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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

that sounds great

plz continue soon and plz continue ur other fics too

plzzz

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

n-hey u main tumhare patni ho he nahin sakte

r-kya bole tu

n-cant u listen

r-hey baagwan is ke yaadash toh chali gae par is ka english bolna nahin gaya

n-kya bol rahe ho tum

r-kuch nahin chal mere saath

n-main tumhare sath nahin jange

r-tere toh

n-shut up main tum jaise insan se shaadi kabhi nahin kar sakte

r-aacha tu mere patni nahin ha toh hmare jo 3 bacche ha woh kaise aaye

n-what?bacche mere bacche

r--nahin ashwaria ke bacche

n-nahin main nahin maante

r-tu chal khud he dekh le

r n ko aapne ghar leke jaate ha

ghar nahin it is zoo full ko dust

n-yeh is ka ghar ha

r-lo tu aapna ghar bhi bhul gaye

r-tu ruk main abhi aata hu

r ander jaata ha

r-tini ,rohan,aryan

aryan-kya hua chachu

r-baccho suno

r baccho samjhata ha

aryan-ok chachu

r-chalo ander chalo

n ander aate ha

sab bacche dur ke n ke pass ate ha

tini/aryan/rohan-mama

n-hey hey kon mama

rohan-aap mama

n-main yeh sab

r-humare bacche

n-what? mere itne sare bacche

r-ha yeh aryan yeh rohan aur yeh tini

n-oh god main pagal ho jauge

r-waise pagal tm ho he

r-sun main bahar jange tu kam kar lena

n-kam

r-ha kam ghar ke safai ,khanna banana aur baccho lo samalna

r jaata ha

n -oh god itna sara kam main kaise karunge

n pahele kitchen main jaate ha

n jaise taise sara kam karte ha

shayam ko r aata ha

r-baccho woh kaise ha

aryan-chachu hmne bohot sataya ha usko

r-kya ka kiya

aryan-main unke uper maida dal diya

r-good tune

rohan-mainne thanda pani

r-good ab aaega maza

san log dinner karte ha

next day

n subhe uthte ha fresh up hote ha

aryan-mama mujhe khanna do

n kitchen main jaate ha

rohan-mama muje omlet chaheye

aryan-mama mujhe bread chaheye

r-mujhe paratha

n pahele paratha banate ha

r-jaldi

n-ha

n omlet banate

tini-mama mujhe poty jaane ha

n-off plz give a break

tini-mama poty

aryan-omlet

r-paratha

n-aahhhhhhhhhhhh

n sab ko breakfast dete ha

r jaata ha

n ghar ka kam karte ha

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Kitne shaitaan hain saare k saare bacche Naina ko kitna pareshaan kar rahe hain.

Par is se Naina ki akal thikane jaroor aa jaayegi.

nice part.

cont. soon.

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Naina toh Raj pe bahut gussa hai!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😛

Naina toh aur 7 din rehna hoga yahan!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Aur Lalaji koi plan banata hai!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina ka boat samundar mein dub jata hai and Naina apni yaadash ko deti hai!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲O no!!!

Magar yaadash jaane ke baad bhi uske nakre nahi gaye!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ko abhi bhi mineral water chahiye!!!!😛 😛 😛 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj bahut khush ho jaata hai yeh sunke ke Naina ki yaadash chali gayi hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj ne bhi mauke ka faida uthaya aur Naina ko apni biwi bana liya!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is right ke iski yaadash toh chali gayi magar iska english bolna nahi gaya!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj bhi kya jawab deta hai ke nahi Aishwariya ke bacche!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Bacche kitna shaitaan hai!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒Saare ke saare Naina ko kitna pareshan kar rahe hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj Naina se kitna kaam kara raha hai!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Very bad!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Ab road pe thokar hi toh maari thi uske liye Raj Naina ko bahut zyada sata raha hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

This reminds me of the film Ek Ladka Ek Ladki starring Salman Khan and Neelam!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

n ghar main kam kar rahe ha aryan rohan aur tini khel rahe ha

suddenly baccho ke beech main larai hone lagte ha

n-aryan rohan

aryan-kya hua

n-eh sab kya ha tu dusre baccho ke sath larai kun kar rahe ho

aryan-shale bohot gande ha

n-what type laungage u r using aryan eh kaise bhasha bol rahe ho jaao ander

r shaam ko ghar aata ha

n-r

r-kya ha

n-tu kaise baap ho baccho ko aacha sikhsha nahin de sakte

r-off ka hua

n-aryan is using slang laungage

r-toh kya hua

n-no it is not good jab aryan bara hoga tab r tu unhe kisi school main admission kun nahin kara dete

r-kya school uthne paise mere pass nahin ha

n-aacha baccha paida kar sakte ho par unhe aache sikhsha nahin de sakte

r- jaao yahaan se

n jaate ha

r-mere shaadi nahin hua

r ka mobile bajta ha

r-ha main aa raha hu

r jata ha

n-yeh r kaha gaya

n-aran rohan tini aao dinner karlo

r raat ke 1 baje ghar ata ha

after some days

kajal-kaise ha tu

n-main thik hu

kajal-ka baat ha bol na

n-pata nahin r ko kya hua ha na toh r mere saath thik se bat karte ha na he mere saath sote ha

kajal-tu pcch r se ke kya baat ha aur ha pati hamesha aapne patni main ek premika ko dekhna chahate ha

n-hmm

n aaj ek red color ke saree pahente ha aapne haatho main choriya pahente bindi lagate ha

r raat ko jab ghar aata

n-tum aa gae

r dekhte ha n ke akhon main ek alag chamak

n room main aake door lock kar dete ha

r-tu tu yahaan kya kar rahe ha

n r ke kareeb aata ha

n-kun main nahin aa sakte

r-t jaa aapne room main

n-kun

n r ka haatho ko aapne haath main lete ha

n-main kaise lag rahe hu

r jhatak se n ko hata dete ha

n-kya hua

r-tu jaa

n-kun jaau main yahaan se aaj tumhe mujhe batana he hoga kya problem ha

r-mujhe baat nahin karne ha

n-nahin r aaj tumhe olna he hoga

n ro rahe ha

n-mujhe toh kuch yaad nahin ha plz mujhe bolo kya baat ha kya hmare beech main koi problem ha bolo plz

r bina kuch bole ghar se chala jaata ha

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Aryan used slang language toh Naina usse daanti hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊

Naina ab Raj ko bhi daant rahi hai ke usne baccho ko school kyun nahi bheja!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊

Naina kehti hai ke bacche paida kar sakta hai magar unhe acchi sikhsha nahi de sakta!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

Raj Naina ko waha se bhej deta hai aur kehta hai ke uski toh shaadi nahi huyi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Yeh Raj kaha chala jata hai??😕 😕 😕 😕

Naina toh ab baccho ka acche se dhyan rakhti hai!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is worried ke Raj usse nahi theek se baat karta hai aur nahi uske saath sota hai!!!! 😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Usse kya pata ke sach kya hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Kajal toh usse advice deti hai ke pati apne patni mein ek premika ko dekhna chahta hai!!!!😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina toh ab Raj ke liye taiyaar hoti hai aur uske kareeb jaati hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊Wow!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj toh ghabra gaya aur phir Naina ko khud se dur kar diya!!!!

Ab Naina roh rahi hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭Poor Naina!!!!

Ek woh hai jisse kuch yaad nahi aur dusra Raj jo uske kareeb jaa nahi sakta kyunki woh uska pati hai hi nahi!!!!

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

that was so good

but plz update ur other fics too plz

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

ye dhakkan Raj bhi na pati banne ka bada shaukh tha ab jhelo 😆😆😆.Kitne gande bacche hain aur kaise lingo use karte hain.😔😔😔

Jab Naina paas aa rahi hai tab ghar se bahar bhaag raha hai Naina se.😒😒😒

update soon.

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

kajal-n

n-hmm

kajal-kya hua phir se r ne kuch kaha

n-kajal main kya karu mujhse r koi baat nahin karta

kajal-n ek kam kar t aaj mere saath taklu baba ke pass chal

n-kya taklu baba

kajal-ha mere bahen ke pati bhi r ke tara bhaagta tha lekin taku baba ne sab thik kar diya

n-sach

kajal-ha

n kajal ke saath taklu baba ke asram jaate ha

taklu baba ke lal chaddi pahenne ha aur unke akhon bhi lal ha

n-aahhh

kajal-chilla kun rahe ha

n-yeh kya ha

kajal-are eh taku baba ha

kajal-baba yeh mere dost n ha

kajal-n pair chu

n -jee

taklu baba-kya hua

kajal-baba is ka pati is ke pass nahin aata ha hamesha dur bhaagta ha

taklu baba-hmmmmmmmmm

kajal-aap kuch kijie

taklu baba-beta tum he ek kam karna hoga

n-kya baba

taklu baba-tu baccha aaj raat ko jungle main jaake 1000 bar mera naam bolna hoga

n-jee baba

n ghar aate ha

aryan-mama aap kaha gae the

n-woh market

r bhi ghar aata ha

sab log dinner karte ha

baccho aur r ke sone ke bad n ghar se nikal ke jungle ke taraff jaate ha

n -oh god kitna andhera ha

n-ahhh

n -n n be brave chal

n jungle main jaake taklu baba ka nam leke lagte ha

n-taklu baba ka naam lene lagte ha

sbhe n ghar wapis aate ha

aase n roz raat ko jngle main jaake taklu baba ka naam lete ha

r aaj jaldi wapis aa gaya ha kunki news main bola ha ke aaj bohot zor ke tufan aanebala ha

sab log jaldi se dinner karke so rahe ha

n ghar se jungle jaate ha

r ka need khul jaate ha

r -oh god yeh door kis ne khulla chor diya

r-door lock karte ha

tini-papa

r-are tini aryan rohan kya hua

tini-hme darr lag rahe ha

r-kun mama toh tumhare room main so rahe ha

rohan-mama woh toh humare room main nahin sote ha

r-kya woh tumhare room main nahin sote ha

aryan-ha woh toh roz raat ko kahin jaate ha

r-kya kaha jaate ha

rohan-pata nahin

r-oh god yeh pagal kaha gaye ha

r-aryan rohan tini tum log raho main aata hu

r-off ab kaha dhundhu is pagal ko

man-kya hua r is tufanne raat tu bhar kun ghum raha ha

r-are kaka woh pagal pata nahin kaha gaye ha

man-r usse toh mainne jungle ke taraff jaate hue dekha tha

r-kya

r jungle ke taraff jaata ha

r-are naam hi nahin pata is ka

r-heyyyyyyyyyyyy

r n ko dhndhta ha

r see that n zameen main pare ha

r-are isse kya hua

r n ko godh main leke ghar aate ha

aryan-kya hua mama ko

r-aryan is ka khayal rak main dr ko leke aata hu

kuch dar bad

r dr ko leke aata ha

r-aaye dr

dr checks n

dr-fikar ke baat nahin ha inhe kuch nahin hua

n aapne akhen kholte ha

r-yeh kya pagalpan ha tu us jungle main kun gaye the

n chup ha

r-bol ab nahin toh

n-tumhare liye

r-kya

n-ha tum mujhse hamesha dur dur rahete ho isliye taklu baba ne kaha tha ke agar main roz jungle main jaake unka naam lu tab tm mujhe mil jaaoge

r-yeh sab bakwas ha

n-toh tum mujhe hamesha dur rahete ho kya baat ha

n is crying

r-dekho aasa nahin ha

n-toh kya baat ha bolo plz mujhe

r-tum aaram karo main aata hu

n is crying hard

r is feeling very helpless

r room main wapis aata ha

r dekhta ha n is crying hard

r put his hand on n's shoulder

n hugs r

r also hug n

r-plz chup ho jaao

r puts his lips on n

r kissing n with love

n is also responding to it

r n ko aapne bahon main leke bed par litta ha

n kiss r face

r is also mesmerised b n

r remove n dress aur dono ek ho jaate ha

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

chalo un gadhe taklu baba ka naam lena Naina ka safal hua aur Raj aur Naina ek ho gaye.

Naina bhi nautanki hai aur baba ka naam to sab se jyada nautanki hai vo to kuch jyada hi mahaan hain.

Kajal bhi unique hai apne aap me.

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