Unwritten (AR) part 16 pg 14 16/04

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aishu*7

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Posted: 16 years ago

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hey guys im bak. The reason i wasnt updating was coz i thoght noone read the last part as nobody commented. I won't update till i have atleast 1 comment so i know that the part has been read. I will update on monday
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aishu*7

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Posted: 16 years ago

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sorry for the late update- i had cross country on Monday, went to France on the skl trip i mentioned earlier on Tuesday, was exhausted on Wednesday and was doing sumthing for skl on Thursday (i won't give too many details except it was hugely embarrassing) buuuuuutttttttttt....... i can make up for that now coz i have holidays!!!!!!!!!! for about two weeks n i will start the ak ff by monday as well.
part 11:
Ridz wondered what the mail could be as it had the colleges stamp on it. So she opened it and it said (sorry if i am copying a serial but i had this idea before mjht did)
dear student,
you are now old enough to understand what you will have to do for your commitments and so this year the following will not be optional but compulsory for every student in their final year (sorry was not whole college).
Talent parade will take place on the 27th of January and auditions will take place next day at school. For it you will need to prepare either a song, dance or any other form of entertainment-please be sensible in your choice. If you are unable to do so or are not gifted in that way then we can arrange some backstage positions but auditions are still mandatory.

we see many other students opening it up and reading the poster and there are many mixed reactions mostly bad but then we see riddhima's face and she looks as calm as a cucumber.
Then Alia comes into the room screming!
A: Nooooooooo!!! The talent parade- how could i forget about that?!? I feel so sorry for you di cause at least i can drop out but you have to do it- hope you can get backstage di. I get sick of just watching it, i do not know how anyone can perform in it
R: Are you kidding?!? I love to sing and i love to dance- oh and i love going on stage and performing.
A: Whatever you say par di, i have to warn you- yaha ke log classical bilkul nahin pasand karte hain
R:To kya hua?? Mujhe kya logon ki parwa hogi? Nooo Way!!! Do not try to change my mind allie coz you know that once i want to do something- i do it!
Alia was silently sursing herself in her mind for challenging her cousin. As far as she knew: Ridzy was really stage shy as she never sings or dances in front of family and the last time she saw her do so was... when she was 7. Now only Ridzy can get herself out of this mess.

The next day at school everyone is talking about the parade and the auditions. Allie is rollling her eyes at Anitah and her feather-headed friends who were talking about it as if it were the entry to heaven and Riddhima walked over to her class where Nikki was standing
ill continue later

Edited by aishu*7 - 16 years ago

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

Hey it was good one, but too short, pls continue soon.

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

hey very nice FF yaar............loving it

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aishu*7

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Posted: 16 years ago

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part 11b
Ridzy: hi nikki
Nikki: hi riddhima, r u going to take part in the talent parade- i cannot believe that we have to do something this year, i will be first in line for a backstage position.
Ridzy: u r so much like Allie, she thinks exactly the same but i want to do this. I love being on stage even though i haven't performed in India properly ever.
Nikki: Ridzy, i know you do not care about what other people think about you but you could be teased for the rest of your college life if this goes wrong you know.
Ridzy: u r right, i do not care about anybody else and dont worry about me- i will be fine.
Armaan comes over to Nikki and gives an evil glare to Riddhima.
Armaan: Hi Nikki, how r u, im sure your day will be great even though you have had to suffer such a bad start (he said while looking at ridzy)
Nikki: what bad start- oh! you mean Ridzy? oh please you two dont start again or im leaving.
Ridzy: I never said anything to this monkey, but lets go Nikki.
They went through most of their lessons and then it was the lesson before the audition. Armaan,nikki and riddhima were together in this lesson. Ridzy sat next to Nikki and nikki had Armaan on her other side so that she could seperate the two.
Armaan: so, nikki, what are you going to do for the talent parade? I am thinking of a dancing performance.
Ridzy:bandar ko to naachna hi aata hai na.
Nikki: come on ridzy, he is actually really good. We don't call him mr. super-cool for no reason. Ammi, do you really think that I will start doing things like the talent parade? No way!
Armaan: why not? you cannot be bad if you are so beautiful 😉 and anyway you can't be worse than the chipkali sitting next to you- right? I am sure that you will be dancing with me while she will be queing for backstage positions.
Nikki: Actually ammi, i will be first in line for bactstage but ridzy will be performing.
Armaan:😆😆😆 Chipkali, performing? She does know that bhajans will not count as performing- right?
Ridzy: And why wont they? I was not going to do a bhajan but if you are dumb enough to challenge me- so be it. Bhajan it is!
Nikki: 😲Ridzy , tell me you're joking. Ammi, tell riddhima that you did not challenge her, you know that she is going to get wrecked if she does a bhajan.
Armaan: No, nikki. I never said that i challenged her but if chipkali wants to ruin her own image- i will. So is that a deal? (he puts his hand forward)
Ridzy: but what will I get in return? okay- i have an idea, if i do a bhajan and get through the auditions, you will have to be my slave for a day. Deal?
Armaan: deal!
the scene ends with Armaan andRidzy competitively shaking hads while Nikki is sitting ther thinking what have they done?
What will happen at the auditions?
Will, riddhima win or armaan?
Is riddhima going to be able to do it?

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aishu*7

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Posted: 16 years ago

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I have started the angad-kripa fanfic.
Here is the link:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1095705#19535718
enjoy.
p.s. i still have not named it. Any suggestions?

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kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

#77

Hey the part is fabulous I just loved it, pls continue soon.

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hydrogurl001

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Posted: 16 years ago

#78

just started reading your ff and i love it! lol AR's lil fights again! plz cont. soon! can u PM me when u continue??

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aishu*7

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Posted: 16 years ago

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MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! Sorry for the late update guys but here is the part, ignore the wierd font and enjoy!
Part 12:

The bell was ringing loudly, marking the end of the lesson/day and the start of the auditions. People in the final year had to come at the end of the day since their audition was compulsory. Ridzy stormed ahead of the whole class while going outside and she was speaking to the teacher in charge of the auditions- prof shubhankar. He was nodding at what she said and soon enough the whole hall was filled. They were told to get into two groups- one with people who wanted to perform on stage and one who wanted to work backstage. The people who were going to work backstage had a separate audition since the teachers had decided that if someone has talent in that group- they should perform. most of the kids had left for the backstage audition and there were only about 20 left. Unfortunately for Ridz, they were the more influential ones in the college and if they heard her doing a bhajan, they would make sure that the whole college knew. But strangely, she still looked confident even though it was her turn next. She strode over to the stage and grabbed the microphone confidently and finally started singing in a melodious and devoted voice: Om jaya Jagadisa hare

Swami jaya Jagadisa hare

Bhakta jano ke sankata

Dasa jano ke sankata

shana men dura kare

Om jaya Jagadisa hare

Armaan was looking at her in a dazed and dreamy look as if she was an angel thinking that the white salwar she wore looked perfect of her and fitted her role completely but was then knocked out of the trance by laughing. He looked around to find everyone laughing at her whilst Riddhima had stopped singing. He could have sworn there was a hurt look in her eyes despite the smile on her face and he angered instanty, "chup karo. Usne jo bhi gaaya hai, accha hi gaaya hai." His sudden outburst had shocked everyone including himself and silenced everyone like he had intended. Ridzy on the other hand looked at him curiously, wondering why he stood up for her even though he was the one who made the bet. "maybe he isn't as bad as I thought" she mumbled to herself.

Almost as if to answer her thoughts Armaan quickly covered up his outburst by laughing and pretending that never happened and soon enough the whole hall had startd the laughing, joking and teasing again. Riddhima's face coloured as she cursed herself of thinking good about that monkey and gave a small grunt before walking (more like running) off stage to talk to prof.Shubhankar.

Everyone's audition was done including Armaan who had danced to dil haara surprisingly well (surprising for ridz). They were told that they would get their results tomorrow morning on the notice board and then the organising would start in the afternoon. After everyone had left, Ridzy crept back in without anyone knowing and was mumbling to shubhankar something. All we can know of the conversation was: "im ready"

"that would have never put you through as even though you have a great voice, a bhajan won't be popular in this school"

"I know and that is why I an here"

The screen then blurs and then shifts to the next morning at college. People were crowding at the notice board wondering who got in. The bell rung and everyone went to their first lesson while Armaan looked at it and a surprisingly late Riddhima walked over with a smirk on her face. And armaan looked at the board with a shocked and angry face/

"I can't believe it… you are in!"