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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part three {3} will be posted tomorrow in the beginning of the day. It's a little shorter then I excepted and wanted to be but i promise the next part will be really long!!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
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intresting promo..cracked me up...lolz..gr8 job with FF
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
hey! u have a new reader!!
this seems a cool ff..
cont soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34

Part 3- Josh <3 !!!

I got home where I met Kaitlin with her poodle, sugar. I had 2 dogs, a golden retriever named Ace, and a teacup Chihuahua named Li Li, I called her baby. "Aww... Kaitlin you look different, why you got a new nose?" I asked. "Kreeepa I see-" I cut her off. "Umm... it's not Kreeepa its Kripa, and that French accent of yours is as real as those breasts you claim to be real. Got it Kaitlin." She seemed mad and walked away with sugar, shaking her hips side to side in a skimpy, red jumpsuit.

I went to the Kitchen and boy was I hungry. I went to Inez and asked her to make me a supreme sundae. I watched Inez make my sundae and when she was ready I stuck my spoon and walked away. When I came back the first thing I saw was workmen moving things from JOSH'S ROOM!!! "OK, WHAT THE F*** IS GOING ON" I asked the worker men. "Dear, I'm making Josh's room into a yoga room .You should join really, it'll relive all the tension you have" she said exhaling and waving her arm in the air like a yoga position. "Ok, now listen here you little what ever you wanna call your self, I have put up with all the changes you're making in my dad's life, the house and my life but no one I mean no one messes with my brother so just get lost" I yelled at her. "Kreeepa-" "Ok, what did I say about the Kreeepa thing. It's kripa alright just Kripa!" I snapped at her.

I left my sundae in the glass table and stormed out. I got into my silver 2005 corvette convertible and drove to Josh's loft. The ride was usually 20 minutes but I broke it into just 14 mins. That is how furious I was. I took the elevator up to the 16th floor and unlocked his door with a spare key that he never knew I had. S***!!! Nobody was home. Josh lived in a huge loft alone which I didn't get, I mean how could anyone live alone. I would die in a heartbeat if I ever were alone. The loft had four bedrooms. Uhh... it seems weird but when he got the loft Josh had three roommates. But, then the roommates left, there was a police officer, secret agent and one was in the navy. Josh was an owner of chains of hotels. He had said that his two friends were moving next week I asked who they were but he told me I didn't know them. Ehh... oh well. I walked over to the kitchen and took out the left over Chinese food. I heated the food up and waited. Eww... his loft was gross there was his stinky shoes and food all over and so much more. Etc.

"Gahh... Uhhh... you friggin scared me," I told my brother Josh. "Hey, how'd you come inside?" he looked confused. "With this key" I held up the pair of keys. Just then, the microwave beeped. "Wait," I went to get the left over leftover lo mein. I grabbed a pair of chopsticks and started eating. "Why didn't you call me back I tried calling you like forever" he was worried. "Chill bro. I was with Prithivi-" He cut me off "Don't you hate Prithivi or something." "long story short. We were stranded in a road were no one comes but us Anyways I was there because the other day I was with Mandy in the club. I was drunk Prithivi just happened to be at the club he tried to drop me off. Then he lied to me that he didn't have any food and I found some dudefromTexasthatdroppedmeoff" I babbled. "Ok, so where's Prithivi?" he asked. "Yeah, umm... I sorta left him there," I bit my tongue. "Nice," I giggled. Josh was an over protective brother but he was an over all really good. "You know that Kaitlin changed your room into a yoga thingy sorta thing. Anywayswhatsup?" I babbled one more time. "Nothing, well my friends are moving in!" "Yeah... well good luck-" I huffed. "whadayamean," I said "well have you seen this dump. Sorry my mistake the dump is cleaner" I said. "What?!? I just straightened up around here," "Sure, this sock is in the right place," I said sarcastically by picking up the sock laying on the counter top.

"Ok maybe I can straighten up a little bit," "Little, Emphasis on the little" I said. "You know what I'll help you," I sweetly offered. "Sure, start over there" He took my food and started eating while pointing towards the vibrating chairs. I threw a pillow at him, which made him drop the lo mein. "Ughh... you're helping." I said while pulling him into the living room.

"I can't believe we cleaned this place up," Josh said breathing heavily. "We, are you kidding the only thing you helped was by putting you feet up while I vacuumed the living room" "please MOM!" he joked before he quickly realized his mistake. "I'm sorry," I managed to hear him say hat before I stormed out and drove to a local beach. I stayed there till it was dark and headed to HE**! Or, as I like to call it home.

I GOT HOME!!!

I went straight to my room not even bothering to look at my dad. Hey! Wait, pause, rewind. What is dad doing here? So what? Not like I give a D*** about dad. Why should I even care anymore? I mean I was so close to doing what Josh did, he broke off his relationship with the family except me. Duhh!!! I heard knock in my room with the beat, You know "Stop. Look. And list-een. Ok-ayy" you know what the first grade teachers say. I slowly opened my door when I saw Inez "Miss. Kripa your father is waiting to speak to you" she said in a practiced, tired, snotty, and robotic. "K, tell him I'll be there" I said in a flat tone. I fixed my hair. I was dressed in a simple pink nightgown that was up to my knees. My hair was just in a simple quick bun. I skipped down the marble steps.

"Kripa!" Daddy sternly said. "Yup that's my name, glad you remembered," I said. "Kripa, you have been out of control. I went to your school-" "You went to my school?" I was actually in shock. "Yes, I had to cancel my very important meeting." I rolled my eyes. Classic, every sentence he said had meeting. All, he ever did was work. "Your school said you haven't showed up for 3 weeks!" "So," I said. "So!!! You are the daughter of 'Rishab Rai Kapoor' and it embarrasses me to even show my face in public" "Huh... at least the public gets to see you, I see you probably about once a month if I'm lucky" "I do not even know what to do with you anymore, Kaitlin was right teenagers can be so rebellious" "Kaitlin? Are you kidding me. The only reason Kaitlin 'understands' is because a few months ago she was a teenager." He was angry. So what? I was satisfied. "Kripa!!! You will say sorry to your step-mother NOW!!!" "And, if I don't?!?" I snapped at him. "That's it I will not stand this anymore, I'm sending you to Military School. I'm calling your uncle he will be picking you up at his school." "I DON'T CARE!!! I HATE YOU DAD!!! I HATE YOU SO MUCH. I DON'T LIKE KAITLIN I DON'T LIKE THIS HOUSE AND I'M LEAVING!!!!!!!!!!!" I ran into my room. "Kripa! Kripa!" I could hear my dad calling my name out. I didn't care so I just locked my door and stood there in sobbing.

"Ughh!" I moaned. The last thing I heard before slamming my door is my dad's command to go to military school. I could not believe it. All because of a stupid reasons like "school, and how you are getting out of control" quoting dad. I mean I do not get why dad could not get over the fact that I am not school material. Ok, maybe I could try harder but come one it is not as if I needed to learn that kind of stuff like, algebra. I mean who uses that. No matter what, I have to face it; I mean how hard could military school be?

I packed up my stuff and threw out my luggage out the window. I was running away I cant stand this place anymore!!! I packed three heavy suitcases. I mean I wasn't gonna pack my whole walk in closet I mean if I just packed my shoes I would be up to 20 suitcases. Uhh... wrong time to wear heels. I cursed my adorable gold stilettos that went perfect with my black satin tank top with golden sequins and dark wash skinny jeans. Finally I made it! Victory for Kripa!!! Whoop, Whoop!!! K, that was excessively lame but I was way to excited to care {Care as much as usual}. I speed dialed Josh. "Hurry... Someone might catch me" I whispered'yelled at him. "Ok I'm here!" he said. He loaded my suitcases in his hummer. "Ok, let's leave" "Ok, so you're sure dad said you can move in with me". "Uh huh," I lied. I will tell him as soon as I get home which was now the loft.

"Ok, you can choose a room" he said. "Which one is the biggest?" "Mine, but you can take the one to the left," he said nervously. Maybe, because he knew what was coming? "Can I please have your room?" I asked Josh. "No, I need it for..." he seemed lost. "... For my stuff" "Oh, please what stuff? I'm the one with stuff like shoes clothes shoes earrings and hair products and totally etc." I said. Shoot! That didn't work. Ok, I'll just do my puppy face eyes. "Fine!" he gave up. Whoo Whoo! Yay!!! Ok, I was too excited. But yay!!! I got settled in while Josh moved his stuff.

Next Part-Meeting a Jerk at the Gala

{If it's not obvious whom I'm describing tell me}

Ok, so everybody has been begging me to bring Angad to the story so I'll Introduce him in the next Part. Okay!!!!

----Elana*

Edited by Elana* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great part
lukin fwd for angad's entry
Edited by deeya123 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i luv tha FF! do cont soon! cnt wait 4 tha nxt prt!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow, a policeman a navy officer and a secret agent???? wonder which one angad will be, i hope the secret agent, there's something so sexy about that job. and i bet the jerk is angad 😉, btw if kripa is in school, won't she be unerage????😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sea_nyx

wow, a policeman a navy officer and a secret agent???? wonder which one angad will be, i hope the secret agent, there's something so sexy about that job. and i bet the jerk is angad 😉, btw if kripa is in school, won't she be unerage????😕



Sorry I think It's my writing but when i said about the Navy, police, and the secret agent i meant Josh's old roommates not Angad sorry
everybody for the confusion.

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Edited by Elana* - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
wow! gr8 part!
so crazy how kripa just ran away like that! lol
but its all cool. cont soon :)
nd can u pm me when u cont again? thanks!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
shoo shweet part..i hate kripsies dad!!! he can have fun with stupid kaitlyn!!

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