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asmita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#151

hey it was awesome...i was so engrossed reading it tht i didn't realise tht its gonna b 10:30 pm...i jus saw my cup of coffee n tht to i forgot to drink it...it was awesome...cont asap n do pm me....

great work...keep it up...

CHEERS,

ASMITA

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Anwaya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#152

Originally posted by: asmita216
hey it was awesome...i was so engrossed reading it tht i didn't realise tht its gonna b 10:30 pm...i jus saw my cup of coffee n tht to i forgot to drink it...it was awesome...cont asap n do pm me....

great work...keep it up...

CHEERS,

ASMITA

asmita chooo chweet of u!

well when i update will pm u!😆

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Sayanti Das

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Posted: 16 years ago

#153

amazing updates Anji.....i am thnkful to u tht u shared wid us ur amazing talent yaar,i am totally speechless.......ur writing style is amazing.....n u handled both the couples sooooooo well..SaJan scenes were fantatic...n i luv the way u wrote the dialogue..smply brilliant..as for teh mayur scenes i got to say only 1 thing...."By God MAza Agaya"...😃...thnxxxxxxxxx a lot for sharing,

Luv Raee🤗

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ruchi

@simranruchi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#154

it was superb yaar

it was really sweet the way mayank and samrat realising that they are in love..............continue asap

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Anwaya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: Raee_rockz
amazing updates Anji.....i am thnkful to u tht u shared wid us ur amazing talent yaar,i am totally speechless.......ur writing style is amazing.....n u handled both the couples sooooooo well..SaJan scenes were fantatic...n i luv the way u wrote the dialogue..smply brilliant..as for teh mayur scenes i got to say only 1 thing...."By God MAza Agaya"...😃...thnxxxxxxxxx a lot for sharing,
Luv Raee🤗

hey gud to hear u lyk sajan scene too!

thnx raee...........it means a lot!

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Anwaya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: simranruchi
it was superb yaar
it was really sweet the way mayank and samrat realising that they are in love..............continue asap

thnx yaar!

thnx alot!

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Monica

@_Monu_

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Posted: 16 years ago

#157

ALL WAS GREAT

FANTASTIC

SUPERB

CONT SOON

WHEN U HAVE TIME

SEE YAA

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Samira

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Posted: 16 years ago

#158

hey ur ff is really superb....plz do continue soon

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Anwaya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#159

Now came the next day, leaving Alibagh and returning to Mumbai.

Gunjan and Nupur were ready with their bags pack and now were taking few eatables packed for journey coz they knew, Benji would be shouting 'i m hungry' right after they start the jeep.

Dia and Anny were seeting on sofa and making arrangements for Mela on phone.

Chako-Dodo and Benji-Sam-Mayu came out of room on same time. Dodo was dragging his bag forcefuly coz it was so heavy.

Sam: oye Uday, is mein aisa hai kya ho itna bhari ho gaya hai.

Uday: wo kya hai na Sam ismein mere sare girlfriends ke liye gifts hai. And u know na ke mere kitne girlfriends hai!

Mayu: haan, uday sara college tumhara hi to diwana hai.

Uday: exactly!

Dia: oh shut up Dodo, ismein mere gifts hai jo mere bag mein fit nahi ho rahe the. Duffer!

Dodo: D tum bhi na!

Here enters Morena sis with food packets.

Benji: Nupur, Gunjan tum done great to. Tum hi meri sachi dost ho....

Gun: benji, benji, thik hai, samajh aagaya!

Nupur smiled and then looked at Dodo who was pushing the bag so hard but it wasnt moving.

Nups: uffo! Bechare uday bhaiyya.

And before she reach there to help uday, Mayu went there first,

'arey Uday, tum kitna boj uthaoge! Thak jaoge, main uthata hoo'

and Mayu tried to lift the bag but it was very heavy. Then he looked at Nups who was looking towards him. He gave her a faint smile and again tried to lift. Finaly he did it.

Dodo: thank you Mayank.

And he was about to lift his own bag when Sam move forward.

'arey Uday kitna bojh uthaoge, thak jaoge nah?'

'nahi Sam main thik hoo'

'nahi Uaday tum thik nahin ho, itna kaam nahi karana chahiye kisiko'

and Sam insisted to take the bag. Dodo had no choice but to agree. And Sam took one bag, Mayu took another bag and head towards jeep.

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Anwaya

@anwaya

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Posted: 16 years ago

#160

Benji gave both a weird look but then thinking 'Sam and Mayank are surprises' he also went towards jeep with chako and dodo. So finaly all baggage loading was done and all were ready to leave.

Morena sis had taken the last seat at the back. Seeing that Sam said to Chako,

'Chako dude aaj driving ka mood nahin hai thak gaya hoo. Will u drive?'

'fine dude'

Sam throw him the keys.

Chako: chalo benji aage baithate hai.

And Chako and Benji occupied front seats.

And before Dia can make any argument Sam sat by Gun at last seats.

'Chashmish any problem main yahan baithoo'

'nahi Samrat baitho'

'aur Nupur tumhe?'

'arey nahin, ab to maza ayega khub maza karenge'

Irritated Dia sat on middle seat along with Annie and Dodo.

Mayu: lagata hai ab mujhe peeche baithane ke alawa option nahi hai!

Nup: hai na Mayank! Chhat, chhat pe jakar baitho na plz!

Gun: Di! Nahi Mayank aao baitho.

And thanking Dia for using her 'jung laga hua brain for once' Mayu sat.

So Chako was on driver seat with Benji at front seat. At middle were Dodo, Annie and Dia. And at back was Mayank and Nupur on one seat and on opposite sit in front of them ( u knw na how sumo aur qualis are) were Sam and Gun. And journey started.

As usual as they went few km ahead benji asked for food. And again he thnxed Morenas for packing it. Nupur replied by saying if one more time he said thanx, she will make sure that he wont eat for next few months. Half the journey went with Nups still fuming with the fact that Mayu is sitting next to her.

Nups: Sam tum ne to kahan tha ke tum jab Alibagh pohochoge to beach pe baithake ghanto Guitar bajaoge. Par tumne to ek baar bhi nahi bajaya. Dekho ab mera mood bohot kharab hai. Kuch bahari grah ke logonke atikraman ki wajah se. To plz mera mood thik karo aur uske liye mere liye gana gao!

Sam: ur wish is my command princess.

Nups: by god Samrat, tumhe ek chance diya to flirting shuru!

Sam: kya karu aadat se majboor, aur Morena sis se door to mujhase raha nahi jata!

And he took out his guitar and bang the guitar so hard like he is playing for a rock concert.

Gun, Nups and Mayu place their hands on ear. (no no this time Arjun dnt put his hand on Rati's ears).

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