Idiots ka Jalwa- episodes 28 & 29 on page 8

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chandni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

shalu and nishu decide that they will check into a hoel for the night. (it doesnt matter that they are under aged😆)

shalu order lots of room service... tons of expensive food and drinks and movies... she charges it all on Ali's credit card😎

nishu flops onto the bed and starts snoring😆

but shalu....😡

she turns up the tv real loud and starts dancing🤣

nish- shaaaaaaluuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu im sleepingggggggg😡

shalu cant hear over the noise😆

nish starts throw pillows

shal-😲 what did u do😲

nish- i threw pillow😲

shal- *grabbing 10 pillows*

nish- aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh🤣

shalu beating the crap outa her🤣

*knock knock knock*

shalu n nishu stop immediately😲

who could it be....😲

they just stand there like idiots😆

*knock knock knock*

nishu slowly walks to door... and looks thru the hole thingy😆

nish-shock shock😲

shal- omg what is it🤣

nish- shalu... i think we are in lots of trouble😭

shal- for what?

nish-😭

shal- nishu tell me whats going on😭😭😭

nish-😭

shal- oh for the love of Ali's broken hairs😡

shalu looks through and says... oh no😭😭😭

what have we done😭

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chandni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Nish yells- coming!

and they both start cleaning up the room fast.

shalu- opens they door and.........................😲

nish n shal- granny!!!!!!!

audience is in shock shock

granny- my goodness i have missed u two (brit accent)

😆

shal- yes granny.... we have missed u too....🤔

nish- why granny. why dont you take a seat over here on our lovely bed? 😳

granny- why yes my dear. and what pleasent manners u have😃 i am so proud of my grand children. here take a cookie. I picked it off of that food cart we were passing by in the hallway 😉

nish- oh😲 oh really grandma. well that's very nice of you😊

shal- tres nice😊

they all have a seat on chairs and bed.

none of them have anything to talk about u know😆 just sitting there...

shal- SOOOO grandma..? How did you find out where we were staying?

granny- Oh Sharlene darling! 😊 My little honey bunch. Remember that chip I put into your mouth when you were just a petite honey bunch? Well that's how I found you Your grandma is smart isnt she😉

shal- 😳

nish0- Umm... granny do I have one also?

granny- of course dude😲

nish- wow... I have to use the restroom. excuse me for a few minutes😆

shal- no don leave me here aloneeeeeeeeee😭

nish- *whispering* shhhhhh granny will hear u😡

Author note- granny has bad hearing aid😆

shal-

nishu goes to bathroom and shuts the door.

nishu thinking hard about what to do with granny

nishu pacing back and forth thinking REAL hard😲

nishu gets idea!

Author note- shabaash nish👏

nish quickly makes it look as if she had used the bathroom (flushes toilet, runs water, etc.)

She walks out the door about to begin her plan.... 😎😎

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chandni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

CONTEST TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok people😆 As you have read... there is a contest😉 WOOOHOOooooooo😊 This contest is to figure out the coolest logos😆 for this story. I am the writer of this amazing story and I want a good catchy logo that will attract attention u know 😎😊 From many months of reading this crazy story what are the crazy names you guys can come up with?😉 I will chose the winner with the best title after 2 1/2weeks. That should give u PLENTY of time now😆 Got it?

Rules:

You can give as many entries as you want. But make sure they are actually good... no one-worders😆

They CAN be in diffrent languages!!😉 The only exception is: Spanish. 😛

They can be as long as a whole sentence long.

Your entries MUST be in by March 1, 2009.

Nothing inapropriate😡

Funny is always best😉

Erm, 🤔 I think that's about it! 😃 So go you people. Go and think of awesome names for this awesome story😆 Good luck😳

Edited by *Nishi* - 16 years ago

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chandni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

anyone going to read? 😆 im going to update soon... plz comment

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chandni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Nish walks out the door into the hallway grabbing a muffin off of a try thingy😆 She walks outside into the cold icy air and pulls out something huge from her pocket. She starts shooting things and blowing them up😆

Nish wakes up from her daydream when she is awakened by a loud scream in the living room.

"AAAHHHHHH" the person screams😲 da da daaan😆

Nisha runs to the room to find her granny on the floor who seems to be having a seizure🤣

Shalu saying casually- dont worry everythings alright. I fed her a doughnut and granny fell on the floor🥱

nish couldnt take this so she fell on the floor laughing toooo🤣🤣🤣

shalu starts laugh for the fun of it. and because she remembered somewhere she heard laughing was good for u-🤣

granny gets up. she walks to the door. and says:

BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CHILDREN😲

and takes off flying thru the building.

shal n nish-😲😲

ONCE AGAIN everything happened so fast they didnt even know what happened😆

after 5 mins

Nish- what just happened?

shal- beats me. who careeeees😛 grannys gone and thats all that matters. wohoo

nish0- yaaaa balle balle😆

Note- sorry for lack of imagination there guys😆 But don't worry... there is a good reason why granny left so suddenly😉

Stay tuned for the next episode of.......

Idiots ka jalwaaaaaaaa

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chandni

@*Nishi*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#36

even though shalu and nishu were in a hotel and eating all the food they wanted and taking long showers and staying up on the internet all night😆 It still made them sad to think that their best friends had left them to go to a concert Esp. Ali with his pagal moment there. It made them feel disapointed and left out. Sure they still had a great time in the hotel😆 But the concert.... was a once in a lifetime thing😭

shal- Nish? Where do u think the others are? (asking on bed with laptop in her lap)

nish- I dunno shal... probably getting high and stuffing themselves with samples from kroger😕😆(asking with her head on the ground and feet up on the bed throwing popcorn into her mouth)

shal-kroger???😲

nish- 😳😆 nevermind...

shals was worried about her friends and since the concert at 12 she was wondering why they hadn't called yet. It was already 4 am 😆

Shal- I guess we'll find out tomorrow morning *sigh*

Nish- oh we will😡

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MeethiMirchii

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Posted: 16 years ago

#37

omg granny is so funny🤣🤣
i will read and comment properly in the other topic!!!

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chandni

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Next Morning:

Shalu n Nishu wake up by the huge alarm clock on the tv😆

tv: Good morning Bonjour Guten tag🤣 Shalu and Nishu😳 *soft jazz music starts play*😆

Nish dragging herself ou of bed, reaches for Ali's credit card on the table.

Nish on the pohne: *voice stil cracky* Um Hello.. I would like to order 3 huge stacks of pancakes😆 And a 1 liter bottle of sprite. do u want anything shalu😲

Shal- I want 10 little yogurt thingys and 3 bags of frozen fruit. And 2 liters of orange juice😛

Nish- wow shalu is hugry today

Nish finnishes ordering and hangs up phone and turns on tv

Shalu- Nish... should we tell the police or something. I feel like somethings gone wrong with the guys.

Nish- Shaluuuuu😡😆 what did i tell juuuuu😡😆😆 They are OK OKAY? Now.. get ready food is comin soon😆

shal thinking to herself* all nishu thinks about is her food...😡 I know something has gone terribly wrong with them.. I just know it😭😭😭

*doorbell*

Nish jumps up from bed and runs to door😲

Nish- wooohooo yaaay. Humara food aa gayeee

Shalu gets a huge bowl and dumps all of the yogurt and frozen fruits in it and pours orange juice into small cup slowly and carefully like with manners

Nishi however... just gets a hugeeeeeee bowl thingy, puts all ov the pancakes into the bowl and dumps syrup aaaall over it😲 And then digs in stabbing her fork into the poor pancakes😆😆😆

shalu shockedd😲

Author note: 🤣

12:00 pm

they both decide that its time to explore the city😃

shal- omg nish i've gotta take u to meet my family😲😃😃

nish- ya dude😲 lets gooooo

Shalu- ok lets get the bill first though😃

Edit*

ok guys I was gonna write a lot more but was feeling really sick. I've had a really bad cold for the last couple of days and I think I'm starting to get over it now😛😆 Now will continue with the story...!!

Shalu n Nishu get all their stuff (just like a purse n some free coffee in the room😆)

Then they make their way downstairs to get their bill and go.

Lady- Here you go ladies

The girls look at the bil.......😲

Hotel

blaahbb blabh lahahala

lalalaaa hmmm mmmm😆

Total cost: 25,000

everyone shockedddd😲

Shal- how did it get this way???😆

Nish- I dunnoooo😆

Lady- I believe that you ordered on the fancy menu 😛

Nish- kya fancy menu😲

Lady- Your food was made out of the most purest and healthiest ingredients in the woooordllldddd😲

shal- heyla😲 we are so healthy now

nish- wow this is good... we were eating healthy food this whole time..? wow u know I feel so energized😃

shal- I cant WAIT to see alu bhaiyas face🤣

nish- omg🤣 wait i think i know😲 -------->😳

shal- hahhahahahaaaaa🤣

nish- wow hes gonna be so mad🤣

shal- like this... -------->😡

🤣

they both are having hard time standing up from laugh so hard 😆

Lady- Um... madams

shal n nish- yaaaaaaaaaaaaaa😲😆😆

Lady- Credit card please?

Nish- Oh yes 😊

lalalaalaaa....

Nish- Well thank you very much for your services. We enjoyed very much spending our time here and eating healthy food😊 Merci beaucoup😳

Shal- Yes. We absolutely loved it here. We will recommend this to our people. Have a WONDERFUL day miss😊

In the parking lot-

Nish- now where are we going to?

Shal- TO THE MALL

Nish- yaaaaa

woohooo dance dance

Nish n shal start dancing in parking lot

Tonight you're falling in love 😆

This feeling's tearing me up😆😆

Now if she does it like this, will you do it like that?
Now if she touches like this, will you touch her right back?
Now if she moves like this, will you move her like that? (Come on)

Shake, Shake, Shake, Shake, uh shake it
Shake, Shake, Shake, Shake, uh shake it

Shake, Shake, Shake, Shake, uh shake it

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chandni

@*Nishi*

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Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Nish- shalu I assure you its OK to use his credit card 😊

shal- lekin bhai after all we've put on it

nish- nothing will happen

shal- but😲

nish- kuch nai😡

shal- theek hai 😆

nish- now... lets go shoppingggggg 😎

they go into stores loking at summer dresses. They try on tons n have a great time u know😃 trying on shoes n emo clothes😆

they finally pick:

Shalu

Nishu

They just have a blast shopping their hearts out😆😆 TONS of food😲 Just stuffing themselves.

They go outside the mall and laugh n laugh and play in the water fountain😳 Splash splash...😳

Then police is coming after themm yelling "Get out of the fountain!" and they run so fast. They bought so much stuff guys... Ali will kill them... so much money.. he doesnt really even have job yet... already in so much debt because of these girls😆

They go back into the mall... and Nishu gets new cell phone with new plan and top 5 faves and internet with t-moblie🤣

Nishu is a little sad though... she no longer has top 5 friends.. they all left Where? We do not know.. but we do know that no matter what, shal and nish will stay best friends forever no matter what happens😊

Shal- I promise miss white, to always be your best friend no matter what through all the crap that life takes you through I will be here

Nish- I promise you, my sweet little potato I will always be here through the crap in life you go through too 😃

🤗

We promised to be here.... Now it's time to move on.