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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: debby

Lovd the dance par especially.. was soo romantic and perfectly written..
Continue asap anwaya!



thnx debby!
me too enjoyed dance part!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: miss.sonia

i always looseyou ff

iput it on favoriet nowsothat can always keep it :P
and last 3 days iwastrying tofind it



thts so sweet sonia!

well i m late to post but its my last year of grad. so hv less tym~
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey nidz i m writting will update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey anji....do update sooonnnn...really looking forward to the next part 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
Finaly they reached home and had dinner.

Benji: whoa! Kya khana tha! Lekin kuch jyada hi khaliya maine!

Sam: bola tha jyada mat kha, pet kharab ho jaega.

Benji: haan ab bas kar dadi maa ki tarah lecture mat de.

Nups: koi baat nahi benji, hum beach pe ghoomne jate hai. Jara chaloge to thik ho jaega.

Sam: baat to sahi hai. Ek akhari sair ho jae Alibagh ke kinare.

Nups: by god, maza aa jaega. Chal Gunjan.

And they all were about to go when Mayu said,

'tum log jao, mujhe neend aa rahi hai'

hearing that Nups turned quickly,

'Mayank chalo! Aaj akhari raat yahan pe kal subah wapas jaenge. Phir so lena'

'nahi. Main bohot thak gaya hoon'

now Nups leave her polite tone and said in her usual tone,

'haan, ab Ladkiyonke sath itna naachoge to thak hi jaoge nah?'

'nahi main to........................'

'rahne do! Agar nahi aana to mat aao. Par bahane mat banao'

Gun: par di................

Nups: rehne de Gunjan. Jise aana hai wo aye aur jise sona hai shouk se soye. Mujhe kya?

And she hurriedly left the room.

Leaving all just stair at poor Mayu. Though she said she dosnt care Mayu knew for sure that she does care. All went out side for stroll leaving Mayu behind.

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Posted: 16 years ago
ON BEACH:
Dodo was giving some stupid tricks for betterment of his stomuch ache.

Dodo: aur phir usmein haldi, tulsi, tikha, mirchi, aur...

Benji: bas kar mere baap! Rehem kar mujhpe! Samrat....

And he called out for help. But Sam was in his own dreamland, thinking about Gun.

Dia: Sammy! Kya hua? Itne chup kyun ho?

'main? Nahit to! Bas itna saaf bech aur aisa atmosphere mumbai mein nahi milega is liye bas enjoy kar raho hoo'

'oh Sammy how sweet!'

But he was thinking about Gun,

' what i m supposed to do about it?
Mujhe to yeh bhi nahi pata ke mujhe exactly hua kya hai?
Bas main humesha Gunjan ke sath rehna chahata hoo, use apne ankhoke samne chahata hoo, wo agar mujhase baat na kare to bura lagata hai, main use hamesha kuch dekhana chahata hoo, muskurate hue.
Par kya yahi pyar hai? Kise poochu? Why this life is complecated?'
.......................................................
'kum akal! Kya samajhata hai apne aap ko? Kisi aur ladkike sath dance kya kar liya apne aap ko Shahrukh samajhata hai'

Nups was talking continously, assuming that Gun is listening to it but Gun was in her own though.

Nups: arey Gunjan tu sun rahi hai na main kya badbada rahi hoo?

Gun: huh? Aapne kuch kaha di?

Nups: dhat tere ki! Matlab itni der tak main jo yahan Mayank ko gaaliya de rahi thi tune ek bhi nahi suni? Uffo Gunjan kahan khoye hai tu?

'wo di.......actually............wo Samrat.....'

'killer dude, usko kya hua?'

'di, aapko nahi lagata wo thoda ajeeb bartaav kar raha hai?'

'dekh Gunjan duniya mein sirf ek hi insaan hai jo ajeeb hai, wo hai Mayank. Aur rahi Samrat ki baat, tujhe aisa kyun lagata hai?'

'dekho na di, jab se hum aye hai tab se kitna chup chup hai, apne mein hi khoya hai. Nahin to kitni baate karata hai. Aur usne mujhe aap chidhaya bhi nahi. Yeh sab sach mein ajeeb hai'

'haan Gunjan, tu baat to sahi kar rahi hai. Magar use hua kya hai?'

'pata nahin di'

and they both looked at Sam, who was sitting on rock alone looking at waves.

'Gunjan, mujhe lagata hai tujhe use baat karani chahiye'

'main?'

'haan. Tu Samrat ko achhi tarah se janati hai. Wo tujhase khul ke baat kar sakata hai. Aur dekh wo abhi akela hai baat karale'

'achha thik hai di, main koshish karati hoo'

'haan Gunjan, aur koshish karane wale ki kabhi haar nahi hoti, is liye hi maine Mayank ko exam mein haraya'

'di! Aap mujhe yeh muhawara aur 'maine Mayank ko haraya' sau baar bata chuki hai. Ab main jau?'

'acha thik hai tu jaa, main Mayank ko gaaliya akele de deti hoo'

Gun just shack her head and turned towards Sam. She approached Sam nervously.

Gun approached Sam.

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Posted: 16 years ago
'Samrat kya main yahan baitho?'

'arey Chashmish tum! Haan, yebhi koi poochane ki baat hai baitho'

and Sam gave some space on same rock he was sitting.

She sat by her, she was close to him.
Her hairs were flying due to wind and were coming on her face. She set them back by her hand.

Sam was stairing at her continuously. But embaressed he continued looking at waves. Now Gun turn towards him,

'Samrat kya hua hai tumhe?'

'mujhe kuch nahi'

'kuch to hua hai, warna tum itne chup kyun ho?'

'kuch nahi bas in waves ko dekh raha tha. Kitne shanti phir bhi kitna shor hai....'

'Samrat.........', Gun called out with weird expression.

'hhmm..........'

'tum sach mein thik nahi ho. Jo pehle guitar, ladkiya, basket ball ki baate karata tha ab wo lehare, shor, shanti, aise baat kar raha hai?'

Sam gave her a faint smile.

'wo sab chodo aur mujhe batao ke jab tum studies ke baad jab vacation mein morena jaogi.......'

'ek min Samrat! Main vacation mein morena nahi jaungi, mumbai aaungi'

Smile suddenly vanished from Sam's face,

'matlab tum Mumbai mein nahi rahogi?'

'nahi. Main phir wapas chali jaungi. Mujhe wahan pe padhana hai. Mujhe teacher banana hai'

Sam said without showing the sadness in his voice, 'oh! Teacher......ms. Aha ki tarah?'

'nahi...nahi. Nahin to koi benji mere peeche pad jaega'

'to phir Deodhar ki tarah strict ya Shukla ki tarah teloo?'

'Samrat! Wo hamare teacher hai'

'achha, main bhi tumhare sath aunga'

'tum? Kya karoge aakar?'

'dekho do wajah hai. Ek, tum jab se mumbai mein aye ho tumhari hindi bighad gaye hai. To use sudharne ke liye tumhe Bhavesh ki jarurat padegi. Aur dusri yeh ke, mujhe us optician se milna hai jisne tumhara chasma banaya'

'kyun?', Gun questioned.

'Bhavesh apna chashma wahan se nahi banaega. Kya chashma banaya hai tumhara, hamesha khisakata rehta hai'

Sam said and that point Gun's chashma khisak gaya.

'dekha, chashmish!'

'achha? Lekin wahan jo tumhe chahiye wo kuch nahi hai. Nah short skirtwali ladkiya, na sports

bike, na basket ball court na.........'

'par tum ho na!'

Sam said cutting her sentence and looking at her so cutely. If any other gal had been their she would have jumped into sea in exitment.

'chashmish, agar tum ho to mujhe kisiki jarurat nahi'

(the trademark MJHT tune plays behind)

Gun looked at Sam for once and smiled shyly. And now she started to watch waves whereas Sam was still stairing at Gun.

Now, he was sure it was love! For sure! He dnt wanted this moment to go, he dnt want Gun to leave him for one sec, he wanted to be with her for lifetime. Yes! It was love.

Now, it happened! It must be special night today, stars must be shinning brightly and in that beautiful ambeance,

Sam BLUSHED. He saw down towards his heart, it was beating fast. It was feeling of one of kind what Sam hvnt experianced before,

'bachhu Samrat', he thought 'tu to gaya kaam se. Jaise Benji kehta hai, sheher ki patang ka pech gaavi ke manje se ladh hi gaya! Oh god'

and his eyes moisten a bit.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Nups was wandering alone.

She looked at waves, that remind her of the day when she and Mayu went to beach together. She remembered how they danced, sang. A small smile appearched on her face, but vanished coz now she wasnt with Mayu.

'mere baarein mein soch rahi ho?'

Nups turned and saw Mayu was standing right behind her.

'main? Aur tumhe yaad karoo? Huh..no way'

'dekho Nups jhoot mat bolo, tum mujhe miss kar rahi thi na. Dekho mujhe kitni hichakiya aye'

and suddenly a real hichaki came to Mayu. Nups staired at her thinking,

'kya sach mein yeh baat sach hai ke agar hum kisi ke barein mein sochu to use hichkiya aati hai?'

'dekho Nupur ab main tumhare samne hoo ab to mere barein mein sochana chod do! Mujhe sharam aati hai'

'Mayank, main tumhare barein mein nahi soch rahi thi. Aur tab kahan gaye thi tumhari sharam jab tum us ladkike sath dance kar rahe the. Dance pe chance?'

'oh! Yeah baat hai! Is liye naraz ho? Jalan ho rahi hai?'

Nups turn her head opposite to Mayu.

'main........main kyun jaloo? Jale mere dushman!'

'ok! To tum nahi jali na? Tumhe koi problem to nahi hai?'

'mujhe? Mujhe kya problem ho sakata hai?'

'haan, to thik hai. Ab halka mehsoos kar raha hoo. Kyunki aaj raat wo mujhase milne aane wali hai'

'KYA?', Nups literaly shouted and turned.

'kya hua koi problem?', Mayu said with the best puppy like face ever he can make.

Nups controlled her anger.

'tum yahan kyun aaye ho Mayank? Wo kya naam tha uska.........haan, Rati! Jao wo tumhara baahein khole intejar kar rahi hogi'

and saying this she turned and started walking far from Mayu.

Mayu stood there, he watched Nups going. He knows he is incomplete without her. More than Nups, Mayu needed her. He neede her so badly in his life. He suddenly remind of what his mom have told him before,

'Mayu tu bohot jiddi hai. Tere man mein jo hai wo tu pura kar ke hi rehta hai. Mujhe pata hai duniya mein aisi koi cheez nahi jo mera Mayu nahi kar sakata. Par pyar ek aise cheez hai jo kabhi jid se haasil nahi

kar sakate, nahi takad dikha ke mil sakata hai'

Then Mayu had asked,

'to maa, main kab samjhunga mujhe pyar ho gaya hai?'

'jiske aage teri jid na chale, jahan tu khud apni takad chodkar pyar se baat kare. Aur jise jitne ke liye tu sab kuch haarne ko tayyar ho'

'tab to mujhe kabhi pyar nahi hoga. Kyun ki haarna Mayank ke dictionary mein nahi hai'

'dekhna ek din aisa jarur ayega. Aur jab aisa hoga tu sabase pehle mujhe bataega? Promice?'

'maa, aisa kabhi nahi hoga. Par phir bhi i promice'

and Maa scramble his hair.

'maa balonko mat chuo na'

In presence:

He touched his hairs,

'maa, aap sach kehti thi. Nupur ko jeetne ke liye main kuch bhi haar sakata hoo'

and he too turned back and started walking opposite to Nups and said to him self,

'yes! I m in love'

and he jumped the same way as he jumped in song 'ladki na jane kyun ladkosi nahi hoti' on beach.

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Posted: 16 years ago
Ohhhh Anji! Anji! Anji!.............🤗
waahhhhhh! Mayank finally confessed to himself!
hayyyyeee......what an update yaar....loved it!
and your dailogues are always sooo interestingggg...esp Nupur's! hehe.....😃
brilliant update as usual Anji......
ab Nupur bhi jaldi realise karle...bus.....😳
waitinggg for next part😳
xoxo
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Posted: 16 years ago
aww dat waz such a cute n sweet update.....i luv mayur....
hope to hear a lot 4m der side.....am dying 4 dat day wen mayank will b romancing wid nupur in any ff or in serial itself.....
continue soon......take care n thanx 4 da pm

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