~Betrayed by fate~ pt 12 uptd 27/04

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Tahira

@cutie13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

gr8 intro

i wonder why armaan is in mental department

where is ridz

god too many questions in my head lol anyways

cont soon

p.s can u tell me what other fan fictions beside pardes u write

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Nruti

@arshluver_15

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Hey Hina Wow new concept i loved it It seemes very very interesting to me i m gald that u have wrot this its something new thnxs luv nruti

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Hinaaaaaaaaa!

I'm so excited for this to start! Man, that was a captivating teaser right there...I'm like longing to read more!!! Feed my hungry self Hina...lol...Jokes apart, Hina this was one awesome start! The way you explained Muskaan's curiosity to Armaan's case was unbelivable..I was intrigued right then and there..Awesome job! And then I loved how you brought in a important real life fact through Anji---"patient-doctor confidentiality."

Atul doesn't like to recall painful disasters...Hmm...why am I getting the feeling that Armaan is somehow connected to Atul?

Damn Muskaan is so curious about Armaan...She got his case files right then and there...lol....I'm loving her character!

My poor Armaan---he's mental! 😭 I wonder how he has been betrayed in love...I have a strong feeling its because of Ridz...😭

Great job Hina! I loved it completely...and to put the cherry on top, I'm actually reading this on time..lol...I'm still catching up on Pardes--hopefully, by this weekend I will be caught up since I have next week off due to Thanksgiving...

You better PM me...and if you don't, I will still check up on this FF!

Thnks Jia, NJ, Nij, and all others for your encouragement for making Hina post this...or else we would have missed out!

Love ya too Hina!🤗

Anita

Edited by anitamalik - 16 years ago

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bollywoodqueen5

@bollywoodqueen5

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

amazing intro...cant wait till you continue the story

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Hina

@hinz

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Thanks everyone for the interest and response

I sure will be putting up part 1 soon

hopefully it will give u all a bit of relief

love

Hina

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: hinanaziri
Thanks everyone for the interest and response
I sure will be putting up part 1 soon

hopefully it will give u all a bit of relief

love

Hina

You better post it soon! It would sure give me relief...lol..😆😳

Aww and thanks for those sweet compliments on my short story! I will update Jeevan Saathis this week...since I have next week off due to Thanksgiving..lol..So I will update it soon! Sorry to keep you waiting!

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Kashish

@..kashish..

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

hey hinna di..

loved the intro...

what happened to armaan..

why is he in there?

continue soon pls..

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ttimpy

@ttimpy

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

sad stories make me sad......i dont like to see armaaan in a sorry state of mind.............sob sob...........im sure u have sumthing up ur sleeve...............get going gal....lets see what u update..........lolzzzzzz