~My Only Desire~ Part13-pg107 NOTE pg 113 17/07

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Nidha

@nidha1983

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#161

waoh👍🏼 its really an awesome one⭐️ mind blowing😛😉 too gud😳😛 so cute😊 so she meet him haiiiii😛😛😍 i wish i can see both😊 of them once in my life😳😳 plz continue it soon😊😉

"Pyaar Ise Kehte Hain
Jawani ko zindage ki nikhaar kehte hain,
pathjad ko chaman ka majdhaar kehte hain,
Ajeeb chalan hain duniya ka yaaro,
Ek Dhoka hain Jise hum sab 'PYAAR' kehte hain."

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@spln

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#162

jia hun...reserved this one is...it sucks to not have the laptop working for like over a week now....will try to read and cooment as soon as i can....cheers!

lov

nj

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oki back....gosh u know wat, u gaveme almostthree strokesin like seconds...first u ended the part at a point like that...then afterur message in black u had another bit typed out n i was like woa the girl sure knows how to catch us off the hook....phewthank god she dint stop...but no when i readi was like darn it she repasted the thing by error....go sh jia this was so crazy hehe...oki that done...ubto the part

i cant go back n quote all of it hun, but u shud know that i thot ur writing skill took a new leap in this part somehow, perhaps its the fact ur writing something u can so identify with ...i cant be certain of that...but itwas wonderful....greatreadthe whole scenesall of them...i felt like u musthave been on the setsto havedealt with such proficiency...great job!

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mahru

@mahi4u

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#163

hey

awwwwwwwwww..................

dat was rellllllllyyyyyyyy interestingggg prt 😉😉😉

cant wait 2 read da next prt 😆

cont super soooooooonnnnnnnn

luv ya n tak care
mahru

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nyla

@nyla_193

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#164

hey really loved this part
i think its great the way ridz n muskaan didn't act all desperate and jump on armaan like those other girls....hopefully he noticed that
ooo armaan kept on staring at ridz..looks like he is quite taken with her...cant wait to see where this leads
amazing part...you managed to explain all of ridz's feelings very well and when she couldn't speak in armaan's presence it was actually kinda painfull lol but neverheless seems like he likes her the best
overall amazing part and luckily they met at the mall
cant wait to read more
please update as soon as you can
n thanx for the pm

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saira

@.x.Saira.x.

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#165

amazing update👏!

wow..ridz and muskaan are so dignified😆

plz update soon😳

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lookwhoshere

@lookwhoshere

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#166

amazinnnngggg!!!! luved it jia!!

continue soon hun!

anu.😊

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prerna

@prernawaghray

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#167

hey jia
finally u updated!!!!!
what an update yaar
lovely superb
while reading it naa i was just smiliing
oh god my cheeks went red completely
lolz
was just imagining myself in ridzi's position lolz
umazing part though
the last bit was gr8 n totally unexpected
update soon

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KAT

@Catwoman

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#168

LOL Sweet ooooo.... heheh

Great update and all...hehe I guess he see something in here....

Continue like soooooon

Love Kat

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aravi

@aravi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#169

reserved

- will get back super soon dee well still u very well know dat i loved it n the effect it had on me hehe 😆😆😆 u noe mum asked bout why as i behaving so absurd yesteraday after dat charger thing i told her the real reason 😉😉😉 gosh she hasnt stopped laughing since even bhai knows it by now talk of embarrasment !!!!!!