uske haath se sab kuch chala jayega!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Bini Naina ki aarti utarti hai toh Naina ko pasand nahi hai!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Usse oily khana bhi nahi khana hai!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ne accident kiya toh Raj ne usse pakda aur kya jawab diye uski baaton ka!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Their first meeting was quite filmy!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome start......

gr8 second part as well

sorry for late reply
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Posted: 16 years ago
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n ghar aate ha bohot gusse main

bini-ka hua beti

n-oh that crap idiot

bini-kya

n-kaka kaka

kaka-jee betiya

n-mujhe ek glass thanda pani dijiye

n-uncle yeh lawyer uncle kab aaenge main aur zada din nahin ruk sakte ahaan

lala jee yeh baat sunnke bohot gussa ho jaate ha

lalajee-woh beti lawyer toh aate honge

n-ok

n aapne room main jaate ha

n- mera haath pakkar usne mera naina singh alluwalia ka he will have to pay

kaka-betiya

n-hmm
n the evening
lawyer aate ha
lawer-n
n-yes
lawyer-main he advocate maheta hu
n-oh hi
lawer-beti main tumhare papa ka dost bhi tha mujhe bohot afsos ha unke maut par
n-jee
lawyer-beta tumhe kuch pappers sign karne hoge
n-jee
lalajee toh mann he mann gussa ho rahe ha
lawer -beta kal he main court main jaake yeh pappers file dunga
n-uncle main kab wapis jaa sakte hu
lawer-beta is kam main atleast 7 din toh lagega
n-ok uncle
n aapne room main jaate ha
lalajee-off mujhe kuch karna hoga main itne jaldi sab kuch n ke naa,m hone de sakte
lala jee calls some1
n ka mobile bajta ha
n-hello
ja-yeh jaan kaise ho
n-main thik hu tum kaise ho
jay-aacha hu waise tumhara sab kam ho gaya
n-jee nahin i have2 live here for 7 days
jay-ok
next day
n boating ke liye jaate ha
n boating kar rahe ha
suddenly n ke picche kuch gudde aate ha
n is trying to save herself but woh gudde n ko distribud kar rahe ha
aur at last n ke boat sink ho jaate ha
after 2 days
kuch fisherman n ko samunder se nikalte ha
1 fisherman-eh masi dekh yeh chore ko
masi-kai hua re chori ko
2 fisherman-samunder main dub rahe the
masi-hatre baba mereko dekhne de
masi n ko hosh main late ha
n-aahhh
masi-eh chori tera naam kya ha re
n-oh plz hatie
masi-lo mainne tereko bacchaa aur tu mujhe he bol rahe ha naam ka ha tera
n-oh plz dur se baat kijiye what a dirty smell is coming
masi-ae ae gali nahin dene ka bol tera naam ka ha
n-mera naam
n aapne sar pe haath rakhte ha
n-mera naam oh god i cant remember my naam
masi-lo yeh toh aapna naam bhi bhul gae
n-mera naam
2 fisherman-masi isse vath ke pass le jaate ha
the took n to a vath
2 fisherman-vath jee zara yeh chori ko dekheye
n-hey dont touch me
vath checks n
vath-lagta ha samunder main dubne se inke yaadash chali gaye
n-what ?what rubbish i dont believe all this
mas-are chori tjhe aad ha toh chali jaa yahaan se
n-u shut up
n ko leke basti main sab pagal ho jaate ha
raj-chacha 1 bottle ram dijiye
chacu-eh le
raj-kya hua
chachu-ka batau ek larki aaye ha humare basti main pagal kar diya ha us ne kabhi bolte ha kya chikun chahee kabhi bolte ha muttum chahee kahi bolte ha yeh saff nahin ha
raj-kaha ha woh
chacha-waha
raj goes to n
n-i told u na that i wan mineral water
masi-kya
n-mujhe eh pani nahin pini ha is main germes hote ha
raj is shocked to see n
raj-tummmmmmmmmmmmmm
masi-raj tu jaanta is ko
raj -ha masi
masi-tu isko le jaa aapunko pagal kar diya ha
raj-waise masi is ko h kya
masi-vath jee ne kaha iske yaadash chali gae
raj-kya
raj becomes very happy
raj -masi aap fikar mat kijiye main is ko le jaa rahe hu
raj-chal
n-hey u leave me
raj-hey chal mere saath
n-main tumhare saath kun jaau
raj-kun ki main tera pati hu
n-what ?pati
raj-ha ha ab chal mere saath
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Posted: 16 years ago
#10
nice fic.
Raj ne mauke ka fayda uthaya aur Naina ko apni biwi bana liya.
update soon.

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