Pyaar Ishq aur Mohabbat(AR)...Part 17 utd @ pg 73 - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago
i have been readin n it is very gud plz contd
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey grt promo yaar hmmm nw lts see if he cn tll her or nt cnt wait
cont soooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh wow!!!...
shaadi??
muaah Sri!!!
👏
lya baat hai!!!
i mean...
just one word ...wow!
u r amazinf fantastic n fabulous girl!!!
plz upd8 ASAP!!!
thanks 4 the Pm
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Miss Wow

I Stick to my words buddies.....😊.will continue only if i get replies.....😉....but here is my Promo of the next part........😆

PROMO 7

Rid: Aur kya karni hai aapko'???

He could not look into her eyes'''He was drained out completely by what all happened''Now he was in pain physically and mentally''.then too he tried speaking''.

Arm: Dekhiye aap meri baath tho suniye''.

She cuts him'.

Rid: Sunne ke liye kuch bhi raha nahi hai'aap jaiye yahan se please''.

He comes closer'.

Arm: Jab tak aap meri nahi sunengi mein yahan se jane wala nahi hoon'..

Please do reply guys.....I know i am not a very good writer but to try atleast i need booster doses in the form of your replies.......😭



are booster chahiye na??
main hun na yahan !!!
tension mat le!!
lolz!
n who told u that u r nt a good writer....
of course u write well..
c'mon...
wanna know whats gonna happen next..
n um w8ing 4 the upd8 here hun!!
so sabse pehle mujhe PM karna hun!!
he he he!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Fantastic promo... Very eager to knw Ridzi's reaction... Plzz continue soon.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey fabulous promo please continue soon.

Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey thanks one and all for the lovely comments and support.....😊..here is my next part.

PART 4

Sunil was listning to the whole conversation he came near ammy…

Sun: kehtha tha na mein…..apne gusse aur junoon pe kaabu rak….deko ab uska anjaam kya huva hai…demag kaha tha tumara yeh sab karthe ammy…… Bussiness aur Personal life ko hume alag nazariye se dekna hai…..samaj kya rakha hai apne aap ko.....😡

Ammy was totally broken mentally……..he was in a bad state…..he needed someone who can console him to feel better………he knew he was wrong………Archana and Sunil's words made him feel more guilty…😭….He just walked towards his bed room……once he entered……he slowly started removing his tie…and threw himself on the bed……..tears came out of his eyes finally…….he cried all his emotions out….😭........he came to a decision….got up and went to his bike…..he went straight to Ridhima's place without even thinking that it was night….The door was locked…he waited for half an hour knocking the door……during this time he thought of the flash back which made him commit such a big mistake……….

It was a week ago and a big conference meet ……………Shashank and Armaan were reperesenting their firms …….Once the conference was over Ammy was introduced to Shashank by one of the common client…..

Client: Shashank……He is Armaan mallik……..Mallik enterprises ka Deputy Chairman most Aur Mr Mallik…He is Shashank gupta….Gupta group of industries ka Chairman…..😊

Sha: Hello Mr Mallik……I think I know you…..😊

Arm: (Shaking his hands) Sir mein aapke paar apne MBA ke internship ke liye aya tha…..tab mulakat huvi thi hamari…..😊

Sha: Oh ya I remember now…...😊

The client knew shashank personally and ammy as well so he spoke on a lighter note….

Cli: Shashank you know Armaan is industry ka most eligible bachelor hai kyo na tumari kisi ek beti ke liye isko choose karthe…😃. Haan…..😉

Ammy is slightly blushing now…😳….by now the client was called by someone….

Cli: Mr Mehra… aa raha hoon…..excuse me guys…..😃

Shashank started to speak softly……in a low tone

Sha: Itna kush mat ho jao…..Meri betiyon ko mein aise waise gharane me nahi bejna chahtha hoon….😡

Ammy was shocked😲…..he never mentioned about marrying Shashank's daughter….it was just a joke by Mr Kumar (Client)….

Arm: (his voice was firm)….excuse me😲😕…..Sir aap galat soch rahe hai…wo ek mazak tha..😲

Shashank took him away from the crowd…..and started talking loudly….

Sha: Jo bhi ho……..lekin tumari aukad hi kya hai mere damad banne ki???????😡

Arm: ….Meri aukad ke baare me bolne ki aapko koi hak nahi hai Mr Gupta…😡internship ki kabil hote huve bhi muje reject kiya gaya sirf is vajah se ki…aapki beti ki koi dost aapke company mein internship karna chahtha tha…💔…..lekin meine kuch nahi bola hai…😔..behtar hoga hum abhi kisi bare mein baat na kare….💔

Ammy was irritated by Shashank's behaviour and he personal had small frustration against him for not giving seat for the internship in Gupta group of companies……….but Shashank was so possesive about his daughters that he dint know what he was talking…..

Sha: Kyon……. Media wale already is bath ko ched rahe hai….. Mallik enterprises ko kade karne mein tumara baap booda ho gaya aur use apne anjaam dene mein tum boode ho javoge…..Aur sapne Gupta ki beti ke?????? No chance…..😡😡😡

Now Ammy couldn't take it……he was angry as he dint like anyone talk about his father….

Arm: Stop it Mr Gupta…aapki tarah bap dadaon ki bussiness badaya nahi hai mere papa ne….Unhone apne kud ki bal boothe par yeh business kada ki hai…Meri use anjaam deni ki baat kar rahe hai na aap …..ek saal Sirf ek saal mein Gupta group of companies ke saat compare karne ke layak banaoonga mein…..dekthe rahiye aap……Aapki betiyon ke baare meine kabhi nahi socha tha…..agar aapko itna gamand hai tho……aapke damad banke dikhaoonga mein…..dekthe rahiye aap……😡

Sha: Meri betiyon se Shaadi to door…unke paas bhi nahi ja sakoge tum….mein bhi dektha hoon kaise banega tu mera damad……Challenge hai yeh meri……😡

Saying this Shashank left.............Atul was just a mere spectator for the whole conversation as a coincidence…..neither Ammy nor Shashank knew that their conversation was heard by someone…..

…….Ammy just banged his foot to the ground and he was doing the same at present ……in front of Ridhima's house....

Amy: Yeh darwaza kyon nahi kol rahi hai……??????? Kahi……oh no…..😔😕

Thinking something he just ran around to look for something to get inside the house….finally he found the pipe which led to balcony ……. At the same time in Ridhima's room……She was leaning to the wall and crying silently😭😭……closing her eyes tears fell like rain drops continuously….It was a shock to her…she dint know what to do……how to react….???? Suddenly she heard some sound near balcony…..It was ammy …….seeing him she opened the door…….She herself dint know why……He was bleeding as he got hurt on the same hand which was already injured😔…… she dint notice it as it was dark due to power failure ……..before he could speak anything……

Rid: Aur kya karni hai aapko…??? 😲😔

He could not look into her eyes………He was drained out completely by what all happened……Now he was in pain physically and mentally…….then too he tried speaking…….😔

Arm: Dekhiye aap meri baath tho suniye……😔.

She cuts him….

Rid: Sunne ke liye kuch bhi raha nahi hai…aap jaiye yahan se please…….😔😭

He comes closer….

Arm: Jab tak aap meri nahi sunengi mein yahan se jane wala nahi hoon…..😔

Rid: Aap zabadasti nahi kar sakthe…😔….she is quite firm on what she is speaking……

Arm: yeh zabardasti nahi hai….request hai…..😔😭

He is pleading her and also his voice is getting feeble as the time progress due to bleeding and the stress he went through………The floor was getting wet by his blood……Ridhima was turnig her back towards him …….

Rid: Armaan mein abhi kuch nahi sunna chahthi hoon…….hum iske baare me……😔

Ammy couldn't handle himself anymore he collapsed on the ground falling unconcious….making a thud sound…..Ridhima turned around……..Seeing him unconcious…..😔

Rid: Armaan……She takes him on the lap…….Armaan kya huva aap ko……utiye…..😭

By then power comes……She could see the bleeding now and was shocked…..She started first aid treatment……and also call the ambulance to take him to the hospital……She was worried….even after what he did to her……Ammy was admitted to hospital…….Ridhima informed his parents with the help of his phone…….She herself was handling the case……..

In hospital……Ammy was lying unconcious on the bed…..Ridhima was checking him…Archana and Sunil came into ward…..

Arc: Ammy…..kya huva beta tumhe?????? She sits next to ammy……carassing his hairs…..

Sorry …… shyad kal meine kuch zyada kehdiya…..par she breaks down…….😔😭

Rid: Ma ji (she comes near Archana put her hands on archana's sholder……) smaliye …….2 – 3 ghanthon mein hosh ajayega inko……..😔

I hope I brought a strong reason...if u guys feel this is not a good reason...then I am sorry for not meeting your expectations.......and this part was ful of sad things but I need one more part to get out of this mood.....plz tel me how was the part did it really make u guys feel what it was meant to be or not.....waiting for the comments.............😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sri
u are a very good writer belive me its straigh from the heart
awesome twosome
um sorry i cud not comment on the last part
i was quite busy with coll
wow dear
this was a big twist n the promo is quite exciting
update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
woah👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ so armaan is in hospital😭😭😭 and ridhima is with him😛😉 and she cares for him❤️😍 so sweet😊😳 plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
hey sri
nice part
quite a goood reson sash shudn't have been so rude
update soon

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