'Desires' AR ff-Part 6(pg 19)July 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow amazing concept and i loved the part,please pm na,i be online for short time,my request once again
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwwwwwww.that was superb...
very nice...
loved it..
plz continue soon and plz do pm wen u update!! :D
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Hey Kanu!!!!

Hats off 2 u...wonderful concept...totally different 4m others...AR's love is lost among the crowd...actually to be precise, its there but ego n anger sometimes takes over it...lolz i hope u understand what i mean...i hope im making sense....anyway update soon, i cant wait 2 read more...once again im loving this wonderful piece 4m u


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wowwwww..nice one...
cont soon..& plzz pm me wenever u update nxt
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heyyyyy Kanu plz update the part na..... ab aur intarzaar karwaogi....
Plz update na... Eagerly waiting for ur next update.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks everyone for your supporting comments shud rather say compliments .


Im really sorry wont be able to reply to each of you individually due to wrapping up at college .

once again sorry for delaying it ...will be posting new part shortly
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Part 2
This one thought was enough for her to keep her awake for nights. But like everything that was happening since these 3 years this was a part of it too, the way they looked at things.

The first couple of weeks went great as they were so much excited about their marriage they didnt realized each others different living habbits and things were certainly not same as they appeared in courtship. It wasnt that they didnt knew about this , they surely had talked with each other about how they live .

And they always convinced each other and their self that they can handle. It was just in talks till the time they got married.

Armaan was all used to live in a mess as he knew he will be the one taking care of it whereas Ridhima was more on the organized front she needed everything in its place. And this usually worked as catalyst in their fights.

He didn't care before marriage as he knew he will be the one taking care of it , and after marriage he didn't coz he knew she is there to take care of his things. No doubt she did for couple of weeks, but he wasn't used to organized things and always had hard time finding them and then he ends up in shouting at her. Ridhima wouldn't take any screaming and would answer him back.

And with every passing day they increased and increased without an end to it .At first she would feel happy when armaan wud pacify her with his sweet romantic gestures.

But with time his gestures started to make her feel uncomfortable as if nothing was left in their relation.

Whenever she would ask to go for a movie or shopping, he would reject the idea saying that he prefer to spend that precious time with her in their bed getting cozy with each other. During their courtship he wud go with her shopping and movies coz they had no other option or in better words no other way they could spend time together.

For her it was her feel that the physical relation was keeping their bond whereas for Armaan was other way around . He believed in no matter how much they fight all the day ,on no matter how petty things ,but they wont let the fights come to their bedroom. He always believed that all the fights can be voided with a sweet gesture of love and thats what he was trying now also.

Both of them were right with their thinking, no one was to be blamed. One thing was true for sure they didn't tried collaborating the thinkings and efforts to make their relationship work.

Armaan wasn't among those who would give up easily even this night he made a second try as he swept his arms against her with slowly moving his arm over her tilted waist and hugged her from back resting his chin on her shoulders.

"Ridhima so gayi kya ?"the way he whispers in her ears she hated the most , because she always knew she wont be able to control her feelings no matter what she was thinking , even if it was about the same thing disturbing her.

But his one blow on her ear would be enough to bring her all hidden DESIRES.
And she turned her back to face his cute adorable face.

Leaving behind all the fights and complaints they were there like every night making love.

As the morning showered its blessings on him, he woke up but got restless seeing his ridhima missing from bed.

Looking for his jaan he reached the living room and was shocked and confused to see a suitcase.

To be cont..............
Edited by *Kanu* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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woooooow grt part really good pls continue soooooon
can you plss pm me when you update??
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Kanu really sweet but realistic part. A part of every couples life.
wow what an observation. Good going .Keep it up. Plz pm me
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow she leaving???
Great part Kanu
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