Pyaar Ishq aur Mohabbat(AR)...Part 17 utd @ pg 73 - Page 10

Originally posted by: *tiny*

wHAT iS THIS !!!!! omg.....what a twist and a half

yaar what sort of guy is this armaan..not at all like our sweet armi...

in one moment he is totally in love with riddz, and tells his mom also and dreams of her also and in the next he is just marrying a girl to take revenge on her father. if he had done this before meeting riddz i could have understood but after getting soooooooo smitten by her how could he do this..and that too merely coz he was rejected for internship? is he slightly touched in the head or what?

but u have really written the part well...and poor riddz...i feel sorry for her ,not only becoz of what happened to her but also coz she started liking a guy like him earlier...what a shock for her on both scores!

waise yaar, mere armi ko itna bura kyon banaaya..??? booooooohooooooooooooooo

Hey come on...he is not bura and all ok..........He is poor fellow.........ya there is a strong reason as to why he is doing all this.....apart from rejection for internship............i like ammy tooo...just wait for the charecterization in future u will feel this act justified dear..........I am feeling bad too but...I cant say anything now.......wait and watch.........Ammy is sweet still coz look at the way he is repenting as well as the dialog before tieing her the Mangalsutra...I hope u got the answers..........

Originally posted by: rani 19

an amazing part i cant believe he did that knowing he has fallen for ridz yet he was willing to put da mangalsutra on shasanks daughter not knowing it was ridz. anyway love da concept but i fink u probably need to build on da reason why he is taking revenge. i dont fink his reasons are strong enuf 2 go out of his way to kidnap shahanks daughter jus because he didint give him a place at his company. hope my suggestions helped n do continue soon

luv iram

Thanks for the suggession but ya .....there will be a reason which is much stronger than just internship rejection yaar.....Will continue ASAP..................

Originally posted by: starasdf

gr8 update

ARMANN WAT R U DOIN?!! GETTING UR BISUNES IN UR PERSONAL LIFE THAT WAS JUST LOW!!! UR LUCKY THAT WAZ RIDZZ!!!! I WOULD HAVE JUST HIT!!!!!!

HUN too short update update longer

Star⭐️

Rid: Aur kya karni hai aapko…???

He could not look into her eyes………He was drained out completely by what all happened……Now he was in pain physically and mentally…….then too he tried speaking…….

Arm: Dekhiye aap meri baath tho suniye…….

She cuts him….

Rid: Sunne ke liye kuch bhi raha nahi hai…aap jaiye yahan se please…….

He comes closer….

Arm: Jab tak aap meri nahi sunengi mein yahan se jane wala nahi hoon…..

aww i like your ff. don't worry people will reply to it, you just keep doing