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Posted: 16 years ago
hey suri nice part yar....ur ff is actually amazing...love the bond these mehra siblings share..yash is a sweetheart..wish cud hav pushed swayam frm tht cliff..he is irritataing...gud he lost the contract,..huh the best..to hell...he is one sick person...guess therz some thng btw chah n yash right....dying to read age...chalo abhi jaldi se update karo
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Posted: 16 years ago
woah🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😳😳😍 soo sweet😎 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Ae khat ja unke hatho ko chum le,
wo padhe to unke hotho ko chumle,
khuda na kare wo phar bhi dale,
to girte girte unke kadmo ko chum lay."



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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

woah🤗 its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😳😳😍 soo sweet😎 plz continue it soon😛 & thanks for the pm😉

"Ae khat ja unke hatho ko chum le,
wo padhe to unke hotho ko chumle,
khuda na kare wo phar bhi dale,
to girte girte unke kadmo ko chum lay."



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thanku so much... i'am glad you liked the part.. i'll surely continue soon..😊🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: janu_2006

hey

gr8 part..
cont.soon



thanku so much... i'll surely continue soon...😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

awesome part again👏 thank you for pm . 😊😊


thanku so much monika... i'am happy you liked the part.. i'll try & post the next part soon...😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: varallika

hey suri nice part yar....ur ff is actually amazing...love the bond these mehra siblings share..yash is a sweetheart..wish cud hav pushed swayam frm tht cliff..he is irritataing...gud he lost the contract,..huh the best..to hell...he is one sick person...guess therz some thng btw chah n yash right....dying to read age...chalo abhi jaldi se update karo


varu yaar tere comments dekhkar dil khush ho gaya.. no thankoo dear..🤗 yaar i agree yash is a sweet heart... aur swayam ka kuch na kuch tho main zaroor karoongi.. waise bhii yash hai na swayam ko usli asli jagah bata ne ke liye..hmm..yash aur chah ke beech some thing, some thing ho bhii saktha hai.. aur nahii bhi ho saktha...hahaha....😉 i'll post the next part soon..😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: goodkashish

hi surili.........kaha se suru karoon muje kuch samaj me hi nahi aata kyunki jis tarah se tum muje us race pe leke gayi ek pal ke to main bhi yash ki cheer team ka hissa ban gayi....👏.us swayam ki itni himmat ki woh hamare yash se cheating kare lekin kehte hai na ki jo cheating karte ho woh khud hi khai me girte hai......achcha hua woh stupid swayam nahi jita warna main uska khoon kar deti....😡...hip hip hurreyyyyy.......aakhir kar mere hero yash ki jeet ho hi gayi.......party time.....🥳.........i love akki n rishi's attitude toward swayam........good going......agar unhe teesre saathi ki zaroorat ho to main taiyaar hoon waise hi muje bahot gussa aata hai ki usne kaisi himmat ki yash ko chut pahonchayi aur woh bhi tab jab uske pass chah nahi hai..........agar chah hoti to bechare yash ka ilaz karti lekin koi baat nahi dusri race me aa jayegi.....😉....ab jab armaan aa gaya hai to chah bhi aa jayegi.........sabhi gharwale yash ka kitna khayal rakhte hai lekin yeh lalit ko koi akkal do ............kitna akdu baap hai apne bete ko nahi samjta......🤢.......khair woh to ab aage jake hi pata chalega ki kaun hero hai aur kaun zero hai..........ab mera sabse favorite part......😳.....chah aur yash ek saath chaand ko dekhna......waise ek baat kahoon.........main bhi jo baat kisi se nahi keh sakti woh chaand se kehke apna jii halka kar leti hoon...........chand is really good freind which can hide ur secreats for forever.............ab muje pakka ehsaas ho gaya hai ki woh yash hi hoga jiska chah ne dil toda.....😲....chah ne kaha hoga ki usne kabhi aisa socha nahi aur yash ne kaha hoga ki woh uska intzaar karega ........ab yeh sab to hona hi tha tabhi to unki phir se mulaqat hogi........lekin ab mann me darr bhi hai ki yeh swayam kya karnewala hai...🤔...kyunki agar use yeh pata chala ki yash ko chah pasnd hai to woh chah ko chut pahonchayega.............i just hope ki chah swayam ki baateoin me naa aaye aur yash ki hamesha ke liye ho jaye....😉.....kitna ajeeb rishta hai un dono ka...........chah ke aanshu yash ko ehsaas dilata hai.....yash ka intzaar chah ko ehsaas banke chubh raha hai............pata nahi yeh log durr rehke bhi ek dusre ko mehsus karte hai aur pass aane se darte hai........inki aage ki zindagi me kya hai woh to ab rab hi jane......lekin i just luv yash;s character..😳..kyunki use apne pyaar pe pura yakeen hai............aur muje yash pe yakeen hai.........ab jaldi se next part isi tarah se likh do kyunki ab mujse aur intzaar nahi hota in dono ki pehli mulaqat ka....👏...kaisi hogi kahan hogi........but i m so happy ki yash ko yeh contract mil gaya aur woh MD bhi ban gaya kyunki woh deserve karta hai sab kuch.......⭐️.....i just luv yash........ple ple ple continue soon......thanks for this wonderful part.........

love
Kashish

kashu dear tumhare itne sweet comments ke liye no thankoo... mujhe behad khushi hui kii tumko yeh part achcha laga... yaar waise your guesses are quite interesting... swayam ko tho sabak yash zaroor sikhayega.. don't worry... aur waise bhi swayam kuch bhi kyun na kar le par yash ko apne jeet kii taraf bhadna khoob aatha hai.. yash ne kabhi harr mann na nahii seekha....yash aur chah kii mulaqat next part mein zaroor hogi... 😉 i'll post the next part soon.... 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice part suri.....!
Continue soon !
Cant wait for Yash-Chah to meet........!
Yash ki dream girl is chah....I think she turned him down coz she doesnt believe in luv !
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Posted: 16 years ago
hi surya........... gr8 parts..all of them........very well written......yash's character......his bonding...with veena....his brothers n sis...entire family....liked it all.... i always like these relationships in ur ffs.....very cute sweet n pure.....even chah n her family....shez gone thru alot i hope she gets out of it soon.....
i am a regular reader to ur ffs...even Dil se dil thak.... i 1st saw it in yahoo groups........i started halfway but liked it so much that i went back to read all the earlier parts...then read Zindagi ek silsilay even when i saw it in the listings.... i liked them all so much...i have bookmarked these few ffs n i read them every now n then....but u m8 hv hardly seen my comments here...... sorry but i cant always do tht...so even if there r no comments understand tht ur story is being liked a lot by silent readers......n keep writing......its very refreshing after a bad day at college..i leave everything aside (honestly... sometimes vivas even! ) to read every new part tht u post.....
tc........love,
sana
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Posted: 16 years ago
really yr bht acha tha 5th part b.ab nxt jaldi se post kr do plz.next part ka to bht wait kr rahi hn men.

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