~Betrayed by fate~ pt 12 uptd 27/04 - Page 4

i dint understand it much but...
as u said its a serious love story then is it that Armaan's sorta mad here??
lolz
PM me!!!
upd8 ASAP!!
tc
hugs & luv
Nimisha

Originally posted by: spln

~~reserved~~

for my expert comments *ahem ahem*...*pulling collar up* 😎

reservd...
wil cum on sat n comment... (serious story.. bt plzz contd .. don't stop it half way..)

gr8 vm

hini...finally watched yur vm...i watched it mute in skool bfr lol!!

but aah luved it!!ya yaaa hez nt bewaffa ...i koe!!!! hez a darlin..he never does ntn...
its always d girl..cuz wen guys like armaan fall in luv....tey literally get jinxed...ahhahhh!! i wud koe ;)!!

updated ma comment too...incase u dunno...lol!!

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Originally posted by: na2339

will you guys please stop reserving and comment? Armaan has just gone into a nut house and you two are just being reserved with your opinions??? 😕

can someone please explain why Armaan is mad... and what's with Muski be sad about it... apparently doesn't know him... can humanity seriously make someone feel this bad? 😕

nice start hina, i just want to know what Ridz (pls make her the lead here and not the new meethi lady) did to drive him insane

Originally posted by: anitamalik

Hinaaaaaaaaa! Aniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii 😆

I'm so excited for this to start! Man, that was a captivating teaser right there...I'm like longing to read more!!! Feed my hungry self Hina...LMAO Ani,calm down sweety lol...Jokes apart, Hina this was one awesome start! The way you explained Muskaan's curiosity to Armaan's case was unbelivable..I was intrigued right then and there..Awesome job! And then I loved how you brought in a important real life fact through Anji---"patient-doctor confidentiality." aww thanks for noticing that Anita,and glad u liked the beginning

Atul doesn't like to recall painful disasters...Hmm...why am I getting the feeling that Armaan is somehow connected to Atul? hmmm,well u 'll know how now

Damn Muskaan is so curious about Armaan...She got his case files right then and there...lol....I'm loving her character! yeh i think i can relate the most to her,well we all nutters can lolz

My poor Armaan---he's mental! 😭 I wonder how he has been betrayed in love...I have a strong feeling its because of Ridz...😭 haha mental sounds so bad ,he may not be it afterall😉

Great job Hina! I loved it completely...and to put the cherry on top, I'm actually reading this on time..lol...I'm still catching up on Pardes--hopefully, by this weekend I will be caught up since I have next week off due to Thanksgiving... its fine Anita,just take your time,and have a fun week off

You better PM me...and if you don't, I will still check up on this FF! haha sure I'll pm u

Thnks Jia, NJ, Nij, and all others for your encouragement for making Hina post this...or else we would have missed out! aha ,tru they deserve it,thanks people lolz

Love ya too Hina!🤗

luv ya Ani

btw u are such a pretty face,good u found me on fb

Anita

Part one updated

lots of love

reserved

*edit*

di i duno how to not say im speechless to u, but il try n pass it somehow....

seriously....u were nervous abt this???LIKE REALLY??? or did u just say it so i dont build hopes too high ...i cud have actually, n u stil wud have met them n much more...its so hard to control the emtions flowing when i read this fic, n look at me talking as if its been one for ever, u only just did part 1, i feel a starnge attachement to it...i think i agree with nij, its deja vu for me, n i cant believe um saying this, for deja vu with hospital environscan never be welcome, i almost cant get enuf of it...i dint re read this part at all...there have been many things in life iv read over n over for the love of them...but very few iv read once n thats it....i think the few one time things are those i know il remember, almost by word in just that once....it happenes rarely but believe me it does.....

personally i cant tell u how much i am happy abt some facts, heres one the atul minnie bond...um glad u chnaged it from armaan minnie to atul minnin i eman armaan stil stays but oh well u know wat i mean....for another um glad ur making atul n muski characters i wud want them to be like...i wish dmg did this...like i was watching this dam old dmg epi n i relized atul was alwaz the clown but now they tunred him so brainless the humor doesnt appeal anymore...somehow this solmen side to him, which i bet is only a consequence of the gravity of the fic, essentially i think u will let him hold onto his soothe the atmostphere image, well this character of his...its incredibly drawing...anji so far i almost dislike (no hating hehe)...but she shud be so, ur literaly holding tru the char essence of what the names make u think of the chars as....

rahul muski extrememly shirt reaction but it 5touched a cord...with a nice feel to it, rahul the talker n muski usually that except rare times, we have to admit everyone has those rare times um glad u allowed muski one....

armaan n ridhima....i dun o wat to say abt them il let this wait for as long as u make me wait for the update haha...dint think u cud be the only one holding unto suspense!!!....aaron is, i duno where u picked the name, but i know for one its jewish....i loved the name when i read it another book i love...n i almost gleefully grinned reading the name, i say almost coz u dint, the scene dint let me, but i loved the name n had to tell u...


with everything else, the plot the chars, the watever...u have to know this one thing....i hold zuz n u in esteem...theres lots of potential story tellers on the forum, only u two who touch details in a professional way...nij was close in her serious fic update...but she can do better justice to the detilas..she will i think in a few parts from now it comes with doing the writing...i loved the part u must know by now....nothing to edit, i wudnt change even an ' A' in there!

n yeh 315 dil se re hahahah stop getting cheesy!!!😆