At d bar..AK UPD pg 11..3/12 - Page 8

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

gr8 promo! cant wait till the next part :)

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

OMG! Wat an awesome ff!! I love it! Ur really gud at writing. LOL WAY better than me. I suck. I have 2 AK ffs but they totally suck! I love AK and ur ff though. Cont soon and can u pm me if u dont mind?

Harjot

Originally posted by: Smilesx3

hey
your not continuing!!!

big part for ma dear vallu sista (vallanki) n monu darling(monikaseth)n anam(anam ali)😳 for always appreciating ma writing skills!!!😃

mujai ishq aur mohabbat bas tujse dil ruba hai
mera ishq sar phera hai meri aashiqi juda hai..
tanhaiiyaan kehnay lagi mehfal nai sajalay...
aa dil se dil mila le
aa dil se dil mila le

Song frm the movie NAQAAB*

10mins passed......still in no sign of prthvi she thought....again late..
suddenly some one tapped her bare shoulder..

Kripa:(annoyingly):Phirse late??meray inform karnay k baad bhi..

the camera scans a tall handsome guy standing at the bak of her..
it was prithvi...he comes infront of her..

Prithvi:I m sorry kripa!please....aj k baad aisa nai hoga..

Kripa:ok...fine..lets grab sum drink...i want some vodka..

Prithvi:Kripa..r u serious???your gonna drink?

Kripa:so wats d big deal...look mai wahi karti hun jo mera dil chata hai..k

Prithvi:Per kripa...

Kripa:wat hun???m nt dependant on anyone....mai azaad hun mera jo dil karega mai wahi karun gi

Prithvi:Hold on...tum to kabi aisi nai thi kripa??kya hogaya hai tumko??wats wrong??I mean i hav been noticing u...since we met now...I mean ur attitude ur dressing style evrything has changed...Jab se tumharay parents ki death hui hai ur behaving strangely...!!

Kripa:Please they were nt my parents ..k..For god sake...when u knoe d entire thing...phr b aisay bolrahay ho tum...y r u reacting like this??

Prithvi:Ohh please kripa...Just bcoz they adopted u...n wen u found out..u started hating them...Kripa wat abt those 20 yrs wen they fed u,loved u,cared for ...

Kripa:Please Prithvi,stop it..there is no use..r u bringing the drinks or nt???

Prithvi...but krip..

Kripa:Fine i will bring it my self!!!

Prithvi:[holds her hand n stops her]You wait here...i will bring it for u..

Kripa:(smiled)ThanQ prithvi...ur very nice

Prithvi:Its ok..(he touches her cheek)n goes away

.........................an hour later........................

Prithvi:thats it kripa...u hav finished 2 whole bottles...did u hear me two whole bottles!!!!for god sake ...stop it now !!!

Kripa:(looks up n smiles like an innocent gal)can i get one more glass plz??

Prithvi:wat???have u lost it??

Kripa:plz plz plz plz...pretty plz..

Prithvi:Kripa but...(b4 he could cont ..his phone vibrated in his pocket)hello...haan tina??wat i cant hear u??m in a disco right now..wid kripa...sorry come again..ok hold on..Kripa i will b bak..kindly dont drink...its a warning!!

Kripa:signalled him frm her hands to leave..n started dancing ......wen her eyes caught a rugged man in d bar section...he was d caretaker...serving diffrent wines...kripa tried 2 look at him as best as she cud in d dark disco lights...he looked familiar 2 her...where did i c him??akhir kahan??she tried thinking hard..bt no use..she was drunk...suddenly she started moving towards the bar section as her drink finished despite prithivis warnings*...as close as she got 2 him she got attracted 2 his features...uff he was deadly handsome...his eyes his nose his killing smile his beard...everythin was so damn handsome......it looked as if she was falling 4 him......as soon as her bare legs touched d counter...she said

Kripa:get me some vodka!!!(in a drunk state)

the man turned around n as soon as their eyes met they forgot everything....it seemed as if they were only in the bar...no one else existed....this song played in d background............

wo milay thay yun milay thay...
dekhnay bas unhay waqt b ruk gaya...
wo pyar tha chunay jissay...
ek pal k liye aasmaaan jhuk gaya......

*i apologize KA fans for using this song in this kyph ff

kripa drew a sharp gasp....n bcame normal once again..hiding her exhilaration by coming so close 2 him..*yet so far

Kripa(looking directly in his eyes):I said get me some VODKA....
Angad:(smiled)in a minute mam!!
Kripa:gwaddd ye mujai kya horaha hai lagta hai bohat ziyada nasha hogaya...........n then she moved her gaze somewhere else....n held her head..still in a drunken state

while angad kept staring at her n poured the vodka in d pointed glass..forgetting to mix ice cubes[sorry for d silly reason]in it.....then gave it 2 her....as soon as she pushed her hand towards it..their fingers met...angad quickly pulled his hand away...she took d glass n was about to drink...wen her eyes caught the glass closely..even in drunken state she could identify things clearly...her anger rose...

Kripa(angry):heyyy u???wat the hell is this??huh??r u blind cant u c??where r the ice cubes???how dare u??mai abhi tumhay andar karwadungi??u dont knoe who i m!!!!

Angad:(his anger rose):he was abt to say something..wen he saw ur feeling dizzy soon she was falling...even before he could touch her...suddenly a man came frm behind..he was prithvi..

Prithvi:kripa kripa..r u allright..i told u nt to drink this much...

bt kripa kept murmuring:u dont knoe who i m !!!as soon as she bcame unconsious prithvi picked her in his arms..n took her away...

Angad kept staring at them..until they were hidden in d crowd...he was angry yet he just couldnt forget those mysterious eyes...the gorgeous face and and..the list was endless........

iqra

hope u all like it...

Oh god kripa dirk a lot . hahahaha angad ke liye acha hai , I am enjoying reading Pl conti soon and thank you for this awesome part & Pm.

hey great part.. continue soon..

Great Part!!!
Kripa drinks ALOT!!!
Who is Prithvi?
Continue SOON!!!

Originally posted by: Smilesx3

Great Part!!!
Kripa drinks ALOT!!!
Who is Prithvi?
Continue SOON!!!

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Wonderful Part Iqra

Originally posted by: monikaseth

Oh god kripa dirk a lot . hahahaha angad ke liye acha hai , I am enjoying reading Pl conti soon and thank you for this awesome part & Pm.