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Posted: 16 years ago
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aawwwwww my cute lil sis vasu............its very nice.......keep it up!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx a lot everyone for appreciating me........
frm past few days i was a bit busy b'coz of pressure from skool n coachings so thats y cud not actually think of nething....
but i've started working on the next 2 parts n will update by tonight......

hope u all will like them......😊


*~VASUNDHARA~*
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART-4

Next morning at rajvansh house at the dining hall everyone gathered for the breakfast ........ everyone was there except ranvir........ inder and finds ranvir missing so he asks
"sadhna, ranvir kahaa hai... sab log aa gaye bas ranvir hi nahi hai"

"ji woh ranvir ji kal kaafi tired the juske wajah se woh aaj subah late uthe hai..... unhone kahaa hai ki aap sab beakfast kar lijiye woh baad me karlenge....."

inder senses that nothing is ok with ranvir..... he gets sad to see his son's condition and gives vasu a cold look and says "dekho vasu tumne kya kar diya.... ranvir tired hone ke wajah se late nahi hua hai balki dukh aur dard ke karan sabse door bhaag rahaa hai.... tumhe ye sab karke kya mila...... kuch nahi na par tumne apne bete ko hamesha ke liye kho diya hai......"

sadhna interrupts in between and says "please papaji abhi is baare mei kuch ma kahiye kahi ranvuir ji ne sun liya toh unka mood aur off ho jayega....."

she pauses for a while and then says
"waise mujhe aap logo ko initation dena tha..... kal jiji ki sagayi hone waali hai aur mamaji ne kahaa tha ki mai aap sabko invite kardu...... ashaa hai ki aap sab mamaji aur mamiji ki khushi mei shaamil honge"

Ambika smiles at sadhna and says "hum zaroor jayenge sadhna.... tumhare maayke ki khushi mei hum bhi shaamil honge"

vasu again gets irritated by this and says "jisko jaana hai jaa sakta hai hum kisiko rokenge nahi par hume wahaa jaane ke lye koi force nahi karega...... hume iske alawaa dusre bhi important kaam hai......"
she says this and she leaves......
inder nodes his head and says "kuch bhi ho jaaye, vasu ka ghamand nahi tutne waala aur ek din ye usse zaroor le dubega....."


here in kaushalya nivaas mamaji and mamiji were discussing about ragini's sagayi........
mamiji looks at the clock and says "suniye ji 11 toh yahi baj gaye, agar hum abhi nahi nilenge sabko nyota dene toh kaise chalega.... suniye aap ragini ko jaake keh ke aayiye ki woh sadhna ke saath jaake uske kapde aur baaki ki zaruri cheeze leke aaye tab tak hum sabki nyota deke aa jate hai.... is bahaane woh bahaar bhi ho aayegi......"

"thhek hai aap tayyar ho jayiye mai ragini se baat karke aata hu........."

ragini was cleaning up her room when she hears someone knocking the door...... she opens it
"bauji aap........ kuch kaam tha kya????"

"haa beta woh kya hai na mai aur teri maa, hum na zaraa jaan pehchaan waalo ko aur rishtedaaro ko kal ki sagayi ke liye nyota dene jaa rahe hai.... toh tu sadhna ke saath jaake zara sagayi ke kuch zaruri cheeze aur apne kapde leke aa jayegi......."

"ji bauji mai sadhna ke saath chali jaungi......" and she turns back

mamaji could clearly feel that ragini was not ready for the marriage and she was sad too......

after mamaji and mamiji left ragini called sadhna

sadhna was in her room with aalekh when the phone rang.....
she went and picked up the phone

"hello..."
"hello sadhna, mai bol rahi hu....."

"haa, jiji kahiye....."
"woh kya hai na sadhna..... ma aur bauji ko zaraa bahar jaana pada jiske wajah se mujhe sagayi ki saari cheeze aur apne kapde lene jaana hai..... tum chalogi mere saath...."

"jiji ye koi poochne waali baat hai...... aap tayyar rahiye mai thode der mei aapko pick kar lungi aur phir hum saath mei chalenge...."
"theek hai sadhna mai tayyar ho jaati hu tum jaldi aa jao......"

and they both disconnect the phone.....

sadhna turns back and goes to aalekh and says "aalekh ji mujhe na jiji ke saath zaraa bahar jaana hoga..... toh aap apna khayal rakhiyega...... waise toh mai jaldi aa jaungi par aapko kisi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh aap chhoti ma se pooch lijiyega..... aur......
aalekh cuts her in middle and says
"tum bhi na dost..... mai ab badaa ho gaya hu, mai apna khayal rakh sakta hu..... tum na apna aur apni jiji ka khayal rakhna ..... tumhari jiji kitni sad hai na , mai jaanta hu , par tum na sab theek kar dena theek hai....." and he kisses her forehead........
sadhna smiles at him and she leaves....... she reaches the hall and at the same time ranvir comes out of his room........ he finds sadhna going somewhere so he calls her and asks
"bhabhi aap kahi jaa rahi hai........ aap kahe toh mai aapko chhod du?????"

"woh ranvir ji mai jiji ke paas........"

ranvir cuts her immediately and with a tensed looks he asks

"ragini ke paas, woh theek toh hai na bhabhi, usse kuch hua toh nahi na, bhabhi kya hua bataiye na......"

"ranvir ji, jiji bilkul theek hai unhe kuch nahi hua hai.... wpj unhe sagayi ke kapde aur thodi aur cheeze leni thi toh mai unke saath jaa rahi hoon........"


as soon as he hears that ragini is getting engaged he completely shatters and looks at sadhna and asks
"bhabhi ragini ki sagayi...... par kab??? aapne mujhe abhi tak kyu nahi bataya???"

"ranvir ji, jiji ki sagayi kal ho rahi hai aur jiji is rishtey se bilkul khush nahi hai..... aur khush ho bhi toh kaise pyaar toh woh aapse karti hai na......"

"jaanta hu bhabhi...... par mai karu bhi toh kya mai usse jaan bujh kar koi dukh nahi dena chahta...... ab toh bas kisi chamatkar ka intezaar hai......"

"accha ranvir ji ab mai chalti hu warna mujhe late jayegi aur aapko bhi chalna chahiye warna aap bhi late ho jaayenge......"

"bhabhi mai aapko chhod deta hu chaliye...."

"nahi ranvir ji aap chale jaiye, mai chali jaungi...."


"bhabhi please, please chaliye is bahaane mai ek baar ragini ko dekh toh lunga......"

sadhna looks at ranvir and realises that he is dying to meet ragini and she cant see him in so much pain anymore...... so she decides to go with him ..........

hope you all like it😊😊..... will update the next part by tommorow.😊😊....

*~VASUNDHARA~*



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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Yay!😃
I just saw that you updated and got really excited!😃 I love your FF.
I haven't read it yet but i'll comment once i have.
Just read it. What a place to stop!😡😆
Brilliant update, loved every part of it. It's so realistic.👏
I especially loved Inder telling Vasu off, it was great. If only he'd done that more often and earlier on in his marriage maybe she wouldn't be the twisted, misguided mother she is today.
Update soon
Edited by Ragvir4ever - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice part can't wait for your next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great update...dying to read the next part
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice update. Waiting eagerly for the next part.👏

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PART-5

Ragini open the cupboard and looks at her dresses..... she finds a suit and takes it out (its the same red suit that she wore when she went to meet ranvir as anmol........ after she wears it she goes and sits infront of the dressing table and wears the bangles..... while putting the bangles she constantly stares at the mirror and thinks "pichle baar jab ye pehna tha tab ranvir se milne ki khushi thi par ab unse bicchadne ka gam...." she keeps on thinking about ranvir when she hears the door bell ring......
she thinks "shayad sadhna aa gayi..... mujhe jaldi karna hoga......"

meanwhile in the hall malti goes opens the door and is surprised to see sadhna.... she asks her to come in and says "arey sadhna tu yahaa..... jhoot toh mai bolti nahi par kuch dino se tera yahaa kuch zyaada hi aana jaana nahi ho raha hai...... kahi tu fir se ragini aur ranvir ko milaane ki koshish toh nahi kar rahi hai????"

"nahi bhabhi aisi koi baat nahi hai..... woh jiji ko sagayi ki cheeze lene jaani thi toh jiji ne mujhe apne saath chalne ko kahaa isliye mai yahaa aa gayi....."


"jhoot toh mai bolti nahi, mai bhi toh is ghar ki member hu par kisi ke liye koi importance nahi..... ragini mujhe bhi toh bol sakti thi na......"

ragini comes in the hall and hears everything that malti says to sadhna.....

"woh kya hai na bhabhi sadhna jo hai woh aap nahi ho...... aur woh sirf meri behen hi nahi balki meri sabse acchi dost bhi hai aur usse zyaada meri pasand aur kaun jaan sakta hai....."

"haa sahi hai..... sadhna bhale hi is ghar se door ho fir bhi har kisi ko sadhna ki hi padi rehti hai...."


ragini gets irritated by the way ,malti behaves with sadhna..... she was about to reply her back when sadhna stops her and says "jiji hame der ho rahi hai.... hum chale...."

"haa sadhna chalo.........." she gives a cold look to malti and they both leave.....

they both walk towards the car but ragini doesn't even speaks a word and looks down on the ground.... sadhna feels realy sad for ragini and asks her "jiji sab theek hai na????"

"haa sadhna sab theek hai par tum kyu pooch rahi ho......"

"aapko dekhke aisa lagaa ki aap kisi musibat mei ho...."

"nahi aisi koi baat nahi hai...."

they both reach the place where the car was parked..... ranvir opened the front door and saw sadhna standing and ragini was standing behind her...... sadhna understood that the door was opened for ragini so she moved from there and opened the back door..... ragini was still standing there and a soft wind blew and her dupatta flew she lifted her face to get the dupatta and ranvir's eyes just got fixed at her face...... he could not take his eyes off from ragini..... ragini finally stood near the car and got inside..... she sat and saw ranvir sitting next to him....... sadhna looked at ranvir told him
"ranvir ji chale...."

"ji bhabhi........" and ranvir started the car......

ragini was feeling a bit uncomfortable to sit next to ranvir and she became more conscious because ranvir was continuously staring at her..... ragini tried to avoid it thats why she kept on looking out of the window....

suddenly sadhna called ranvir..... "ranvir ji maine yahaa aalekh ji ki kuch paintings frame karwaane di thi aur aaj un paintings ko lena hai toh aap log yahaa thoda sa rukiye mai abhi leke aayi......"

Ragini became more uncomfortable as she was now alone with ranvir...... she was looking down and was playing with her dupatta and there was a strange silence in the environment.... ranvir was staring at her and he could easily feel that ragini was a bit uncomfortable so to break up the silence he suddenly said.......
"ragini agar tumhe bura na lage toh tumhe ek baat batau....... jis ladke se tumhari shaadi hone waali hai na woh ladka bohot lucky hai kyunki usse tum jaisi life partner mili........" then he turned towards the window and said par kisi kisi ke kismat mei ye khushi likhi hi nahi hoti hai......"

Ragini knew that he was talking about himself and after listening to this she tried to control herself from not looking at ranvir but could not help her...... she lifted her face and looked at ranvir with teary eyes...... ranvir also looked into her eyes......... they both gazed at each other and were completely lost in each other's eyes..... a tear rolled down from ragini's cheek and she came back to her sense and again started looking down.........

Ranvir again looked and kept his hand on ragini' hand and ragini's heart skipped a beat....... though she didn't want to show her pain but couldn't help herself so she just closed her eyes and as she closed her eyes a drop of tear fell on ranvir's hand..... ranvir sensed that something is surely wrong....

he looked at her again and asked "ragini ek baat bataana... tum is rishtey se khush toh ho na...."

"maa, bauji is rishtey se bohot khush hai aur mai unki khushi ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hu......."

"aur tumhari khushi.. tumhari khushi koi maayne nahi rakhti......"

"ranvir please mujhe is baare mei koi baat nahi karni hai....." and she opens the door and goes out and stands near a tree......


ranvir felt that he should not have made her cry and he also opens the door and goes behind ragini....... ragini was standing behind a tree and her back was towards ranvir..... ranvir goes there and keeps his hand on her shoulder.....

"ragini tumhe hurt karna mera intention nahi tha..... par kya karta tumhe dukhi bhi toh nahi dekh sakta na.... tum chaahe jitna mujhse chhupaane ki koshish karlo par mai jaanta hu ki tum kitni dukhi ho...... mai jaanta hu ki tumse door rehne pe jitna mai tadap raha hu utna hi tum bhi tadap rahi ho mujhse door rehne pe....."

ragini could not control her feelings anymore and she turned towards ranvir and bursted out in tears and hid her face on ranvir's chest..... for a wahile ranvir didn't know wat to do but then he held ragini tightly in his arms........ ragini was still crying and ranvir moved his hands through ragini's hair and kissed her forehead...... ragini was still in his arms....

"ranvir aapse door rehna mere liye kitna mushkil hai ye mai aapko bataa bhi nahi bataa sakti..... aap meri zindagi ho, meri khushi ho, mere liye bhagwaan ka woh tohfa jisse paakar meri zindagi ki sabse badi khushi mil gayi hai....
main aapse bohot pyaar karti hu par mai kya karu mere maa bauji ke prati jo farz hai woh mai kaise bhool jaau....."

"mai jaanta hu ragini..... isliye maine aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya jisse kisi ko bhi koi bhi dukh pohoche...... aur kal tum kisi aur ki ho jaogi aur mai sirf aur sirf tumhare aur tumhare pariwaar ke liye tumhe hamesha ke liye kisi aur ka hote dekhunga......"

"ranvir kal chae kuch bhi ho mai apki rahu ya nahi par abhi jo pal hum saath mei bita rahe hai unhe mujhse mat chheeniye..... ye kuch pal zindagi kaatne ke liye mere liye bohot hogi....."
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and she remains in ranvir's arm.....



HOPE YOU ALL WILL LIKE DIS PART......😊

*~VASUNDHARA~*



Edited by cuty_pie - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Fantastic creation Vasundhra .. You have beautiful imagination. its simply awesome!! :p
keep it coming :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I wud read the part 2mrw and comment so sorry for keeping u guys wait fr cmeent !!

Luv,

Shagun

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