destiny will bring us together.. pt 7 upd - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Read both part... Its great.👏 Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx a lot for the lovely comments......
now i m updating the third part.... hope you all like it😊


*~VASUNDHARA~*

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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART-3

nani comes to kauslaya nivaas and finds that there is nobody in the hall but still the main door is open..... she enters in the house and goes straight to the kitchen.... and calls out kaushalya.....

"arey koshi accha hua jo tu mujhe yahaa mil gayi warna mai toh tujhe poore ghar mei dhoondhti reh jaati....."

"accha kiya maa jo aap yahaa aa gayi..... ab vinu ke lautne ki khushi hum sab saath honge....."

"aati kaise nahi, mujhe toh jaise hi vinu ki riha hone ki khabar mili waise hi mai yahaa aa gayi......"

kaushalya smiles at her and says "maa aap baithiye mai aapke liye chaai banati hu...."

"arey koshi mai yahaa chai peene nahi aayi hu balki ek bohot badi khush khabar dene aayi hu......."

"khush khabar?? kaisi khush khabar maa, saaf saaf kahiye na...."

"jaise hi mujhe vinu ke riha hone ki khabar mili na waise hi maine shishir ke gharwalo se baat ki.... aur woh chahte hai ki ab jab sab kuch thik ho hi gaya hai toh kyu na ragini aur shishir ki sagai jald hi ho jaye.... toh maine unke saath milke sagaai ki tarikh parso ki tay kardi hai...... sahi kiya na maine???"

kaushalya remains silent for a while and then says "haa maa aapne bilkul sahi kiya hai..... waise bhi ye sagayi jitni jaldi ho jaaye utna hi accha hai..... main abhi unse baat karti hu aur unse kehti hu ki sab ko invitation bhej de aur sagayi ki tayyariyaan bhi shuru kar deti hoon....." and gives her a smile.....

here in the hall mamaji was sitting on the sofa and was thinking something when sadhna comes and sits besides him and says
"mamaji kya mai aapko kuch keh sakti hu????"

"sadhna aisa kya kehna chahti
hai jiske liye tujhe mujhse ijazat leni pad rahi hai"

she kneels down and starts crying.... looking at her like this mamaji tells her to get up and asks him to sit..... she sits besides him and says
"mamaji aap log ranvir ji aur aur jiji ke saath aisa kyu kar rahe hai?? kyu mamaji... kyu???? aapne dekha na, dekha na ki ranvir ji jiji se kitna pyaar karte hai aur woh unke liye kitna badaa balidaan de rahe hai..... aur aapne jiji ka dard bhi mehsoos kiya na, woh dard jo jiji ko ranvir ji se door rehne pe ho rahi hai........ aap log jiji ko kyu ek anchahhe rishte mei baandh rahe hai, aisa rishta jisse kisi ko koi khushi nahi milegi.. na jiji ko, na ranvir ji ko aur na hi shishir ji ko aur jiji apni saari zindagi ranvir ji ke liye dard mei rahegi.... kya aap jiji ko saari zindagi dard mei dekh sakte hai??? nahi na... toh kyu aap log ranvir ji aur jiji ke shaadi ke liye raazi nahi ho rahe hai..... please mamaji.... please ranvir ji aur jiji ki khushiyan lauta dijiye... please...."

mamaji looks at sadhna and was just about to say something when he hears vinu say...
"haa bauji sadhna sahi keh rahi hai.... ragini ki khushi sirf aur sirf ranvir ji ke saath hai..... maine ranvir ji ki aakhon mei ragini ke liye bohot pyaar dekha hai aur ye mera poora bharosa hai ki ranvir ji ragini ko hamesha bohot khush rakhenge... toh aap please maa se ek baar baat kijiye na....."

while they were talking to mamaji both kaushalya and nani over hears them and nani shouts at sadhna and vinu
"ye tum dono kya keh rahe ho..... kahi pagal toh nahi ho gaye ho???

"nani hum sahi keh rahe hai... jiji ranvir ji ke alaawa kisi ke saath khush reh hi nahi sakti.... isliye un dono ko ek ho jaane dijiye please......"


BAS!!! kaushalya sceams from behind.....
"bas karo tum dono.... mujhe aur kuch nahi sunna..... maa ne shishir ke pariwaar walo ke saath milke sagayi ki tarikh parso ki karwa di hai aur koi chaahe na chaahe par shishir aur ragini ki sagaayi ho kar rahegi......"
everyone is shocked to hear this....

mamiji turns towards sadhna and says
"sadhna ab bohot raat ho chuki hai aur mujhe aisa lagta hai ki tumhe ghar janaa chahiye" saying this mamiji leaves and naniji also goes after her.....

sadhna looks at mamaji with teary eyes and she also leave the house thinking "bhagwan main aaj tak har cheez aap pe chhodke chali hu aur ab jiji aur ranvir ji ki khushiyaan bhi aap hi ke haatho hai.... please sab thik kardena......"


sorry guys no ragvir scenes but still hope u all will like it......😊

*~VASUNDHARA~*



Edited by cuty_pie - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice.. can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#25
Nice Part liked the Part where Vinu is supporting Ragvir's Rista ,I hope,Vinu does the same thing in the show also
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Posted: 16 years ago
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beautiful part Vasundra--- loved it Vinu supporting RagVir relationship i hope we see this in the actual show it wud b nyc!!

Luv,

Shagun
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
I thought part 3 was updated..?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great part 👏 👏 👏 ...... I really like the originality of characters in your fiction
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
Brilliant update!👏
I love that Vinu is sticking up for Ragvir too.
Update soon, can't wait for the next part.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I am happy that vinu is supporting ragvir. Waiting for the next part..^_^

Edited by sandy92 - 16 years ago

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