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Posted: 16 years ago
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Episode 21-

Nish gets a call from her agent while on their way home from the mall.
Agent- Hello? Nisha?
Nisha- yes liz
Agent- I've just got you a book signing in Tokyo next week!!
Nish- next week?? And where is it? WOW ive never been to tokyo before😃
agent- YES this will be great.
Nish- Uh.. yes. I know. Now when next week? Liz email me all the details ok I'm kind of usy right now 😛
Agent- NISHA
Nish- yes liz😭
Agent- I went thru a lot of crap to get u this signing and u are going to listen to mehh😡
Nish- yes liz😭
Agent- Now... write down everything I tell you
Nish- yes liz 😆
Agent- blah blaha lalala bla blaaa blalalalala la
Nish- blah blaha lalala bla blaaa blalalalala la 😲
Agent- ok thats all u get everything?
Nish- yup 😃
Agent- Now pack ur bags Nish, we're going to HONG KONG 😎
Nish- u mean tokyo
Agent- TOKYO 😎
Nish- yaaa baby can i bring shalu 😎
agent- sure y not 😎
nish- OKAAAYYY 😎
agent- yaaa😆
Nish- Now Liz? Why is your voice a lil... diffrent today haan😲
Agent- diffrent... 😳
Nish- yes diffrent
Agent- I dont know what you are alkng abouttt😡
Nish- just a question liz😲
Agent- I just gave u this AWESOME book signing and now u are accusing me of having a phony voice huhhhhhh😡
Nish- no liz😭
Agent- ok good. now.. ciao
Nish- ciao liz😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Episode 22~
Note- Sorry guys.. I lost the notebook that had my Idiots ka jalwa outline. Am gonna have to write this from memory now...😆
Shalu and Nishu start shopping more for their trip to tokyo. Another huge shopping spree except this time it's for things they actually need 😆
They buy new bags n jewelry and clothes and cell phoneeee 😎 And junk food and more clothes 😎
Nish- We are going to tokyo TONIGHT
Shal- oh yeah baby
Nishu and Shalu go to the airport and go to the shops and buy bubble gum😳 Now they are all ready for their trip lol.
on the plane-
Shal- nish am scared😭
Nish- why yaar its only plane
Shal- we're all gonna DIE😭😭
Nish- who said tha😲
Shal- I never got to tell my mum... nd my dad i loveed themmmm waaah😭
Nish- chill dude😆 There's like... one in a billion chance of this plane going down 😲 (i think)
Shal- Give me some sprite
Nish- uhh😆
Shal- NOW😡
Nish- ok okkkkk 😲
Shalu swallows the whole can of pop
Nish- wow shal u were this thirsty
Shal- nishuuuuuuuu😡
Nish- now what😡
Shal- am so scared and nervous I need more to drink to get my mind off of this
Nish- oh geez😡 U never told me.. u afraid of flying😡 its ok 😆 everything will be alright i'll get more sprite
shal- ok thanks😳
Nishu goes to air hostess to ask for more sprite when she sees the same mother and kid that they saw at the arena. they are giving her evil stares😆
finally nish going back to seat and gives shal 3 cans of pop.
Nishu think*- ok this will keep her for a while 😃
shal swallows them again 😲
nish- shaluuuuuuu what is this huuuhhhhh😡 im trying my best u know... now i have to go all the way back to get more spriteeee😭
nish- shalu??... where are u 😲
shal playing with lil kid in the back seat 😆
nish- oh god what is this 🤣 oh well.. as long as it keeps her occupied am fine.
suddenly plane starts talking no im joking😆
person announces*- Hello everyone and thank you for chosing Swiss air😳 blah bla bla bla lala blahhaa? bala ahhaha lalal blah😳 We will be taking off soon make sure your luggages and crap are safely secured for take off. No smoking bla bala bla. We (hostess lol) are here for anything you might need so just ask us. Now have a wonderful flight😳
Nish- ok shaluuu😃 I safely secured our crap lets go
Nish n Shal put on seat belts on... drink and food ready... oh yeaaah... camera ready 😎
hostess- Im sorry mam but you cant use cameras during take off
Nish- huhhhhhh 😲😡 oh come on its not that bad... u know😳
Hostess- please put it away until after
Nish- after what 😲 --- Shal interupts: nishuuuu just put the dang camera away😡
Nishu and Shalu spend like the rest of the 6 hours or so bugging the air hostesses for more sprite and playing with lil kid (his name is Jimmy) and going to the bathroom because of all the sprite😆
Landing in Tokyo-
author note- omg i think my chinese neighbors are fighting outside i can hear them thru the window 🤣 ok now to story
Announcer: ohayou gozaimasuuuu ?????????? tokyooooo????????????????????????????????????????? tokyoooooo??? 😆
Nish- haaai... shalu... we made it 😲
*both look out window*
Shal n Nish- woooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww😲
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43
Episode 23
Shalu and Nishu going around Tokyo eating rice n stuff.. this song is play in background:
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-vshjzMiRa0[/YOUTUBE]


Dekakeru mae ni nakushita katahouuuuu no piasu
Kyou to iu hi wa fukanzen na mama😆 hashiridasu
Konna ame no naka tada matte iru😲
Sono hito ga watashi wo kanzen ni suru no

You're so wonderful
You're soaking wet. so what?😆
You're so wonderful

chandini- I love this song its so cool I promise u will love it too 🤣
Some where in Siberia.....
Sania ali sadia and hinna trapped in underground cave
sania- oohhhhhh the pain😭
sadia- mummyyyy😭😭
hinna- 😔
ali- ugh... this sucks
sania- i need my mom.. and kinny😭 omg.. how long have we been here my kinnyyyyyyyy😭 i hope he is well
hinna- shh guys am praying
ali- maybe if I hit the rock water will come 😲
sadia- 😡
sania- this is no time for joke... oh God nothing wil come when u hit the rock 🤣
Tokyo~
Nish gets text msg from her agent confirming the book signing in Kyoto
nish- whaaa i thought signing was in tokyo
shal- oh well when are we leave😆
few hrs later.....
Nisha and Shal arrive at the book signing place... everything is like... nothing there😲
nish- wow this is sooo weird shal... there is like nothing there😲 and hey wheres my chips go😡
shal-
nsih- shaluuuuuuuuuu😡
shal- well u see
nihs- oh forget it lets go 😆
They go into the building but theres nothing in the room... Just 3 windows on both sides on the walls and the blinds are open a lil otherwise nothin there😲
Nish- Oh GEeez nothing here too (their foot steps are in echo)
Shal- are u sure we're at the right place?
nish- ya this is it
Nish and shal walk a few more steps in an.d... all ov a sudden the floor breaks through
Both are screaming 😲
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh🤣
gonna continue later
try to guess what happens😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44

Episode 24~

The happening😲

Nishu and shalu fell thru the floor and started screaming 🤣
Then after a few minutes they fall to the ground..
both are burned out😆
nish- ooohhh the pain😭
shal- oohhh the burn😭
Suddenly everything lights up and opens up into a huge arena and they hear a small voice getting louder and louder...
Voice: Mwahahahhaa
Nish and Shalu looked around
Voice: I've got you I've got you!!! You thought you could get away from me haaan...😡
Nishu is so scared... she start laugh🤣
Shalu start laugh too🤣
Voice: How dare you laugh at ME😡
Shal- .....🤣🤣
Nish- anddddd who u r?😲
The voice uncovers herself with a huge blanket thingy and voila
Voice: I am.... GRANNY
everyone shocked😲😲😲
Nish- granny...?😲 Granny what happened to u
Shal- and what big ears you have
Nish- and such a big noseeee...😲
Granny- Oh you are making fun of me now
Shal- Just tell us... why we are here and what u doing with us😡
Granny- I have a request... you guys will be sooo shocked man😲😆 Anyways, I am holding something very valuable that I think you might want back.
All of sudden a spotlight shines on Sania. She's tide up with duck tapes on her mouth😆
Sania- mamammmhmhmhmhmhma😡😲
Nish and Shal are speechless
Granny- Sania.. 😈
Shal- you wouldntt..😲 give her back😡
Granny- AHA but you see my dear... I have not made my request yet?😳
Nish- ahaaaaaaan 😡
Granny- You can have your Sania back... in exchange for her kinny
*da da daaan*😆
Sania duck tapes fall off and she says: Noooo not my kinnyyy😡 You can have me but let my Kinny go 😭
Granny- Make the desicion😈
Sania- You guys..am begging u... we all will have to DIE first am not gonna give away mine Kinny😡😃
Nishu- ughhhhhhhhhhhhhh whyyy sania this is for all of us not just u
shal- sanu stop being so selfish😡 Your Kinny doesnt even love u😲
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
Hey Nishi..nice update yaar..
I did'nt unnersan ow Sania..Sadia n Ali got trapped wid the Granny..!!
I wonder wt will happen next..
Awesome story..n a lot of fun 2 read..!!
Keep rockin!!
Aish ;)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: aish_punk

Hey Nishi..nice update yaar..

I did'nt unnersan ow Sania..Sadia n Ali got trapped wid the Granny..!!
I wonder wt will happen next..
Awesome story..n a lot of fun 2 read..!!
Keep rockin!!
Aish ;)

thanks so much😃
ya am gonna explain that coming up 😉😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Episode 25
Sania- how can u say this.. my kinny loves me😡
nishu- he didnt even call or text😡😆
shal- yaaa... he doesnt care about u sania come on... u have to let him go if u want to live😭
sania- but i dont want to live if it means going on without my kinnyyy😡
nishu-ughhh😡
ali and sadia get spotlights on them too😲
shal- omg sadi n ali😲😆 wow this is so random dont u think nish😆
nish- yeah man😆 hey i have an idea...but wait.. where is Hinna? everyone is here except her
Hinna walks in thru a lonnggggg pathway with lots of color spotlights on her and shes wearing expensive saree 😆
everyone shockeddd
Hinna (holding plate)- Here is your cookie Madam *bowing*
Granny- Thank you Ms. Hinna. You may return to your quarters now😊 But first..would you like to say hello to your old friends?
Hinna turning around dramatically...
Hinna-😲😲😲
Nish n shal jaws dropping
Hinna- Nisha..sharlene..? Is that really you😲
Nish- hinnaaaaaaaa😭
shal- hinna we thought u are gone😭 aww we missd u😭😭
nish- ya but what happened😲
Hinna- Ever since I have started working with Ms. Granny I have had a better life. Better clothes food. People treat me with respect here.
Nish- but always treat you with respect
Hinna- oh yah u did😡😡😡
shal- come on tell us.. what did we ever do to u😆
Hinna- Lets not repeat the past
Nish- but hinnu😲
Hinna- DONT call me Hinnu😡 Now go into the corner and DIE. rascal😡
Nish- but pleaseeeeeee😭 am begging u😭
Hinna- uff not again😆 Here... take this cookie. It's all I have left. You can have it.
Hinna throws the cookie sideways (like really cool throwing) and it hits Shalu on the forhead 🤣
Hinna turning around back dramatically to say one more thing wind is blowing in eveyone faces and soft music is playing in background
Nish n Shal shedding little tears
😆
Hinna- You guys mean nothing to me. Get get out.
Back at the real Liz's house-
Liz thinking.. hmm I havent heard from Nisha in a long time maybe I should cal her up.
Liz.. swinging in chair slowly and on the phone😆
But no answer.. its just keeping ringing.. nd ringing...
Liz- hmm thats wierd nishu always has her cell on 🤔
Granny- And now you see.. This was all a trick.. Liz never called u it was ME 😈
Nish- this is terrible😭
Shalu- man... what are we gonna do now
Nish- wait.. i have an idea
shal and nish start whispering to each other
*whisper whspier...chuckle chuckle😆*
nish whispering- now when i say go throw the cookie
Granny continuing with her speech
Granny- And thats how I got to be this powerful😳😆
Nish- go
Shal- oohhhhhh ooops what is this happening to mehhh omgg i am throwing this cookie am out of controoolllll😲🤪 *throws cookie*
Nish- cant stop laugh 🤣🤣🤣
Cookie hits Granny in the butt🤣
Shal- omg 🤣 run nish run get the knife to untie them🤣
Nish n shal hurry soooooo fast to get everyone out
Everyone untied and everything😆
Sadia- But what about Hinna?
Ali- she doesnt love us anymore remember😔
Sania- but we should at least tryyyyy😲
Shal- yeah we should... That cookie should last a little longer... I threw it so hard😲
Nish- ok guys lets go 👏
Everyone starts running down the same pathway down the halls and find Hinna sitting in the corner brushing her hairs
Hinna- guys?😲
Nish- come on Hinna ji we've come to rescue u😲
Hinna- it workeddddddd I knew you guys could do it 😃😃😃
Shal- do what?😆😆
Hinna- I threw that cookie at you so that u guys could hit Granny in the balls😲
Shal- the balls😲
Nish- omg🤣
Sadia- well they didnt get the balls they got the backside🤣
Sania- so u still love us😲😡
Hinna- of courseeee I love you 🤗
everyone hug each other🤗
Hinna- close enough now lets runnnn
Ali- lekin kahaaaaan😡😆
Hinna- Granny has secret tunnels leading all over the world over here follow mehhh 😆😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Episode 26~
Hinna- Come on guys!! Follow... mehhhhh😲
Shalu,Nishu, Sadia, Ali, Sania, and Hinna all going throught a long hallway with lots of doors on either side...
Shalu opens one door...
Hinna- NO dont touch that that leads to Indonesia😡
*screams coming out of the door*😆
Nishu- ooooo... what does this one lead to?😳
Nih opens door..: omg no way😲
Shal- what happened
both are looking thru..
Sania sees this.. : Is this ShaNg ri LA?😲
Ali is trying to catch up with everyone but he trips and his pants fall😆
Hinna- ok here we go 😊
everyones mouth falls
Nish- Dont u think... this slide is a little steep😲
Ali- slide😲
Shal- ooh YA this will be fun 😎
Hinna- now off u go everyone..😲 *shoving everyone down the slide*
Everyone screaminggggggggg🤣
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Nishu and sania and sadia and ali all go down the slide... screaming😆 but then Nish,shalu, and sania get separated into one part of da slide and sania and ali go into the other😲 u might be thinking HUUhhh?
🤣
now.. take a few mins to take this all in😆🥱
Note- from now there will be 2 parts I will be taking turns to write. Sania, and ali's part... and then sania, nish, and shal's part. There will be 2 parts because they get separted and end up in diffrent countries. I was just gonna take turns to write and have you guys figure out what was happening but then I remembered... some of my readers are quite SLOW😲😆😆
sorry for the short update guys
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Quick message:
I apologize for the way Idiots ka Jalwa has been going on 😛 A lot has been going on and I haven't exactly got my thoughts all together. I've been really busy with h/w and other things going on here... everything is so confusing😆 I've been under a lot of stress too. I think it's been really affecting my writing I know every few weeks/months I give this message saying with all these excuses that im under so much stress bla bla😆😆😆
Idiots ka Jalwa updates will be back in a few weeks.
Until then... just chill yaar chill 😎😆
But you guys have become so close to me lately... I might as well tell you. I'm actually thinking of ending Idiots ka Jalwa. Like I said in the begining, there's really no point in it. And then the people I'm writing about don't care.. It just seems pointless I'm sorry. It's not a final desicion though I'm just thinking about it. Let me know what you guys think.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Episode 27

Sania and Ali make their way up through the tunnel
Sania- ufff its so small in here hurry up
Ali- im trying
Sania- it would be so easier if u werent so fatttttttttt😡😡
Ali- its not fat its muscle😡
sania- u know what...😡
Ali- there I got it
they open up the lid and it turns out to be some man hole thing😆
Sani and Ali get up from it
Cars beeping and planes flying and balloons eveywhere😲
sania gets mud splashed from the car
Sania- HEyyyy watch it😡
Ali- (water balloon smacked his face😆)
Sania- (potinging and him and laughing) u gott... water all over urself.
Ali- 😡
Sania- it looks like u... no1🤣
Ali- and.. u look like no2 on ur pants😲🤣
Ali- j'en ai marre😡
sania- HUh😲
Ali- come on lets go... here we are standing like IDOT in the middle of the street
Sania- yeah lets go😛
(after some time)
they find out from some person that they are in Belgium
Sania- U better buy me a waffleee😲
Ali- I cant yaar someone took mine credit card
Sania- Yeah im gonna get a waffle and u...u gonna buy it
Ali- no credit card saniaaaaaa😡😡😡
Sania- so😲😡 u can earn money... other ways u know😳
Ali- what other ways. and why u blushing
Sania- oohhh nuffin😳
Ali- ewwwwwww that is sSick😡 ughhh Why do I have to be stuck in Belgium with this
Sania- this what
Ali- this girl
Sania- girl😲 is this all u can come up with
Ali- I want to say more but its ot apporporaite for the readers
Sania- whattttt am so confuseddddddddddddddddd🤣
Ali- anyways why waffle
Sania- we're in belgium
Ali- no way
Sania- yes ali didnt u know😲
ali- 😉
Sania- uff... anyways u know.. belgium is famous for da waffles
Ali- and I have to buy it😡
Sania- haaaaaan😲😳
Other side
Nishu shalu, and sadia end up going through the top of the tunnel and then to the outside world😆
Shal- man where are we...
Sadia- lookkk tulips😲
Nish- We're somewhere in Europe. I hope we're in Germany
Shalu- um i dont think we're in Germany Nish...
Nish- ohh... I guess thats ok...
Shalu- Nish come here for a second
Nish nd shalu go to separat place alone so sadia cant hear
Shalu- I have something... I need to tell you Nish
Nish- uh oh😲😆 ok u can tell me
Shal- I know how much u've been wanting to go to Germany but...
Nish- but what di😲
Shal- we're in the...um how u say. opposite of Germany
Nish- omg... the opposite of Germany whats that😭
Now they hear lil kid throwing newspapers screaming in Dutch
Shalu- we're in...
Nish- The Netherlands.
~*end*~
da da DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAn😲
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