~My Only Desire~ Part13-pg107 NOTE pg 113 17/07

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Qwerty123rty

@Qwerty123rty

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Posted: 16 years ago

#151

~reserved~

for the first time i got this late in updating my reserve...my apologies jia...had some cousins visiting..so sorry but i loved the part totally..

So finally they met...and the effect was ahem ahem...lost in thought....savoring the first touch...WOW...and you described it beautifully jia and his lingering gaze...ah!!!...too good...he too seems intrigued?? or maybe a lil interested....can we go tht far...oh whatever...the teeny bit extra attention was more than enough and you made it natural and yet hard to miss...awesome there...

and the silly girls all over him...uff!!..i hate such people...but i think Riddhima's thoughts were the best part...the way she realised how what she saw on tv wasn't real....the sets and all and was wondering if she too was acting like a star struck gilr...and wat he thought about her....that i liked the best and u described it all perfectly...it was flawless....

and oh!! the end...so they meet again at the mall...hmmm...reallly wanna know what next...hope u update soon...loved the part Jia.....you did a great job...me curious now

Love ya

Krati

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Neeta

@U-No-Poo

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#152

Awesome Part Jia Di!!!!!!!!! Great Going!!!👏

AR interaction was great!!😳...Ridhima's nervousness is so justified. And they'll meet again!!!!!!😊

Wonderful part Jia Di!! Really waiting for this one to unfold!!⭐️

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 16 years ago

#153

Hey Jia fabulous part awesome. I was imagine every scene, well i am sure he is attract by ridhima. Brilliant, mind blowing. I truly loved it.
Pls continue soon.

Kashish

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Avanti

@forevercharmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#154

omg amazing!! and what a cliffhanger yaar!!! theyre meeting again??!!! awesome! please continue soon

Avanti

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KaSh_4_eva

@KaSh_4_eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#155

amazing part

i'm eager to know what will happen in this meeting

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JennyPenny

@JennyPenny

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Posted: 16 years ago

#156

Oh man, I loved th way you wrote this. It is what every fan goes through yaar, I am sure I will feel this too if I meet Armaan or Riddhima. Loved how you had his eyes fixed on her. The update was fierce jia. I loved how you potrayed Riddhima and Muskaan as die hard but decent fans while you showed the other side of the coin too and you showed the emoions of Armaan complety well. Mezemrzied by a fan who is simple and does not throw her at hi. It was brillant! Please do continueee!!

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Suvarna

@Suvarna....

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#157

Superb ... amazing. Loved every bit of it.

'Sweetheart' was such cute way of addressing ... awwwwwwww ... I love Armaan!!! :)

Riddhima's reaction is so well captured. Very natural .... and very real.

Wow ... so meeting 2 already up for AR. Looking forward to read on!!!

Cheers,
Suvarna

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Natasha

@Ladoo645

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#158

reserved!

*edit*

Wow Jia, I can feel the game playing up here, as the tension b/w A n R like damn......and her anticipation state of even being in front of Armaan, it soo flawlessly done, That I could easily slip into in her shoes as a reader!!!

Oh lala!!! Rid betta be chosen dat shirt der!!

Awesome update!!

-Nats

Edited by Ladoo645 - 16 years ago

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Anita Malik

@anitamalik

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#159

Jiaaaaaa! Awesome and long part! YAY!

I'm so relating to this character...If I met KSG, god knows what would happen to me..I would probably faint...LOL...

"Well thankyou" he purred disturbing my thoughts again. Within the next moment I suddenly felt his gaze on me. Those mesmerizing eyes again……. there was an air about him that was unmistakably magnate material.

OMG..I know Riddhima..I feel the same way..There is this aura that Armaaan/KSG posseses..sigh...

Beatiful description of thoughts Jia!

And Lucky her...She got to see him another time..at a SHOP!

Interesting! Continue soon!

Love, Anita

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archana

@av10dulkar

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Posted: 16 years ago

#160

hi jia been reading ur fan fiction
i have completed may be all of them
they are all really fantastic
this one is no exception
loved the way u have actually described the feelings of a ardent fan
i really can connect to it
its mind blowing yaar

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