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Posted: 16 years ago
surya where r u???? pls cont soon
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dee firstly sorry for replying so late bt finally i m here wid my comments......
dee u know d special part of ur story .....that u describe every relation in ur story...........i love d way u describe emotions frm each n every peron's point of view........defintaley for me charters of yash n chah r most close to my heart bt all other characters r very sweet n cute xcept that swayam........bt what will happen when yash n chah come to know that who is arman sis n who is ridhima;s bro....can;t wait to read.n if m not wrong yash's dream girl is chah only....plsssss continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
wow........ everything is written .. so well.... it is juss splendid...and left me speechless......will giv a longer comment very soon..........please do update .......
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Nice part suri.....!

Continue soon !
Cant wait for Yash-Chah to meet........!
Yash ki dream girl is chah....I think she turned him down coz she doesnt believe in luv !



thanku so much vandu... i'am glad you like it.. the next part is coming in five minutes...😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetangel_25

hi surya........... gr8 parts..all of them........very well written......yash's character......his bonding...with veena....his brothers n sis...entire family....liked it all.... i always like these relationships in ur ffs.....very cute sweet n pure.....even chah n her family....shez gone thru alot i hope she gets out of it soon.....i am a regular reader to ur ffs...even Dil se dil thak.... i 1st saw it in yahoo groups........i started halfway but liked it so much that i went back to read all the earlier parts...then read Zindagi ek silsilay even when i saw it in the listings.... i liked them all so much...i have bookmarked these few ffs n i read them every now n then....but u m8 hv hardly seen my comments here...... sorry but i cant always do tht...so even if there r no comments understand tht ur story is being liked a lot by silent readers......n keep writing......its very refreshing after a bad day at college..i leave everything aside (honestly... sometimes vivas even! ) to read every new part tht u post.....

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thanku so much sana.. i'am so happy that you like my fanfics... readers comments encourage me to be a better writer... i hope you like the story of hogi pyaar kii jeet agge bhi.. thanks a ton once again....😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: saliha_!

really yr bht acha tha 5th part b.ab nxt jaldi se post kr do plz.next part ka to bht wait kr rahi hn men.



thanku so much saliga.. i'll post the next part soon.....😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sneha0504

wow........ everything is written .. so well.... it is juss splendid...and left me speechless......will giv a longer comment very soon..........please do update .......


thanku so much... will wait for your big comment... thanks once again.. the next part is coming up in 5 mins...😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: angel 16

dee firstly sorry for replying so late bt finally i m here wid my comments......dee u know d special part of ur story .....that u describe every relation in ur story...........i love d way u describe emotions frm each n every peron's point of view........defintaley for me charters of yash n chah r most close to my heart bt all other characters r very sweet n cute xcept that swayam........bt what will happen when yash n chah come to know that who is arman sis n who is ridhima;s bro....can;t wait to read.n if m not wrong yash's dream girl is chah only....plsssss continue soon...

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heenu no sorry.. i'am more than happy you commented...thanku so much for your comments dear.. even i like all characters except swayam... don't worry uska kuch karthi hoon main.. thanks once again.. posting the next part in five minutes....😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hello Guys.. How are you all.. Hope all of you are doing fine… Guys first of all I'am extremely sorry that I have not continued my fanfic from such a long time… I know I have made all of you wait… actually now that my MBA first year exams are finished, it seems we have to do a Internship, A Summer Internship Program.. I was stuck up with the internship program kii waqt hii nahii mila that I write the fanfic.. Bohat baar socha maine kii I start writing the sixth part of "Hogi Pyaar kii Jeet" lekin jab bhi main fanfic likhne baithi tho koi na koi kaam aa hii jaatha… Really very sorry about that… ab mujhe thoda waqt mila hai tho I have started typing the part.. Waise guys I have even recieved my MBA 1st year results.. and I have scored quite good marks.. I'am very happy with them.. Now I juust hope kii internship ke grading mein bhi achche marks mil jaye… Guys the update of my fanfic might be a bit irregular till the 27th of June. That is the day when my internship program ends.. but still I will try & write the fanfic as & when possible… Hope all of you like "Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet- Part 6" & I also hope that the part compensates your long wait…. Isse pehle that I write the part 6 let us juust see kii aakhir pichle part mein kya hua tha….

Recap: well pichle part mein we have seen the hatred between swayam & yash.. we have also seen kii in the younger clan of the Garewals koi bhi swayam ko bardhast nahii kar saktha.. aur swayam bhi kissi ko pasand nahii kartha.. We have seen kii Yash bike race jeet jaatha hai and then uuske baad yash aur swayam ke beech bohat kaha-suni hothi hai.. & we also saw kii Armaan & ridhimma have patched up.. & armaan Shimla wapas gaya hai… humne yeh bhi dekha yash aur lalit is getting worse.. then humne yeh bhi dekha kii dekhthe hii dekhthe ek saal ka waqt beet gaya hai.. it is the year of 2007 & after yash proves himself worthy of the Managing director of Garewal industries yash wins that MD battle against swayam & is the new MD of the Garewal industries.. dusari taraf chah has also completed her practice as a intern aura b she has started working as a full time doctor.. & the last part ended with oing meet ridhimma in her university….Ab agge..


*****Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet - Part 6*****


Hum yeh dekh sakthe hai kii Chah is sitting on the flight aur woh apne kaan mein I-Pod lagaye hue gaane sunn rahii hothi hai.. chah has a smile on her face… aaj chah ke chehre par ek ajeeb si khushi thi.. chah itni khush kyun thi yeh tho khud chah bhii nahii jaanthi thi… tab ek air-hostess wahaan aathi hai asking chah if she will have some juice or cold drink… chah switches off her I-Pod & then tells the air-hostess:- One Pepsi please… the air hostess while giving the drink to chah sees kii chah is very happy.. & she is smiling to herself…
The air-hostess out off curiosity asks chah:- maam you seem very happy…
Chah smiles & says:- what if I say I don't know.. why I'am so happy…
The air-hostess smiles & says:- maa'm would you mind if I ask you a personal question…
Chah:- no.. go ahead…
Air hostess:- maa'm are you going to meet the love of your life or your husband or fianc..
Chah:- hellll.. no… from where did you get that idea… & first of all I'am not married.. nor I'am engaged… & nor I believe in the term called love.. for me love is just a compromise where two people come together to fulfill each others needs…
Air hostess:- maa'm if I can say so, then surely love is not compromise.. love is need to be loved.. it is a eternal feeling maa'm..
Chah:- I think you are married to the person you love…
Air hostess [smiles & says]:- yes maa'm….
Chah:- so you would not understand my thoughts.. so it is better we leave it there tha for me the term called love does not exists in life.. I think love is just a pretense…
Air hostess:- anyway maa'm have a good flight…
Saying this the air-hostess is about leave.. when chah calls her back:- aahh.. Excuse me.. Miss…
The air hostess turns around & says:- yes maa'm…
Chah:- by the way I'am going to meet my brother… I just wanted to clarify that too you as I did not want you to have any further misconceptions…
Air-hostess nods & smiles then leaves as some other passenger calls her..
Chah thinks:- armaan tum aaj mujhe dekh kar surprise ho jaaoge… you will be in for a big surprize.. tum hamesha hum sab ko chouka dethe the na.. aaj main tumhe choukaoongi with my surprise visit…. Ab aayega mazaa.. thinking about armaan shocked face when he sees chah , chah gives a smile & then gets back to listening to her I-Pod… & thinks about kii woh aaj itni khush kyun hai.. the air-hostess talks are running in her mind… she is trying to divert her mind.. lekin phir bhii her mind gets diverted to the feeling of love… aisa kyun ho raha hai khud chah bhii nahii jaanthi thi…
Doosri taraf hum dekh sakthe hai kii Yash is driving his car towards ridhimma's university… He has a smile on his face.. uske chehre par ek relaxed muskaan hai joh kii pichle ek sal se uske chehre par nahii thi.. he feels as is pichle ek saal se jitni mehnat usne kii all that has paid off.. as the garewals have won the contract & usse garewal industries ka MD bana diya gaya hai.. yash's happiness knew no bounds.. usse aur kya chahiye tha he has his family's love, care.. joh log yash ke liye mayine rakhthe the woh sabhi uske saath hai… aisi koi bahar ka insaan yash ko dekhtha tho usse aise hii lagtha.. lekin yash ke chehre kii muskaan mein ab bhi kuch kami thi.. he was not able to be totally happy.. aur woh kami uske dil ko lag rahii thi…
Yash gaadi drive karte hua starts thinking:- aaj maine apni nayi zindagi kii taraf apna pehla kadamn rakha hai.. Managing Director of the Garewal Industries.. aaj mere apne mere saath hai.. mere liye khush hai… lekin na jaane kyun mujhe meri har khushi mujhe adhuri lagthi hai… yeh adhurapann shayad mere zindagi mein us din se hai jis din se woh mujhe chod ke gayi.. kaash aaj who meri zindagi mein hothi mere saath taaki main apni khushi uske saath baant saktha… maine apni ab thak kii zindagi tho tumhare begair kaat li lekin ab aur intezaar nahii hotha.. lout aao na meri zindagi mein… yash then sees his next seat aur sochtha hai:- ek din mujhe yakeen hai kii tum mere bagal mein baiti hogi… us din tum meri hogi… meri hokar tum meri zindagi mein aaogi… tab mujhe sham ka intezaar karna nahii hoga aasmaan mein apne chaand ko dekhne ke liye… kyunke tum mere saath har pal rahogi, mera chaand meri zindagi mein hoga.. mera hoga mera chaand… yash smiles to himself & continues driving his car…
We can see Armaan & Ridhimma in their university.. ridhimma is very happy… & she is expressing her happiness to armaan…
Ridhimma:- armu.. aaj main bohat bohat bohat zyada khush hoon….
Armaan:- kya baat hai armaan se seedhe armu.. iska matlab tho yahii hai kii tum aaj wakayi mein bohat khush ho… baat kya hai sweet heart.. itni khush kyun ho.. meri pyaari ridsy… armaan holds ridhimma from behind…
Ridhimma:- armaannn.. kya karr rahe ho hum log university mein hai… kissi ne dekh liya tho achcha nahii rahega.. please armaan chodo mujhe…
Armaan:- [nautanki karte hue kehtha hai..] ufff… yaarrr ridsy..… tum kitni badi spoil sport ho.. kayi girlfriends ko tho yeh sikayat hothi hai kii unka boyfriend unse openly , publicly pyaar ka izhaar nahii kartha.. lekin yahaan tho main apni premika ko apne pass rakhna chahtha hoon aur tum ho kii mujhse keh rahii ho kii main tumhe chod doon.. waah re upar waale.. kya zamana aagaya hai.. meri tho koi qadar hii nahii hai…
Ridhimma hits armaan playfully & says:- armaaannn tum apni yeh nautanki bund karne ka kya loge…
Armaan:- well let me see may be a sweet kiss…
Ridhimma:- armaan very funny… agar tum aise hii nautanki karthe rahe tho tum yahaan raho akele main tho chali.. aur main tumhe batane bhii nahii waali kii main itni khush kyun hoon…
Ridhimma wahaan se jaane lagthi hai jab armaan uska haath pakadtha hai aur kehtha hai:- arre aree… ridsy.. tum kahaan chali main tho bas mazaak karr raha tha.. tumhe tung karne mein bohat mazaa aatha hai mujhe…
Ridhimma:- main bhi kahiin nahii jaa rahii thi armaan.. mujhe patah hai tum mujhe tung karr rahe the.. tho issi liye maine socha kii kyun na main bhi tumhe tung karoon, yahaan se jaane ka naatak karke.. dekha maine bhi tumhe pareshaan kiya na…
Armaan:- hmmmm… main dekh raha hoon kii mere saath reh-rehkar tum mujhe tung karna bhii seekh gayi ho..
Ridhimma smiles cheekily & says:- haannn woh tho hai..
Armaan:- lekin haan ek baat hai agar tum chahthi ho kii main nautanki karna bund karoon tho tumhe meri ek shart mannni hogi…
Ridhimma:- tumhari kaunsi shart armaan.. dekho armaan main abhi se keh rahii hoon agar koi ut-patang so shart rakhoge na tho main nahii mannne waali.. aur han main yahaan se chali jaaugi.. phir tum yahaan akele rehna aur ped- hawa, panchi ke saamne apni nautanki dikhana.. unki bhii kuch entertainment ho jayegi…
Armaan:- arree.. lekin pehle sunn tho lo kii meri shart kya hai.. baad mein tum khud hii decide kar lena kii kya meri shart justified hai ya nahii.. shart ko manna ya nahii manna tumhari marzi hai.. tumhare haaton mein hai..
Ridhimma:- hmm.. theek hai.. bolo tumhari shart kya hai.. I'am waiting…
Armaan:- badii aayi waiting kii bachchi… khud ko queen of England samaj ke rakha hai kya.. I'am waiting tho itne that se kehtyhi hoon, kii agar bas kuch aur palon ka intezaar karogi tho pahaad toot padega…
Ridhimma:- armaaaann.. tum keh rahe ho ya main jaaun..
Armaan:- theek hai. bata raha hoon.. tho meri shart yeh hai kii tum mujhe aaj se pyaar se armu bulaoge.. [saying this armaan has a sweet smile on his face..]
Ridhimma hass padthi hai Armaan kii yeh baat sunnkar.. & she hits a tapki on armaan's head & says:- howww sweettt armaan.. I mean armuuu… mujhe tumhari shart manzoor hai….
Armaan:- gooddd.. ab tum mujhe batao kii tum aaj itni khush kyun ho…
Ridhimma:- well main aaj itni khush isliye hoon kyunkee.. [ridhimma pauses for a second & continues] tum guess karo na armu…
Armaan:- main guess karoon… ok… let us see… shayad tumhare bhaiyon ne tumhe shopping karne kii ijazat dii hogi…
Ridhimma:- nahiii….
Armaan:- tho shayad tum apne family ke saath kahiin bahar jaa rahii hogi for holiday…
Ridhimma:- yeh bhii nahii… armaan dekho yeh tumhara aakhri chance hai… agar tumne theesra waala bhii ghalat guess kiya tho iska matlab yeh hai kii tum mujhe jaanthe hii nahii ho…
Armaan:- theek hai.. tho sochne do… [armaan thinks for some seconds & then says] haan mujhe patah hai tum itni khush kyun ho….
Ridhimma:- tho bolo na…
Armaan:- well tum itni khush is liye ho kyunke tumhare ghar waalon ne tumhare liye ek ladka chun liya hai..
Ridhimma with a confused expression asks:- ladka chun liya hai, kya matlab hai tumhara…
Armaan:- arre.. ridsy tum itna bhi nahii samajthi.. tumhare liye ladka chunna hai.. jisse tumhare ghar waale tumhari shaddi karwa sake.. chalo achcha hai issi bahane tumse mujhe tho chutkara mil jayega.. mujhe tho tumse aazadi mil gayi.. meri jaan chutti… [armaan yeh kehthe hue wahaan se bhaag ne lagtha hai in the university grounds…]
Ridhimma realizes kii armaan kehna kya chah raha hai & she runs after him shouting:- armaan.. tumhe tho main chod doongi nahii.. tum samajthe kya ho khud ko…
Armaan was giggling all the way through & says:- pehle mujhe pakad ke dikhao….
Armaan, ridhimma continue their game for same time.. aur phir dono hii thak jaathe hai so both sit down in the basket ball court [bhaagthe bhaagthe they are in the basket ball court now..]..
After sitting both armaan & ridhimma have a hearty laugh… they are giggling.. & then ridhimma tells armaan:- armaan tum mujhe bilkul nahii jaanthe…
Armaan:- aisa kyun bhala…
Ridhimma:- woh is liye kyunke tum is baat ka patah nahii kar sake kii aakhir main itni khush kyun hoon.. maine tumko then chances diye lekin tumne theeno baar ghalat guess kiya…
Armaam:- agar main tumse kahoon kii main tumhe jaantha hii nahii.. balki tumhe samajtha bhii hoon tho tum kya kahogii..
Ridhimma:- agar aisi hii baat hai tho main tumko ek aur mouka dethi hoon.. aur tum saabit karo kii tum mujhe jaanthe aur samajthe bhi ho… tum mujhe batao kii main aaj itni zyada khush kyun hoon…
Armaan:- theek hai… tho suno tum aaj itni khush is liye ho kyunke…. [armaan pauses]
Ridhimma says:- kyunke kya bolo..
Armaan:- kyunke tumhare Big-B, yaani kii Yash Garewal ko aaj Garewal Industries ka Manging Director bana diya gaya hai.. Tumhare Big-B ne woh contract bhi jeet liya jiske liye woh pichle ek saal se mehnat karr rahe the..
Ridhimma stares at armaan with her mouth wide open…
Armaan sees ridhimma's reaction he smiles , & says:- kyun ridsy main sahii hoon na…
Ridhimma just nods her head.. even now she is surprised kii armaan ko uski khushi kii baat kaise patah chali..
Armaan:- ab tho maanthi ho na ridsy kii main tumjein jaantha aur samajtha bhii hoon..
Ridhimma:- haan armu.. main aaj maan gayi tumko.. lekin mujhe ek baat ab thak samaj mein nahii aayi…
Armaan:- kaunsi baat
Ridhimma:- yeh baat kii tumhe kaise patah chala kii big-b ko garewal industries ka MD banaya gaya hai.. aur doosri baat agar tumhein pehle se hii patah tha kii meri khushi kii wajah kya hai tho tumne pehle kyun nahii bataya..
Armaan:- in baaton ka jawaab dena zaroori hai kya ridsy..
Ridhimma:- haan hai mere pyaare armuu..
Armaan:- agar aisa hai tho phir pehle main tumhare doosare sawal ka jawaab detha hoon.. mujhe pehle se hii tumhare khushi ka raaz patah tha, lekin maine tho bas tumko chidane ke liye woh theeno jawaab ghalat diye the… main tumhari taang kheech raha hai… aur tum ho kii khamakha serious ho rahii thi..
Ridhimma:- hahahaha… very funny armaan.. ab tum mere pehle sawaal ka jawaab do…
Armaan:- well pehle sawaal ka jawaab bohat hii simple hai.. aur jawaab yeh hai kii tum hamesha se hii mujhse mere big-b yeh, mere big-b woh kehthi rehthi thi na.. aur jab se tumhare big-b aur swayam ke beech who MD ke post kii jung shuru hui hai us din se lekar aaj thak tum yahii thi keh rahiiho kii big-b jeetenge.. aur shayad tum apni khushi mein yeh bhi bhool gayi kii pichle ek mahine se tumaaj ke din , aaj kii tareekh ka zikar mujhse roz karthi thi.. toz kehthi thi kii bas aut thees din, bas aur unatthees din, bas aur pchis din, bas bas dus din, bas aur paanch din.. aur kal tumne kaha tha bas aur ek din.. tho zaahir si baat hai na mujhe itna tho zaroor maloon chal gaya hoga kii deciding day ke din faisla rumhare big-g ke favor mein hua hjai.. kyun ridsy mujhe patah hoga na.. [armaan asks this to ridhimma with a mischevious smile on his face, a teasing smile…]
Ridhimma:- haannn..
Armaan:- tumhare big-b kii khushi tumhare liye bohat mayine rakhthi hai na ridsy…
Ridhimma:- haan armu… big-b kii khushi humare ghar par sab ke liye bohat mayine rakhthi hai.. agar big-b khush hai tho saare ghar mein khushi hothi hai.. unke chehre par udaasi kii ek bhi shikan humse bardshat nahii hothi…
Armaan:- haan main samaj saktha hoon tumhari baat ko ridsy.. humare ghar par bhii chah kii khushi hum sabke ke liye bohat mayine rakhthi hai.. chah kii ek muskaan ke liye main kuch bhii karoonga.. agar chah aur uski khushi ke beech kissi ne aane kii koshish kii tho main us shaks kii jaan lene se bhii peeche nahii hatoonga…
Ridhimma:- tum chah dii se bohat pyaar karthe ho na armuu… unhe bohat yaad bhi karthe ho na…
Armaan:- haan ridsy yeh baat tho sach hai main chah ko bohat yaad kartha hoon.. ghar par sabse zyada ussi ko miss kartha hoon…
Ridhimma:- tho tum ghar jaake sabse aur chah dii se mil kyun nahii aathe…
Armaan:- nahii ridsy.. main wahaan nahii jaana chahtha hoon..
Ridhimma:- lekin kyun armaan.. waise bhi takreeban ek saal hone ko aaya hai, aur tum ghar nahii gaye.. jab tum apne gharwaalon ko itna miss karthe ho tho tum ghar jaathe kyun nahii ho… armaan tum na kabhi-kabhi mere samaj mein nahii aathe….
Armaan:- ridsy yeh baat kisi ke samaj ne kii nahii haii.. baat tho bas itna hii hai kii main ghar nahii jaata hoon kyunke har baar main wahaan jaatha hoon bas ek haft eke liye lekin wapas aathe waqt sabko rulakar aatha hoon.. tho issi liye maine socha hai kii main ek bar apni padayi poori kar loon phir jaaunga unke pass.. wahiin par kaam karoonga..
Ridhimma:- iska matlab tum apni padayi ke baad Delhi chale jaaoge…. Mujhe chod kar… [ridhimma makes a sad face..]
Armaan:- ridst common yaar… tum please abhi se aisi shakal matt banao… dekho ridsy jaise mera tumhari taraf farz hai ussi tarah kuch farz hai joh mujhe nibhane hai apniu family kii taraf.. aur main jaantha hoon kii woh mujhse durr rehkar khush nahii hai.. aur ab main apni padayi ke baad bhi internship ke liye yahaan rukhkar unko aur takleef nahii de saktha.. lekin haan main tumse waada kartha hoon kii main tumhe roz phone karoonga.. do hafte mein ek baar tumse milne aaya karoonga weekend par.. aur sabse important waada yeh kii main wahaan jaakar kissi aur ladki kii taraf aankh utta kar bhii nahii dekhoonga….
Ridhimma smiles listening to armaan's promises & she says:- armaan main sach keh rahii hoon agar tum ne kissi aur ladki kii taraf ankh utta kar bhii dekha tho main tumhe chodoongi nahii…
Armaan:- haan.. jaantha hoon tum mera kya hashal karr sakthi ho.. lekin fikar matt karo meri joh then behene wahaan Delhi mein baiti hui hai na, woh hii mujhe kahiin ka nahii chodengi.. agar maine koi ulti-seedhi harkat karne kii koshish kii tho… issi liye tum fikar matt karo main kuch aisa-waisa nahii karoonga…
Ridhimma laughs & says:- yeh hui na baat… lekin waise bhii armaan abhi humari padayi khatam hone mein aur che mahine baaki hai.. aur phir saathve mahine mein humare exams hai.. tho humein exams ke baare mein sochna chahiye naaki uske agge kii…
Armaan:- saath mahine baad hai na exams… kal tho nahii hai na… tho saath mahine baad kii baat che mahine ke baad sochenge.. abhi se kaun kitaabon mein apna saara sweet time barbaad karega..
Ridhimma:- armaannn.. tum bhi na.. Thank God tumne yeh nahii kaha kii exams kii baat exams ke baad sochenge…
Armaan:- actually dekha jaye tho main wahii kehna waala tha.. lekin maine apna irada badal liya.. tum ghussa hogi na..
Ridhimma:- armaan you know what you are totally impossible.. tumhara kuch nahii ho saktha hai…
Armaan:- jaantha hoon.. thank you..
Ridhimma just sighs…
Armaan:- ridsy tum yeh sab baatein chodo aur mujhe batao kii tumhare Big-B ko Garewal Industries ka Managing Director bana diya gaya hai, tho kya koi party sharty nahii hogii..
Ridhimma:- arre haan main tho tumhe batana hii bhool gayi.. party tho hai aaj sham ko.. it seems dadu aaj sham ko party mein sabke saamne announce karenge kii kal se Yash Garewal, Garewal Industries ke Managing Director honge…
Armaan:- wooww.. coolll yaar… tho iska matlab kya yeh hua kii main khud ko invited samju party ke liye..
Ridhimma:- tum party mein aaoge.. woh bhi mere ghar…
Armaan:- kyun nahii aaun kya… waise bhii tumhare theeno bhai tho mere baare mein jaanthe hii hai na.. issi bahane main unse bhi mil loonga.. kyun ridsy kya kehthi ho, idea kaisa hai..
Ridhimma:- armaan tum keh tho sahii rahe ho, kii agar tum party mein aaoge tho Big-B, Bhai, aur rishi se mil tho sakoge.. lekin agar tum ghar aaoge tho ek problem ho jaayegi..
Armaan:- problem, kaisi problem zara main bhi tho jaanu…
Ridhimma:- well agar tum ghar aaoge aur kahiin dida, badi-maa aur mom ko patah chal gaya na kii tum mere kaun ho tho woh log mujhse kehne lagenge kii woh tumhari family se milna chahthe hai, shaddi kii baat karne ke liye.. aur armaan hum dono mein se abhi koi nahii chahtha shaddi karna.. hum dono hii yahii chahthe hai kii hum pehle kuch bann jaye phir hum shaddi karenge, aur agge kii sochenge..
Armaan:- baat tho tumhari sahii hai ridsy.. lekin waise main tumse ek sawaal poochna chahtha hoon…
Ridhimma:- poocho na..
Armaan:- main tumhara kaun hoon ridhimma..
Ridhimma:- yeh kaisa sawaal hai armu..
Armaan:- well sawaal tho bada hii simple aur seedha hai ridsy, tum hii ne tho kaha tha kii agar main tumhare ghar party mein aaunga tho tumhari dida, mom aur badi-maa ko patah lag jaayega kii main tumhara kaun hoon.. tho batao na ridsy main tumhara kaun hoon..
Ridhimma thoda sa sharmaathe hue kehthi hai:- kyunn tum nahii jaanthe kii tum mere kaun ho…
Armaan:- nahii na main sachchi nahii jaantha main tumhara kaun hoon… batao na.. main jaan na chahtha hoon kii main tumhara kaun hoon..[armaan says this teasingly..]
Ridhimma blushes harder & hugs armaan & says:- armaan.. tum bhi na bohat bure ho…
Armaan holds ridhimma in a hug & says:- ridsy kya karr rahii ho, koi dekh lega..
Ridhimma:- agar koi dekhtha hai tho dekhne do.. tum sirf mere ho aur sabko yeh baat samaj leni chahiye…
Armaan:- [smiles & says] agar tum na bhi chaho na tab bhii main tumhara hii rahoonga..
Ridhimma suddenly breaks the hug & says:- arre in sab baaton mein main ek baat tho bhool hii gayi…
armaan says:- kya hua ridsy… kaunsi baat bhool gayi tum…
ridhimma:- armaan big-b mujhe lene university aane waale the.. lekin woh ab thak nahii aaye…
armaan:- shayad woh raaste mein honge ridsy, is mein itni pareshaan hone kii kaunsi baat hai…
ridhimma:- nahii armaan big-b ne mujhe one & half hour pehle call kiya tha.. lekin garewal industries ke office se university ka raastha bas 45 minutes ka hai..
armaan:- tho tum ek kaam karo ek baar phone karlo unhe… issi bahane tumhe bhi tasalli mil jayegi na..
ridhimma:- haan yeh theek rahega… ridhimma then takes her phone & dials yash's number..
yash on the other hand who is stuck up in the traffic picks up ridhimma's call:- haan ridzi bol…
ridhimma:- big-b aap kahaan ho.. ab thak aap university kyun nahii aaye.
Yash:- arre ridzi main traffic mein phasa hoon.. yahaan ek accident hua hai tumhare university ke aane ke raasthe par.. tumhare university se bees minute kii durr par hoon.. shayad wahaan aate-aate aadha ghanta lag jaayega..
On the other side we can see chah has come out of the airport & is looking for a taxi joh kii usse Armaan ke university ko le jaye…
Tab aah taxi driver comes there & stops the car… & chah gaadi mein bait jaati hai… then the driver says:- madam jii aap kahaan jaana chahthi hai..
Chah:- main Shimla Medical University jaana chahthi hoon…
Tazi Driver:- theek hai madam jii… waise madam jii aap kaunse raaste jaana chahengi, kyunke Shimla Medical University jaane ke do raasthe hai, ek raasta Garewal industries ke pass se guzartha hai, aur doosra raasta thoda sa kachcha hai.. wahaan par sadak theek se nahii bani hai…
Chah is thinking & she does not answer the drivers question, she thinks:- Garewal… kahiin Garewal Industries se woh tho nahii juda hai.. kahiinyeh wohii tho nahii.. jis shaks kii yaadon se main pichle theen saal se bhaag ne kii koshish karr rahii hoon, kahiin woh shaks issi seher mein tho nahii rehtha…
Tab the driver honks & gets chah out of her thoughts:- batayiye na madam jii, kiss raaste chalun…
Chah:- kachcha raastha le lo.. kyunke main nahii chahthi kii aur dher ho.. [actually chah wanted to avoid the garewal industries route, as the name garewal usse kissi kii yaad dila raha tha…]
The taxi driver:- theek hai madam jii.. jaisa aap chahein…
Yahaan chah is in the car.. the kachcha raastha is a half an hour route to the university, it is a short cut aur traffic bhi nahii hothi raasthe mein… yahaan on the other side Yash is finally relieved that the traffic there has started moving…
Finally yash university pohanch jaatha hai.. even chah reaches the university around the same time… chah is turning her head & paying the taxi driver, aur yahaan yash apni gaadi se utartha hai… when yash gets down there is a gush of air which huts his face.. & yash starts feeling that someone who is close to him is there… woh mudhkar harr jagah dekhtha hai, lekin he cannot see chah's face as chah is facing the other side..
Right at the time when chah turns around to face the college & walk inside, tabhi idhar se Yash ko koi bulatha hai.. It is the security of the university…
Yash turns around to see the security.. the security says:- sahib aap ridhimma jii ke bade-bhai ho na...
Yash nods his head & says:- haan..
The security guard says:- ridhimma jii ne mujhse kaha tha kii agar aap aayenge tho main aapko wahan parking lot ke pass bhej doon, woh aapko wahiin par milenge…
Yash:- jii shukriya… yash starts walking.. lekin he stops & asks the security person] suno yeh parking lot ko kaise jaathe hai…
The security guard says:- jii sahib, yahaan se seedha jaayiye aur phir daayein mud jayiye, wahaan apko two wheelers kii parking milengii, wahan se agge baayein mudenge tho car parking milegi…
Yash says thank you & starts to walk off.. he walks straight for some distance & then suddenly stops, thinks if the security guard told daayaan aur baayaan first… yash wahaan khada hoke sochthe hii rehtha hai, jab koi usse takratha hai.. someone while walking hits his shoulder… yash turns back to that person & says:- hey you.. watch out… yash is seeing the guy joh kii jaa chukka hotha hai.. & that is the exact moment when chah walks past yash… yash aur chah ko kuch ehsaas tho hotha hai.. unko yeh bhii lagtha hai kii woh ek baar mudhkar dekhe.. lekin both ignore that feeling.. chah keeps walking agge.. yash turns around & says to chah joh agge kii taraf chal rahii hothi hai:- excuse me kya aap mujhe parking lot ka raastha bata sakthi hai…
Chah does not turn around, but says:- sorry mr, main khud apna raastha dhoond rahii hoon.. yeh kehkar chah agge chalthi jaathi hai.. & here yash ko yeh black kuti, blue jeans waali ladki bohat jaani pechaani lagthi hai.. but still he brushes off the feeling & asks some other passer by about the raastha….
Now on the other side chah ko armaan kahiin nahii dikh raha hotha hai… so she comes back from where she was heading to.. this time again yash & chah ek doosre ko dekhthe dekhthe reh jaathe hai.. as chah is too busy looking for armaan & yash is busy to catch a glimpse of ridhimma.. with many students coming, in & out it was becoming hard for both of them to find their raastha…
Finally chah armaan ko dhoonthe-dhoondthe thak jaathi hai & she goes & stands under the shade of a tree & decides to call armaan…
Armaan & ridhimma are waiting for yash in the parking lot…. Armaan bhi yash se milna chahtha tha, yash ko badhayi dena chahtha tha… tabhi armaan ka cell bajtha hai.. his smile widens when he sees kii it is chah's call..
Armaan:- chahhh.. kaisi ho tum…. Madam bohat busy hai aaj kal…
Chah:- armaan main theek hoon.. waise busy main nahii tum ho… tum aate hii nahii ho, ghar…
Armaan:- chah aisi koi baat nahii hai… woh bas meri classes itni hectic main kya kahoon..
Chah says teasingly:- haan, haan.. main jaanthi hoon tumhe kaun busy rakh raha hai.. tumhare classes ya phir ridsy..
Armaan blushes a little & says:- chahh.. aisi koi baat nahii hai.. waise main ghar nahii aatha theek hai mantha hoon main, lekin tum bhi tho yahaan aa sakthi ho na mujhse milne…
Chah:- your wish is my command sir…
Armaan:- kya matlab hai tumhara..
Chah:- tumhare university ke building ke agge ped [tree] ke shade mein khadi hui hoon.. aa jaao jaldi se..
Armaan:- chah are you serious..
Chah:- haan armaan.. dekho ab tum yahaan jaldi aao.. warna main tho jaa rahii hoon..
Armaan:- chah tum wahii ruko main abhi aa raha hoon… abhi bas aa raha hoon.. do minute mein..
Chah:- theek hai.. theek hai.. itne over-excited matt ho.. main idhar hii hoon..
Armaan cuts the phone & then tells ridhimma:- ridsy chah yahaan mujhse milne aayi hai.. chalo chalthe hai usse milne…
Ridhimma:- armaan big-b abhi yahan aate hii honge.. unhone abhi mujhe message kiya hai kii woh college pohanch chuke hai, tho tum jao main jaise hii big-b aayenge unhe bhi le aaungi tumse aur chah se milne ke liye..
Armaan:- achcha theek hai… tum jaldi aana.. main jaatha hoon.. armaan starts running…
Ridhimma smiles at his excitement & says:- armaan sambhal ke.. warna gir jaaoge..
Armaan just turns around gives a nod to ridhimma & then again runs & vanishes in the thin air…
Yahaan ridhimma is watching armaan go & laughing aur doosri taraf yash , ridhimma ko peeche se bulatha hai..
Yash:- ridzi..
Ridhimma turns around sees yash & runs to him & hugs.. & starts telling:- big-b aap nahii jaanthe main aaj kitni khush hoon.. big-b aap garewal industries ke Managing Director bann gaye… aap contract jeet gaye… yess.. main bohat khush hoon big-b.. mujhe tho pehle se hii patah tha kii yeh contract aur managing director kii post tho aapko hii milegi.. dekha big-b main hamesha aapse kehthi thin a kii you deserve the position of being the MD of the garewal industries.. main sahii thi.. yes.. yes.. yes.. ridhimma keeps jumping aur yash ridhimma kii itni excitement dekhkar smile kartha hai..
& then ridhimma continues:- big-b aaj aapne phir ek baar swayam ko hara diya.. aaj us swayam ko patah chalega kii woh kabhi aap se jeet nahii saktha.. aaj us swayam kii saari akad toot gayi hogi.. achcha hua harr gaya woh…
Yash:- ridzi maine jab se kaam karna shuru kiya na tab se mujhe ek baat seekh ne ko mili hai.. aur wohii baat main aj tujhse keh raha hoon.. dekh ridzi kabhi bhi humein humari jeet kii tullna, kissi ke harr se nahii karni chahiye.. yeh ghalat hoga.. main jaantha hoon kii kissi ke jeet ke liye kissi kii harr zaroori hai… lekin humein yeh kabhi yeh nahii bhool ni chahiye kii haar jeet tho kismet ka khel hai.. maine is ek saal mein kuch seekha hai joh main tujhe in lines mein batana chahtha hoon "Haar jeet ka khel tho ek dastoor hai, is mein na jeetne waale na haarne wa aala ka kasoor hai…Yeh tho bas kismet ka khel hai jahaan ek taraf aati jeet hai tho duji taraf aati haar hai…" [ yeh lines maine likha hai do tell me if you like them..]
Ridhimma:- big-b aapki baatein meri samaj mein nahii aathi.. aapko us swayam ke liye bura lag raha hai jisne kabhi aapka bhala nahii chaha…
Yash:- ridzi yahaan baat swayam kii baat nahi hai.. main bas itna keh raha hoon kii agar tumhe kabhi apni jeet ka jashn manana ho, tho beshak manao, lekin not at the cost of showing it off to others, khaas karke usko jiski harr hui hai…
Ridhimma:- big-b lekin us swayam ke khilaaf tho hum aisa karr hii sakthe hai na.. anyway woh humari sympathy nahii deserve kartha..
Yash:- haan ridzi main jaantha hoon.. aur samaj bhii raha hoon teri baat ko.. lekin ridzi hum humari is jeet kii khushi mein us swayam ka zikar karke humari khushi ko kum kyun kare… main sahii hoon na..
Ridhimma:- haan aap sahii ho… big-b kya main aapse ek sawaal pooch sakthi hoon..
Yash:- haan ridzi pooch na.. tujhe mujhse kuch pooch ne ke liye ijazat kab se leni pad rahii hai….
Ridhimma:- big-b aapne swayam ko maff kar diya kya big-b…
Yash:- ridzi main kabhi zindagi mein kuch logon ko maaf nahii ka saktha hoon…
Ridhimma:- aur un kuch logon mein bade-papa bhi aathe hai..
Yash:- haan mr.lalit garewal bhi un mein se ek hai.. tum jaanthi ho ridzi main swayam se zyada nafrat mr.lalit garewal se kartha hoon.. kyunke unki wajah se kabhi meri maa ko woh ijzzat nahii mili joh milni chahiye thi… swayam ko humari zindagi mein lane waale aur koi nahi wohii the.. tum keh rahii thi na kii maine swayam ko maaf kar diya, lekin sach baat tho yeh hai kii main kabhi bhii swayam kp maaf nahi kar saktha.. bas farq sirf itna hai ki aaj kal mr.lalit garewal ya phir swayam kuch bhi kahe mujh par unki baaton ka koi asar nahii padtha.. I don't let them effect me… lekin haan ridzi iska matlab yeh nahii kii main chup rahoonga chahe woh log kuch bhi kare.. nahii kabhi nahii.. mujhe burayi ke khilaaf ladna aatha hai.. lekin jab thak swayam kissi ladayi kii shuruwaat nahii karega, tab thak main bhi kuch nahii karoonga.. lekin agar swayam ne mere pariwaar ke khilaaf kuch bhii karne kii koshish kii tho swayam kii ghatiya chaalon ka anth main karoonga.. aur swayam ko sabak bhi sikhaoonga…
Ridhimma:- big-b kya aapke is pariwaar ke dayire mein bade-papa bhi aathe hai….
Yash tries to change the topic & says:- ridzi yeh tub hi kya-kya baatein lekar bait gayi.. chalo mujhe tyum armaan se nahii milaaogi kya..
Ridhimma:- achcha theek hai chaliye aap yeh sab chodiye aur mere saath chaliye aap armaan se milna chahthe hai na waise bhi armaan aap se milna chahtha hai.. bohat utavla ho raha hai aapse milne ke liye…
Yash smiles & says:- achcha theek hai chal….
On the other side we can see chah & armaan…
Armaan:- mujhe tho ab bhi yakeen nahii ho raha hai kii tum yahaan aayi ho…
Chah:- armaan tum yakeen karte hue yahaan raho main tho chali…
Armaan:- arre chah, main bas apni khushi zaahir karr raha tha.. waise bhi ghar par sabse mile hue ek saal hone ko aaya hai..
Chah:- haan jaanthi hoon main, tujhe ghar aaye ek saal hone ko aaya hai.. lekin ghar tho tu hii nahii aaya na.. aur tu baat tho aise karr raha hai jaise kii hum logon ne tujhe mana kiya hai kii armaan tum ghar matt aao.. tum tho aise keh rahe ho jaise kii tumhare ghar pe aane ke liye koi pabhandi lagi hai…
Armaan:- arre chah.. aisi koi baat nahii hai.. tum tho jaanthi ho na kii main ghar kyun nahii aa raha hoon.. phone par bataya tha na maine tumhe…
Chah:- haan.. haan sab jaanthi hoon main…
Armaan:- waise tum yahaan achanak kaise aagayi… koi khaas wajah Shimla aane ke liye..
Chah:- armaan agar tumhe mera yahaan aana pasand nahii tho koi baat nahii main chali jaaungi…
Armaan:- chah aisi koi baat nahii hai aur tum bhi yeh baat jaanthi ho na.. main bas aise hii pooch raha hoon…
Chah:- main bas mazaak kar rahii thi armaan.. darasal main mere Hospital kii taraf se Shimla Medical University ke liye ek proposal laayi hoon.. woh practicing interns ke internship ke liye…
Armaan:- yeh tho bohat achchi baat hai…
Chah:- tho jab mere hospital waale kissi shaks kii khoj karr rahe the joh Shimla jaa sake tho maine volunteer kiya aur kaha kii main jaaungi, kyunke maine socha kii kaam ka kaam bhi ho jaayega aur issi bahane main tumse bhi mil sakti hoon.. tho bas flight liya aur aagayi idhar..
Armaan:- iska matlab tum yahaan mujhse milne nahii balki apna kaam karne aayi ho.. hmmm [armaan makes a sad face & continues] wohii tho main kahoon mujhse koi yahaan thodi na milne aayega….
Chah:- armaan tu apni nautanki bund kar..
Armaan:- yeh lo tumhe bhi lagtha hai kii main nautanki karr raha hoon aur wahaan ridsy ko bhi lagtha hai kii main nautanki karr raha hoon.. mujhe tho lagtha hai kii aap log jab bhi ridsy se baat karthe honge tab meri hii burayi karthe honge.. tum sabki mili bhagat hai yeh.. main jaantha hoon..
Chah:- armaannn.. hum sab ko lagtha hai kii tum nautankii karthe ho kyunke tum duniya ke sabse bade dramebaaz ho.. bina nautanki kiye , bina drama kiye tumhara ek bhi din nahii jaatha….
Armaan:- hahaha… very funny… lekin waise achcha hua joh tum yahaan aagayi.. mujhe tumhari bohat yaad aa rahii thi.. abhi kuch dher pehle main aur ridsy tumhari baat kar rahe the…
Chah:- waise tho mujhe bhi tumhari bohat yaad aa rahi thi.. issi liye kaam ke bahane tumse milne chali aayi…
Both armaan & chah get teary.. & chah hugs armaan.. armaan head is facing the tree.. & chah is facing the other side… tabhi wahaan yash aur ridhimma aathe hai.. ridhimma asks yash to stand at a place & woh apne kuch doston se pooch ne jaati hai kii if they have seen armaan.. yahaan yash khade hoke chaaron taraf dekhthe hii rehtha hai.. when suddenly he sees chah… chah ko dekhthe hii yash ke saamne uske beete hue kal ke kadvi yaadein aa jaathi hai.. chah's words are ringing in his ears:- main tumse pyaar nahii karti… kyunke main pyaar jaise shabd par yakeen hii nahii karti.. tumse tho kya main kabhi kissi se pyaar nahii kar sakthi.. so it is better tum apne raasthe jao aur main apne….
Yash comes out of his thoughts.. & still sees chah in a hug with some other man.. Yash is burning with jealousy… he cannot see armaan's face as , armaan is facing the opposite direction.. chah also does not see yash as her eyes her closed… yash keeps seeing them… aur woh apne khayalon mein ghum hotha hai.. he has some images & chah & him smiling.. giving hi-fy to each other… laughing.. chasing each other around…
Yahaan chah & armaan break away from there hug, chah ruffles armaan's hair & tells him:- armaan main ab jaakar tumhare university ke dean se milkar aathi hoon.. warna dher na ho jaye… waise bhii raat gyarah baje meri return flight hai.. tho bas ek baar dean se milkar aa jaaun, phir tumhare aur ridsy ke saath aaraam se baitkar baat karoongi…
Armaan says ok & then gives her directions to go to the dean's office..
Chah leaves the place , even armaan does seeing ridhimma somewhere at a distance.. yahaan yash is still lost in his thoughts… chah goes inside the college, armaan goes to ridhimma….
Ridhimma sighs & says:- armaan kahaan the tum.. main kabse tumhe dhoond rahii hoon… aur chah dii kahaan hai…
Armaan:- main tho yahii tha, aur chah abhi andar gayi hai dean se milne.. woh apne hospital se koi proposal laayi hai humare university ke liye , issi liye dean se milne gayi hai.. waise tumhare big-b ab thak nahii aaye kya..
Ridhimma:- arre big-b tho kabki aagaye… woh wahaan humara wait karr rahe hai chalo…
Armaan:- theek hai chalo…
Yahaan armaan & ridhimma walk to yash.. & ridhimma nudges him.. yash comes out of his thoughts & still stares at the place jahaanhe just saw chah hugging someone..
Ridhimma:- big-b kya hua… kahaan kho gaye aap…
Yash looks at ridhimma & armaan… & then says:- nahii kahiin nahii ridzi…
Ridhimma:- big-b yeh armaan hai… aur armaan yeh
Isse pehle kii ridhimma kuch keh sake armaan kehtha hai:- jaantha hoon tumhare big-b hai… Mr.Yash Garewal…
Armaan apna haatn agge kartha hai aur kehtha hai:- hello sir.. itne dino se aapke baar mein sunn raha hoon, aakhirkaar aapse mil raha hoon.. aapse milne kii kitni zyada khushi hai mujhe main aapko yeh bata nahii saktha…
Yash:- hii armaan.. main bhi bohat dino se tumse milna chah raha tha.. lekin kabhi mouka hii nahii mila… waise yeh meri chotti behen tumhein pareshaan tho nahii karti na…
Ridhimma whines & says:- kya big-b aap bhi.. main kya sabko pareshaan karthi hoon…
Yash:- haan, aur nahi tho kya.. tu ghar par hum sabko aur university mein bechare armaan ko pareshaan karti ho.. teri sab khabar hai mujhe..
Armaan:- haan aap sahii keh rahe hai bohat pareshaan karti hai ridhimma mujhe.. aur tung bhii karti hai.. lekin kya karein zindagi bhar ab issi ke saath guzara karna padega.. aur koi choice bhii nahii hai.. kyunke agar main kissi aur ladki kii taraf jaaunga tho mujhe is bechari par taras aatha hai, tho main isse tho chod kar nahii jaaunga…
Yash & armaan giggle…
Ridhimma:- [says with a sad face..] aap logon ko mujhe tung karne mein bohat mazaa aatha hai na.. jaao main aap logon se nahii bolthi…
Yash:- arre ridzi hum tho bas mazaak karr rahe the.. bhale hum tere bagair reh sakthe hai kya.. tu tho humari aankhon ka tara hai… kyun armaan..
Armaan:- haan ridhimma hum tho bas mazaak karr rahe the.. tumhari kasam…
Ridhimma ab bhi nahii maanthi tho… yash & armaan dono hii apne kaan pakadthe hai aur bohat hii sweet tareeke se kehthe hai:- sorry ridzi/ridsy, agli baar hum aisa mazaak bilkul nahii karenge.. pukka…
Ridhimma yeh dekh kar has dethi hai..
Ridhimma jaake yash ke pass khadi ho jaathi hai giving him a side hug.. aur armaan ridhimma ko ishare mein boltha hai kii even he wants a hug lekin ridhimma usse isharon mein kehthi hai later..…
Ab armaan yash se kehtha hai:- waise sir maine suna hai aap garewal indurstries ke naye MD hai.. Congratulations..
Yash smiles & tells:- thank you so much armaan.. main shayad yeh kabhi nahii kar paatha agar meri family mera saath na dethi thi.. waise armaan tum aaj shaam aa rahe ho na party mein…
Armaan:- sir main aana tho chahtha hoon lekin ridhimma ne mana kiya hai…
Yash:- ridhimma ne… lekin kyun…
Ridhimma:- big-b woh isliye kyunke agar armaan ghar aagaya aur dida, badi-maa, ya mom ko iske baare mein patah chal gaya, tho woh mujhe settle hone ke liye force karenge.. aur abhi settle hona main aur armaan nahii chahthe.. aap jaanthe hai na big-b..
Yash:- ridzi koi baat nahii hogi.. agar koi poochega tho hum bata denge kii armaan mera dost hai.. bas aur kissi ko shak bhii nahii hoga.. theek hai…
Ridhimma:- lekin big-b..
Yash:- ridzi dekh tu tension matt le.. agar kissi ne pooch bhi liya tho main sambhal loonga..
Ridhimma:- thanku so much big-b…
Yash smiles & says:- tho armaan it is final tum aaj shaam aa rahe ho…
Armaan:- nahii sir woh darasal…
Yash:- pehli baat tho tum mujhe sir kehna chod do.. ya tho um mujhe yash keh sakthe ho ya phir ridzi kii tarah big-b, ya phir joh tum chaho.. lekin please sir nahii…
Armaan:- theek hai tho main aapko bhai bulaoonga.. waise bhi mera koi bhai nahii hai…
Yash:- theek hai done.. lekin ab tum mujhe batao kii tum aj shaam kii party mein kyun nahii aa sakthe… kya tum apne bhai kii itni si baat nahii man sakthe…
Armaan:- nahii bhai.. baat darasal yeh hai kii meri behen aayi hui hai Delhi se.. woh aaj raat kii flight se wapas jaa rahii hai, tho maine socha kii kuch waqt uske saath bita loon.. warna main zaroor aatha..
Yash:- bas itni si baat.. is baat ke liye merr pass ek solution hai.. jisse kii tum bhi party attend karr sako, aur tumhari behen ko bhi tumhari company mil jaye…
Armaan:- woh kaise…
Yash:- woh aise armaan kii tum aaj shaam party mein apni behen ko bhi leke aao.. issi bahane tumhari behen ko bhi company mil jayegi, woh bhi bore nahii hogi.. tum aur tumhari behen dono party attend kar sakoge… this is just a suggestion.. ab is baat ko maana ya na maana tum par nirbhar hai..
Armaan smiles & says:- bhai main koshish karoonga kii main aur meri behen party mein aa sake.. main apni behen se pooch kar dekhtha hoon kii kya woh mere saath aayegi.. agar woh mere sath aane ke liye raazi hothi hai tho main zaroor aaunga…
Yash:- theek hai.. lekin humein tumhara intezaar rahega.. khaas karke ridzi ko tumhare aane ka intezaar rahega…
Ridhimma blushes & says:- big-b…
Yash just laughs.. tabhi yash ka cell bajtha hai.. yash picks up his call..
Yash:- hellooo..
Akshat:- yash kahaan ho tum.. ghar kab aa rahe ho.. ridhimma kahaan hai.. yash kuch bol na.. tu kuch bol kyun nahii raha hai…
Yash:- akki main bolunga tho tab na jab tu chup baitega…
Akshat:- achcha theek hai bol, ab tho chup hoon na main…
Yash:- achcha tho sunn main ridzi ke university mein hoon.. ridzi mere saath hai.. main abhi ridzi ko lekar ghar hii aa raha hoon…
Akshat:- theek hai jaldi aao.. humein ridzi ke kuch ideas chahiye aaj ke party ke liye…
Yash:- theek hai hum aa rahe hai, tum phone rakho…
Akshat:- rakh raha hoon.. byee.. jaldi aana…
Yash:- haann… byee…
After cutting the call yash tells rishimma:- Ridzi humein ab jaana chahiye… akshat ko tumhare kuch ideas chahiye shaam ke party ke liye… tho hum chalein…
Ridhimma:- haan big-b chaliye… armaan tum shaam mein aa jaa na.. aur dii ko bhi le aana…
Armaan:- haan theek hai.. main koshish karoonga… and bhai congratulations once again.. I'am very happy for you…
Yeh kehke armaan hugs yash.. & ysh acknowledges the hug & pats armaan's back.. aur smile kartha hai…
Ridhimma:- big-b chalein hum…
Yash:- haan chalo..
Both yash & ridhimma tell bye to armaan….
Then ridhimma & yash leave bidding good-bye to armaan.. & armaan keeps waiting for chah in the university…
Yahaan yash drives back home lekin baar-baar uske zehen mein chah ka chehra aa raha hotha hai.. he is not able to divert his thoughts from that of chah.. yahaan thak kii aisa bhii hua kii ridhimma kept talking on various things lekin yash ne uski baaton ka bhi theek se jawaab nahii diya.. he was lost in his thoughts while he was driving.. yash ko yeh bhi lagne laga tha kii kahiin chah ko dekhna uska bhram tho nahii tha.. lekin kahiin na kahiin yash ko yeh yakeen tha kii usne zaroor chah ko dekha hai.. ridhimma ko yash ka yeh bartaav thoda ajeeb laga lekin she just ignored it.. yash & ridhimma reach home…
Yahaan doosri taraf chah apni meeting khatam karke aathi hai.. armaan is waiting for her, he goes to her & says:- tho madam finally tumhari meeting khatam ho gayi…
Chah:- haan yaar.. armaan tumhara dean kitna pakatha hai.. usse joh bhii baat karo har baat ke liye uske pass ek flashback hothi hai… kabhi meri maa kehtha hai.. tho kabhi meri behen.. ufff… paka diya usne mujhe…
Armaan:- haan chah main jaantha hoon.. humara dean ek number ka rotlu insaan hai… lekin tum mujhe batao tumhari meeting kaisi rahii.. jis kaam ke liye tum aayi thi woh successful hua kii nahii…
Chah:- aisa kabhi ho saktha hai kii chah mehra apne haaton mein koi kaam le aur woh poora na ho…
Armaan:- iska matlab woh sadu maan gaye…
Chah:- well mujhse tho usne nahii kaha.. lekin keh rahe the kii mere hospital head se baat karenge aur further proceedings karenge… tho iska matlab tho yahii hua na kii mera kaam sucessful raha…
Armaan:- woww.. yaar congrats…
Chah:- thank you.. armaan ab mujhe batao shaam ka kya plan hai…
Armaan:- well agar tum chaho tho we can attend a party…
Chah:- party.. lekin armaan tum tho jaanthe ho na mujhe parties mein jaana pasand nahii hai…
Armaan:- haan theek hai koi baat nahii.. kuch aur karthe hai..
Chah sees kii armaan ka chehra utar gaya hai & she asks armaan:- waise kisske ghar mein party hai zara bata tho…
Armaan:- woh darasal ridsy ke ghar mein party hai…
Chah:- ohhh.. aur kiss khushi mein ho rahii hai yeh party…
Armaan:- well aaj ridsy ke bhai ko unke industries ka Managing Director banaya hai.. aur ridsy ke bhai ne tumhe aur mujhe khaas bulaya hai…
Chah:- hmm.. tho ab samjhii.. theek hai agar aisi baat hai tho tujhe shaam ke liye koi aur plan banane kii zaroorat nahii hai.. hum ridsy ke ghar chalthe hai party ke liye.. lekin hum jaldi aa jaayenge.. okiee..
Armaan gets a bhatisi smile on his face & says:- done.. you are the best..[armaan hugs chah..]
Chah:- chal chod ab mujhe maska lagana bund kar.. aur chalo…
Chah & armaan leave the university premises..
Yahaan garewal house mein yash, akshat, ridhimma, rishi are discussing about the evenings party.. balki yeh kahoongi tho theek hoga kii akshat, ridhimma, rishi were discussing about the evening party plans.. aur pallavi, veena, dadi were all fussing over yash.. usko kabhi juice pila rahe hai, tho kabhi kuch aur de rahe hothe hai khane ke liye.. unko aisa lag raha hotha hai kii ab agar kal se yash office as a full time MD join karega tho woh khud par koi dhyaan nahii dega.. issi liye they are fusing about him.. yash wahaan se jaana chahtha hai kuch time ke liye akele rehna chahtha hai… lekin koi bhi usse akele hii chod raha hotha hai..
Yahaan let us see akshat, ridhimma, rishi kya discuss karr rahe hai…
Rishi:- main keh raha hoon hum aaj costume dress party rakhthe hai.. yahii sabse achcha rahega…
Akshat:- nahii rishi… yeh bilkul achcha idea nahii hai…
Ridhimma:- main bhai ke baat se sehmat hoon.. yeh idea bilkul achcha nahii hai rishi kuch aur socho…
Akshat:- tho ek kaam karthe hai aaj ke party ka ek theme rakhthe hai..
Rishi:- theme.. kaisa theme…
Akshat:- well color theme…
Ridhimma:- matlab main kuch samjhi nahii…
Akshat:- dekho main tum logon ko samjhatha hoon.. well hum aisi condition rakhthe hai kii ladke should wear blue, white or black… and girls.. well let me think… girls shayad purple… &.. &… akshat keeps thinking… isse pehle kii woh kuch kahe ridhimma says….
Ridhimma:- noo.. purple nahii.. bilkul nahii…
Rishi:- bilkul nahii bol ne se behtar hai kii tu hume bata kii ladkiyon ko kaunsi color ke kapde pehen ne chahiye….
Ridhimma:- theek hai tho ladkiyon ke liye colors honge pink, redor black…
Akshat:- tho phir tay hogaya.. abhi chal rishi sabko call kar de aur party ke baare mein bhi batana aur saath saath color theme ke baare mein bhi…. Samjha…
Rishi:- haan samaj gaya…..
Ridhimma:- bhai , rishi suno mere pass ek aur idea hai.. kyun na hum aaj kii is party ko mask party banaye…
Akshat:- mask party…
Ridhimma:- haan mask party… haan main jaanthi hoon kii bohat log mask pehen na pasand nahii kartha.tho kyun na hum yeh baat sirf younsters ke liye rakhe.. un logon ke liye joh dance floor par jaana chahthe ho, unke liye mask is compulsory…
Rishi:- wow yaar.. yeh tho bohat hii achcha idea hai… good ridzi.. waise tumhe yeh ideas aana lazmi hai…
Ridhimma:- aur woh kyun bhala…
Rishi:- woh iss liye my dear sister kyunke tum meri behen ho the the great rishi garewal kii behen ho…
Akshat:- oyee.. rishi.. chup kar.. ridhimma ko itne achche ideas aathe hai woh is liye nahii kii tum uske bhai ho.. usse itne achche ideas is liye aathe hai kyunke woh meri behen hai.. you knpw akshat the great ki behen hai..
Ridhimma goes & sits near yash & says:- big-b dekho na koi mujhe credit nahii de raha hai.. tabse yeh bhai aur rishi, mere saare ideas ka credit khud par le rahe hai aur keh rahe hai kii mujhe ideas is liye aathe hai kyunke main unki behen hoon… big-b aap hii kuch kahiye na…
Yash throws a cushion at both of them.. rishi & akshat bend taaki woh cushion kahiin unko na lag jaye…
Akshat:- humko kyun marr raha hai yash.. hum tho sach hii keh rahe hai…
Rishi:- haan big-b sachchi, hum tho fact keh rahe hai.. auragar sachchi baat ridzi ko pasand nahii tho hum kya kare.. it is not our problem…
Akshat:- absolutely right…
Yash:- not our problem.. rishi.. akki.. phir ek baar soch lo…
Rishi:- arre big-b is mein sochne waali kaunsi baat hai.. hum ne tho bas sach kaha.. aur humein tho lagtha hai kii doosron ko bhii sach ka saamna karna seekhna chahiye… [rishi says this hinting at ridhimma… ]
Akshat:- main bhi akshat ke is baat se sehmat hoon yash.. ridzi ko yeh baat sweekar leni chahiye kii uska dimaak joh hai woh usne apne bhaiyon ke sanghat mein rehkar paaya hai…
Ridhimma futher whines & says:- big-b dekho na…
Yash ridhimma ke kaan mein kuch kehtha hai.. & ridhimma smiles & nods.. rishi & akshat keep seeing them suspiciously.. & suddenly yash akshat ke chehre par ek cushion marrtha hai.. aur ridhimma does the same with rishi…. Rishi & akshat are in a state of shock.. & yahaan yash, ridhimma, pasllavi, veena, preeto all giggle at them… yash aur ridhimma ek doosre ko hi-fy dethe hai… & rishi & akshat are ready to pounce on yash & ridhimma lekin isse pehle kii all the four start playing around pallavi intervens & says:- bachcha log.. ab bohat mastio hogayi.. chalo ab kaam par lag jao.. bohat kaam karna hai.. chaloo…
Akshat:- is baar tum dono mom kii wajah se bach gaye.. warna agli baar tho…
Yash:- warna kya haan.. kya kar loge.. bol na kya karoge…
Veena:- yash, akshat bohat ho gaya.. Agar tum mein se koi kaam nahii karne waala hai tho hum aaj sham kii party cancel kar denge.. bas… kyun maa…
Preeto- haan bilkul sahii..
All the four nod their head.. aur unhe yen tho patah hai kii agar abhi unhone dida ka order follow nahii kiya tho they were surely capable of calling off the party…
Ab rishi says:- ridhimma meri pyaari behen hai na tu…
Ridhimma:- bolo kya chahiye.. kyun maska laga rahe ho mujhe….
Rishi:- woh ridhimma please saare guests to tu call kar de..
Ridhimma:- agar saare guests ko main call karoonga, tho tum kya karoge..
Rishi:- main.. main.. haan main party ke liye masks ka arrangement kartha hoon.. tum hii ne tho kaha tha kii humein masks kii zaroorat padegi.. tho bolo ridzi mera kaam karogi…
Ridhimma:- haan theek hai main kar doongi.. lekin haan tum achche waale masks le aana mall se.. agar tumhare laaye hue masks mujhe pasand nahii aaye tho main tumhe dubara mall bhejongi… aur haan ek aur baat tum please who bhoot, who daravne chehre waale masks le aaye nahii laana…
Rishi smirks & says:- ab tho wohii laaunga…
Ridhimma:- rishi agar tum woh sab laaye tho tho mujhse bura koi nahii hoga.. samjhe tum…
Rishi [teasingly says]:- waise bhi tumse bura aur koi ho bhii nahii saktha… rishi yeh kehkar bahar bhaag jaatha hai.. ridhimma uske peeche bhaag ne waali hothi hai lekin then ridhimma sees kii pallavi is giving her a stern look tho she does not go.. aur apne kaam mein lag jaathi hai… yahaan akshat bhi kaam mein lag jaatha hai.. jaise decorations for the evening.. food etc etc.. koi yash ko kuch kaam karne hii nahii detha because they feel that it is his day… tho usse koi bhii kaam nahii karna chahiye… yash bhii chup chaap apne kamre mein chala jaatha hai, as he wants some time for himself.. to think.. & relax himself.. kyunke usne university mein apna woh guzra hua kal dekha, jisse woh bohat pyaar kartha tha.. aur aaj bhi jisse woh pyaar kartha hai..
Yash chup chaap kamre mein jaakar he locks the door.. aur dheere-dheere apne kamre kii khidki kii taraf bhadtha hai… khidki ke pass jaakar woh aasmaan kii taraf dekhtha hai, lekin abhi chand nahii nikla hotha hai..
Yash:- aaj tho chaand bhi nahii nikla… aur shayad meri zindagi mein agge se chaand aayega bhii nahii.. aaj maine apne chaand ko kho diya hai.. aaj se theen saal pehle jab chah mujhse durr hui thi, tab se lekar aaj thak main issi umeed par jii raha hoon kii shayad kabhim chah meri zindagi mein lout aayegi… lekin aaj chah ko kissi aur ladke ke saath dekh kar mujhe tho aise lagne laga hai kii chah ne joh baatein mujhse kahii theen saal pehle, woh sab uska ek dhong tha.. woh kabhi mera saath chahthi hii nahii thi, issi liye woh mujhse durr gayi.. sab uska dikhawa tha.. aj thak main jis duniyaan mein jeer aha tha, aaj uska bhram chah ne thod diya.. aaj usne mujhe haraa diya… yash goes to his cup-board aur wahaan ek chotte se locker se woh ek tasveer nikaal tha hai woh tasveer is of a young chah who is about 18 or 19 years of age… he starts talking to chah's photo… kyun kiya tumne mera saath aisa chah.. agar tumhe mera saath pasand nahii tho tum mujhe ussi din keh dethi, jis din maine tumse apni dil kii baat kahii thi.. agar tumne us din mujhse jhoot nahi bola hotha tho main itne saal kabhi yeh umeed nahii rakhtha kii tum kabhi meri hogi.. tum ne mujhse durr jaane ke liye, mann ghadath baatein boli mujhe.. aur woh main hii tha joh idiot kii tarah tumhari har baat ko sach samaj kar chala gaya tumhari zindagi se.. mujhe laga shayad tumhe waqt chahiye tha.. aur main tumhe woh waqt denbe ke liye bhii taiyaar tha.. lekin tumne joh mere saath kiya.. uske baare mein, maine sapne mein bhii nahii socha tha… mujhe khud par taras aa raha hai kii aakhir kyun main ek aisi ladki se pyaar kiya jiske liye meri koi qadar hii nahii.. chah ke liye main koi mayine hii nahii rakhtha.. lekin uske bawajood kyun mera dil bas ussi ko chahtha tha..patah nahii kyun lekin ab bhi mujhe yakeen nahii ho raha hai kii tumne chah, sirf tumne meri saari umeedein thod doon.. mann tho karr raha hai kii tumhari yeh tasveer phad doon.. lekin na jaane kyun mere dil ko ab bhi tum par yakeen hai.. ab bhi mera dil mujhse keh raha hai kii meri chah aisi nahii hai.. he stares at chah's picture & says:- ab tum hii batao sach kya hai.. maine joh sach apni aankhon se dekha usko sach maanu ya phir apni dil kii awaaz sunoon… mujhe tho kuch samaj nahii aa raha hai.. yash kii aankhon mein halki si name hothi hai…

Song In The Background:-

" Sun leyna Sun leyna ...
ohhhh ....
Sun leyna Sun leyna ...
Sun leyna Sun leyna…..
Sun leyna Sun leyna…
Sun leyna Sun leyna….
[yash thinks about his old times with chah.. when they had become friends..]
Usse ghar kahye jahn dil ho……
Dil ho wahnnnn jahnnn pyaaaar……
Is pyaar main mushkil hai………
[Yash thinks back to the time jab chah ne uske pyaar ko tukraya tha…]
Muhskil tho hai pyaaaaaar…….
[yash kii ankhon mein aasoo aa jaathe hai..]
Phir bhi karay gay kartay reh gayyyyyy…….
Pyaar tujhe meri jaaaan…….
[yash chah kii tasveer ko apne seene se lagakar baittha hai..]
Sun leynaaaaa dil jnaiyaaaaa…….
Gal mile Gal mile gal hona pyar diya
Tirapa tirapa…
Sun leynaaaaaa dil janiyaaaaaaa
Sun leyna Sun leyna ...
ohhhh ..…
Sun leyna Sun leyna .……..
Jo milaaaa nahiii woh mera nahiii……..
koiiii bhiiii gilaaaaa nahiiiii….
[he thinks about kii kaise aaj uske theen saal kii umeed toot gayi…. Pal mein…]
Koi chod de……….
Dil tord de…….
[yash thinks about chah hugging the person in the university….]
Usse kho diya khainnnnnn…
[yash feels as if usne aaj chah ko hamesha ke liye kho diya ho..]
Rehnay do Chorooooo……….
Kuch bhi na sochoooo……..
[yash chah kii tasveer ko phektha hai… apne se durr karthe hue…]
Pyaar tho hai imthiannnn……..
[tasveer phek ne ke baad bhii, yash kii nazar us tasveer par hii jaathi hai…]
Sun leyna dil janiyaaaaaaa…….
Gal mile Gal mie gal hona pyar diya………
[yash walks over to the place jahaan tasveer giri hui hothi hai.. he bends down.. takes the photo in his hand..]
Sun leyna dil janiyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ……..
Sun ley na , sun leyna……………
[yash keeps the photo close to his heart & murmurs to himself:- sunn ley na…]
ohhhh ..………"
[yash wahaan se utkar again keeps back the photo jahaan se usne nikaala hotha hai.. & without turning around he just walks away…]

Yash walks out of his room kyunke he feels kii agar woh kamre mein rahega tho chah's thoughts will keep haunting him again & again.. so he decides kii woh bahar jaye aur saare arrangements dekhe aur sabki madat kare…. Yash goes down.. aur dekhtha hai kii taiyaari bohat zoron-shoron se chal rahii hothi hai.. yash sabse kehtha hai kii woh madat karega lekin koi uski ek bhii baat nahii sunntha.. tho finally yash sofa par bait kar sab ko dekh raha hotha hai… he was just a silent spectator…
Tabhi wahaan swayam aatha hai.. woh ghar mein enter karthe hii dekhtha hai kii ghar par party kii tayarriyaan chal rahii hothi hai.. he gives everybody a angry stare & then goes to the study room jahan lalit was there.. lekin swayam ke stare se kissi ko bhi koi farq hii nahii padtha.. swayam thinks to taunt yash.. lekin swayam ke dekhtha hai kii yash kea aas-pass sabhi log hothe hai so he decides kii woh yash se baad mein baat kar lega.. lekin pehle he needs to talk to lalit.. swayam ka wahaan aana ya na aana kissi ko koi difference nahii create kartha.. yash joh kii sofa par baita hai sees kii rishi is back with different types of masks aur ridhimma ko woh masks achche nahii lagthe.. tho ridhimma was forcing rishi kii woh mall wapas jaye aur mall se achchi waali masks le aaye... rishi having no other choice kyunke pallavi ka order hai kii he has to go.. so he leaves, sighing and in a irritated mood…
Yahaan ridhimma, akshat giggle at rishi's haalat.. lekin even they get a stare from pallavi tho woh dono foran chup ho jaathe hai.. aur apne saare kaam fatafat karne mein lag jaathe hai.. yash ghar mein yeh khushi dekhkar muskuratha hai.. he forgets the pain which he was in some time back & starts observing each one of then keenly….
Ridhimma has finished calling everyone except for armaan.. so she decides to call him & inform him about the dress code… she dials his number & waits for armaan to pick it up… as soon as someone picks it up ridhimma starts talking…
Ridhimma:- hello armaan… suno.. isse pehle kii tum kuch kaho, aur apni baatein shuru karo, meri baat sun lo.. aaj sham ke party ke liye dress code hai.. ab tum chounk na matt kii kya dress code, kyun dress code.. bas suno…. The guys have to wear some in black blue or white aur tum dii se kehna kii she has to wear something in pink, black or red… theek hai na… [armaan does not reply anything…. tho ridhimma says again] armaan tum samaj rahe ho na main kya keh rahii hoon… armaan tum kuch bol kyun nahii rahe ho.. kuch kaho na..
Tab chah kii awaaz aati hai from the other side of the phone:- hii ridsy… phone maine utaya hai.. armaan ne nahii…
Ridhimma:- diii.. aap…. Woh maine socha kii armaan tha.. issi liye main bolthi chali gayi.. mujhe is baat ka ehsaas nahii hua kii aap the.. dii aapne bataya kyun nahii kii phone aap ne utaya hai…
Chah smiles & says:- well ridsy tum hii ne kaha tha kii kuch bhii kehne se pehle tumhari baat sunn le.. issi liye wahii sunn rahii thi…
Ridhimma:- woh diii actually.. sorry…
Chah giggles & says:- nahii.. ridsy.. koi baat nahii.. tumhein tho yahii laga na kii armaan hai.. issi liye tum bolthi chali gayi.. waise ridsy ek baat tho hai mere alsi bhai ke liye tum ek dum sahii ho.. you will always keep him on his toes…
Chah & ridhimma share a giggle…
Then ridhimma says:- waise aap aur armaan aaj aa rahe ho na…
Chah:- haan hum aa rahe hai… lekin mere pass red, black ya pink mein koi dress nahii hai.. mujhe lagtha hai mujhe armaan se kehna hoga kii woh mujhe mall le jaye… theek hai main usse kehthi hoon aur phir sham ko party mein tumse milthi hoon.. abhi armaan washroom mein hai main uske aathe hii usse bata doongi kii tumne call kiya tha… theek hai….[it is armaan's apartment…]
Ridhimma:- haan theek hai… byeee… see you in the evening…
Chah:- byeee.. see you…ab mujhe mere bhai ko manana padega mujhe shopping le jaane ke liye.. koi baat nahii armaan ko main mana loongi.. byee….
Ridhimma laughs & then cuts the phone.. phone rakhthe hai she sees yash joh kii usko meaningful look de raha hotha hai like abhi se apne future pati ke gharwaalon se rishthe banaye jaa rahe hai.. & ridhimma just blushes…
Yahaan in armaan's apartment, as soon as armaan is out of the washroom chah tells him kii he has to take her shopping, as aaj sham kii party mein dress code ka color abhi ridhimma ne usse bataya… armaan sulks… tho chah emotionally blackmails him saying things like armaan tum nahii chahthe kii main aaj sham party mein aaun… armaan tum apni behen ke liye itna bhii nahii kar sakthe… & etc.. etc stuff.. finally armaan sulks sighs & takes chah to the mall…

Here on the other side swayam knocks on the study-rooms door….
Swayam enters the room… & l.alit looks at him..
Swayam:- mujhe aap se baat karni hai…
Lalit:- kaho kya kehna chahthe ho tum…
Swayam:- aap mere saath aisa nahii karr sakthe…
Lalit still reading a book without looking up says:- maine tumhare saath kya kiya hai swayam… tum kehna kya chahthe ho…
Swayam:- dekhiye main aap se bas yahii kehna chahtha hoon kii aap mujhse Garewal Industries ke Manging Director kii position nahii cheen sakthe… aap MD ka position yash ko nahii de sakthe…
Lalit:- dekho swayam agar tumhe yaad ho tho ek saal pehle hum sab ne yeh baat tai kiya tha kii joh bhii Foreign Delegates ke saath ka deal win karega, wohii Garewal Industries ka MD hoga.. aur tab tho tumhein koi aitraaz nahii tha.. aur aaj yash ne woh contract jeet liya that ho zaahir is baat hai usse hii MD kii position milni chahiye…
Swayam:- dekhiye main woh sab nahii jaantha.. main bas itna jaantha hoon kii mujhe us managing director kii kursi par baitna hai.. main us yash ko wahaan baite hue nahii dekh saktha.. dekhiye pehle hii aapke is ghar mein koi meri qadar nahii kartha, ab agar MD kii kursi bhii mujhse cheen lii jaayegi tho mere liye aur mushkhil ho jaayegi.. aapka woh joh beta hai na woh mujhe chaine se kabhi jeene nahii dega.. issi liye main aap se keh raha hoon ki isse pehle kii bohat dair ho jaye aap kuch kariye.. warna agge chal kar kuch ho jaye tho mujhse matt kahiyega..
Aur waise bhii aap kabhi meri maa ko tho is ghar mein unka hakh nahii dila paaya, tho shayad aaj aap mujhe swayam garewal ko bhi hakh naa de paaye.. lekin phir bhi main umeed kartha hoon kii you won't let me down… kyunke main jaantha hoon aap mere pita hai.. aur ek pita apne bachche ko kabhi nirash nahii kar saktha… [swayam says this with the thought to kind off emotionally blackmail lalit.. he knows kii lalit usse mana nahii karr paayega…]
Swayam just stand there… jab lalit gives him a slight nod & then says:- swayam main koshish karoonga bouji se baat karne ke liye.. lekin main tumhe assure nahii kar saktha kii kya woh meri baat maanenge….
Swayam:- theek hai… aap bouji se baat kariye aur phir mujhe batayiye kii unka kya faisla hai.. lekin haan ek baat zaroor yaad rakhiye yeh aapke bete ke hakh ka sawaal hai.. main umeed kartha hoon kii aap mera hakh kissi aur ke haath nahii jaane denge….
Lalit just nods his head.. swayam turns around with a look on his face which is like mission accomplished… he has a smirk on his face which shows his over-confidence kii ab yash ko garewal industries ka managing director nahii banaya jayega…
Suddenly swayam looks at door aur woh dekhtha hai kii yash wahaan kada hai with a stern expression on his face… yash ke chehre par ghussa hai… it shows kii usne swayam aur lalit kii saari baatein sunn lii hai.. yash & swayam are facing each other , staring at each other ready for one more argument.. & from the desk lalit keeps looking at both of his sons who cannot stand each others presence…

So guys here ends "Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet – Part 6 "… I hope this part was worth the wait.. I'am really sorry that I have made all of you wait for so much time…. I hope all of you liked the part… the next part will be posted next week.. I wil try & write the part as soon as i can.. & guys may be you might feel that I'am not writing about yash & chah but guys pukka from the next part the part will have yash & chah all the way… thank all so much for your comments.. & also for your patience.. you always wait for my fanfic.. thank you so much…. Your comments encourage me to be a better writer….

I'll be eagerly waiting for your comments, compliments, suggestions & even criticsm is also welcome.. If you don't like anything in the fanfic please feel free & tell me…

Preview For The Next Part:- Well next part is going to have a argument bet ween lalit & yash… and the party… aur party mein yash & chah come face to face.. unke beech baatein hongi.. some kadwi purani yaadein tazaa hongi.. and a dance.. between who… yeh next part mein dekhenge…

Guys ab yeh jaane ke liye kii yash, lalit, swayam ke beech kya baatein hothi hai, kya lalit gulshan ko mana lega kii abhi yash ko managing director kii post na de… kya gulshan will agree.. party mein kya hoga.. kya swayam koi naya bakeda khada karega… swayam kaunsa naya tareeka dhoondega to cause trouble in yash's life.. kya yash aur chah kii mulaqat hogi party mein.. kya chah ko patah chalega kii ridhimma yash kii behen hai.. kya yash kii ghalatfaimi regarding chah will solve.. kya yash ko patah chalega kii chah armaan kii badi-behen hai… yeh.. aur kayi aur sawaalon ke jawaab jaane ke liye wait kijiye "Hogi Pyaar Kii Jeet" ke next part ka…

Please send in your comments.. waiting for them very eagerly.. I'll try & post the next part as soon as I can… & guys for sure next part mein there will be flashback of yuash & chah.. we will see yash & chah's past in part 7 & part 8….. Thank You….

Take Care…
Byeeeeeeee

Love
Surya…😳
Edited by sun_423 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi surya....finally u updated...........was thinkin where u hav vanished..anyways jokes apart........loved the part..so chah and yash were together before but chah rejected him..............feel very bad but hope in their first meetin chah wil realise somewhat.....this swayam is too much......hope he doesnt use chah to create or hurt yash.......update soon dear......
Edited by spvd - 16 years ago

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